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Well i'm going to keep it short here.

I'm not trying to be rude here, but i played the first chapter and i noticed that most missions were taken from other gta games with a small twist. I don't hate on that, but you could've had better ideas. and there was this one mission impossible to do, You spawned in a place full of enemies with no armor and no place to take cover. Plus the enemies had headshots off and had 500 hp or something. No offense here or any hard feelings but it could be better. That's my honest opinion.

I have yet to play the other chapters so yeah, let's see what that will be.

First of all, you're wrong about that most missions were taken from other GTA games. It's true that I took 1-2 missions but not most of them. Also I tested all of my missions and nothing it's impossible but yeah sometimes are very challenging and the enemies has 250 HP. Thanks for your short review, waiting for the second chapter. :)

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Well, you know what they say. Your own missions seem easier to yourself, but other people may have a tougher time with them.

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Well, you know what they say. Your own missions seem easier to yourself, but other people may have a tougher time with them.

Yeah I know but it's not impossible.

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if you are talking about the mission where there are two trucks in the same directions. then I will complain about that, the left truck is a big problem too, because its way closer than the right one, which makes this even harder, because if you run away they will shoot your mom, try to fight. R.I.P Tommy Vercetti 1950 - 1971

I got out of there by shooting the two guys on the far left in the head then running to a car that I stole.

 

 

P.S that was hard work first time I got killed second one I was on fire but that Damn guy on the left side killed me.

Can you tell me the name of this mission because I can't remember it?

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So, I just played chapter 1 of "Tommy Vercetti Stories" and here's my review:

 

Writing: I thought the writing was decent. Your English has definitely improved, Heisen. The only thing I would improve is some grammatical errors, and more comas. Because the comas help make the sentence more realistic, instead of all the words pilled on top of each other. The English is decent, but I would improve!

Presentation: I thought the presentation was good! Although I would work on adding more moving cutscenes/other cutscene types that are present to you. But, you still did good in this department! Then again, I've only played chapter 1 so far, so, what would I know to expect? :p

Length: I thought the length of the missions were perfect actually! The missions weren't to long, yet they weren't to short! The perfect length! Great job in this department, Heisen!

Difficulty: I thought the difficulty within the missions was great! I really didn't have an impossible moment, nor a to easy moment! Just the right amount of difficulty! :)

Variety: I thought the variety within the missions, were good! Although a lot of the missions in chapter 1 were missions taken from other GTA games. Like, literally ripped straight from a GTA. But, nonetheless, it was decent/good. But, I still got the other two chapters to play! So what would I know!? :p

Overall Verdict: Tommy Vercetti Stories chapter 1, was a fun experience. I can't doubt myself when saying that. I am definitely looking forward to extracting chapter 2 into my DSL folder! Chapter 1 didn't completely live up to my expectations, I guess you could say, but, it was still an enjoyable experience nonetheless. I'm looking forward to playing chapter 2 and thus wards. Overall, I give "Tommy Vercetti Stories" chapter 1, an 8/10 :D

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Sorry if this was already brought up, but didn't Tommy's dad work at a print shop, and now a car place?

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So, I just played chapter 1 of "Tommy Vercetti Stories" and here's my review:

 

Writing: I thought the writing was decent. Your English has definitely improved, Heisen. The only thing I would improve is some grammatical errors, and more comas. Because the comas help make the sentence more realistic, instead of all the words pilled on top of each other. The English is decent, but I would improve!

Presentation: I thought the presentation was good! Although I would work on adding more moving cutscenes/other cutscene types that are present to you. But, you still did good in this department! Then again, I've only played chapter 1 so far, so, what would I know to expect? :p

Length: I thought the length of the missions were perfect actually! The missions weren't to long, yet they weren't to short! The perfect length! Great job in this department, Heisen!

