KeV3n Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 (edited) (UPDATE) Sorry for no reviews this couple of past days, i have been busy doing other stuff. I will promise i will have an review out in 2 days. And i will start (or try) to make one review every day. But not on saturday though if you saw my video. Edited November 20, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted November 23, 2015 Author Share Posted November 23, 2015 (edited) Okay so here is my review for ''GTA: The Three's a Crowd by The GTA Fanatic. A Whole Group Also this mission is made by Huzaifa Khan as i believe. Writing: Very Good! Again. Good spelling, but i think there was an error where you spelled ''favourite'' To me ''favorite'' seems more right. Presentation: Excellent! Very good moving cutscenes! Nice work! Length: Good. Length was about 6 minutes. (and i extended the cutscenes so the bot can finish those sentences) Difficulty: Easy. Seems easy, just escape from the Purple Claw members. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects. Also i like how in nearly every cutscene the actor does different animations so good job! Overall Rating: 45% PaybackSadly i don't know who made this mission Writing: Very Good! Nice spelling, the commas and dots are in a nice position. But no space is left after a comma or a dot is placed. This made the bot voice say weird stuff like ''Let's do this the easy wayDOTJust follow me. Presentation: Good. The cutscene was very bugged near the beginning. Just black screen and actors falling. Length: Very Good! Length was about 9 minutes! So good job! Difficulty: Medium. I died once. You have to take down allot of actors. And some of them carry heavy weapons and one of them have so much health. Other then that they miss allot when in a good position. Variety: Good. Like i mentioned allot of actors. Overall Rating: 53% Here is me narrating in this episode: Edited November 25, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 (edited) Okay so here is my review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' by Heisenberg_GR BIG JOB Writing: Excellent! Although there was 1 error were you spelled ''Mee too man i have the coke'' But you had the commas and dots in a perfect position. Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation again, really enjoyed it so good job! Length: Very Good! Length was 7 minutes, nice work! Difficulty: Easy. Nice and simple you just have to drive around places. I destroyed nearly my car. Variety: Good. Good amount of objects, actors and vehicles. Overall Rating: 61% BIG JOB PART2 Writing: Very Good! The dots and commas again in a nice position but you had 3 errors, for an example you spelled ''I'm suprised boys you are alive'' surprised* ''I want to meet me at my house'' i want you to meet me at my house* Presentation: Very Good! Very good i enjoyed this too but the mission is mostly about driving. Length: Very Good! The length was 8 minutes so good job! Difficulty: Easy. Again, nice and simple just cap some Russian goons and drive around down. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects. So good work! Overall Rating: 55% Here is me narrating in this episode: Edited November 24, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 (edited) Okay so here is the entire review of Chapter 1 of UNTOUCHABLE: Okay so here is my review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' by Heisenberg_GR Introduction/Intro Writing: Very Good! The writing is still perfect! Although at some point i notice a error. Presentation: Excellent! Nice start for the story! By the way you forgot to hide a actor but quickly in the next objective you noticed. Also at the start the actor didn't jump down the edge. Length: Very Good. The length for me to complete was 7 minutes, nice work! Difficulty: Easy. You just have to escape from the police. Nothing hard here but a police man tried to shotgun me down xD Variety: Very Good. I liked how the police were placed at a perfect area, and the explosion at the end was cool. Overall Rating: 76% Hard Working Men Writing: Very Good! Their swearing makes it so funny xD, like how Alberto was talking and Chelio responded: No sh*t?! Presentation: Excellent! The rating would of been Very Good! on how the mission was just half driving but what pumped it up was the funny moment at the end. They got jobs and their jobs turned out to be a Hot Dog sellers xD, if it wasn't hilarious than you should play it yourself or watch my video. Length: Very Good! This mission was a minute longer than the Intro which was 7 minutes. This was 8 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. No reason to fail here only if you crash your vehicle, fall from height or get beaten up by the enemy at the end of the mission. Variety: Good. Good work, although this mission seemed to have less objects. But i liked the long line while the customers were waiting. Overall Rating: 70% Here is me narrating in this episode: Okay so here is my review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' by Heisenberg_GR BIG JOB Writing: Excellent! Although there was 1 error were you spelled ''Mee too man i have the