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KeV3n

Kevin Reviews Your DYOMs

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UPDATE: In 2 days this topic got ''Hot'' with over 300 views and 30 replies thank you so much for the support everyone! :r*::lol:

#HatersGonnaHate #FansGonnaFan #AdminsGonnaAdmin :santa::breadfish:

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Okay so here is my review for ''GTA: The Three's a Crowd'' made by The GTA Fanatic

Introduction/You're Welcome

Writing: Very Good! Nice moving cutscenes and jokes like ''We will miss you, by that we will miss your money'' By the way leave spaces after a dot to make it more understandable.

Presentation: Very Good! Like i said nice moving cutscenes!


Length: Short. The length was only 2 minutes.

Difficulty: Blank because there is no in-game action.


Variety: Decent. Cars and actors can only be found here.

Overall Rating: 50%

Relations

Writing: Very Good! You sometimes leave out the 's' at a end of a word for an example: Go to your UNCLE house.

Presentation: Very Good! One error is there that when the gangsters attack you and when they kill your friends Ray and Max die you will not fail the mission.


Length: Very Good! The length was 8 minutes, good work!

Difficulty: Easy. You only have to beat up 3 gangsters with Bats, plus you don't have to worry about your friends getting killed because as i said you will not fail the mission.


Variety: Good. Meh, more animations and actors can be found here so good work!

Overall Rating: 61%

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Okay so here is my review for ''GTA: The Three's a Crowd'' made by The GTA Fanatic

 

Introduction/You're Welcome

 

Writing: Very Good! Nice moving cutscenes and jokes like ''We will miss you, by that we will miss your money'' By the way leave spaces after a dot to make it more understandable.

 

Presentation: Very Good! Like i said nice moving cutscenes!

 

Length: Short. The length was only 2 minutes.

 

Difficulty: Blank because there is no in-game action.

 

Variety: Decent. Cars and actors can only be found here.

 

Overall Rating: 50%

 

Relations

 

Writing: Very Good! You sometimes leave out the 's' at a end of a word for an example: Go to your UNCLE house.

 

Presentation: Very Good! One error is there that when the gangsters attack you and when they kill your friends Ray and Max die you will not fail the mission.

 

Length: Very Good! The length was 8 minutes, good work!

 

Difficulty: Easy. You only have to beat up 3 gangsters with Bats, plus you don't have to worry about your friends getting killed because as i said you will not fail the mission.

 

Variety: Good. Meh, more animations and actors can be found here so good work!

 

Overall Rating: 61%

 

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Just so you know i made the relations mission, and thanks for such honest review you made, keep it up 😊

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Just so you know i made the relations mission, and thanks for such honest review you made, keep it up

Sorry didn't know that. Anyway thank you for the support!

Please review this MP. Please!

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36028

It is on the list! I will try to have it out this week.

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Okay so here is my review for ''UNTOUCHABLE'' by Heisenberg_GR

Introduction/Intro

Writing: Very Good! The writing is still perfect! Although at some point i notice a error.

Presentation: Excellent! Nice start for the story! By the way you forgot to hide a actor but quickly in the next objective you noticed. Also at the start the actor didn't jump down the edge.

Length: Very Good. The length for me to complete was 7 minutes, nice work!


Difficulty: Easy. You just have to escape from the police. Nothing hard here but a police man tried to shotgun me down xD

Variety: Very Good. I liked how the police were placed at a perfect area, and the explosion at the end was cool.

Overall Rating: 76%

Hard Working Men

Writing: Very Good! Their swearing makes it so funny xD, like how Alberto was talking and Chelio responded: No sh*t?!

Presentation: Excellent! The rating would of been Very Good! on how the mission was just half driving but what pumped it up was the funny moment at the end. They got jobs and their jobs turned out to be a Hot Dog sellers xD, if it wasn't hilarious than you should play it yourself or watch my video.

Length: Very Good! This mission was a minute longer than the Intro which was 7 minutes. This was 8 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. No reason to fail here only if you crash your vehicle, fall from height or get beaten up by the enemy at the end of the mission.

Variety: Good. Good work, although this mission seemed to have less objects. But i liked the long line while the customers were waiting.

Overall Rating: 70%

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Good to know that the first person i reviewed became a reviewer himself. It would be nice to review one of my missions as it will give me motivation once i come back and get my sh*tty computer fixed.

 

I'm giving you two options, the third is to review them both if you wish.

