Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 (edited) -Completed- Hello guys and welcome to my new Project. First of all in the Description you will read some things you should know about GTA: Tommy Vercetti Stories. This Project is a Classic GTA Storyline and have many missions. It's completed and includes 3 Chapters. The story is fictional and based on GTA: Vice City events and I'm well readed of Character's history. You MUST install GTA: United 1.2 and the skin of Tommy Vercetti. You can find the links of Tommy Vercetti's Skin & GTA: United 1.2 on Downloads section. Don't forget to give a feedback, I'll appreciate it! -Liberty City 1971- Liberty City is the worst place in America, full of crime and violence. The Crime Families rises with the help of corrupt cops and Politicians. Tommy Vercetti is just a 21 years old kid who don't care about his family's shop but how to fight with thugs and earn easy money. The Sicilian "Leones" Mafia wants to take over the city with extortions or blood. The shop of Tommy's father is one of the shops which the Leones want to take over but his father Claudio refused to pay them. After Uncle's Leone order, Don of Sicilian Mafia, his hitmen killed him. His father's death made him more angry and became a criminal. Forellis helped him to stand again on his feet. Tommy didn't took it personal but an opportunity to become a Made Man of Forelli's Crime Family and rise on the Most Wanted men in Liberty City and he made it, but with a different way. Tommy Vercetti - Protagonist Smart and big mouth. He's doing anything for easy money and power! Claudio & Alessandra Vercetti Tommy's parents. They owns a shop with used cars in Red Light District. Harry Rigano He is a good friend with Tommy and they grew up together. Sonny Forelli He's leading the Forelli Crime Family and he wants to take over the Liberty City. Giorgio Forelli Sonny's cousin and Capo of the Family. He helped Tommy to get into the Family. Lee Cirillo Giorgio's right hand and Enforcer of the Family. Marco Forelli Sonny's brother and Underboss of the Family. He owns the Marco's Bistro in Saint Mark's. Mike Forelli Sonny's brother and Capo of the Family. He owns the Ammu Nation in Saint Mark's. Yoshio Takayama He's leading the Yakuza in Liberty City. Robert Quinn One of the best crook lawyers in Liberty City. Lance Vance He knows Vice City better than anyone. Ken Rosenberg One of the best crook lawyers in Vice City. Forelli Crime Family Sicilian "Leones" Mafia Sindacco Crime Family Snake Heads MC Yakuza Uptown Yardies - Mission- Turf War- Take Over - Setup - Heist Teaser Trailer Official Trailer Review by Jhan Dave: Played them all with no time nor break! Heisen. Here's my review: Introduction: Really f*cking awesome! Genres: Amazing, you did great, such as gunfights, stealth, etc. Great job. Environment: Excellent, and the placements like explosions, objects, actors, cars. Everything are perfect. Length: It takes me more time, each storyline's duration is just like 10-15 minutes to finish it. Nice work! Spelling and Grammars: Not bad. You've improved now your language English! Good job. Story: Perfect, according to your plan/idea for this. The Story was unbelievable and really good Difficulty: Unbelievable! Some chapters is hard for me, but the others are easy/normal for me to play it! Percentage: (98%) Excellent work, Heisen. You're the best designer! Review by Lion killer: Finished the storyline, god it was awesome, keep it up heisenbergGR you are the best. A review for GTA: Tommy Vercetti Stories storyline by HeisenbergGR Better (84%) Writing : there was some sentences that you forgot to add will in and sometimes you mix Any with some. Excellent (100%) Story Presentation : The missions was amazing and there was some funny stuff like *Shut the f*ck up, I want to play* and when tommy kicked the guy's ass out of robert's office, these two scenes, they are just yolo . the gunfight and stealing and stuff was amazing too. Excellent (100%) Length : It had a lot of good missions,I can remember that it was 30+ missions which is a lot and some of them was hard but you didn't watch me playing Gta sa, I'm a mlg pro yo . Excellent (95%) Difficulty : Some missions were easy to beat but some missions were super hard, especially the turf war stuff and the yardies turf war (I died in the yardies turf war two times in a row then I finished the first part then rip me once again at the second part then I finished it.) Excellent (100%) Variety : The effect's,the object's,the cutscenes and everything was amazing 100% for this one. Overall Progress (Excellent 98%) Review by SaintsAreComing: That was freaking awesome dude well done! Here's my review: "Story" Awesome dude really. Vice city is my favourite GTA and you did great prequel of Tommy's story! 100% "Writing" You've improved your English. Good Job! 85% "Presentation" I can't find the word here wait. A yea, AWESOME! 100% "Length" It took me 20-35 minutes for each Chapter. The whole storyline took me 2 days with pause of course. GREAT! 100% "Difficulty" Wow some missions were real too hard man but it was challenging! VERY GOOD 80% "Variety" Excellent! You added many cars, objects and actors. Anyway, GREAT! 100% Keep it up man your ideas are awesome. The introduction, the heist and the last mission were amazing! OVERALL: 91% MASTERPIECE Review by Hardluck Style: Chapter One: Writing: none of misakes noticed (grammars & spells), everything understood and logical so far, nice work! Variety: we see lot of things there gun fights, explosions, and more of attractive things, great job! Difficulty: well sometimes it's easy, meduim and hard at the same time, i didn't have some troubles tho, nice one! Lenght: pretty decent so far, i manage to pass the whole chapter bettwen 40mins to 1hrs which means awsome for a chapter, great! I think thats all for today, i'll be editing my post ones i finish a chapter GTA United 1.2: http://www.gtaunited.net/downloads.p6.htmlTommy Vercetti Skin: http://www.mediafire.com/download/7vhthjdddpp7bh6/Tommy+Vercetti+Skin.zipDYOM Storyline: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/40511 Heisenberg_GR - Creating the Storyline Rockstar Games - GTA: San Andreas Dutchy3010 & PatrickW - DYOM Mod ATP, LiveLife, cj2000 & ManDog - GTA: United 1.2 Jhan Dave, Hardluck Style, Lion kill & SaintsAreComing - Reviews [WARNING] You must install GTA: United 1.2 and Tommy Vercetti's Skin to play this Storyline! Edited April 2, 2016 by Heisenberg_GR Reizov, Curtis, Xinen and 12 others 15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 Nice Bro Goodluck u am waiting Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Author Share Posted October 4, 2015 Nice Bro Goodluck u am waiting Thank you and stay tuned! Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 Nice! Maybe i will review it!? Springfield and Heisenberg_GR 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whenwhowhat3nodigitalfoo Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 Woah... That's sum strong stuff.... Kudos 2 ur new project, pal! Springfield and Heisenberg_GR 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Author Share Posted October 4, 2015 Nice! Maybe i will review it!? Yeah why not. Woah... That's sum strong stuff.... Kudos 2 ur new project, pal! Thank you! SaintsAreComing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 Such a hard working man you are! anyways i'm still waiting for this one Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Author Share Posted October 4, 2015 Such a hard working man you are! anyways i'm still waiting for this one Stay tuned my friend! Hdxt_Hardluck and Springfield 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curtis Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 just what we needed. a decent GTA United mission series! I think this idea is perfect. Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Author Share Posted October 4, 2015 just what we needed. a decent GTA United mission series! I think this idea is perfect. Thanks man, stay tuned for the Storyline. Hdxt_Hardluck and Springfield 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raasheo Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 (edited) 8 Edited August 30, 2022 by Raasheo Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 4, 2015 Author Share Posted October 4, 2015 I really hate GTA United but for you Heisen I will just download all the mods and re-install my game You won't regret it. Hdxt_Hardluck and Springfield 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 (edited) I remember when i tried to do this myself back in 2011. Yea, just like prequel to Tommy Vercetti, good luck i'll surely play this! Edited October 4, 2015 by AnDReJ98 Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Dyom Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Good.That awesome creating missions in Gta United.GoodLuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 I remember when i tried to do this myself back in 2011. Yea, just like prequel to Tommy Vercetti, good luck i'll surely play this! Thanks my friend. Good.That awesome creating missions in Gta United.GoodLuck. Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintsAreComing Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Is this gta encyclopedia or a dyom mission pack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 Is this gta encyclopedia or a dyom mission pack? Yeah maybe. BTW it's a Storyline not a Mission-Pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintsAreComing Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 (edited) Is this gta encyclopedia or a dyom mission pack? Yeah maybe. BTW it's a Storyline not a Mission-Pack. Yea i'm joking Good luck with your storyline seems perfect. Edited October 5, 2015 by SaintsAreComing Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 Is this gta encyclopedia or a dyom mission pack? Yeah maybe. BTW it's a Storyline not a Mission-Pack. Yea i'm joking Good luck with your storyline seems perfect. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 looking for you SL bro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 looking for you SL bro! Stay tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whenwhowhat3nodigitalfoo Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Great, so what will be the abbreviation? Gta tvs? Sounds kind of catchy, tvs, tvs, tvs.... Anyway what will u do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 Great, so what will be the abbreviation? Gta tvs? Sounds kind of catchy, tvs, tvs, tvs.... Anyway what will u do? Call it as you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whenwhowhat3nodigitalfoo Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Great, so what will be the abbreviation? Gta tvs? Sounds kind of catchy, tvs, tvs, tvs.... Anyway what will u do? Call it as you want. cool, thats cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whenwhowhat3nodigitalfoo Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 man, how did u even reach this point? u r really, really good in composure, very cool. thumbs up!!! I just wanted 2 ask, just out of curiosity, will u release this on ps4? lol. Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 man, how did u even reach this point? u r really, really good in composure, very cool. thumbs up!!! I just wanted 2 ask, just out of curiosity, will u release this on ps4? lol. You're a funny guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Hey, finally tommy vercetti returns... Btw, I really liked your work bro! I always support you. Thumbs up!!! Heisenberg_GR and Springfield 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 Hey, finally tommy vercetti returns... Btw, I really liked your work bro! I always support you. Thumbs up!!! Thanks for the support again my friend really appreciate it. Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Gta United 1.2 ready waiting for storyline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted October 5, 2015 Author Share Posted October 5, 2015 Gta United 1.2 ready waiting for storyline Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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