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Okay so here is the entire review for ''The Revenge'' made by Rendy Specter:

Okay so i am back now again with another review. This series is made by Rendy Specter called The Revenge.

Introduction/The Unexpected Death

Writing: Very Good! Although there are some errors like ''It's been 3 years long since i haven't SEE you and Mark.''

Presentation: Excellent! I really liked the cutscene angle. Good work!

Length: Very Good! Probably one of the longest intros ever, 7 minutes nice work!

Difficulty: Easy. Just driving, and near the end you have to escape from 2 Russian goons.

Variety: Good. Decent amount of objects. Also why didn't you add more actors to the funeral of Sam and Mark's father? Lol only their kids showed up (Sam and Mark)

Overall Rating: 70%

The Russian Mafia

Writing: Very Good! Again, in this series you don't add a space after a dot :p.

Presentation: Excellent! Once again you put the cutscene angle in a nice and perfect place.

Length: Very Good! The length this time was 8 minutes. 1 minute longer than the intro.

Difficulty: Medium. You have to drive a very long road. Kill around 6 Russian Goons who have headshot disabled, and will wipe your HP out the moment you spawn. I didn't die but it was hard to kill them while we had around 15 ammo for the pistol. Not to mention there was a timer to find Reikov's location.

Variety: Very Good! I found allot of objectives in this mission, good work!

Overall Rating: 82%


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Okay so here is my review for ''The Revenge'' by Rendy Specter:

Grey Falcon

Writing: Very Good! Good writing, but sometimes a sentence doesn't go together.

Presentation: Excellent! Very good. Every cutscene angle is perfect. And the characters are doing different animations in every different cutscene.

Length: Good. The mission length was 9 minutes, good work!


Difficulty: Very Hard! The battle starts in a instant, you stand in the same place 5 seconds and you are dead. You have to run away the moment the fight starts. And you are given limited amount of ammo for the SMG and you have to fight about 20 enemies with OP weapons + with good aim. Luckily, i didn't die. Not to mention you have to escape 3 Russian vehicles.

Variety: Good. Good amount of vehicles, actors and weapons.

Overall Rating: 78%

What Falcon leave you with...

Writing: Very Good! Again, sometimes a sentence does not go together, like in the end: So the time is come. So the time has come*

Presentation: Excellent! Very good! But when Mark pushes the ladder to the other side doesn't that guard hear him?

Length: Very Good! The length was 10 minutes, good job!


Difficulty: Excellent! This is EXTREMELY hard. When one of the guards spot you, you are pretty much done. They have atleast 2500 hp. They have 100% accuracy. And very good weapons like shotguns, AK's, SMG's etc) Don't make that mistake that they will spot you...

Variety: Good. Again, good amount of actors and vehicles and the weapon variety.

Overall Rating: 88%

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Okay so here is my review for ''The Revenge'' made by Rendy Specter

Half Stealth

Writing: Very Good!

Presentation: Very Good! Good presentation.

Length: Very Good! Length was 9 minutes. Good job!

Difficulty: Hard! It is very hard finding the russians. And you have to deal with the chainsaw russian.


Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 80%

Downfall of Russian Mafia!

Writing: Very Good! I think there was no errors here.

Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation.

Length: Long! Mission length was 10 minutes.

Difficulty: Too hard!! Its really hard taking down the russians. And near the end i always run out of ammo.


Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and vehicles.

Overall Rating: 64%

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Real Culprit

Writing: Very Good! Pretty sure there was no errors in it so good job!


Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation, and Sammy's execute scene though...

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Excellent! Very difficulty for me, i always died at the final battle and you have to race to Sammy's house in time.


Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors and vehicles.

Overall Rating: 62%

Aftermath/Outro

Writing: Very Good! There was some sentence errors for an example: Don't just shutting your mouth, Don't just shut your mouth,


Presentation: Very Good! Good presentation so good job!

Length: Too short!! Length was only 1 minute.

Difficulty: BLANK: Blank because there is no in-game action.


Variety: Could be better!! There was about 3 actors.