 

The Silent Assassin Demo Mission 1- Drop The Deal

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37268

 

GTA: The CRASH of Tenpenny Demo

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37447

 

Yes, they're both demos to upcoming mission packs i will release. I just need someone to critique my work and see your thoughts on them since all i got is Alessandro.

 

I'm not in a rush, so take your time.

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Hey Kevin, just wondering are you going to review GTA Undercover Cop (the storyline I requested on page 1), just wondering

EDIT: Nevermind, just saw that you added my storyline to the list, just forget this comment existed

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Sorry for no reviews in this couple of past days, i have been busy in real life. I will try to 2 reviews out tomorrow.


Hey Kevin, just wondering are you going to review GTA Undercover Cop (the storyline I requested on page 1), just wondering
EDIT: Nevermind, just saw that you added my storyline to the list, just forget this comment existed

No you had the right to tell me, i totally forgot to add it into the list.

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Okay so i am back now again with another review. This series is made by Rendy Specter called The Revenge.

Introduction/The Unexpected Death

Writing: Very Good! Although there are some errors like ''It's been 3 years long since i haven't SEE you and Mark.''

Presentation: Excellent! I really liked the cutscene angle. Good work!

Length: Very Good! Probably one of the longest intros ever, 7 minutes nice work!

Difficulty: Easy. Just driving, and near the end you have to escape from 2 Russian goons.

Variety: Good. Decent amount of objects. Also why didn't you add more actors to the funeral of Sam and Mark's father? Lol only their kids showed up (Sam and Mark)

Overall Rating: 70%

The Russian Mafia

Writing: Very Good! Again, in this series you don't add a space after a dot :p.

Presentation: Excellent! Once again you put the cutscene angle in a nice and perfect place.

Length: Very Good! The length this time was 8 minutes. 1 minute longer than the intro.

Difficulty: Medium. You have to drive a very long road. Kill around 6 Russian Goons who have headshot disabled, and will wipe your HP out the moment you spawn. I didn't die but it was hard to kill them while we had around 15 ammo for the pistol. Not to mention there was a timer to find Reikov's location.

Variety: Very Good! I found allot of objectives in this mission, good work!

Overall Rating: 82%


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Light Syde Riandy

I purposedly never put spaces between words and punctuations because I want to put more words but I don't want to accidentally make mistakes and forcing myself to move the cutscene and edit. Do you really expect me to wrote transcripts and making s******** of cutscenes even exceeding 50 objectives? Once again, never add this as a factor for my missions.

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I didn't spawned other actors because that cutscene is after the prayers for George and everyone had left before his Mark and Sam. Besides, one of them will ruin the challenge of getting to the car before either Valgore or Sam died. And do you really expect me to add more objects in a drama action MP that focusing on reality without the needs of adding s******** of objects?

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I purposedly never put spaces between words and punctuations because I want to put more words but I don't want to accidentally make mistakes and forcing myself to move the cutscene and edit. Do you really expect me to wrote transcripts and making s******** of cutscenes even exceeding 50 objectives? Once again, never add this as a factor for my missions.

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My reaction to your post :p

Just wanted to say that It's very tough for me to add that much cutscenes in one environment only for that proper writing simply because I cannot type anymore characters in one cutscene. Not to mentioned if I wanted to edit the certain dialogue later on if I make mistakes and I had to move another one just to edit this cutscene. I can never be that good really... sorry for being pissed before.

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Okay so the forum is now online again! So here is my review for ''Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION by Heisenberg_GR



Introduction/Invasion



Writing: Very Good! Although there are sometimes few sentences that don't very well fit together. Or it's just my bad english.



Presentation: Excellent! So many explosions! Nice work!



Length: Good. The length for this was 6 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy. I died once when i was supposed to escape from a window with a vehicle.



Variety: Excellent! So many Soviets placed everywhere, very nice work!



Overall Rating: 69%



Prison Break



Writing: Excellent! Okay this time i am sure i found no errors or anything. Good job!



Presentation: Very Good! So many fighting was here. Which i enjoy!



Length: Long! The length was 11 minutes.



Difficulty: Hard! So many enemies, no health and armor pickups, but you are given a RPG with 9999 ammo to shoot the gate down but i used it to kill allot of the enemies ;) I died once at that extreme moment where your in a interior and enemies start shooting you.



Variety: Very Good! So many Soviets members, good job!



Overall Rating: 90% ((PERFECT!))


