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The water. So wet, So pure, So clear. It is water. Clean, Slick, Calm.

The serene, Blessed, Fulfilled, Uplifted, Taste of water. The one liquid that is so Efficient, So open-minded, So natural. It is water. It can Boost, Cure, And Energize. Even the most Arrogant, Cruel, And Greedy people can taste water. Tired... Fleece... Delightful. While its Fresh On your mind. It is water.

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Is this supposed to be a poem?

 

If so, it is always good to have Stanza's of around 5 lines or so. You should remain immune from using grammatical words like "open-minded" and "efficient" for inanimate object like water. Just my two cents.

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