Heisenberg_GR Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 (edited) Inspired from the movie SCARFACE "Heisenberg_GR'' presents UNTOUCHABLE Cyprus 1974, a war broke between Greeks and Turks. Eladio Chelios at his 4 years old moved with his mother from Cyprus to America to avoid the war. Los Santos 1994, Eladio and his best friend Alberto Vega doing small time robberies to make some money. They want to be something "big'' and make a lot of money. Learn about Eladio's fate, just download! Eladio Chelios - Protagonist: A Greek who moved to America during the war between Greeks and Turks. After what the Turks did to him and to his family, he is always angry. Daniela Chelios: Eladio's mother and his angel. She has weakness for her son and she is scared for Eladio's fate. Alexandros Chelios: Eladio's father and a brave man! He lost him during the war but he's always in his heart! Alberto Vega: Eladio's best friend. They grew up together and they are always in trouble together, this is friendship. Eduardo Garcia: He is one of the mobs in Los Santos. He is a funny guy but back of his smile he hides his madness. Boris Mikhailov: He is one of the most powerful mobs in Los Santos. If you f*ck with him you will be dog's food. Santiago Braja: The most powerful mob in San Andreas. He's a legit businessman! Reyes: Garcia's most loyal dog! Diaz: The second of Garcia's dogs! Patrick Bradley: --A.C.A.B.-- FIRST PERSON: This mission pack support Voron295's First Person Mod. One of my favourites mods. If you play this mission pack i recommend you to have this mod! DOWNLOAD Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ramtxhpatvxkmfw/FirstPerson30.rar MUSIC: This mission pack has "SD" files each chapter. The music and the effects it's strongly recommended if you want to play this mission pack! DOWNLOAD Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c23r5f6rxs81g3t/Untouchable-Music.zip ~FPS - SCREENSHOTS~ REALEASED! [MP]: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37323 [MUSIC]: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c23r5f6rxs81g3t/Untouchable-Music.zip Edited July 23, 2015 by Heisenberg_GR SaintsAreComing and Springfield 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Nice! Goodluck for this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted May 17, 2015 Author Share Posted May 17, 2015 Nice! Goodluck for this! Thanks maoffense01. If you like it rate it or write a comment if you want i'll appreciate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Yeah,I'll do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted May 17, 2015 Author Share Posted May 17, 2015 Yeah,I'll do! Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adolf_Traplord_Hitler Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 You are good designer fam, your ideas are much cool and i am sure that your missions would be serious great... keep making missions dude! i will play em one day soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted May 17, 2015 Author Share Posted May 17, 2015 You are good designer fam, your ideas are much cool and i am sure that your missions would be serious great... keep making missions dude! i will play em one day soon Thank you man i appreciate you support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PresidentShark Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 (edited) Did NASA create this robot? Beacause he's so fast at making missions! Edited May 17, 2015 by PresidentShark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted May 17, 2015 Author Share Posted May 17, 2015 Did NASA create this robot? Beacause he's so fast at making missions! Haha, glad you're here President. Check this mission if you want and tell me your opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aflien Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 I tried it out. Good use of DYOM possibilites. (aka features) There are some grammar issues, but nothing groundbreaking. And to me personaly dialogue seems kinda random. (To be honest its a hard job to make good dialogues that are engaging, I myself struggle everytime to make dialogues in my mission relevant,engaging,not storybreaking and most importantly not boring) Overall it looks great, and promising. I won't comment the storyline untill I see more of the mission. Stay on top of your game. I'm looking forward to more content (missions). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Played the intro. It's a good mission, i like when missions are connected with something real (Greek-Turkish war) and such. I'm looking forward this, and i hope it won't be typical gang-themed mission-pack. So, by that, i hope it's gonna have more to do with backstory and such. Anyway, good luck! Also, the reason i still didn't give you feedback for SAS, is because i still haven't finished it. Once i do, i'll tell you my opinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Look, i didn't play it yet (due my school) by seriously, ur a best designer in my view Soon i finish this craps, surelly i'll play it and give you feedback once and for all @Andrej98 Nice to see old guys here, Greeating from me pal !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted May 18, 2015 Author Share Posted May 18, 2015 I tried it out. Good use of DYOM possibilites. (aka features) There are some grammar issues, but nothing groundbreaking. And to me personaly dialogue seems kinda random. (To be honest its a hard job to make good dialogues that are engaging, I myself struggle everytime to make dialogues in my mission relevant,engaging,not storybreaking and most importantly not boring) Overall it looks great, and promising. I won't comment the storyline untill I see more of the mission. Stay on top of your game. I'm looking forward to more content (missions). Played the intro. It's a good mission, i like when missions are connected with something real (Greek-Turkish war) and such. I'm looking forward this, and i hope it won't be typical gang-themed mission-pack. So, by that, i hope it's gonna have more to do with backstory and such. Anyway, good luck! Also, the reason i still didn't give you feedback for SAS, is because i still haven't finished it. Once i do, i'll tell you my opinions. Look, i didn't play it yet (due my school) by seriously, ur a best designer in my view Soon i finish this craps, surelly i'll play it and give you feedback once and for all @Andrej98 Nice to see old guys here, Greeating from me pal !! Thank you guys for the support! This Mission Pack will take me a while because i have work to do in my real life you know, but stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 3, 2015 Author Share Posted July 3, 2015 (edited) TOPIC UPDATED AND IT ISN'T COMPLETED! Edited July 3, 2015 by Heisenberg_GR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephcurryMVP Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 I'm Looking Forward To This MP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 3, 2015 Author Share Posted July 3, 2015 I'm Looking Forward To This MP Stay tuned stephcurryMVP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 4, 2015 Author Share Posted July 4, 2015 Trailer added. