KeV3n Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) Kevin Reviews Your DYOMs What is this topic?! This is a topic where i review other peoples DYOM mission/storylines. I review them and plus with gameplay. Before complaining we already have a topic like this you must know the difference with mine and those. AznKei's topic: EVERYONE reviews there, but this topic is just where only i review them for everyone. KC10a's topic: He reviews missions with text, but i review them with text and gameplay. ''I am no longer taking in anymore reviews!!! So please stop asking!'' How can i enter my mission?! Simple, just leave a link to it. Ratings: Writing max rating: Excellent! Presentation max rating: Excellent! Length max rating: Excellent! (Very Long! is a bonus) Difficulty max rating: Excellent! (Very Hard! is a bonus) Variety max rating: Excellent! Overall max rating: 100% ((PERFECT!!)) ((PERFECT!!)) starts from 90% or higher. Please note, your review should be out within a week. It depends how busy i am or how many reviews i have to do. Here are colors and what they mean: Red 0% to 29%: Could be better / Bad. Green 30% to 69%: Decent / Normal. Blue 70% to 100%: Excellent / Perfect! Dark Orange: Spelling correction. Missions to review: COMPLETED! Missions/storylines that are reviewed: Kilometer by maoffense01: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38637 Rating: 40% Wanted, Dead Or Alive by Huzaifa khan: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39100 Rating: 66% The Silent Assassins Demo 1: Drop The Deal by AstroNutHead and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37268 Rating 54% 144 Hours For Life by KC10a and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36028 Rating: 50% Playing the Spoiler by HardluckStyle and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38496 Rating: 58% GTA: The CRASH of Tenpenny by AstroNutHead and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37447 Rating: 47% San Andreas Remake: Los Desperados by Huzaifa khan and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38599 Rating: 67% The GTA Undercover cop by DBZOVERLORD700 and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36314 Rating: 52% The Revenge by Rendy Specter and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/24762 Rating 72% Freedom Fighters: REVOLUTION by Heisenberg_GR and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37229 Rating: 76% UNTOUCHABLE by Heisenberg_GR and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37323 Rating: 80% Kenji Chronicles by GangstaZilla203 and link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39275 Rating: 82% Edited March 22, 2016 by KevinDYOM account Hdxt_Hardluck, maoffense01 and Huzaifa khan 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? Edited October 25, 2015 by SatournFan Curtis 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 I just wanted to let you know that I'm remaking the first mission of "The Revenge" because the mission itself is broken. So please don't review it until I request again okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 Yeah, Good idea, kevin I also really like your reviewing system KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? Let me think... Yeah, the Topics that you're talking about are dead. Good luck with this Kevin. KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? Let me think... Yeah, the Topics that you're talking about are dead. Good luck with this Kevin. and your point is? I mean, it takes one post to revive a topic Curtis 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? Let me think... Yeah, the Topics that you're talking about are dead. Good luck with this Kevin. and your point is? I mean, it takes one post to revive a topic These guys like me we're working alone. For example I'm working alone on Trailers so I made a Topic and it goes well. Forget the pinned dead Topics. KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) Wow, another reviewer!!. Edited October 25, 2015 by KC10a KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curtis Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? i really agree with you there. there are more than enough topics already where you can ask for a trailer or a review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 25, 2015 Author Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? I'm sorry, should i know shut this topic down because you hate it? These are the kind of people who make me crazy, by far you are the only person to complain about my 'commentary' if you got nothing better to say than please, go away. Anyway for the rest of you thanks for the support! Edited October 25, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) if that is what you call 'commentary'... ugh besides, there IS a topic for reviews WITH commentary. I don't get it - why do you guys feel the need to make topics for something that already exists? I'm sorry, should i know shut this topic down because you hate it? These are the kind of people who make me crazy, by far you are the only person to complain about my 'commentary' if you got nothing better to say than please, go away. Anyway for the rest of you thanks for the support! 1. this is not 'commentary', this is text-to-speech and it sounds awful, let's admit it. besides, it's an awful text-to-speech. there are better programs for that if you can't just voice your own reviews 2. I just don't get it. why would you create a topic for something that already has a dedicated topic? yeah, it may be dead, but as I've said, it takes one post to revive a topic and there was not a single word of hate in my original comment, I asked a genuine quiestion Edited October 25, 2015 by SatournFan /\rdooZ, Curtis and Kratos2000 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJGM Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) We already have a topic for this. You guys need to stop making topics so you can individually do stuff. EDIT: Unlocked. Threads like this are allowed, but won't be pinned as they're not official. Edited October 25, 2015 by TJGM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 25, 2015 Author Share Posted October 25, 2015 Thanks admin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 25, 2015 Author Share Posted October 25, 2015 Okay so here is my review for ''Kenji Chronicels'' made by GangstaZilla203 Car Goes Boom! Writing: Very Good! You can understand everything. Lot's of gangsta talk there though! Presentation: Very Good! There is a small funny goof though, when you destroy a car the next car literally appears in front of you. Length: Short. The time to complete it took me 3 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. Simple, just take cover when you are killing the goons. And go in a distance when blowing up the sport cars. Variety: Good. I found in this mission actors with different guns, 3 sport cars. (BTW nice place to plan the attack i enjoy shooting enemies off from high edges. Overall Rating: 50% Heroin Delivery Writing: Very Good. Allot of slang, but you can understand what they are talking, sorta. Presentation: Very Good. Nice cutscene angles. Length: Very Good. The time to complete it was 7 minutes. Difficulty: Medium. Dang there was like 30 thugs attacking you. Atleast you were given full health and armor plus another armor pickup and the actors had headshot on. I suggest you ram them with a