Overall Rating: 28%

Full rating: 72%

Here is a gameplay video:

 

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But, I thought you retired?

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I hope you're gonna make the video review of GTA: TVS.

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But, I thought you retired?

i said i will not take anymore review requests, but i will still finish those ones what i have on missions to review list.

I hope you're gonna make the video review of GTA: TVS.

yeah i forgot to add it into the list you requested last week.

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Okay so here is my review for Kenji Chronicles:

Pick up, load and fire!

Writing: Excellent! I didn't spot any errors, although allot of slang. Good job!

Presentation: Excellent! Lol, nice remake of one of the missions in the original game.

Length: Decent. The length was 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Difficulty was easy.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors and

Overall Rating: 46%

We all scream for Ice Cream!

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good! Allot of driving in this missions, also, ain't it suspicious that a random person is asking a meeting at a gas station?

Length: Good. The length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Basic driving.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of variety.

Overall Rating: 43%



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Okay so here is a review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

NEW BLOOD

Writing: Excellent! I believe there was no errors so great work!


Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes so good job!

Difficulty: Medium. I actually died where i had to battle the gangsters.


Variety: Good. There was good amount of gangsters in this mission, and some few objects too!


Overall Rating: 57%

FLAMING SHIP

Writing: Excellent! Again, i don't think there was any errors and you had the dots and commas perfectly.


Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation! Really liked the epic explosion at the end! Great work!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes. 1 minute longer than the previous mission.

Difficulty: Easy. You cant really die in this mission because your in a crane and all you have to do is snipe those enemies.


Variety: Good. Good amount of actors in this mission.


Overall Rating: 63%


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Okay so here is a another review for Freedom Fighters REVOLUTION made by Heisenberg_GR:

TRAIN STAION

Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, and the dots and commas are perfectly so good job!

Presentation: Excellent! Love the epic explosions at the end!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! I died once, and it was hard taking down those Soviet's!


Variety: Excellent! Once again there is allot of objects! You musta worked hard on this!

Overall Rating: 85%

THE DOCKS

Writing: Excellent! Same as before!

Presentation: Excellent! At the end, Carter only planted 3 bombs, but there was about 10 explosions, i assume the ship was full of bombs?

Length: Very Good! Length was 9 minutes! Good work!

Difficulty: Medium. This was allot easier than before, the crew were talking that this was gonna be the hardest mission yet to come but i didn't die once!


Variety: Excellent!

Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!!))

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Okay so here is a another review for Kenji Chronicles made by GangstaZilla203:



Sniping time eh?



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy.



Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors!



Overall Rating: 43%


That objective tho! ''Type ROCKETMAN to get on the building''



Store Heist



Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, so good job!



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.



Difficulty: Medium. It was a pain catching up with them.



Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.



Overall Rating: 50%



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Okay so here is the entire chapter 2 review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

 

Okay so here is a review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

NEW BLOOD

Writing: Excellent! I believe there was no errors so great work!


Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes so good job!

Difficulty: Medium. I actually died where i had to battle the gangsters.


Variety: Good. There was good amount of gangsters in this mission, and some few objects too!


Overall Rating: 57%

FLAMING SHIP

Writing: Excellent! Again, i don't think there was any errors and you had the dots and commas perfectly.


Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation! Really liked the epic explosion at the end! Great work!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes. 1 minute longer than the previous mission.

Difficulty: Easy. You cant really die in this mission because your in a crane and all you have to do is snipe those enemies.


Variety: Good. Good amount of actors in this mission.


Overall Rating: 63%

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Okay so here is another review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

INVADERS

Writing: Excellent! I noticed one 1 error though.

Presentation: Excellent! Once again epic presentation! Good work!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. That fight was hard, my game crashed once (lol)

Variety: Excellent! Lot's of objects in this mission.

Overall Rating: 70%

NOTHING PERSONAL

Writing: Excellent! Again i noticed one tiny error.

Presentation: Excellent! That was like horror movie. They fricking

Length: Good. Length was this time 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. This mission was mostly just a cutscene.