Difficulty: I thought the difficulty within the missions was great! I really didn't have an impossible moment, nor a to easy moment! Just the right amount of difficulty! :)

Variety: I thought the variety within the missions, were good! Although a lot of the missions in chapter 1 were missions taken from other GTA games. Like, literally ripped straight from a GTA. But, nonetheless, it was decent/good. But, I still got the other two chapters to play! So what would I know!? :p

Overall Verdict: Tommy Vercetti Stories chapter 1, was a fun experience. I can't doubt myself when saying that. I am definitely looking forward to extracting chapter 2 into my DSL folder! Chapter 1 didn't completely live up to my expectations, I guess you could say, but, it was still an enjoyable experience nonetheless. I'm looking forward to playing chapter 2 and thus wards. Overall, I give "Tommy Vercetti Stories" chapter 1, an 8/10 :D

Thanks mate, waiting the second review. :^:

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Awesome dude you did a Really good work :lol:

 

Review

 

Feeling: it feel me like back in the action of 90s its awesome I love gta united 90%

 

Missions: awesome but I got crashes sometimes but after restarting game the problem fixed 70%

 

Introduction: I tought its a part of story but after seeing crowd saying yea and you Heisenberg then i taught why you did coz of Y/N system 100%

 

Story: better then original gta games 100%

 

Dialogues: it was so nice that jokes and everything my best one is toilet seen :^: 96%

 

Difficulties: Normal and sometimes Hard 80%

 

Over all 98.9% awesome

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Awesome dude you did a Really good work :lol:

 

Review

 

Feeling: it feel me like back in the action of 90s its awesome I love gta united 90%

 

Missions: awesome but I got crashes sometimes but after restarting game the problem fixed 70%

 

Introduction: I tought its a part of story but after seeing crowd saying yea and you Heisenberg then i taught why you did coz of Y/N system 100%

 

Story: better then original gta games 100%

 

Dialogues: it was so nice that jokes and everything my best one is toilet seen :^: 96%

 

Difficulties: Normal and sometimes Hard 80%

 

Over all 98.9% awesome

Thanks my friend. :^:

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Finished the storyline, god it was awesome, keep it up heisenbergGR you are the best.

 

A review for GTA: Tommy Vercetti Stories storyline by HeisenbergGR

Better (84%)

Writing : there was some sentences that you forgot to add will in and sometimes you mix Any with some.

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Story Presentation : The missions was amazing and there was some funny stuff like *Shut the f*ck up, I want to play* and when tommy kicked the guy's ass out of robert's office, these two scenes, they are just yolo :lol:. the gunfight and stealing and stuff was amazing too.

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Length : It had a lot of good missions,I can remember that it was 30+ missions which is a lot and some of them was hard but you didn't watch me playing Gta sa, I'm a mlg pro yo :die::die: .

 

 

Excellent (95%)

Difficulty : Some missions were easy to beat but some missions were super hard, especially the turf war stuff and the yardies turf war (I died in the yardies turf war two times in a row then I finished the first part then rip me once again at the second part then I finished it.)

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Variety : The effect's,the object's,the cutscenes and everything was amazing 100% for this one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall Progress

(Excellent 98%)

 

84% + 100% + 100% + 95% + 100% = 479%

479% / 5 = 95.8%

 

 

That was freaking awesome dude well done! :panic: Here's my review:
"Story" Awesome dude really. Vice city is my favourite GTA and you did great prequel of Tommy's story! 100%
"Writing" You've improved your English. Good Job! 85%
"Presentation" I can't find the word here wait. A yea, AWESOME! 100%
"Length" It took me 20-35 minutes for each Chapter. The whole storyline took me 2 days with pause of course. GREAT! 100%
"Difficulty" Wow some missions were real too hard man but it was challenging! VERY GOOD 80%
"Variety" Excellent! You added many cars, objects and actors. Anyway, GREAT! 100%
Keep it up man your ideas are awesome. The introduction, the heist and the last mission were amazing!
OVERALL: 91% MASTERPIECE