Also when Carter was sleeping he was bugged and was under the bed, but that of course was DYOM's fault. Or the bed was none solid.



I have this video out yesterday but due to gtaforums was down i added this review today so anyway here is me narrating in this episode:

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Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicels'' made by GangstaZilla203.



Dead bodies? no, no!



Writing: Very Good! I really don't think there is any spelling errors there. Good job!



Presentation: Very Good! A whole lot of Italian gangs attack you but luckily they have decent aim.



Length: Short. It took me 3 minutes to complete it.



Difficulty: Easy. Just dump the body in the car into the water and kill some Italian gangsters.



Variety: Good. Decent amount of weapons, pickups and peds.



Overall Rating: 46%



Meth Take



Writing: Very Good! The spelling seems to be the same, good work!



Presentation: Excellent! I really liked to kill the Italian members, You are given full health and ammo, a very nice weapon and the gangsters have good weapons too but with normal aim and plus with headshot on.



Length: Excellent! The length was 10 minutes! Nice going, and i skipped the trip where i go to Bayside and back.



Difficulty: Easy. Like i said in Presentation.



Variety: Good. Actors and weapons are found in this mission, and few pickups.



Overall Rating: 60%


Also, why was one guard in the freezer? Lol...



Desert Kill



Writing: Very Good! Funny jokes are found here. Like ''C'mon man, MONEY! MONEY! Kenji: Shut the f*ck up you f*cker'' or something like that.



Presentation: Very Good! I am very happy how that very long desert trip was skipped. Also how the hell they got up to a big ganton? You probably wanted Zee Gee to die like a badass right? :p



Length: Decent. The length was this time 4 minutes.



Difficulty: Easy. You have to kill a guard with a spas with a knife. Just sneak up on him and cut him. Where you kill Zee Gee just eliminate him with the Deagle you are given.



Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objectives are found in this mission.



Overall Rating: 40%


EDIT: And the reason why it was out fast because he wanted another episode of this awesomeness!


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Huzaifa khan

Hey kevin, what about review of my mission ? Is that done. Just want to know nothin' more ;):D

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Hey kevin, what about review of my mission ? Is that done. Just want to know nothin' more ;):D

should be out today or tomorrow.

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Okay so here is my review for ''144 Hours For Life'' made by KC10a



Countdown for death



Writing: Good. There are some errors there and there. But anyway you can understand everything.



Presentation: Good. The cutscene chat ends so fast. Like if someone is talking the next chat starts in 2 seconds. But anyways everything is alright.



Length: Good. It took me 6 minutes to complete it, good work!



Difficulty: Hard! Again the enemies appear in an instant it's kinda easy to defeat them but the problem is the cops! When i start killing like 20 enemies after one kill those annoying cops ruin everything! I put AEZAKMI cheat because i was getting sick of those cops. Lol seriously i had 1 case = 3 police bikes and an ground officer tried to kill me.



Variety: Good. So many actors! Nice work!



Overall Rating: 50%



Value Of Guns



Writing: Very Good! There seems to be less errors here, so far the only error i spot ''My another friend, Jack''



Presentation: Good. Once again the actors appear out of nowhere, but still this time it was easier for me.



Length: Short. The length for this was 3 minutes.



Difficulty: Medium. We can consider this easier because how the actors attack you in one road at once so you can headshot them easily. I had 2 cases but the cops never showed up. And the car was there to protect me getting killed.



Variety: Good. again allot of actors.



Overall Rating: 45%



Test Of Life



Writing: Good. There was some errors here, for an example you mixed up the words ''we'' and it should be ''have'' because the chat is like this: ''And why we HAD to kill Jizzy?'' ''We HAD to kill him because he wants to attack Los Santos'' They were discussion a plan to kill Jizzy, but he was not dead yet.



Presentation: Good. Cutscenes end a little bit fast again, and instant fight again but due to how it took for 4 seconds for the enemies to load i was ready.



Length: Short. The length was 3 minutes.



Difficulty: Medium. Had no problem i took them out fast with my M4 what you are given. But i almost died.



Variety: Good. A little bit less hackers then usual. Also you forgot to hide Toreno and Jack when we got to the hospital.



Overall Rating: 42%


Take note people: Always disable cops in any mission because they will be a pain in the buck.


