Super Shizuku Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 (edited) Every single things written in the short novel... Hi guys, it's been a half and a month ago since I have finished with Racing for Alice's Love, and now I'm finally back with another Mission Pack. May 2005, the time when the College Students from LV University are having a graduation ceremony.so many happiness they can expressed because of such a wonderful moments like this, with their full efforts in study also supports from their families, finally make it through the tests with success. But there are also some students who are failed, one of them is Gordon “Gord” Vincent. He feels very desperate due to his failure in the tests, although he had studied very hard, but unbelievably he had bad marks for all subjects, he walked his way to his house slowly. Arrived in there his father took his report forcibly from Gord’s hands. A very worst moment for Gord because this is not usually happens to his graduations back in Kindergarten, ES, JHS, and SHS. After his father(Torento) berates about Gord’s horrible failure to the family.The Gord’s family feels very mad with Gord and finally he is evicted from his house. After being turned on by his family, he went to a small casino, hoping for his luck to earn some money. Eventually he lost all of his money also got into debt $100.000, every dealers in the casino then mad at him, the fights then begin. After his survival in a mess hand to hand combat in the casino, the owner of the casino(Torento) arrived with his proudest kid and Gord’s older brother(Davis). They laughing at Gord seeing his cause in his brutal fight, just for some seconds later Torento immediately called his gunmen mafia to shoot down Gordon. Knowing Torento revealed himself as the head of the mafia the ”Vincent Family”, even Davis hate Gordon, Gord then moves to San Fierro. Gord swears that one day he will restore his family by making Davis and Torento pay for their plots against Gordon. Gordon "Gord" Vincent: The youngest siblings of the Vincents, he's determined to figure out how such a miserable thing happen to him, also sworn to restore his family by killing Torento. He surprised that his best friend Dewey from the same college is participated for killing Gord after Torento posted bounty of Gord worth by $100.000, he is served as the Protagonist. Thomas Anderson: The Traitor of The Vincents, he's the one who prevented Gordon to suicide jumping down from a high building, when Gord give up with his troubles from the people who are attempting to kill Gord in order to earn money from Torento. He revealed to Gord that Torento is actually an evil stepfather who had killed Gord's real father before the birth of Gord due to Gord's mother request, he is the author of a popular short novel in America with the same title from this Mission Pack. Greg Thompson: The owner of an Ammu Nation in San Fierro, after Gord and Thomas saves Greg from the Vincents who were robbing his business. Greg offers both of them free guns and any big helps he can, Thomas was quite often practice firing guns in Greg's Ammu Nation back for few months ago. Sonya: Davis's girlfriend, she decided to break up with Davis when she knows that Davis can no longer has any affection to his brother and following Torento's path, she feels the same pain as Gord from the moment when Torento posted bounty of Gord. Dewey Wobensmith: Gord's best friend since college, He is participated for killing Gord. However, He is threaten by Torento that if Dewey doesn't bring Gord's head to him within a month, Torento will call Davis to kill Dewey afterwards. Davis Vincent: Gord's older brother, even though he followed Torento's path, He actually planned wanted to kill both Dewey and Torento in order to gain the power only for himself after the death of Gord and his new friends. Torento Mancini: The Main Antagonist in this Mission Pack, He is willing to kill Gord in order to takeover the Vincent family that was formed by Gord's real dad long time ago. Chapter 1 (Bounty)> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39052 Chapter 2 (The Crumble of My Family)> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39053 Full MP> http://www.freeuploadsite.com/do.php?id=86636 Have fun, and finally this MP is finished. Also right now I'm going to make a Mission Pack about a crossover between GTA and Anime X Overs. Maybe after finishing that MP, I can finally retired. Edited February 6, 2016 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Rocket man FI 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 I Played Ur Missions Of Chapter , I Have Nothing To Say , Just Improve Some Typical Mistakes , And Please Use Some DYOM Featuers that Allowed, Also I Would like Give U 8.1 / 10, Casue it's really Fablouse Missions Pack, Keep its Up, I'll be waiting for chapter 2 Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 Hi, a nice concept overall, but the story doesn't real GTA style.. I mean, come on.. College in GTA? I think people should understand that you should still stay within GTA realsm when coming up with a project. Unique does not neccesarily mean logic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted April 17, 2015 Author Share Posted April 17, 2015 (edited) Hi, a nice concept overall, but the story doesn't real GTA style.. I mean, come on.. College in GTA? I think people should understand that you should still stay within GTA realsm when coming up with a project. Unique does not neccesarily mean logic You just misunderstand,what