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Heisenberg_GR

UNTOUCHABLE [Complete Edition] + More Features

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Inspired from the movie SCARFACE

"Heisenberg_GR'' presents UNTOUCHABLE

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Cyprus 1974, a war broke between Greeks and Turks. Eladio Chelios at his 4 years old moved with his mother from Cyprus to America to avoid the war.


Los Santos 1994, Eladio and his best friend Alberto Vega doing small time robberies to make some money. They want to be something "big'' and make a lot of money. Learn about Eladio's fate, just download!

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Eladio Chelios - Protagonist:

A Greek who moved to America during the war between Greeks and Turks. After what the Turks did to him and to his family, he is always angry.

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Daniela Chelios:

Eladio's mother and his angel. She has weakness for her son and she is scared for Eladio's fate.

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Alexandros Chelios:

Eladio's father and a brave man! He lost him during the war but he's always in his heart!

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Alberto Vega:

Eladio's best friend. They grew up together and they are always in trouble together, this is friendship.

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Eduardo Garcia:

He is one of the mobs in Los Santos. He is a funny guy but back of his smile he hides his madness.

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Boris Mikhailov:

He is one of the most powerful mobs in Los Santos. If you f*ck with him you will be dog's food.

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Santiago Braja:

The most powerful mob in San Andreas. He's a legit businessman!

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Reyes:

Garcia's most loyal dog!

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Diaz:

The second of Garcia's dogs!

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Patrick Bradley:

--A.C.A.B.--

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FIRST PERSON: This mission pack support Voron295's First Person Mod. One of my favourites mods. If you play this mission pack i recommend you to have this mod!

DOWNLOAD Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ramtxhpatvxkmfw/FirstPerson30.rar

MUSIC: This mission pack has "SD" files each chapter. The music and the effects it's strongly recommended if you want to play this mission pack! DOWNLOAD Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c23r5f6rxs81g3t/Untouchable-Music.zip

~FPS - SCREENSHOTS~

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REALEASED!

[MP]: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37323

[MUSIC]: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c23r5f6rxs81g3t/Untouchable-Music.zip

Edited by Heisenberg_GR

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maoffense01

Nice! Goodluck for this!

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Heisenberg_GR

Nice! Goodluck for this!

Thanks maoffense01. If you like it rate it or write a comment if you want i'll appreciate it!

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maoffense01

Yeah,I'll do!

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Heisenberg_GR

Yeah,I'll do!

Thanks again!

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Adolf_Traplord_Hitler

You are good designer fam, your ideas are much cool and i am sure that your missions would be serious great...

keep making missions dude! i will play em one day soon

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Heisenberg_GR

You are good designer fam, your ideas are much cool and i am sure that your missions would be serious great...

keep making missions dude! i will play em one day soon

Thank you man i appreciate you support!

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PresidentShark

Did NASA create this robot?

Beacause he's so fast at making missions!

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Heisenberg_GR

Did NASA create this robot?

Beacause he's so fast at making missions!

Haha, glad you're here President. Check this mission if you want and tell me your opinion!

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Aflien

I tried it out. Good use of DYOM possibilites. (aka features)

There are some grammar issues, but nothing groundbreaking.

And to me personaly dialogue seems kinda random. (To be honest its a hard job to make good dialogues that are engaging, I myself struggle everytime to make dialogues in my mission relevant,engaging,not storybreaking and most importantly not boring)

Overall it looks great, and promising. I won't comment the storyline untill I see more of the mission.

 

Stay on top of your game. I'm looking forward to more content (missions).

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AnDReJ98

Played the intro. It's a good mission, i like when missions are connected with something real (Greek-Turkish war) and such. I'm looking forward this, and i hope it won't be typical gang-themed mission-pack. So, by that, i hope it's gonna have more to do with backstory and such. Anyway, good luck!

 

Also, the reason i still didn't give you feedback for SAS, is because i still haven't finished it. Once i do, i'll tell you my opinions.

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Look, i didn't play it yet (due my school) by seriously, ur a best designer in my view :)

Soon i finish this craps, surelly i'll play it and give you feedback once and for all :)

 

@Andrej98

Nice to see old guys here, Greeating from me pal !!

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Heisenberg_GR

I tried it out. Good use of DYOM possibilites. (aka features)

There are some grammar issues, but nothing groundbreaking.

And to me personaly dialogue seems kinda random. (To be honest its a hard job to make good dialogues that are engaging, I myself struggle everytime to make dialogues in my mission relevant,engaging,not storybreaking and most importantly not boring)

Overall it looks great, and promising. I won't comment the storyline untill I see more of the mission.

 

Stay on top of your game. I'm looking forward to more content (missions).

 

 

Played the intro. It's a good mission, i like when missions are connected with something real (Greek-Turkish war) and such. I'm looking forward this, and i hope it won't be typical gang-themed mission-pack. So, by that, i hope it's gonna have more to do with backstory and such. Anyway, good luck!

 

Also, the reason i still didn't give you feedback for SAS, is because i still haven't finished it. Once i do, i'll tell you my opinions.

