Sprunk Commercial

[CaliMeatWagon]

Great work, yes indeed maybe change the voice over guy (yeah i know it is you lol ^^), to a more older guy , and that would fit better.The Sprunk commercial is good but lacks a little voice over , but everyone has not the same thinking.

 

Keep doing what you do, and by improving little details it can only be better.

 

 

How much older? Do I need to be 60? I'm 29 and my voice is behind the Sprunk Commercial. My girl is the one that voiced the Downtown Cab Company Commercial. I know for some it's a foreign concept, having girl and all, but I figured it would be better to mix up the voices being used instead of me being the only voice over guy.

[Shrreder]

 

Great work, yes indeed maybe change the voice over guy (yeah i know it is you lol ^^), to a more older guy , and that would fit better.The Sprunk commercial is good but lacks a little voice over , but everyone has not the same thinking.

 

Keep doing what you do, and by improving little details it can only be better.

 

 

How much older? Do I need to be 60? I'm 29 and my voice is behind the Sprunk Commercial. My girl is the one that voiced the Downtown Cab Company Commercial. I know for some it's a foreign concept, having girl and all, but I figured it would be better to mix up the voices being used instead of me being the only voice over guy.

 

You need to use company colors ALL OVER THE COMMERCIAL and better, relatable scenarios for businesses. Look on wiki's for sayings or slogans, or trivia to give you better ideas about the plot of a commercial. Bump heads to think of something witty and original for slogans if none can be found (bonus points for sexual references or references to steoreotypes). Use footage from cut scenes or scenes from story mode or even ONLINE if applicable. Create banners at the end of commercials with company logos. That's what I'd do at least. Find people with deep voices for voice overs, make it sound cheesy (REALLY CHEESY), and if the company is based off of a real life company, poke fun at its ridiculousness just like R* did in-game. After all, Los Santos is a unrealistic and humorous parody of Los Angeles.

[LongDickJohnson]

you have too much time on your hands bro

[minifat]

It was a little long, and the "first person" footage was bad.

 

I liked the first 15 seconds or so though.

[CaliMeatWagon]

you have too much time on your hands bro

 

What's the difference between spending a couple hours playing video games, watching a movie, making a video, or rubbing one out? How some one chooses to spend their time is their business.

[Zwenkwiel]

 

you have too much time on your hands bro

What's the difference between spending a couple hours playing video games, watching a movie, making a video, or rubbing one out? How some one chooses to spend their time is their business.

 

oh oh, I know

the last one makes more of a mess than the others XD

 

anyway I think you got the basic commercial idea down but it's all a bit too straightforward.

you need some kind of hook like a comedic element or some kind of unexpected twist or something.

[Dinlee]

c'mon bruh. everyone knows tv spots are :15, :30, :60, :120

This :40 jazz aint cutting the beans...

That said, interesting idea you just need some one with editing / animation skills to polish these jawns up.

 

[Filip]

 

*sigh* cant wait for the pc version to come out

There wont be anymore creativity.

 

 

What? The creativity starts with the release of PC version. Always.

[CaliMeatWagon]

c'mon bruh. everyone knows tv spots are :15, :30, :60, :120

 

This :40 jazz aint cutting the beans...

 

That said, interesting idea you just need some one with editing / animation skills to polish these jawns up.

 

 

 

 

While I appreciate your offer, I don't know you, don't trust you, not going to give you my raw footage.

[Shootinalloveryourface]

1. Lacks any humour

 

2. Lacks reference to product

 

3. Lacks imagery to product

 

Where's the Sprunk Van that spawns in SP? Where's the green?

 

I liked the bikes.. Energy drinks and BMXing fits, but that's about it.

 

2/10

[Dinlee]

 

c'mon bruh. everyone knows tv spots are :15, :30, :60, :120

 

This :40 jazz aint cutting the beans...

 

That said, interesting idea you just need some one with editing / animation skills to polish these jawns up.

 

 

 

 

While I appreciate your offer, I don't know you, don't trust you, not going to give you my raw footage.

 

lol its just a digital copy. Its not like you are sharing your social security number. Offer stands. PM me and I'll show you some of my work

Edited January 4, 2015 by Dinlee