I meant college is this MP happens after the graduation also happens before the original short novel existed,when Gord evicted from his house and Torento posted bounty of him worth by $100.000,Gord decided to get his revenge and restoring Gord's family how does that doesn't make sense? I Played Ur Missions Of Chapter , I Have Nothing To Say , Just Improve Some Typical Mistakes , And Please Use Some DYOM Featuers that Allowed, Also I Would like Give U 8.1 / 10, Casue it's really Fablouse Missions Pack, Keep its Up, I'll be waiting for chapter 2 What do you mean with typical mistakes?As far as I know i typed in correctly,though i didn't put spaces between punctuation and alphabets I did that because I never like when I cannot input anymore characters since speaking about making missions,I always focus on storyline first and then gameplay because MP's with good gameplay don't always have good storyline while MP's with good storyline do always have good gameplay Edited May 15, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted May 15, 2015 Author Share Posted May 15, 2015 (edited) Mistake: -In the 8th and 9th mission,I typed in peope instead of people I'm sorry for typos. Edited October 11, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted May 21, 2015 Author Share Posted May 21, 2015 (edited) Chapter 2 and the Full MP are finally released. Download and play the Full MP. Also, give feedbacks if you really enjoyed playing this MP Chapter 2 (The Crumble of My Family)> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39053 Full MP> http://www.freeuploa...do.php?id=86636 Edited February 6, 2016 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LM3310 Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 Hmm, the plot is really good! I will play this for sure! Wait for the feedback! Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted May 22, 2015 Author Share Posted May 22, 2015 Finally another one who replied this topic,thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LM3310 Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Finally another one who replied this topic,thanks No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LM3310 Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Nice job. I'll rate the overall missions, 4/5. Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 The Last mission were though ur father has big accuracy, but i like the story as well i just read it. i dont care about the missions since the story Great. Overall i rat it : 4,4/5 Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 I see people talk good about the story. I think I'm going to try this, sooner or later. Hdxt_Hardluck and Super Shizuku 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted May 23, 2015 Author Share Posted May 23, 2015 (edited) The Last mission were though ur father has big accuracy, but i like the story as well i just read it. i dont care about the missions since the story Great. Overall i rat it : 4,4/5 First of all thanks for such a very high rating,and secondly this: Not only Torento's accuracy is 100%,he is also armed with Spaz 12(Arguably the third most dangerous weapon in the game)the reason why I made the boss fight that hard is because it's as the oppose to the difficulties from games these days,they are not as hard as the old games ones,it's something like when you comparing GTA 5 and GTA 2,the reason why GTA 2 is way harder is because some of the missions are very challenging also with horrible controls which what makes the difficulty very interesting like even if you know all of the spoilers in that game doesn't mean you can beat all of them easily,it's always practice for getting rid each hard missions in one MP,and right now I'm at 80% finished the first mission for "The Return of Haruhi Suzumiya" it's part of a trilogy MP titled "Legend of the 6 Dimensional Portals",hope you can wait Also this,Torento is not Gord's father,Thomas revealed to Gord that Torento is actually Gord's evil stepfather who had killed Gord's real father before the birth of Gord due to Gord's mother request,hope you can understand Edited May 24, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Oh. aight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted August 19, 2015 Author Share Posted August 19, 2015 (edited) Trailer released: Edited August 19, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted October 11, 2015 Author Share Posted October 11, 2015 (edited) Reuploaded all archieves with the new version of "Prologue" Chapter 1 (Bounty)> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39052 Chapter 2 (The Crumble of My Family)> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/39053 Full MP> http://www.freeuploa...do.php?id=86636 Edited February 6, 2016 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted July 30, 2016 Share Posted July 30, 2016 Hey, here is the walkthrough / review for the first 3 missions https://youtu.be/SSgiGNX1kT0 Rocket man FI 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted July 30, 2016 Author Share Posted July 30, 2016 Will you give honest feedbacks once you have completed this series? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted July 31, 2016 Share Posted July 31, 2016 Will you give honest feedbacks once you have completed this series? Yes, I will. I'll plan a video that summed up the review of the series Anyway, mission 1.4 & 1.5 is here https://youtu.be/85kY7zGe_5Q Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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