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Okay so here is my review for ''Wanted, Dead Or Alive'' by Huzaifa khan

Wanted, Dead Or Alive

Writing: Decent. There was allot of sentence errors or how they call it 'grammer erros'' or something like that. For an example: ''Your problem will be solve in 2 days''

Presentation: Excellent! Honestly those cutscenes were so boss! Good job!

Length: Very Good! The length was 8 minutes. Nice job!


Difficulty: Easy. Nothing hard here, just kill the enemies from a distance and you are given health and armor pickups, not to mention a infinite amount of deagle ammo, good work again!

Variety: Excellent! Allot of objects was found in this mission.

Overall Rating: 66%

Also from this point on i will count how well your sentence starts. For an example: Hello, my name is Kevin. Wrong: hello my friend is kevin

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Okay so here is my review for ''The Silent Assassin Demo Mission 1- Drop the Deal'' made by AstroNutHead

Drop the Deal

Writing: Very Good! I don't think there was any errors there, good job! Also you forgot to start one sentence with capitalize.

Presentation: Very Good! What i really liked here was how long the cutscenes lasted. You got to read everything without rushing. It would of been better if it was 1 second shorter.

Length: Decent. The length was almost 5 minutes, good job!

Difficulty: Easy. Just drive to the deal, snipe those targets and get out of there fast.


Variety: Good. Very decent amount of objectives.

Overall Rating: 54%

Also from now on i will rate the missions after it is completed.

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Okay so here is my review for ''The GTA Undercover cop'' made by DBZOVERLORD700

Introduction/Intro

Writing: Good. Very good english, but you don't leave a dot at a end of a sentence.

Presentation: Good. Just a few cutscenes.

Length: Too short!! The length was only 1 minute, although it is an intro so i will respect that.

Difficulty: Easy. Just cap those 3 enemies.


Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 38%

The Work of and Undercover cop

Writing: Very Good! No spelling errors but same as in the introduction, no dots at the end.

Presentation: Very Good! It is actually like in the real game, they give a job for you and you won't answer questions, you just do it. Good job!

Length: Too short!! Length was 1 and a half minute long.

Difficulty: Easy. Again, just beat up a few thugs. I recommend you use a knife.


Variety: Good. Decent amount of enemies.


Overall Rating: 41%

Rifa Shakedown

Writing: Very Good! Pretty much what i said before.

Presentation: Very Good! Again, same as what i said before.

Length: Too short!! Missions are always 1 minute long. This has to be improved a little bit.

Difficulty: Easy. Yeah just cap them again.


Variety: Good. More enemies, and they are strapped with guns.


Overall Rating: 41%

Crack Deal at Cluckin Bell

Writing: Very Good!

Presentation: Good.

Length: Too short!! 1 minute again.

Difficulty: Easy. Again, just cap those enemies.


Variety: Decent. There was 1 vehicle and a few actors.


Overall Rating: 37%

Overall actually this mission series is so far interesting for me, mostly because how we can cap the enemies with their decent aim.

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Huzaifa khan

Thanks for your great review Kevin, it's really motivate me to create more missions :):^:

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Thanks for your great review Kevin, it's really motivate me to create more missions :):^:

Thank you! No problem.

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Okay so here is my review for ''GTA: The CRASH of Tenpenny'' made by AstroNutHead



Introduction/Bad cop, good cop.



Writing: Good. First of all, you added everything perfectly, the dots thes '','' (no idea what they are called) But the problem was there was errors. For an example: You spelled everytime ''Pendulberry'' while its ''Pendelbury'' also at one point you did this: This is a weapon Officer Pulaski, was used to gun down down''



Presentation: Very Good! Very good cutscene angle! Also at the part where CJ jumps out of the vehicle, you could of used the animation ''Jump forward''



Length: Good. The length was 6 minutes, good work!



Difficulty: Too easy!! You just have to cap Pendelbury and the whole mission is an cutscene (again, i will count that it's just an introduction)



Variety: Good. Nice amount of objectives.



Overall Rating: 57%



The Gang Capital



Writing: Excellent! Here you basically nailed it! No errors, you have all the dots in the right place, and every sentence starts with a capitalization. Very good work!



Presentation: Very Good! Pretty much all the angles are in an perfect position. When Tenpenny is talking with Melvin (aka Big Smoke) The only time its not perfect is when you force Smoke to jump away from the car which is up to the player.



Length: Good. The length was 6 minutes. Good work!



Difficulty: Easy. Just do the driving, it depends how well you drive.



Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors, nothing to say here about it.