coke'' But you had the commas and dots in a perfect position. Presentation: Excellent! Excellent presentation again, really enjoyed it so good job! Length: Very Good! Length was 7 minutes, nice work! Difficulty: Easy. Nice and simple you just have to drive around places. I destroyed nearly my car. Variety: Good. Good amount of objects, actors and vehicles. Overall Rating: 61% BIG JOB PART2 Writing: Very Good! The dots and commas again in a nice position but you had 3 errors, for an example you spelled ''I'm suprised boys you are alive'' surprised* ''I want to meet me at my house'' i want you to meet me at my house* Presentation: Very Good! Very good i enjoyed this too but the mission is mostly about driving. Length: Very Good! The length was 8 minutes so good job! Difficulty: Easy. Again, nice and simple just cap some Russian goons and drive around down. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects. So good work! Overall Rating: 55% Here is me narrating in this episode: Chapter 1 Rating: 64% Edited November 24, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 (NEWS) This topic is now officially back! I will have another review out tomorrow! ghettospaghetti and Heisenberg_GR 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 Hello since i'm not active at designing today could you review the tow Farcry remakes i've made - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 Hello since i'm not active at designing today could you review the tow Farcry remakes i've made - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 Yes of course ! Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 Hello since i'm not active at designing today could you review the tow Farcry remakes i've made - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 Yes of course ! Well thanks in advance man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''The Revenge'' by Rendy Specter: Grey Falcon Writing: Very Good! Good writing, but sometimes a sentence doesn't go together. Presentation: Excellent! Very good. Every cutscene angle is perfect. And the characters are doing different animations in every different cutscene. Length: Good. The mission length was 9 minutes, good work! Difficulty: Very Hard! The battle starts in a instant, you stand in the same place 5 seconds and you are dead. You have to run away the moment the fight starts. And you are given limited amount of ammo for the SMG and you have to fight about 20 enemies with OP weapons + with good aim. Luckily, i didn't die. Not to mention you have to escape 3 Russian vehicles. Variety: Good. Good amount of vehicles, actors and weapons. Overall Rating: 78% What Falcon leave you with... Writing: Very Good! Again, sometimes a sentence does not go together, like in the end: So the time is come. So the time has come* Presentation: Excellent! Very good! But when Mark pushes the ladder to the other side doesn't that guard hear him? Length: Very Good! The length was 10 minutes, good job! Difficulty: Excellent! This is EXTREMELY hard. When one of the guards spot you, you are pretty much done. They have atleast 2500 hp. They have 100% accuracy. And very good weapons like shotguns, AK's, SMG's etc) Don't make that mistake that they will spot you... Variety: Good. Again, good amount of actors and vehicles and the weapon variety. Overall Rating: 88% Here is me narrating in this episode: Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203. Boom goes the car! Writing: Excellent! Although sometimes the sentence does not start with a caps letter. Presentation: Excellent! Nice! Really enjoyed killing those bodyguards and killing that debt owner in slow motion. Difficulty: Medium. It's kinda hard killing all those body guards. Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes, good job! Variety: Good. Lots of actors in this mission. Overall Rating: 62% Construction Destruction Writing: Very Good! Although there's a few sentences, good writing but the sentence does not again sometimes start with caps. Presentation: Very Good! But when the mission ends you are pretty much stuck on the crane. Difficulty: Medium. The mission is kinda hard too! I died once because 3 guards vs Kenji with a 30 HP + a deagle. Length: Too short!! Mission was 1 minute long, but i appreciate you making short mission once and a while. Variety: Decent. Few actors there and there. Overall Rating: 45% Dealin' n' wealin' Writing: Excellent! I think this time there was no errors. Presentation: Very Good! Nice cutscene angle. Difficulty: Medium. Lots of guards, but keep using a AK and you can kill them. Length: Good. Length was 5 minutes, good job! Variety: Good. Like i said lots of lots of Triads. Overall Rating: 68% Here is me narrating in this episode: ghettospaghetti 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 7, 2016 Author Share Posted January 7, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION'' made by Heisenberg_GR SAN FIERRO'S MALL Writing: Excellent! There is no errors at all, every sentence starts with a capitalization letter, the dots and commas are in a perfect position. Nice work! Presentation: Very Good! The cutscene angle is perfect, but the amount of cutscenes seems less then usual. Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. That is ALLOT of Soviet enemies you have to kill. And there is no health or armor pickups (maybe i didn't notice) And also one of the guards were bugged. They got stuck in boxes. If this happens i use a car to explode them. Variety: Excellent! Variety is allot. Many actors plus allot of objects making it look like a actual base. Overall Rating: 69% S.F. AIRPORT Writing: Excellent! The writing felt again perfect. Same like the last mission. Presentation: Excellent! Actually, you know what? We don't need that many cutscenes. 70% depends how well the gameplay is. Length: Good. Length was 8 minutes, but it depends how you move. Difficulty: Hard! This felt harder for some reason, i almost died at the start because of those snipers, luckily i spotted a armor pickup at the start of the battle. Variety: Very Good! Again, allot of actors. And allot of objects but the airport at the middle felt empty. Not sure if its because the game would starts crashing. Overall Rating: 76% Here is me narrating in this episode: Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 8, 2016 Author Share Posted January 8, 2016 Okay so here is the entire review of ''144 Hours to Life'' by KC10a Okay so here is my review for ''144 Hours For Life'' made by KC10a Countdown for death Writing: Good. There are some errors there and there. But anyway you can understand everything. Presentation: Good. The cutscene chat ends so fast. Like if someone is talking the next chat starts in 2 seconds. But anyways everything is alright. Length: Good. It took me 6 minutes to complete it, good work! Difficulty: Hard! Again the enemies appear in an instant it's kinda easy to defeat them but the problem is the cops! When i start killing like 20 enemies after one kill those annoying cops ruin everything! I put AEZAKMI cheat because i was getting sick of those cops. Lol seriously i had 1 case = 3 police bikes and an ground officer tried to kill me. Variety: Good. So many actors! Nice work! Overall Rating: 50% Value Of Guns Writing: Very Good! There seems to be less errors here, so far the only error i spot ''My another friend, Jack'' Presentation: Good. Once again the actors appear out of nowhere, but still this time it was easier for me. Length: Short. The length for this was 3 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. We can consider this easier because how the actors attack you in one road at once so you can headshot them easily. I had 2 cases but the cops never showed up. And the car was there to protect me getting killed. Variety: Good. again allot of actors. Overall Rating: 45% Test Of Life Writing: Good. There was some errors here, for an example you mixed up the words ''we'' and it should be ''have'' because the chat is like this: ''And why we HAD to kill Jizzy?'' ''We HAD to kill him because he wants to attack Los Santos'' They were discussion a plan to kill Jizzy, but he was not dead yet. Presentation: Good. Cutscenes end a little bit fast again, and instant fight again but due to how it took for 4 seconds for the enemies to load i was ready. Length: Short. The length was 3 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. Had no problem i took them out fast with my M4 what you are given. But i almost died. Variety: Good. A little bit less hackers then usual. Also you forgot to hide Toreno and Jack when we got to the hospital. Overall Rating: 42% Take note people: Always disable cops in any mission because they will be a pain in the buck. Here is me narrating in this episode: A Step For Success Writing: Good. There was errors in like ''Tommy first we need to plant bomb in Jizzy's club.'' Tommy first we need to plant a bomb in Jizzy's club. ''Kill these Bodyguards!'' Kill the bodyguards! and some dots and commas are missing. Presentation: Good. Presentation is good but the cutscenes end so fast, every cutscene ends in 2-3 seconds. Hard to read fast if there are multiple sentences. Length: Short. The length was 3 and a half minutes long. Difficulty: Medium. The guards appear out of nowhere, and they have pretty powerful weapons. Variety: Good. Good amount of actors so nice job! Overall Rating: 50% Survive from Death Writing: Good. There was a few errors like ''Why was Jizzy is doing that ?'' Why is Jizzy doing that ? Presentation: Good. The whole thing just does not make sense, why would Jizzy, a pimp attack Los Santos? He only has few bodyguards. If HE really wants to take over Los Santos then he needs a whole army! But although this is your mission pack you design how you want. Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes. Good job! Difficulty: Hard! You need to take cover fast when attacking Jizzy's club. I almost died because some actors have combat shotguns + eagles. Variety: Good. Again good amount of bodyguards. Overall Rating: 58% The Ending/Outro Writing: Good. Grammer errors again. Presentation: Good. What don't add up is that we never got to kill Jizzy. I assume he escaped. Length: Short. Length was only 3 minutes, but i will respect that its just an outro so good job! Difficulty: Hard! When the fight starts you must very quickly escape. You stand around 1 second and boom your dead. Plus you need to worry about the police. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. And also those are allot of random bodyguards! Overall Rating: 54% Here is me narrating in this episode: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W12Ui57_veQ1 Overall Rating: 50% This series is pretty challenging in my opinion! Good luck on your next design KC10a! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Okay so here is the entire review of ''144 Hours to Life'' by KC10a Okay so here is my review for ''144 Hours For Life'' made by KC10a Countdown for death Writing: Good. There are some errors there and there. But anyway you can understand everything. Presentation: Good. The cutscene chat ends so fast. Like if someone is talking the next chat starts in 2 seconds. But anyways everything is alright. Length: Good. It took me 6 minutes to complete it, good work! Difficulty: Hard! Again the enemies appear in an instant it's kinda easy to defeat them but the problem is the cops! When i start killing like 20 enemies after one kill those annoying cops ruin everything! I put AEZAKMI cheat because i was getting sick of those cops. Lol seriously i had 1 case = 3 police bikes and an ground officer tried to kill me. Variety: Good. So many actors! Nice work! Overall Rating: 50% Value Of Guns Writing: Very Good! There seems to be less errors here, so far the only error i spot ''My another friend, Jack'' Presentation: Good. Once again the actors appear out of nowhere, but still this time it was easier for me. Length: Short. The length for this was 3 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. We can consider this easier because how the actors attack you in one road at once so you can headshot them easily. I had 2 cases but the cops never showed up. And the car was there to protect me getting killed. Variety: Good. again allot of actors. Overall Rating: 45% Test Of Life Writing: Good. There was some errors here, for an example you mixed up the words ''we'' and it should be ''have'' because the chat is like this: ''And why we HAD to kill Jizzy?'' ''We HAD to kill him because he wants to attack Los Santos'' They were discussion a plan to kill Jizzy, but he was not dead yet. Presentation: Good. Cutscenes end a little bit fast again, and instant fight again but due to how it took for 4 seconds for the enemies to load i was ready. Length: Short. The length was 3 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. Had no problem i took them out fast with my M4 what you are given. But i almost died. Variety: Good. A little bit less hackers then usual. Also you forgot to hide Toreno and Jack when we got to the hospital. Overall Rating: 42% Take note people: Always disable cops in any mission because they will be a pain in the buck. Here is me narrating in this episode: A Step For Success Writing: Good. There was errors in like ''Tommy first we need to plant bomb in Jizzy's club.'' Tommy first we need to plant a bomb in Jizzy's club. ''Kill these Bodyguards!'' Kill the bodyguards! and some dots and commas are missing. Presentation: Good. Presentation is good but the cutscenes end so fast, every cutscene ends in 2-3 seconds. Hard to read fast if there are multiple sentences. Length: Short. The length was 3 and a half minutes long. Difficulty: Medium. The guards appear out of nowhere, and they have pretty powerful weapons. Variety: Good. Good amount of actors so nice job! Overall Rating: 50% Survive from Death Writing: Good. There was a few errors like ''Why was Jizzy is doing that ?'' Why is Jizzy doing that ? Presentation: Good. The whole thing just does not make sense, why would Jizzy, a pimp attack Los Santos? He only has few bodyguards. If HE really wants to take over Los Santos then he needs a whole army! But although this is your mission pack you design how you want. Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes. Good job! Difficulty: Hard! You need to take cover fast when attacking Jizzy's club. I almost died because some actors have combat shotguns + eagles. Variety: Good. Again good amount of bodyguards. Overall Rating: 58% The Ending/Outro Writing: Good. Grammer errors again. Presentation: Good. What don't add up is that we never got to kill Jizzy. I assume he escaped. Length: Short. Length was only 3 minutes, but i will respect that its just an outro so good job! Difficulty: Hard! When the fight starts you must very quickly escape. You stand around 1 second and boom your dead. Plus you need to worry about the police. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. And also those are allot of random bodyguards! Overall Rating: 54% Here is me narrating in this episode: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W12Ui57_veQ1 Overall Rating: 50% This series is pretty challenging in my opinion! Good luck on your next design KC10a! Thanks man, I'am still designing a MP named, "Who Wins - Crime or Truth" I will inform you when it was complete, I need a review of it to post it in my topic, and your name will be in CREDITS........