Variety: Good. Good amount of objects, and chopped body parts...

Overall Rating: 62%

Here is a gameplay video:

Chapter 2 entire rating: 65%

Edited by KevinDYOM account

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Hello could you make a review for my mission-pack San Andreas Warfare 2? here's the link btw http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/40879

i am not taking in anymore reviews... I will finish those last 3 (Kenji Chronicles, untouchable and freedom fighters revolution)

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Okay so here is the entire review of Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION chapter 2:

Okay so here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION'' made by Heisenberg_GR

SAN FIERRO'S MALL

Writing: Excellent! There is no errors at all, every sentence starts with a capitalization letter, the dots and commas are in a perfect position. Nice work!

Presentation: Very Good! The cutscene angle is perfect, but the amount of cutscenes seems less then usual.

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. That is ALLOT of Soviet enemies you have to kill. And there is no health or armor pickups (maybe i didn't notice) And also one of the guards were bugged. They got stuck in boxes. If this happens i use a car to explode them.

Variety: Excellent! Variety is allot. Many actors plus allot of objects making it look like a actual base.

Overall Rating: 69%

S.F. AIRPORT

Writing: Excellent! The writing felt again perfect. Same like the last mission.

Presentation: Excellent! Actually, you know what? We don't need that many cutscenes. 70% depends how well the gameplay is.

Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes, but it depends how you move.

Difficulty: Hard! This felt harder for some reason, i almost died at the start because of those snipers, luckily i spotted a armor pickup at the start of the battle.

Variety: Very Good! Again, allot of actors. And allot of objects but the airport at the middle felt empty. Not sure if its because the game would starts crashing.

Overall Rating: 76%

Here is me narrating in this episode:

Okay so here is a another review for Freedom Fighters REVOLUTION made by Heisenberg_GR:

TRAIN STAION

Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, and the dots and commas are perfectly so good job!

Presentation: Excellent! Love the epic explosions at the end!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! I died once, and it was hard taking down those Soviet's!


Variety: Excellent! Once again there is allot of objects! You musta worked hard on this!

Overall Rating: 85%

THE DOCKS

Writing: Excellent! Same as before!

Presentation: Excellent! At the end, Carter only planted 3 bombs, but there was about 10 explosions, i assume the ship was full of bombs?

Length: Very Good! Length was 9 minutes! Good work!

Difficulty: Medium. This was allot easier than before, the crew were talking that this was gonna be the hardest mission yet to come but i didn't die once!


Variety: Excellent!

Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!!))

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EASTER BASIN

Writing: Excellent! I again didn't notice any errors.


Presentation: Very Good! Again you have epic presentations!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. There are allot of Soviet's. The reason i failed was because one of my partners died.


Variety: Excellent! Once again you never disappoint me with your english so excellent work!


Overall Rating: 72%

EASTER BASIN PART 2

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. Length was 5 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. Again there are allot of Soviets!


Variety: Very Good! Allot of objects again, but the the same like before.


Overall Rating: 65%

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Chapter 2 overall rating: 80%

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Okay so here is the entire review of Chapter 2 of Kenji Chronicles made by GangstaZilla203:

Okay here is were i continue the review i made today, but this is now Chapter 2 of Kenji Chronicles:

Intro

Writing: Excellent! Even though it's just 2 sentences, no errors.

Presentation: Decent. Just to be honest at this point you should of made a flashback on how the characters were worrying about Kenji being missing for 4 days.

Length: Too short!! The intro was about 15 seconds.

Difficulty: Blank because no in-game action.


Variety: Blank because the fact there was only 1 actor.

Overall Rating: 30%

That was a hard decision. But exceptions are made for Difficulty and Length...

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Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203.

Boom goes the car!

Writing: Excellent! Although sometimes the sentence does not start with a caps letter.

Presentation: Excellent! Nice! Really enjoyed killing those bodyguards and killing that debt owner in slow motion.

Difficulty: Medium. It's kinda hard killing all those body guards.

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes, good job!

Variety: Good. Lots of actors in this mission.