truck and use it for cover. Variety: Very Good. The actors pumped it up because how many there was. Overall Rating: 77% Here is me narrating in this episode: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 Please review this MP http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36028 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 I finally finished with the first mission for "The Revenge". Looking forward to the time when you review that MP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) Lovin' this topic! thanks for reviewing KC in text form as well! There already is topics like this, but, nothing like one from my homie Kevin! Edited October 26, 2015 by GangstaZilla203 KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 26, 2015 Author Share Posted October 26, 2015 Lovin' this topic! thanks for reviewing KC in text form as well! There already is topics like this, but, nothing like one from my homie Kevin! Thanks homie! ghettospaghetti 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 Yes,another reviewer! Kilometer http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/38637 Yes,I'm in a rush to have it out,if you review it honestly! Sorry for being shameless because it's the first time we met. And I shamelessly requested you. I JUST WANT A BANCH OF RATINGS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 26, 2015 Author Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) Alright, you will get a banch of ratings then xd! Edited October 26, 2015 by KevinDYOM account maoffense01 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/\rdooZ Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) I don't really want to repeat stuff,but this just doesn't make sense. We have the topic that Aznkei opened and that's enough in my opinion:Everyone can post their reviews there. Kc10a(sincerely apologized if I spelled your username wrong)opened one,now you're opening one too! At this rate a new Review topic will be up and goimg every week for no reason. And if really all of you guys want to review,at least open a topic together.More than one topic for reviews isn't needed. Hovewer,do as you wish.I don't have the right to stop you,but I can express my opinion. Also,if you want to use a text-to-speech program,find a better one.Hundreds of hundreds of them are on the internet.Seriously,I couldn't watch the review just from that ''speech''. Edited October 26, 2015 by The GTA Fanatic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 26, 2015 Author Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) I don't really want to repeat stuff,but this just doesn't make sense. We have the topic that Aznkei opened and that's enough in my opinion:Everyone can post their reviews there. Kc10a(sincerely apologized if I spelled your username wrong)opened one,now you're opening one too! At this rate a new Review topic will be up and goimg every week for no reason. And if really all of you guys want to review,at least open a topic together.More than one topic for reviews isn't needed. Hovewer,do as you wish.I don't have the right to stop you,but I can express my opinion. Also,if you want to use a text-to-speech program,find a better one.Hundreds of hundreds of them are on the internet.Seriously,I couldn't watch the review just from that ''speech''. You mean the latest voice? It's not text-to-speech its speakonia! Anyway i'm not going to argue about this. Mentioned reasons have been explained above. Edited October 26, 2015 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/\rdooZ Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) You mean the latest voice? It's not text-to-speech its speakonia! Anyway i'm not going to argue about this. Mentioned reasons have been explained above. Speakonia is a text-to-speech program,mate! I am also not going to argue about this and let this be. It would still be better if all reviewers would cooperate... Edited October 26, 2015 by The GTA Fanatic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 26, 2015 Author Share Posted October 26, 2015 You mean the latest voice? It's not text-to-speech its speakonia! Anyway i'm not going to argue about this. Mentioned reasons have been explained above. Speakonia is a text-to-speech program,mate! I am also not going to argue about this and let this be. It would still be better if all reviewers would cooperate... They are still 2 different things, text-to-speech has one voice, while speakonia had many voices to choose plus how you want the voice to sound like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/\rdooZ Posted October 26, 2015 Share Posted October 26, 2015 (edited) You mean the latest voice? It's not text-to-speech its speakonia! Anyway i'm not going to argue about this. Mentioned reasons have been explained above. Speakonia is a text-to-speech program,mate! I am also not going to argue about this and let this be. It would still be better if all reviewers would cooperate... They are still 2 different things, text-to-speech has one voice, while speakonia had many voices to choose plus how you want the voice to sound like. You are wrong on that too,mate.Text-to-Speech isn't a program,is a group of them.And in the group any app/website that can convert text to speech qualifies(hence the name).And in most of Text-to-Speech programs you can select a lot of voices. Also,I would appreciate it if you would review my,Prodz and Huzaifa's MP:http://gtaforums.com/topic/767788-gta-the-threes-a-crowd-wip and I am also in a rush,since Kc10a hasn't done this in a week. Edited October 26, 2015 by The GTA Fanatic Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 27, 2015 Author Share Posted October 27, 2015 Okay so here is my review for ''Kilometer'' made by maoffense01 Kilometer Writing: Decent. Since there was only like 4 sentences and few errors like for an example: Get Redy. Presentation: Excellent! I am really liking the slow motion parts, nice work! Length: Short. The length for this mission was only 3 minutes. Difficulty: Easy. Nothing hard, you have to win a race but heck, even the A.I for some reason just backs down at the start of the mission. Why it is not rated Very Easy is because of the fact how i almost destroyed my vehicle. Variety: Excellent! Really nice of objects can be found here. Overall Rating: 40% Here is me narrating in this episode: maoffense01 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 Wow,thanks for the review,Kevin! Very thankful on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 27, 2015 Author Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) Wow,thanks for the review,Kevin! Very thankful on it! No problem, Lol why does it have a dislike there already? xDD oh well. Edited January 3, 2016 by KevinDYOM account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 Hey bro, can you review my this mission: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39100 I highly appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DBZOVERLORD700 Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 Hey there Kevin, can you review this storyline that I made/making called GTA Undercover Cop. Link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36314 (This is only chapter 1, I'll link you more chapters once they are finished and when you have completed Chapter 1) Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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