 

 

100% + 85% + 100% + 100% + 80% + 100% = 565%

565% / 6 = 94.16%

 

Awesome dude you did a Really good work :lol:

 

Review

 

Feeling: it feel me like back in the action of 90s its awesome I love gta united 90%

 

Missions: awesome but I got crashes sometimes but after restarting game the problem fixed 70%

 

Introduction: I tought its a part of story but after seeing crowd saying yea and you Heisenberg then i taught why you did coz of Y/N system 100%

 

Story: better then original gta games 100%

 

Dialogues: it was so nice that jokes and everything my best one is toilet seen :^: 96%

 

Difficulties: Normal and sometimes Hard 80%

 

Over all 98.9% awesome

 

90% + 70% + 100% + 100% + 96% + 80% = 536%

536% / 6 = 89.33%

 

 

People clearly don't know what an overall is and neither do they know their maths - it seems like.

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Finished the storyline, god it was awesome, keep it up heisenbergGR you are the best.

 

A review for GTA: Tommy Vercetti Stories storyline by HeisenbergGR

Better (84%)

Writing : there was some sentences that you forgot to add will in and sometimes you mix Any with some.

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Story Presentation : The missions was amazing and there was some funny stuff like *Shut the f*ck up, I want to play* and when tommy kicked the guy's ass out of robert's office, these two scenes, they are just yolo :lol:. the gunfight and stealing and stuff was amazing too.

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Length : It had a lot of good missions,I can remember that it was 30+ missions which is a lot and some of them was hard but you didn't watch me playing Gta sa, I'm a mlg pro yo :die::die: .

 

 

Excellent (95%)

Difficulty : Some missions were easy to beat but some missions were super hard, especially the turf war stuff and the yardies turf war (I died in the yardies turf war two times in a row then I finished the first part then rip me once again at the second part then I finished it.)

 

 

Excellent (100%)

Variety : The effect's,the object's,the cutscenes and everything was amazing 100% for this one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall Progress

(Excellent 98%)

 

84% + 100% + 100% + 95% + 100% = 479%

479% / 5 = 95.8%

 

 

That was freaking awesome dude well done! :panic: Here's my review:
"Story" Awesome dude really. Vice city is my favourite GTA and you did great prequel of Tommy's story! 100%
"Writing" You've improved your English. Good Job! 85%
"Presentation" I can't find the word here wait. A yea, AWESOME! 100%
"Length" It took me 20-35 minutes for each Chapter. The whole storyline took me 2 days with pause of course. GREAT! 100%
"Difficulty" Wow some missions were real too hard man but it was challenging! VERY GOOD 80%
"Variety" Excellent! You added many cars, objects and actors. Anyway, GREAT! 100%
Keep it up man your ideas are awesome. The introduction, the heist and the last mission were amazing!
OVERALL: 91% MASTERPIECE

 

 

100% + 85% + 100% + 100% + 80% + 100% = 565%

565% / 6 = 94.16%

 

Awesome dude you did a Really good work :lol:

 

Review

 

Feeling: it feel me like back in the action of 90s its awesome I love gta united 90%

 

Missions: awesome but I got crashes sometimes but after restarting game the problem fixed 70%

 

Introduction: I tought its a part of story but after seeing crowd saying yea and you Heisenberg then i taught why you did coz of Y/N system 100%

 

Story: better then original gta games 100%

 

Dialogues: it was so nice that jokes and everything my best one is toilet seen :^: 96%

 

Difficulties: Normal and sometimes Hard 80%

 

Over all 98.9% awesome

 

90% + 70% + 100% + 100% + 96% + 80% = 536%

536% / 6 = 89.33%

 

 

People clearly don't know what an overall is and neither do they know their maths - it seems like.

 

You're right. :^:

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Lol!! I just knew i would have problems installing this storyline.

 

First: Game started with a crash.

Second: Managed to fix the crash, then missions started to crash.

