Super Shizuku Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 (edited) THE REVENGE June 2002. A man named George Larson got into debts from someone in his car shop in Liberty City, as the exchange for paying his debts George helping him destroying Columbian Cartel after since they have been severely weaken by someone along with other minor gangs like Yakuza, The Hoods, Yardies, Leones, Diablos, and Liberty City Triads. However, after all of these gangs fallen before George. The man keep sending his men to kill George, saying the man himself doesn't need him anymore, George finally arrived at his house in Los Santos. Unfortunately he got shot in the Cabbie along with the Cabbie driver by an unknown asssassin, with the death of his father, will Mark successful getting his revenge? or will his family be crumbled after Mark's death? find out after beating this mini mission series made by me. Mission Download> http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/24762 Edited August 17, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/762633-the-revenge/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted March 30, 2015 Author Share Posted March 30, 2015 (edited) To people who give lowest rating and played this series: I know this is a bad series because Valgore's bodyguard executed Mark in the end, making a bad ending because he's the one who actually killed his father. But be understand, the reason why I made the ending like this is not because I'm a heartless, but I just wanted to give lesson here that it's not like a story always ended with good ending, or in other words the Protagonist always managed to kill the Antagonist in the end.I just like to make something different for all of my MPs because I love it, and I don't care about fame and respect, I just wanted to make the very first series that has bad ending and nobody has ever done this before is that something wrong?If you judge MPs only because of the ending then you are considered as bad reviewers not me the bad designer, enjoy when DYOM always belong to mainstream people who are focusing gameplay over story while creative people like me will forever vanish Edited August 17, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/762633-the-revenge/#findComment-1067220600 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted August 17, 2015 Author Share Posted August 17, 2015 (edited) Trailer released, thanks to Heisenberg GR Edited August 17, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/762633-the-revenge/#findComment-1067887373 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted August 17, 2015 Share Posted August 17, 2015 As the trailer-maker I played all of your missions to create a good trailer for your mission-pack and I could give you a feedback. Very interesting mission-pack and unique but it's kinda poor for example "I am the good guy and I must kill the bad guys", you should focused on the plot. Anyway, here my rating for this mission-pack: 3.5/5 Good Job Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/762633-the-revenge/#findComment-1067887390 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted August 17, 2015 Author Share Posted August 17, 2015 (edited) As the trailer-maker I played all of your missions to create a good trailer for your mission-pack and I could give you a feedback. Very interesting mission-pack and unique but it's kinda poor for example "I am the good guy and I must kill the bad guys", you should focused on the plot. Anyway, here my rating for this mission-pack: 3.5/5 Good Job Well, I wanted to make at least one ending with the combination of plot twist ending and bad ending since something like this is very rare. Another reason is I wanted to make an "Ultimate Antagonist", I mean an Antagonist who cannot be killed even by the Main Protagonist. Instead they will die by old age, accidents, or get killed by another person in a different story Edited August 17, 2015 by Rendy Specter(Riandy) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/762633-the-revenge/#findComment-1067887543 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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