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 10, 2016 Author Share Posted January 10, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''Playing The Spoiler'' made by HardluckStyle. PLAYING THE SPOILER Writing: Very Good! You had few errors like ''DzxProx PRESENT...'' DzxProz presents: ''Kill the remaing enemies.'' Kill the remaining enemies. Presentation: Excellent! Very nice cutscene angles! Good job! Length: Short. Mission length was only 3 minutes. Difficulty: Medium.. Its sometimes hard spotting the enemies behind trees. Almost died with 5 hp left. Variety: Very Good! There was allot of objects, very good work! Overall Rating: 58% Here is me narrating in this episode: Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted January 10, 2016 Share Posted January 10, 2016 Tbh, my grammars still progressing don't judge it. i really appreciate your review. thanks in advance KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 10, 2016 Author Share Posted January 10, 2016 Tbh, my grammars still progressing don't judge it. i really appreciate your review. thanks in advance You're welcome! Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''The CRASH of Tenpenny Demo'' made by AstroNutHead. Cleaning the Streets Writing: Very Good! You had some errors, but you placed the dots and commas perfectly! Good job! Presentation: Excellent! Very good presentation. Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. Pretty easy, just beat up some Balla chumps! Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. Good job. Overall Rating: 48% Armed and Dangerous Writing: Very Good! Same has before. Very excellent place to put commas and dots but you have few errors like ''Head to the precint.'' Head to the precinct. Presentation: Excellent! The cutscenes are very excellent! 100% positive that this is how it went behind the scenes. Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. You have to chase some suspects around the town. Then kill one of them. Variety: Decent. Again, decent amount of actors. Overall Rating: 48% Outro/Thank you for playing! Writing: Very Good! You had one error though: ''Don't forget to Rate, Comment or leava review. Don't forget to rate, comment or leave a review. Presentation: Excellent! Since it was only about 4 cutscenes but good end to a demo. Length: Blank. Blank because the outro was 20 seconds. Difficulty: Blank. Blank because there is no in-game action. Variety: Blank. Blank because there there was only 1 actor walking. Overall Rating: 29% Overall rating to the series: 47% Besides the rating, i would really like to play the entire project ! Good work on this AstroNutHead! Here is me narrating in this episode: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 18, 2016 Author Share Posted January 18, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''The GTA Undercover Cop'' made by DBZOVERLORD700. An Undercover Patrol Writing: Very Good! Good writing, but you leave out to dots everywhere. The commas are in a perfect position. Also at one point you spelled Kevn instead of Kevin. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation, so good job! Length: Short. Length was only 3 minutes. But longer then the previous missions. Difficulty: Easy. Pretty easy. Just kill a serial killer. Variety: Could be better!! There was only 2 actors and 1 vehicle. Overall Rating: 44% A Serious Gang Banger Writing: Very Good! Same as before. Presentation: Very Good! Again, good cutscene angles. Length: Too Short!! Length was only 2 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. You have to take down allot of Rifa gang members. So good job! Variety: Good. Good amount of actors in this mission. Overall Rating: 50% Taking Out Another Drug Dealer Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Very Good! Length: Too Short!! Length was only 1 minute. Difficulty: Too Easy!! You barely cant fail here. The drug dealer will not even attack you. Variety: Decent. Actors, vehicles and animations are decent. Overall Rating: 35% Here is me narrating in this episode: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted January 19, 2016 Share Posted January 19, 2016 (edited) Can you review my this mission. If you want: San Andreas Remake: Los Desperados Edited January 19, 2016 by Huzaifa khan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 19, 2016 Author Share Posted January 19, 2016 Can you review my this mission. If you want: San Andreas Remake: Los Desperados Yes of course! Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Rooster Posted January 20, 2016 Share Posted January 20, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''The CRASH of Tenpenny Demo'' made by AstroNutHead. Cleaning the Streets Writing: Very Good! You had some errors, but you placed the dots and commas perfectly! Good job! Presentation: Excellent! Very good presentation. Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. Pretty easy, just beat up some Balla chumps! Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. Good job. Overall Rating: 48% Armed and Dangerous Writing: Very Good! Same has before. Very excellent place to put commas and dots but you have few errors like ''Head to the precint.'' Head to the precinct. Presentation: Excellent! The cutscenes are very excellent! 