Third: Installed GTA United into a fresh new GTA San Andreas folder, wouldn't start!

Fourth: My recording device wouldn't record gameplay.

Fifth and final error: Game taking about 5 seconds loading 1 objective, aaaand ends with a crash...

 

i nub with a PC don't judge me!

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@KevinDYOM - Reinstall GTA SA & GTA United.

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So, I just got done playing "Tommy Vercetti Stories" chapter 2, and it was definitely better than the first chapter! I like how you brought back the "Take-Over" feature and the gang warfare. Cool! I thought chapter 2 was good! Action, dialogue, nice. Looking forward to playing chapter 3 soon! Of course, I'll do a review of chapter 3 and the series as a whole. :)

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So, I just got done playing "Tommy Vercetti Stories" chapter 2, and it was definitely better than the first chapter! I like how you brought back the "Take-Over" feature and the gang warfare. Cool! I thought chapter 2 was good! Action, dialogue, nice. Looking forward to playing chapter 3 soon! Of course, I'll do a review of chapter 3 and the series as a whole. :)

Thank you. I'm waiting for the whole review! :)

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when i opening the GTA United 1.2 game crashing in loading.Anyone known this problem solution?

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Topic unpinned due to completion.

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Hmm most good misson

 

Bro, i am wuzi from dyom

 

 

I posted comments in ur profile

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Hmm most good misson

 

Bro, i am wuzi from dyom

 

 

I posted comments in ur profile

Thank you!

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Yeah,Today Aznkei reviews all missons of this,I really played it most times too.Really,I feel so sad to play it,Well,I have never seen any good misson in dyom.Good luck for your next storyline

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When i played your MP, this is my review of MP

 

Dialogue; Nice,i check the dialogue and so good,no mistakes,no mess 100%

 

Story; Cool,long mission pack,i played for 6 Hours Full mission pack,it takes so long.. 100%

 

Diffilicuty; Normal and Hard,because acuraccy is very strong 96%

 

Introduction; So cool and i*l find one my funny montage is SHUT THE f*ck UP,I*M WANT TO PLAY!! 100%

 

Length; Nice,i take play one chapter 1 hour, second chapter 1 hours, third chapter 2 hour, and last chapter 2 hours 100%

 

Feeling; Oh i*m so feeling about that coolest mission pack..I*m love it

 

OVERHALL; 100% f*ckING LOVE IT AND YOU ARE BEST CREATOR EVER

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Hello, this is the review for the first 4 missions

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sq-nWeUcZt8

 

https://youtu.be/MUArw_fKX7Q

Great! :lol:

 

When i played your MP, this is my review of MP

 

Dialogue; Nice,i check the dialogue and so good,no mistakes,no mess 100%

 

Story; Cool,long mission pack,i played for 6 Hours Full mission pack,it takes so long.. 100%

 

Diffilicuty; Normal and Hard,because acuraccy is very strong 96%

 

Introduction; So cool and i*l find one my funny montage is SHUT THE f*ck UP,I*M WANT TO PLAY!! 100%

 

Length; Nice,i take play one chapter 1 hour, second chapter 1 hours, third chapter 2 hour, and last chapter 2 hours 100%

 

Feeling; Oh i*m so feeling about that coolest mission pack..I*m love it

 

OVERHALL; 100% f*ckING LOVE IT AND YOU ARE BEST CREATOR EVER

Thank you for the review mate :^:

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This mission pack is fantastic, probably the best I've ever played in DYOM! :D But there are some mistakes like Tommy's father worked in printing shop, he wasn't a used car salesman and second Giorgio was transvestite. Oh and you forgot about Franco Forelli which Toni killed in LCS and the fact that Sindacco's were born after Sonny's death in 1986. Besides this everything is 10/10!

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Good mission pack but are you aware that Giorgio is a cross dresser (according to the GTA VC website) yet he has problems with wearing a clown suit?

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