Overall Rating: 62%

Construction Destruction

Writing: Very Good! Although there's a few sentences, good writing but the sentence does not again sometimes start with caps.

Presentation: Very Good! But when the mission ends you are pretty much stuck on the crane.

Difficulty: Medium. The mission is kinda hard too! I died once because 3 guards vs Kenji with a 30 HP + a deagle.

Length: Too short!! Mission was 1 minute long, but i appreciate you making short mission once and a while.

Variety: Decent. Few actors there and there.

Overall Rating: 45%

Dealin' n' wealin'

Writing: Excellent! I think this time there was no errors.

Presentation: Very Good! Nice cutscene angle.

Difficulty: Medium. Lots of guards, but keep using a AK and you can kill them.

Length: Good. Length was 5 minutes, good job!

Variety: Good. Like i said lots of lots of Triads.

Overall Rating: 68%

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Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203.

Family Problems

Writing: Very Good! Very good writing, but you had some errors like: disapointed disappointed. twice.

Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation on how Kenji and hes father were talking.

Length: Too Short!! Length was only 2 minutes.

Difficulty: BLANK: Black because there is literally no reason to die.

Variety: Could be better!! There was only about 3 actors and 1 phone booth.

Overall Rating: 26%

The Only Good Triad is a Dead One

Writing: Excellent! I believe there was no errors. The dots and commas are perfect. Allot of slang/funny dialogue. Good work on this!

Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation again.

Length: Short. Mission length was 3 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! This is hard indeed. There was at least 20+ triads with powerful weapons attacking you. So good work!

Variety: Very Good! Like i told you, allot of triads!

Overall Rating: 83%

'The Green Thing'

Writing: Excellent! Again i don't think there was any errors.

Presentation: Very Good! Same as before.

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes, nice job!

Difficulty: Medium. Many triads but not as much as before.

Variety: Good. Good amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 59%

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Okay so here is my review for Kenji Chronicles:

Pick up, load and fire!

Writing: Excellent! I didn't spot any errors, although allot of slang. Good job!

Presentation: Excellent! Lol, nice remake of one of the missions in the original game.

Length: Decent. The length was 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Difficulty was easy.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors and

Overall Rating: 46%

We all scream for Ice Cream!

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good! Allot of driving in this missions, also, ain't it suspicious that a random person is asking a meeting at a gas station?

Length: Good. The length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Basic driving.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of variety.

Overall Rating: 43%


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kay so here is a another review for Kenji Chronicles made by GangstaZilla203:

Sniping time eh?

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors!

Overall Rating: 43%

That objective tho! ''Type ROCKETMAN to get on the building''

Store Heist

Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, so good job!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. It was a pain catching up with them.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 50%

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Cars with Bodies

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes, (not counting the repeated fails)

Difficulty: Hard! That was absolute pain losing the cops...

Variety: Decent.

Overall Rating: 70%

Outro

Writing: Excellent! Excellent writing once again!

Presentation: Very Good! That moment though... were Wu dies...

Length: Too short!! Length was 2 minutes.

Difficulty: BLANK Blank because there is not in-game action.

Variety: Decent.

Overall Rating: 32%

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Chapter 2 overall rating: 70%

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Okay so here is my review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:



WAR HERO



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes.



Difficulty: Hard! It was hard killing those people.



Variety: Good.



Overall Rating: 73%



PRISON BREAK



Writing: Excellent! Didn't spot any errors.



Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation again.



Length: Excellent! Length was 14 minutes :O Longest mission ever reviewed in Kevin Reviews Your DYOMs...



Difficulty: Medium. Lol. I failed killing those 4 cops at the end.



Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and objects.



Overall Rating: 75%



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Okay so here is the entire review for Freedom Fighters REVOLUTION made by Heisenberg_GR:

Okay so the forum is now online again! So here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION by Heisenberg_GR

Introduction/Invasion

Writing: Very Good! Although there are sometimes few sentences that don't very well fit together. Or it's just my bad english.

Presentation: Excellent! So many explosions! Nice work!

Length: Good. The length for this was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. I died once when i was supposed to escape from a window with a vehicle.