Overall Rating: 63%


Also, i really believe this is how things really went behind the scenes of the original game. So nice job!



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Okay so here is my review for ''The Ballad of Polo Garmer'' made by FES04

Introduction.

Writing: Excellent! I'm pretty sure there was no errors and you put the commas and dots in a such a perfect place. Good job!

Presentation: Excellent! I enjoyed the cutscene angles. Although when that ''Buster'' kills Polo's parents (or atleast i think they are hes parents) sometimes fails. But it is DYOM's fault.

Length: Decent. Length was 4 minutes. And i extended the cutscenes in my video if you are going to wonder.


Difficulty: Blank because no in-game action.

Variety: Very Good! Very nice amount of cars, actors and weapons. Good work!

Overall Rating: 70%

(Exceptions are made in every introduction of Difficulty and Length)

Ride ma Mama!

Writing: Very Good! Again, dots and commas are put in a good place. But the problem was that you spelled everytime (Gaurd) instead of (Guard)

Presentation: Very Good! Again, good cutscene angles!

Length: Very Long! I gotta say here, i think this is one of the longest missions EVER in Kevin Reviews Your DYOMs, 15 minutes! Nobody has not gotten yet Excellent! which is 20+ minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. You are given decent guns, and max health and armor plus 3 health and a armor pickup at Otto's Autos. And you have to wipe out about 20 guards.

Variety: Very Good! Lot's of objects again. Like actors, objects, and vehicles.

Overall Rating: 82%

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Any news for "The Revenge" Kevin?

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Okay so here is the ENTIRE review of Kenji Chronicles Chapter 1:

Okay so here is my review for Konji Chronicles made by GangstaZilla203.

Introduction:

Writing: Very Good! Writing is very good. Funny lines as well.

Presentation: Very Good! What made it perfect is that the cutscene angle is always in the same place when a actor is talking. Nice!

Length: Short. Nothing won't be taken very seriously since it is an introduction. I completed it in 3 minutes. But i was driving very fast. So for some people it will be around 4 or 5 minutes. (aga Decent.)

Difficulty: Easy. Just cutscenes and drivings. The only death reason i see here is destroying your car.

Variety: Decent. The amount found here was just actors, vehicles. Again since it's a introduction nothing serious can be taken.


Overall Rating: 46%

Ways to get Paid:

Writing: Very Good! Besides the slang, you can understand what they are talking.

Presentation: Very Good!

Length: Decent. It took me to complete only about 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Again just driving, and at the end you have to beat the sh't out of some guy but he won't really fight back since he has a camera.

Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 58%

In Need of an Assassin:

Writing: Very Good! Everything is the same, the slang, the funny moments like ''Yeah why the fu*k not''

Presentation: Excellent! What pumped this up was that Dre the protagonist from ''Gangsta Life'' series made a small cameo in this mission. (Also i don't know if Zilla makes more of this kind of surprises) Seriously that was the final thing i would of aspected to happen.

Length: Very Good! It took me around 7 minutes to complete it. Nice job!

Difficulty: Medium. As the boss hands you a sniper with 5 bullets. And you are supposed to eliminate 4 gang members with a headshot who are shooting you with eagles. If you miss 2 shots, you would have to bear hand kick the sh't out of them.

Variety: Good.


Overall Rating: 71%

I will be expecting more cameos like that in future missions though ;)

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Racing Chasing

Writing: Good. Again, there is allot of slang and some of them i didn't understand. Plus i found a error which you typed: Go sign up for the illegal *steet* races.

Presentation: Very Good! Meh, not bad the cutscene angle is in a perfect place.

Length: Short. It took me to complete it 2 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. Nothing hard here, just drive to Pier 69 and beat some thugs in a race.


Variety: Good. I liked the explosion what you had to ram into it to win the race.

Overall Rating: 46%

Pimping, Bitch!

(sorry for this kind of a title but it's the name of the mission)

Writing: Very Good! the writing was much better here.

Presentation: Good. Hey amigo, when actors are gonna leave don't just make them disappear, make them like walk away or run away not just letting them disappear in the next cutscene angle like some cartoon.

Length: Very Good! Nice, the mission was much longer. It took me to complete it 7 minutes.


Difficulty: Easy. Nothing hard, just drive the women where they have to go and take down some pimps in the club called ''The Loot'' but they are hard to kill but your given extra armor.


Variety: Good.

