maoffense01 Posted April 19, 2015 Share Posted April 19, 2015 (edited) As a racer's life!!! Have you ever tried being a racer??? Have you became a professional racer??? Have you did some mistakes while turning a drift??? A maoffense01 presentation!!! Will you win from these races??? Will you survive from these angry racers??? Shall you let your manager die because of them??? maoffense01 presents...This storyline is about a little man whose his ambition is to become a racer! It has 20+ missions! Up to Chapter 3! Chapter 1(The Ambition) is about racing.Chapter 2(The Causes of Racing) is about violence.Chapter 3(At The End) is about racing and violence! John(The player),whose his ambition is racing,was just a little,young man,doing anything he want.But there are 2 racers that raced through John's front.Then he went to the racers.Then he met the manager(John's Boss) whose will help him to reach his ambition.John has 2 friends named "Albert" and "Pablo".These 2 men was more impressive than John.But there are some interception on the way that would make Manager kill.And that's the another race team.As John always win the races,more of his opponents are getting angry to him. Protagonists Player John- is the protagonist of the storyline.He's the player!Although,John needs to save his manager in last chapter. Friends Albert- he is the 2nd protagonist of the storyline.He's not the player,but he's the friend of John! He always help John with his problem.He will not be a traitor in last. Pablo- he's the 3rd protagonist of the storyline.He always like to trip John to anything he want.He always joke the friends.But he's still a supportive man for any problem of his friends.And he's the strongest man in the three! Neutrals Manager- he's the guy who will help John to reach his ambition.As the manager,he taught John how to race professionally.But he will be taken by the another race team due to John's average. I'm sorry for not putting a mission name! But the chapters have their own name. Chapter 1(The Ambition)- up to 6 missions only,'coz I'm so tired of creating race missions.I'm so sorry! Chapter 2(The Causes of Racing)- up to 8 missions! Have fun! Chapter 3(At The Last)- up to 8 missions,too! No trailers yet. All credits go to: Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for the awesome modification,and for the help of coding,too! My Friends for their help,support and giving feedbacks to this storyline! Especially to Shadowscythe and ProDz DYOM Designers/Users for giving some feedbacks,too! DYOM Reviewers for reviewing this storyline! Whole Storyline Link : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/36962 Don't forget to give some feedbacks and rates! Hope you like this storyline Edited April 22, 2015 by maoffense01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adolf_Traplord_Hitler Posted April 19, 2015 Share Posted April 19, 2015 Woah man... this looks very great insane! waiting for others to review.. i am pretty sure its a good one storyline maoffense01 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted April 20, 2015 Author Share Posted April 20, 2015 Oh,thanks,bro! I don't really know that you're Dhiman! Hi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProdigyX34 Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 Looks promising, you already know that racing is my favorite, right? Will try this one soon and wait for my feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted April 20, 2015 Author Share Posted April 20, 2015 Ahh,you,ProDX! I know you in DYOM,but you weren't my friend.And I don't know that you like racing missions! By the way,it's nice to meet you! I think you're XxProDzxX,because your nickname is similar as Pro Dz! I hope you like my storyline.Please,rate in correct situation.If the missions were bad or good,just say it,so that I can make my future racing missions better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProdigyX34 Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 ProDz is appear after I made an account long ago, so we're truly different. And you can compare it in DYOM profile. I might start this one once return from college tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 (edited) Lol Maoffense01, Actually as u said X34 , we're diffrent of all things , Ur one of the best designers right. the first time i played ur missions i feel some thing new and Incredibale, As LwFS, Dutchy and PatrickW should add u to hall of famers, as best raceing MP' also TPoD' should earn the best Drama and Survival MP, even though u still the best for me, and don't forget to continue DS and Maoffense wait intill finish ur MP, its too long to complete it Edited April 20, 2015 by DzxProx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maoffense01 Posted April 22, 2015 Author Share Posted April 22, 2015 Thanks for the feedback,bros! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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