Variety: Excellent! So many Soviets placed everywhere, very nice work!

Overall Rating: 69%

Prison Break

Writing: Excellent! Okay this time i am sure i found no errors or anything. Good job!

Presentation: Very Good! So many fighting was here. Which i enjoy!

Length: Long! The length was 11 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! So many enemies, no health and armor pickups, but you are given a RPG with 9999 ammo to shoot the gate down but i used it to kill allot of the enemies ;) I died once at that extreme moment where your in a interior and enemies start shooting you.

Variety: Very Good! So many Soviets members, good job!

Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!))

Also when Carter was sleeping he was bugged and was under the bed, but that of course was DYOM's fault. Or the bed was none solid.

I have this video out yesterday but due to gtaforums was down i added this review today so anyway here is me narrating in this episode:

Okay so here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION'' made by Heisenberg_GR

Okay so here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION'' made by Heisenberg_GR

SAN FIERRO'S MALL

Writing: Excellent! There is no errors at all, every sentence starts with a capitalization letter, the dots and commas are in a perfect position. Nice work!

Presentation: Very Good! The cutscene angle is perfect, but the amount of cutscenes seems less then usual.

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. That is ALLOT of Soviet enemies you have to kill. And there is no health or armor pickups (maybe i didn't notice) And also one of the guards were bugged. They got stuck in boxes. If this happens i use a car to explode them.

Variety: Excellent! Variety is allot. Many actors plus allot of objects making it look like a actual base.

Overall Rating: 69%

S.F. AIRPORT

Writing: Excellent! The writing felt again perfect. Same like the last mission.

Presentation: Excellent! Actually, you know what? We don't need that many cutscenes. 70% depends how well the gameplay is.

Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes, but it depends how you move.

Difficulty: Hard! This felt harder for some reason, i almost died at the start because of those snipers, luckily i spotted a armor pickup at the start of the battle.

Variety: Very Good! Again, allot of actors. And allot of objects but the airport at the middle felt empty. Not sure if its because the game would starts crashing.

Overall Rating: 76%

Here is me narrating in this episode:

Okay so here is a another review for Freedom Fighters REVOLUTION made by Heisenberg_GR:

TRAIN STAION

Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, and the dots and commas are perfectly so good job!

Presentation: Excellent! Love the epic explosions at the end!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! I died once, and it was hard taking down those Soviet's!


Variety: Excellent! Once again there is allot of objects! You musta worked hard on this!

Overall Rating: 85%

THE DOCKS

Writing: Excellent! Same as before!

Presentation: Excellent! At the end, Carter only planted 3 bombs, but there was about 10 explosions, i assume the ship was full of bombs?

Length: Very Good! Length was 9 minutes! Good work!

Difficulty: Medium. This was allot easier than before, the crew were talking that this was gonna be the hardest mission yet to come but i didn't die once!


Variety: Excellent!

Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!!))

Here is a gameplay video:

EASTER BASIN

Writing: Excellent! I again didn't notice any errors.


Presentation: Very Good! Again you have epic presentations!

Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. There are allot of Soviet's. The reason i failed was because one of my partners died.


Variety: Excellent! Once again you never disappoint me with your english so excellent work!


Overall Rating: 72%

EASTER BASIN PART 2

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. Length was 5 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. Again there are allot of Soviets!


Variety: Very Good! Allot of objects again, but the the same like before.


Overall Rating: 65%

Here is a gameplay video:

ONE STEP CLOSER

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. Length was 5 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium.

Variety: Medium.

Overall Rating: 58%

ENEMY AT THE GATES

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Excellent!

Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium.

Variety: Very Good!

Overall Rating: 65%

VIVA LA REVOLUCION

(LONG LIVE THE REVOLUTION)

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy.

Variety: Good.

Overall Rating: 47%

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OVERALL RATING: 76%

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Okay so here is my review for Kenji Chronicles made by GangstaZilla203:

Intro

I will not count this. It is just 2 basic sentences.

Bar Time

Writing: Very Good! I spotted some errors.