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted July 5, 2015 Share Posted July 5, 2015 Not a bad intro. I like the cutscenes, they were done well. The story was unique and not something that you encounter a lot these days. Overall, a good intro and am looking forward to the rest of the Mission Pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 6, 2015 Author Share Posted July 6, 2015 Not a bad intro. I like the cutscenes, they were done well. The story was unique and not something that you encounter a lot these days. Overall, a good intro and am looking forward to the rest of the Mission Pack. Thank you Target13! All missions will be in an archive soon to download. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 19, 2015 Author Share Posted July 19, 2015 Finally, i released this Mission Pack! Download, enjoy and give a feedback. Thanks! SaintsAreComing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/\rdooZ Posted July 19, 2015 Share Posted July 19, 2015 Can you please PM me the link of the weapons/effects in the screenshots,they look cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted July 19, 2015 Share Posted July 19, 2015 Got Nice Screen Shots here ! i didn't play all ur mission all yet but i directly played the last tow mission of the MP ^^ - in the last mission of CH#4, you make them really impressive, i remeber Scareface the movie when chelios die, its smiler when sosa kill MR. montana really make it worth ^^ - you improve every think i guess ^^ Overall i'd give u 9,5/10, its really unique MP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 19, 2015 Author Share Posted July 19, 2015 Can you please PM me the link of the weapons/effects in the screenshots,they look cool. Yeah man! Got Nice Screen Shots here ! i didn't play all ur mission all yet but i directly played the last tow mission of the MP ^^ - in the last mission of CH#4, you make them really impressive, i remeber Scareface the movie when chelios die, its smiler when sosa kill MR. montana really make it worth ^^ - you improve every think i guess ^^ Overall i'd give u 9,5/10, its really unique MP Thank you my friend for your rate! Also nice spoiler /\rdooZ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjarvis15 Posted July 20, 2015 Share Posted July 20, 2015 The dialogue in this mission pack is terrible and random to be honest, although the story is pretty unique and I like the pacing of the missions. If you worked on your dialogue it would be perfect. Way better than SAS by far. 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 20, 2015 Author Share Posted July 20, 2015 The dialogue in this mission pack is terrible and random to be honest, although the story is pretty unique and I like the pacing of the missions. If you worked on your dialogue it would be perfect. Way better than SAS by far. 7.8/10 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 21, 2015 Author Share Posted July 21, 2015 IMPORTANT: If you find a bug please report here. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 (edited) I guess all mission run just perfect, there is no doubt if there are any bugs ^^ Edited July 22, 2015 by DzxProx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 23, 2015 Author Share Posted July 23, 2015 I guess all mission run just perfect, there is no doubt if there are any bugs ^^ Alright then, thank you! Hdxt_Hardluck 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintsAreComing Posted July 23, 2015 Share Posted July 23, 2015 (edited) It's my first review and i think this mission-pack needs a review so here it is. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "WRITING" - Your writing needs practice. Few mistakes but understandable writing. Decent "PRESENTATION" - I love it, I LOVE your style with the cutscenes and explositions and all that stuff. Excellent "LENGTH" - Some missions are long some others not so long, but the most of the missions are long. You created just it must be! Excellent "DIFFICULTY" - Overall i think it's hard enough but not so hard for a good GTA players, i liked it too! Medium "VARIETY" - I think you chose the right actors for this mission-pack the right weapons but no pickups. Very Good Alright a short summary about this mission-pack. Dude your missions-pack is inspired from Scarface but you, you did it Very Cool! When i saw the topic i thought that it will be a usual boring mission pack like Scarface the movie, but you did it so cool! Your story was awesome and please practice your English a little bit and you'll be very good designer, it's an advice! Anyway i recommend you to play this mission pack. Good job dude! My finally rate is 8,9/10 Edited July 23, 2015 by SaintsAreComing Heisenberg_GR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted July 23, 2015 Author Share Posted July 23, 2015 It's my first review and i think this mission-pack needs a review so here it is. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "WRITING" - Your writing needs practice. Few mistakes but understandable writing. Decent "PRESENTATION" - I love it, I LOVE your style with the cutscenes and explositions and all that stuff. Excellent "LENGTH" - Some missions are long some others not so long, but the most of the missions are long. You created just it must be! Excellent "DIFFICULTY" - Overall i think it's hard enough but not so hard for a good GTA players, i liked it too! Medium "VARIETY" - I think you chose the right actors for this mission-pack the right weapons but no pickups. Very Good Alright a short summary about this mission-pack. Dude your missions-pack is inspired from Scarface but you, you did it Very Cool! When i saw the topic i thought that it will be a usual boring mission pack like Scarface the movie, but you did it so cool! Your story was awesome and please practice your English a little bit and you'll be very good designer, it's an advice! Anyway i recommend you to play this mission pack. Good job dude! My finally rate is 8,9/10 Thank you for your review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