 

 

Look, i didn't play it yet (due my school) by seriously, ur a best designer in my view :)

Soon i finish this craps, surelly i'll play it and give you feedback once and for all :)

 

@Andrej98

Nice to see old guys here, Greeating from me pal !!

Thank you guys for the support! This Mission Pack will take me a while because i have work to do in my real life you know, but stay tuned! ;)

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Heisenberg_GR

TOPIC UPDATED AND IT ISN'T COMPLETED!

Edited by Heisenberg_GR

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stephcurryMVP

I'm Looking Forward To This MP :)

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Heisenberg_GR

I'm Looking Forward To This MP :)

Stay tuned stephcurryMVP! ;)

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Heisenberg_GR

Trailer added. Enjoy!

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Target13

Not a bad intro.

I like the cutscenes, they were done well. The story was unique and not something that you encounter a lot these days.

Overall, a good intro and am looking forward to the rest of the Mission Pack.

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Heisenberg_GR

 

Not a bad intro.

I like the cutscenes, they were done well. The story was unique and not something that you encounter a lot these days.

Overall, a good intro and am looking forward to the rest of the Mission Pack.

Thank you Target13! All missions will be in an archive soon to download. ;)

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Heisenberg_GR

Finally, i released this Mission Pack! Download, enjoy and give a feedback. Thanks!

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/\rdooZ

Can you please PM me the link of the weapons/effects in the screenshots,they look cool.

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Got Nice Screen Shots here ! i didn't play all ur mission all yet but i directly played the last tow mission of the MP ^^

 

- in the last mission of CH#4, you make them really impressive, i remeber Scareface the movie when chelios die, its smiler when sosa kill MR. montana really make it worth ^^

 

- you improve every think i guess ^^

Overall i'd give u 9,5/10, its really unique MP :)

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Heisenberg_GR

Can you please PM me the link of the weapons/effects in the screenshots,they look cool.

Yeah man!

 

Got Nice Screen Shots here ! i didn't play all ur mission all yet but i directly played the last tow mission of the MP ^^

 

- in the last mission of CH#4, you make them really impressive, i remeber Scareface the movie when chelios die, its smiler when sosa kill MR. montana really make it worth ^^

 

- you improve every think i guess ^^

Overall i'd give u 9,5/10, its really unique MP :)

Thank you my friend for your rate! Also nice spoiler :p

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cjarvis15

The dialogue in this mission pack is terrible and random to be honest, although the story is pretty unique and I like the pacing of the missions. If you worked on your dialogue it would be perfect. Way better than SAS by far. 7.8/10

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Heisenberg_GR

The dialogue in this mission pack is terrible and random to be honest, although the story is pretty unique and I like the pacing of the missions. If you worked on your dialogue it would be perfect. Way better than SAS by far. 7.8/10

Thank you!

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Heisenberg_GR

IMPORTANT: If you find a bug please report here. Thanks!

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Hdxt_Hardluck

I guess all mission run just perfect, there is no doubt if there are any bugs ^^

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Heisenberg_GR

I guess all mission run just perfect, there is no doubt if there are any bugs ^^

Alright then, thank you!

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SaintsAreComing

It's my first review and i think this mission-pack needs a review so here it is.

 

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"WRITING" - Your writing needs practice. Few mistakes but understandable writing.

Decent

 

"PRESENTATION" - I love it, I LOVE your style with the cutscenes and explositions and all that stuff.

Excellent

 

"LENGTH" - Some missions are long some others not so long, but the most of the missions are long. You created just it must be! Excellent

 

"DIFFICULTY" - Overall i think it's hard enough but not so hard for a good GTA players, i liked it too!

Medium

 

"VARIETY" - I think you chose the right actors for this mission-pack the right weapons but no pickups.

Very Good

 

 

 

Alright a short summary about this mission-pack. Dude your missions-pack is inspired from Scarface but you, you did it Very Cool! When i saw the topic i thought that it will be a usual boring mission pack like Scarface the movie, but you did it so cool! Your story was awesome and please practice your English a little bit and you'll be very good designer, it's an advice! Anyway i recommend you to play this mission pack. Good job dude! ;) My finally rate is 8,9/10 :^:

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Heisenberg_GR

It's my first review and i think this mission-pack needs a review so here it is.

 

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"WRITING" - Your writing needs practice. Few mistakes but understandable writing.

Decent

 

"PRESENTATION" - I love it, I LOVE your style with the cutscenes and explositions and all that stuff.

Excellent

 

"LENGTH" - Some missions are long some others not so long, but the most of the missions are long. You created just it must be! Excellent

 

"DIFFICULTY" - Overall i think it's hard enough but not so hard for a good GTA players, i liked it too!

Medium

 

"VARIETY" - I think you chose the right actors for this mission-pack the right weapons but no pickups.

Very Good

 

 

 

Alright a short summary about this mission-pack. Dude your missions-pack is inspired from Scarface but you, you did it Very Cool! When i saw the topic i thought that it will be a usual boring mission pack like Scarface the movie, but you did it so cool! Your story was awesome and please practice your English a little bit and you'll be very good designer, it's an advice! Anyway i recommend you to play this mission pack. Good job dude! ;) My finally rate is 8,9/10 :^:

Thank you for your review!

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