Yared92 Posted September 17, 2015 Share Posted September 17, 2015 (edited) GRAND THEFT AUTO Nostra Vita 4:13 am "Liberty city" [phone rings] enzo (lorenzo) 24 wakes up and checks his cell phone . He noticed he just missed a call from an unknown name. He waits untill they call back 2 minutes later he is confused he doesn't know if he should call back but he decides quickly and answered to a male in his mids 30's The guy on the other side of the phone asked him with deep voice if he was lorenzo. Enzo said yes this is enzo. The other man shoots his gun and a loud and painful scream comes out while he makes fun of it and laughs as he was enjoying it. Lorenzo yells at the man on the phone and asks.. -wtf it's going on!? -what did just happen! The guy on the other side of the phone continued laughing and says -have you seen your little brother lately? Have you take the time to visit your family in Italy? [lorenzo asks ]-who are you and what do you want from me? [The man] - you know what i want. I want you for killing my brother when you two were in jail in italy. [Lorenzo] - if i did so it was because things weren't going like they were suppose to. It was either him or me. [The man] -what ever mother fcker i will get you as soon as i find you in America <hangs up>... Enzo now worried and confused is thinking if he should go look for that guy in Italy or wait untill the man finds him and confront him now that his brother is kidnapped and probably dead. But lorenzo has his contacts who will protect him since he is a member of a powerful Mafia in Liberty city. On the other hand the 2nd protagonist is martin 23 an illegal immigrant who lives in the north side of mexico -A humble young adult man that lives with his older brother Israel and his brother's wife natalia. Martin's life is complicated since he lives in the middle of a war between The Mexican cartels and the goverment. Martin and his brother Israel are in the mexican military forces but martin one day decides that he needs to leave his country because A powerful and very dangerous cartel's boss wants his head since martin with the help of other soldiers killed the cartel boss (señor.aguilera's son "andres" while a duty combat against aguilera's cartel. So one day martin says good bye to everyone he knows and leaves everything behind, his brother, friends and wife and goes to US illegaly. ( Btw there could be a mission where martin walks the desert and finds himself in trouble while trying to get to the US.) Martin and lorenzo the Italian guy will meet eachother when one of enzo's contacts tell enzo about a guy that will help him to find that guy he spoked on the phone with. And that guy will be a guy whom martin will be staying with when he arrives to the US.( a cartel member). The 3rd protagonist will be joe mattews a hard working (caucasian)"white"man that works in a dairy since he was born and raised in los santos he is 26 a tall man that wears a black cow boy hat but dresses classy when off work. Joe lives with his sister kendall mattews 18 , his older brother joh mattews 28 and his father chris mattews 51 also a farm man divorced from joe's mother. ((All the caharacters will meet in Los santos.)) Joe is tired of working in a dairy and decides to give a try to the drug bussines after talking about it with alberto garcia a mexican drug dealer(29)Y.O (" I think y'all already know what is going to happen they all going to meet eachother and are going to help lorenzo find his younger brother and the angry kidnapper while doing bussines on the side.") I hope somebody read this and comments!. I want the next protagonists to be younger btw. Edited September 18, 2015 by Yared92 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yared92 Posted September 17, 2015 Author Share Posted September 17, 2015 (edited) I changed the mexican guy name into Martin. Edited September 17, 2015 by Yared92 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan1997GTA Posted September 17, 2015 Share Posted September 17, 2015 From what I've read, it's OK. But f*cking New York City? Really? The GTA universe doesn't even have real-life cities, in North America at least. You should rename it to Liberty City. Plus, I don't think you should have spammed this everywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yared92 Posted September 18, 2015 Author Share Posted September 18, 2015 From what I've read, it's OK. But f*cking New York City? Really? The GTA universe doesn't even have real-life cities, in North America at least. You should rename it to Liberty City. Plus, I don't think you should have spammed this everywhere. That's because everywhere i've had posted it there was always somebody that asked me to put it somewhere else bro and by NY i meant to say LC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClaudX Posted September 18, 2015 Share Posted September 18, 2015 I'd comment on it, but it's too difficult to read. Try spacing it out between paragraphs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yared92 Posted September 18, 2015 Author Share Posted September 18, 2015 I'd comment on it, but it's too difficult to read. Try spacing it out between paragraphs. I will do that i know it's difficult my bad lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yared92 Posted September 18, 2015 Author Share Posted September 18, 2015 I'd comment on it, but it's too difficult to read. Try spacing it out between paragraphs. I tried making it easier to read bro. Take a look at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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