100% positive that this is how it went behind the scenes. Length: Good. Length was 7 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. You have to chase some suspects around the town. Then kill one of them. Variety: Decent. Again, decent amount of actors. Overall Rating: 48% Outro/Thank you for playing! Writing: Very Good! You had one error though: ''Don't forget to Rate, Comment or leava review. Don't forget to rate, comment or leave a review. Presentation: Excellent! Since it was only about 4 cutscenes but good end to a demo. Length: Blank. Blank because the outro was 20 seconds. Difficulty: Blank. Blank because there is no in-game action. Variety: Blank. Blank because there there was only 1 actor walking. Overall Rating: 29% Overall rating to the series: 47% Besides the rating, i would really like to play the entire project ! Good work on this AstroNutHead! Here is me narrating in this episode: Thanks for the review, man! I sh*t you not, you're going to enjoy the first full episode full of continuity, explanation, backstory and a whole lot more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 20, 2016 Author Share Posted January 20, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicles'' made by GangstaZilla203. Family Problems Writing: Very Good! Very good writing, but you had some errors like: disapointed disappointed. twice. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation on how Kenji and hes father were talking. Length: Too Short!! Length was only 2 minutes. Difficulty: BLANK: Black because there is literally no reason to die. Variety: Could be better!! There was only about 3 actors and 1 phone booth. Overall Rating: 26% The Only Good Triad is a Dead One Writing: Excellent! I believe there was no errors. The dots and commas are perfect. Allot of slang/funny dialogue. Good work on this! Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation again. Length: Short. Mission length was 3 minutes. Difficulty: Hard! This is hard indeed. There was at least 20+ triads with powerful weapons attacking you. So good work! Variety: Very Good! Like i told you, allot of triads! Overall Rating: 83% 'The Green Thing' Writing: Excellent! Again i don't think there was any errors. Presentation: Very Good! Same as before. Length: Good. Length was 6 minutes, nice job! Difficulty: Medium. Many triads but not as much as before. Variety: Good. Good amount of actors. Overall Rating: 59% Here is me narrating in this episode: Hdxt_Hardluck and ghettospaghetti 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 30, 2016 Author Share Posted January 30, 2016 (UPDATE) i have been thinking, should i really be using that bot voice or should i just make gameplay videos and add reviews? Because i looked it over and the videos sound really weird. No bot voice and then i would make these videos with pleasure . PyThOn #TakeItEasy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted January 30, 2016 Share Posted January 30, 2016 (edited) (UPDATE) i have been thinking, should i really be using that bot voice or should i just make gameplay videos and add reviews? Because i looked it over and the videos sound really weird. No bot voice and then i would make these videos with pleasure .Yeah, no bot voice. Edited January 30, 2016 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) KeV3n and Hdxt_Hardluck 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted January 30, 2016 Author Share Posted January 30, 2016 Okay so here is my review for ''The Revenge'' made by Rendy Specter Half Stealth Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Very Good! Good presentation. Length: Very Good! Length was 9 minutes. Good job! Difficulty: Hard! It is very hard finding the russians. And you have to deal with the chainsaw russian. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. Overall Rating: 80% Downfall of Russian Mafia! Writing: Very Good! I think there was no errors here. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation. Length: Long! Mission length was 10 minutes. Difficulty: Too hard!! Its really hard taking down the russians. And near the end i always run out of ammo. Variety: Good. Good amount of actors and vehicles. Overall Rating: 64% Here is a gameplay video: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted January 31, 2016 Share Posted January 31, 2016 No, bot voice is better option. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted February 2, 2016 Author Share Posted February 2, 2016 No, bot voice is better option. Truth, im lazy to use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted February 2, 2016 Author Share Posted February 2, 2016 Okay so here is my review for Sa. Remake: Los Desperados Los Desperados Writing: Decent. The dialogue was not exactly the same like in the original game. You left out some sentences and there was allot of errors. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation just like in the real game. Length: Good. Length was 9 minutes, so good job! Difficulty: Hard! This is kinda hard, because there are many vagos and one of them as a RPG. Variety: Very Good! Allot of vagos, nice work! Overall Rating: 67% Here is a gameplay video: Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted February 2, 2016 Share Posted February 2, 2016 Thanks alot kevin, my bro, for this awesome review in detail. Respect + Have some cookies PyThOn #TakeItEasy and KeV3n 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted February 5, 2016 Author Share Posted February 5, 2016 (edited) Okay so here is the entire review for chapter 1 of ''The GTA Undercover Cop'' made by DBZOVERLORD700: Introduction/Intro Writing: Good. Very good english, but you don't leave a dot at a end of a sentence. Presentation: Good. Just a few cutscenes. Length: Too short!! The length was only 1 minute, although it is an intro so i will respect that. Difficulty: Easy. Just cap those 3 enemies. Variety: Good. Overall Rating: 38% The Work of and Undercover cop Writing: Very Good! No spelling errors but same as in the introduction, no dots at the end. Presentation: Very Good! It is actually like in the real game, they give a job for you and you won't answer questions, you just do it. Good job! Length: Too short!! Length was 1 and a half minute long. Difficulty: Easy. Again, just beat up a few thugs. I recommend you use a knife. Variety: Good. Decent amount of enemies. Overall Rating: 41% Rifa Shakedown Writing: Very Good! Pretty much what i said before. Presentation: Very Good! Again, same as what i said before. Length: Too short!! Missions are always 1 minute long. This has to be improved a little bit. Difficulty: Easy. Yeah just cap them again. Variety: Good. More enemies, and they are strapped with guns. Overall Rating: 41% Crack Deal at Cluckin Bell Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Good. Length: Too short!! 1 minute again. Difficulty: Easy. Again, just cap those enemies. Variety: Decent. There was 1 vehicle and a few actors. Overall Rating: 37% Overall actually this mission series is so far interesting for me, mostly because how we can cap the enemies with their decent aim. Here is me narrating in this episode: Okay so here is my review for ''The GTA Undercover Cop'' made by DBZOVERLORD700. An Undercover Patrol Writing: Very Good! Good writing, but you leave out to dots everywhere. The commas are in a perfect position. Also at one point you spelled Kevn instead of Kevin. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation, so good job! Length: Short. Length was only 3 minutes. But longer then the previous missions. Difficulty: Easy. Pretty easy. Just kill a serial killer. Variety: Could be better!! There was only 2 actors and 1 vehicle. Overall Rating: 44% A Serious Gang Banger Writing: Very Good! Same as before. Presentation: Very Good! Again, good cutscene angles. Length: Too Short!! Length was only 2 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. You have to take down allot of Rifa gang members. So good job! Variety: Good. Good amount of actors in this mission. Overall Rating: 50% Taking Out Another Drug Dealer Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Very Good! Length: Too Short!! Length was only 1 minute. Difficulty: Too Easy!! You barely cant fail here. The drug dealer will not even attack you. Variety: Decent. Actors, vehicles and animations are decent. Overall Rating: 35% Here is me narrating in this episode: The Herion Chillidog Stand Writing: Very Good! Very good spelling, but you always leave out a punctuation at the end of a sentence. Presentation: Very Good! Very good presentation! Length: Too short!! Length was only 1 minute. Difficulty: Too easy!! There is literally no reason you can fail here. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objects. So good work! Overall Rating: 40% Gang Activity in Easter Basin Writing: Very Good! Same like before. Presentation: Very Good! Once again good presentation. Length: Too short!! Length was once again short. About 2 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. Its kinda hard killing the gangsters. Variety: Good. Good amount of actors. Overall Rating: 45% Pier 69 Bust Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Very Good! Length: Short. Length was 4 minutes. Longer then the previous so good job! Difficulty: Medium. I actually died here once. There are actors with powerful weapons here again so good work! Variety: Good. Good amount of actors again. Overall Rating: 51% Outro/Kevin vs The Cluckin Bell Murder Writing: Very Good! Presentation: Very Good! Length: Too short!! Length was 2 minutes and 30 seconds long. Difficulty: Easy. Easy enough but i actually died one time. Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors. Overall Rating: 40% i will count that this was a outro so exceptions can be made. Here is a gameplay video: Chapter 1 Overall Rating: 52% Things to improve: +Put dots at the end of a sentence: +Make your mission longer. Good luck on your next storyline! UPDATE: I won't be taking in more reviews because i seriously wanna retire already from DYOM . The experience was great! Edited February 5, 2016 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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