Presentation: Very Good! The bar was bugged.

Length: Short. Length was 3 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. This mission is basically driving.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects.

Overall Rating: 46%

First Date

Writing: Excellent! This time i didn't spot any errors.

Presentation: Very Good! The club floor was bugged too!

Length: Short. Length was 3 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. No reason to fail again.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects.

Overall Rating: 53%

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Okay so here is the entire review of Chapter 3 of UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

Okay so here is my review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

WAR HERO

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! It was hard killing those people.

Variety: Good.

Overall Rating: 73%

PRISON BREAK

Writing: Excellent! Didn't spot any errors.

Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation again.

Length: Excellent! Length was 14 minutes :O Longest mission ever reviewed in Kevin Reviews Your DYOMs...

Difficulty: Medium. Lol. I failed killing those 4 cops at the end.

Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and objects.

Overall Rating: 75%

Here is a gameplay:

THE GETAWAY

Writing: Very Good!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.

Difficulty: Hard! It was impossible for me at the start of the fight.ddd


Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 70%

THE GETAWAY PART 2

Writing: Very Good!

Presentation: Excellent!

Length: Good. Length was once again 6 minutes long.

Difficulty: Medium. It was easier killing them than before.


Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and vehicles.

Overall Rating: 70%

Here is a gameplay video:

Chapter 3 Overall Rating: 71%

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Okay so here is another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:

Second Date

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes!

Difficulty: Easy.


Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 51%

Coke Take

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes.


Difficulty: Medium.

Variety: Good. Good amount of objects and actors.

Overall Rating: 56%

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Okay so here is a another review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:



THIS IS PERSONAL



Writing: Very Good! I spotted some sentence errors.



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Short. Length was 3 minutes long.



Difficulty: BLANK Blank because there is no in-game action



Variety: Decent.



Overall Rating: 42%



AND THIS IS BUSINESS



Writing: Very Good!



Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation once again.



Length: Decent. Length was 5 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy. No reason to fail here, the only chance i see is the car being destroyed.



Variety: Decent.



Overall Rating: 45%



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Okay so here is a another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:



Steal my wallet? I don't think so!:



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Excellent!



Length: Too Short!! Length was about 2 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy. I actually died once.



Variety: Decent.



Overall Rating: 43%



Secret Documents



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes.



Difficulty: Medium. They had good aim.



Variety: Good. Good amount of actors.



Overall Rating: 55%



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Okay so here is a another review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' made by Heisenberg_GR:

MAYDAY

Writing: Very Good! You had some sentence errors. Like: Lot of cops will waiting us there! Lot's of cops will be waiting us there!

Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation once again Heisenberg!


Length: Decent. Length was 5 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. It was kinda hard killing those FBI.

Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and objects.

Overall Rating: 49%

THE FALLEN HERO

Writing: Very Good! Same as before, you had some errors, (Are they called grammar errors?) but the dots and commas were in a perfect position.

Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation as usual.


Length: Good. Length was about 6 minutes so good job!

Difficulty: Easy. I was not even shot by those enemies. You can say i was untouchable in this level xD.

Variety: Good. Again, good amount of actors in this mission.

Overall Rating: 53%

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Okay so here is a another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:



Dodge The Rocket!



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Excellent!



Length: Too short!! Length was only 2 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy.



Variety: Could be better!!



Overall Rating: 34%



This was probably the most random mission in Kenji Chronicles xD!



Drug Dealer Shootout



Writing: Excellent!



Presentation: Very Good!



Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy.



Variety: Decent.



Overall Rating: 48%



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Okay so here is a another review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' made by Heisenberg_GR:

SENSELESS CHOICE

Writing: Excellent! I spotted no errors, and the dots and commas are in a perfect angle.

Presentation: Excellent! Once again excellent presentation! So good work!


Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. No reason to die here, but you may lose her while following her.

Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and vehicles.

Overall Rating: 61%

SENSELESS CHOICE PART 2

Writing: Excellent! Same as before.

Presentation: Excellent! Again, very good presentation!