Overall Rating: 58%

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Car Goes Boom!

Writing: Very Good! You can understand everything. Lot's of gangsta talk there though!

Presentation: Very Good! There is a small funny goof though, when you destroy a car the next car literally appears in front of you.

Length: Short. The time to complete it took me 3 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. Simple, just take cover when you are killing the goons. And go in a distance when blowing up the sport cars.

Variety: Good. I found in this mission actors with different guns, 3 sport cars. (BTW nice place to plan the attack i enjoy shooting enemies off from high edges.

Overall Rating: 50%

Heroin Delivery

Writing: Very Good. Allot of slang, but you can understand what they are talking, sorta.

Presentation: Very Good. Nice cutscene angles.

Length: Very Good. The time to complete it was 7 minutes.

Difficulty: Medium. Dang there was like 30 thugs attacking you. Atleast you were given full health and armor plus another armor pickup and the actors had headshot on. I suggest you ram them with a truck and use it for cover.

Variety: Very Good. The actors pumped it up because how many there was.

Overall Rating: 77%

Here is me narrating in this episode:

Dead bodies? no, no!

Writing: Very Good! I really don't think there is any spelling errors there. Good job!

Presentation: Very Good! A whole lot of Italian gangs attack you but luckily they have decent aim.

Length: Short. It took me 3 minutes to complete it.

Difficulty: Easy. Just dump the body in the car into the water and kill some Italian gangsters.

Variety: Good. Decent amount of weapons, pickups and peds.

Overall Rating: 46%

Meth Take

Writing: Very Good! The spelling seems to be the same, good work!

Presentation: Excellent! I really liked to kill the Italian members, You are given full health and ammo, a very nice weapon and the gangsters have good weapons too but with normal aim and plus with headshot on.

Length: Excellent! The length was 10 minutes! Nice going, and i skipped the trip where i go to Bayside and back.

Difficulty: Easy. Like i said in Presentation.

Variety: Good. Actors and weapons are found in this mission, and few pickups.

Overall Rating: 60%

Also, why was one guard in the freezer? Lol...

Desert Kill

Writing: Very Good! Funny jokes are found here. Like ''C'mon man, MONEY! MONEY! Kenji: Shut the f*ck up you f*cker'' or something like that.

Presentation: Very Good! I am very happy how that very long desert trip was skipped. Also how the hell they got up to a big ganton? You probably wanted Zee Gee to die like a badass right? :p

Length: Decent. The length was this time 4 minutes.

Difficulty: Easy. You have to kill a guard with a spas with a knife. Just sneak up on him and cut him. Where you kill Zee Gee just eliminate him with the Deagle you are given.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of objectives are found in this mission.

Overall Rating: 40%

EDIT: And the reason why it was out fast because he wanted another episode of this awesomeness!

Here is me narrating in this episode:

Pow! Pow! Pow!

Writing: Excellent! Pretty sure no errors, and commas and dots are in a perfect place. Good job!


Presentation: Very Good! Not bad, not bad at all, but you can see CJ in the background in the beginning of the mission. And the battle starts in an instant once you get to the roof.

Length: Too short!! The length was 1 and an half minute long. I think this was the shortest mission in chapter 1.

Difficulty: Easy. Pretty easy, although i almost died in this mission.

Variety: Decent. Decent amount of actors.


Overall Rating: 39%

Outro

Writing: Excellent! Again, no errors. Everyone seems to be drunk there (lol) and dots and commas are in a perfect place.


Presentation: Very Good! Nice presentation but i honestly i wish i didn't see ''that'' moment... You know what i mean if you played the storyline.

Length: Short. The outro was 2 minutes, not bad. Longer then the previous mission.

Difficulty: Blank because there is no in-game action.

Variety: Decent. Again, decent amount of objects and actors.


Overall Rating: 45%

(again exceptions are made in a outro and a introduction)

Here is me narrating in this episode:

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Okay here is were i continue the review i made today, but this is now Chapter 2 of Kenji Chronicles:

Intro

Writing: Excellent! Even though it's just 2 sentences, no errors.

Presentation: Decent. Just to be honest at this point you should of made a flashback on how the characters were worrying about Kenji being missing for 4 days.

Length: Too short!! The intro was about 15 seconds.

Difficulty: Blank because no in-game action.


Variety: Blank because the fact there was only 1 actor.

Overall Rating: 30%

That was a hard decision. But exceptions are made for Difficulty and Length...

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