LiniArc Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 (edited) Name: My Wife Genre: Hilarious Author: CR7 No matter how much I miss you, I always wanted to kiss you I though you hang with guys, Turns out you bang with guys I love all your attires, Because they make you set on fire Whenever you wear that red, You better be on my bed I love your sexy voice, Is their any other choice?! I always talked about plants, But you preferred Implants. I call you Honey!, But you take all my Money We could make some Love, Provided you first bath with Dove After all you are my wife, Love you more than my life. ______________________ I gave it a thought, whether I should post or not. But I never knew. Showing enough courage to post it. If it breaks any rules or something; I sincerely apologies. Aim: Looking forward to some constructive comments. Related to English/Grammar. Edited June 19, 2015 by Cristiano Ronaldo 7 Payne Killer, Flachbau, Grichka Bogdanoff and 3 others 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacobmaate Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Not exactly much of a constructive comment here, but im no specialist in this However I do like it LiniArc 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkingsickness Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 Yeah...no constructive criticism from me either. I thought it was a very funny poem. Now I'm going to read to this to my wife and get the death stare.. Jacobmaate, Alexander, LiniArc and 2 others 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AEsob Posted June 21, 2015 Share Posted June 21, 2015 Yeah...no constructive criticism from me either. I thought it was a very funny poem. Now I'm going to read to this to my wife and get the death stare.. yeah, best of luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omgitzoli Posted June 22, 2015 Share Posted June 22, 2015 great poem i hope she loves it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiniArc Posted June 22, 2015 Author Share Posted June 22, 2015 (edited) Note to all: I am not Married. Just 19 Ok. Also having no Wife/Gf. Edited June 22, 2015 by Cristiano Ronaldo 7 Jacobmaate 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted June 23, 2015 Share Posted June 23, 2015 I thought it was quite funny. It's like it was written by a bitter, cynical CEO with a wife as fake as her corporate-tax funded tits. AEsob 1 "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AEsob Posted June 24, 2015 Share Posted June 24, 2015 (edited) I thought it was quite funny. It's like it was written by a bitter, cynical CEO with a wife as fake as her corporate-tax funded tits. Good one. Edited June 27, 2015 by AEsob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacobmaate Posted June 26, 2015 Share Posted June 26, 2015 Note to all: I am not Married. Just 19 Ok. Also having no Wife/Gf. Secret Admirer? LiniArc 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiniArc Posted June 26, 2015 Author Share Posted June 26, 2015 Secret Admirer? Sure. She is someone; who has always been in my imaginations. Better and beautiful than all girls around. Simple; still sweet. I do always think of her and "No one else". I will stay alone forever. Whenever I think of that Imaginary girl; Kind of Hallucination takes place to me. And song in the background is below. She is not like the girl for whom the poem is written. I love very few people in my life and she is surely one of them. "Me,Nature, Imagination"-- What else do I want? spaceshape and Jacobmaate 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 A Romantic peom, i like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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