Length: Good. Length was once again 6 minutes.


Difficulty: Medium. I nearly died by the guards.

Variety: Good. Good amount of actors.

Overall Rating: 65%


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Okay so here is a another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:

The Shipment

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Excellent! Good presentation! And seriously, that plot was epic when Terry and Waka betrayed Kenji. Katzuki really offered them 1,000,000,000 just to kill Kenji? Lol........

Length: Good. Length was about 7 minutes.


Difficulty: Medium. It was hard killing all those Triads.


Variety: Good. That was a sh*t load of Triads! So good job!


Overall Rating: 67%

The Payphone Task

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Good. Length was once again about 7 minutes.


Difficulty: Hard! It was seriously very hard getting to the second payphone.

Variety: Decent.


Overall Rating: 70%

EDIT: Lol i forgot to add the gameplay video! Here is a gameplay video:

Edited by KevinDYOM account

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Aye' man! I just looked around and saw you have a DYOM Review topic, this explains your member title. So, can you do a task for me? Review The Vito Familly, just askin'

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41295

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Aye' man! I just looked around and saw you have a DYOM Review topic, this explains your member title. So, can you do a task for me? Review The Vito Familly, just askin'

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41295

Unfortunately i am not taking in anymore reviews. But if some of you want reviews really badly, i guess i can make a full review like i did with Chapter 1 of The Golden Bullet? What i mean by this is that i won't be reviewing each mission and making gameplay.

 

EDIT: Nah, i think i am gonna keep my promise, i will finish UNTOUCHABLE and Kenji Chronicles than i can finish this topic. But i will still full review in the official mission pack topics (like with The Golden Bullet)

Edited by KevinDYOM account

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Okay so here is the final review for UNTOUCHABLE made by Heisenberg_GR:

UNTOUCHABLE

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation once again.

Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes.


Difficulty: BLANK. Blank because there is no in-game action.


Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 46%

(Exceptions are made since this is the semi finale mission)

Although i was a little bit disappointed in Alberto dying and Eladio didn't give a sh*t :(

UNTOUCHABLE PART 2

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Excellent!

Length: Decent.


Difficulty: Medium.


Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 62%

Here is a gameplay video:

UNTOUCHABLE Overall Rating (IMO): 80%

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Okay so here is a another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:

Ending all the Bullsh*t


Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Excellent! Also nice remake with ''End of the Line'' mission from the original game xD.

Length: Very Good! Length was 10 minutes so good job!

Difficulty: Medium. It was kinda hard to kill the triads.

Variety: Good. There was allot of actors.

Overall Rating: 75%

Fight! Fight! Fight!

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy.

Variety: Decent.

Overall Rating: 42%

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Okay so here is another review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:

The Tank Heist

Writing: Excellent! I didn't spot any errors.


Presentation: Very Good!


Length: Excellent! Length was 15 minutes so good job!

Difficulty: Hard! I nearly died in this mission.


Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!!))

Kill A Friend

Writing: Excellent!


Presentation: Very Good! You forgot to hide some actors. I think this is the first time this kind of a error happened to you. Also this whole thing just didn't make sense. Why would Kenji betray Alberto, his old homie for 20.000$? Yet Kenji told Terry why he betrayed him for 1,000,000,000$... lol.


Length: Decent.

Difficulty: Easy.


Variety: Decent.


Overall Rating: 48%

Sadly this time i couldn't make a gameplay video because of my crap recording device :(

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Okay so here is the final review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203:

Big Take

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Excellent!


Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes long.


Difficulty: Easy. The mission was easy although it was a pain losing the cops.


Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and objects.


Overall Rating: 47%

Outro

Writing: Excellent!

Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation, and also, where was Garry?


Length: Too short!! Length was 1 minute, although exceptions are made in Intro's and Outro's. (As i have told many times)


Difficulty: BLANK Blank because there is no in-game action.


Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.


Overall Rating: 50%

EDIT: Again i forgot to add a gameplay video xD, here is a gameplay video:

Kenji Chronicles entire rating (IMO): 82%

Edited by KevinDYOM account

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