ONP Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 (edited) EPISODE 1 STORY When Las Venturas is drowning into chaos... There must be a cure for the disease... Lenny Giffard, a new detective from the SFPD. He's "The Truth's Right Hand", as his mates call him. He's famous by his intelligence and using his highly developed observational skills. Recently he moved to the LVPD as he got an offer to get over there in order to solve the crimes and murders going down there. His boss Dixon Diaz, introduced him to his partner onwards, Edgar Willie. Now, they have to team up and trust each other to overpass this anarchy and lawlessness. Enjoy a storyline full of action, drama... The point of making this is to make the player fall in love with the innovation of the cases and how the story progresses, and especially, the development of the characters throughout the story. CHARACTERS - Lenny Griffard - Dixon Diaz - Edgar Willie CASES - Prelude Homicide Desk: - Case 1 : Only The Toughest Stays - Redeemer Of The Souls - Seedless Grapes - ... EQUIPMENTS Case 1 : 9mm pistol and a shotgun. CREDITS Dyom123: Episode 1 Designer. GammoudiCJ: Episode 2 Designer. Edited February 18, 2015 by ONProductions mouaz nsb 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 (edited) EPISODE 2 STORY: "When Las Venturas is drowning into chaos... There must be a cure for the disease... Raven Ethelbert a hard working homicide detective, gets shot in his chest while solving one of the LVPD's hardest cases. He's known by his intelligence and his investigation skills and he went through a lot of cases and never failes... 2 months later after the treatment of his injuries, he came back to his continue his path but he was shocked after finding out that Las Venturas isn't the city of quite no more... It became a city of chaos, robberies, death... a town full of assassins and psychos and after finding out that his partner disappeared In some mysterious circumstances. Now he has to fight his way and face the unkowns who are behind this in a bloody silent storm The point of making this is to make the player fall in love with the innovation of the cases and how the story progresses, and especially, the development of the characters throughout the story." MAIN THEME: CHARACTERS: -Raven Ethelbert -Dixon Diaz -Arvel Madison -Nathan Wynne (More characters and informations... TBA) Cases: -Prologue: -Case 1: The Scorpio The Scorpio (Intro) Bloody scene Unkown connection East Shootout New lead Who are we dealing with? Wife of the past Dirty pal The path to the hitman Parking murder His next move Taking him down Case closed(outro) Equipments -Case1: 9mm pistol Credits: Dyom 123 for creating the first episode GammoudiCJ for creating the second episode. Edited January 20, 2015 by Gammoudicj mouaz nsb 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTyLeR Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 (edited) SO..MUCH..AWESOMENESS I Shall wait for this. BTW, Nevermind And Good luck with this Edited December 31, 2014 by iTyLeR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted December 31, 2014 Share Posted December 31, 2014 (edited) many action, much awesome, wow. So, you two are teaming up like DP and LND, good. But, in my opinion, you shouldn't use their style, rather just learn from it and improve it somehow, or at least make it looks like yours, if you know what I mean. Also, DYOM123's story looks like a "copied and edited" version of Dark Skies (don't get me wrong, but I just feel like there are some similiarities) One more thing, dyom123's logo doesn't look like police'ish. Edited December 31, 2014 by Revolver1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted December 31, 2014 Author Share Posted December 31, 2014 many action, much awesome, wow. So, you two are teaming up like DP and LND, good. But, in my opinion, you shouldn't use their style, rather just learn from it and improve it somehow, or at least make it looks like yours, if you know what I mean. Also, DYOM123's story looks like a "copied and edited" version of Dark Skies (don't get me wrong, but I just feel like there are some similiarities) One more thing, dyom123's logo doesn't look like police'ish. I get you Rev, if you mean the way we design, it's going to be top-notch, if things would go the way we planned it to be. The story also isn't the same as Rytiklus's one. But anyway, I'll try to change some details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted December 31, 2014 Share Posted December 31, 2014 (edited) The story does indeed look similar to Dark Skies, but only few very bland similarities. There is nothing that needs to be changed, I'm completely okay with this and can't wait for the first mission/chapter w/e ! Edited December 31, 2014 by Rytuklis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 31, 2014 Share Posted December 31, 2014 Hey, good luck with this Dyom123 and Gammoudi very fantastic topic looking forward for missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted January 2, 2015 Author Share Posted January 2, 2015 The story does indeed look similar to Dark Skies, but only few very bland similarities. There is nothing that needs to be changed, I'm completely okay with this and can't wait for the first mission/chapter w/e ! Thanks pal, I assure you that this is really worth the waiting. Hey, good luck with this Dyom123 and Gammoudi very fantastic topic looking forward for missions. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 UPDATE: Case 1: The scorpio: Introduction is uploaded. Play, enjoy and give us some feedback guys Note: We've decided to release the missions one by one. Stay tuned, the next mission's on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 Hue. Gonna play right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 Played the first mission. Very little gameplay, but since it's an intro, that's forgivable. At first I was like "Meh, this is gonna be boring", but the cutscenes that followed after the LVPD shootout got me interested and I wasn't dissappointed. Loved the camera angles, the detail and the story. Can't wait for the next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 (edited) Played the first mission. Very little gameplay, but since it's an intro, that's forgivable. At first I was like "Meh, this is gonna be boring", but the cutscenes that followed after the LVPD shootout got me interested and I wasn't dissappointed. Loved the camera angles, the detail and the story. Can't wait for the next mission. Thank you for your feedback Rytuklis. Update: Case 1: The scorpio: Bloody scene is uploaded! Play, enjoy and give some feedback guys Edited January 2, 2015 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 In my humble opinion, releasing missions one by one is a horrible choice. Rather, release screenies and such of your completed missions until you finish the whole case. And get your ass back to DYOM Magazine will ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 In my humble opinion, releasing missions one by one is a horrible choice. Rather, release screenies and such of your completed missions until you finish the whole case. And get your ass back to DYOM Magazine will ya. School will restart in 2 days and we'll rarely find time to make missions. That's why we're releasing them one by one because a case might take a month to finish. And I'll get back to DYOM magazine soon, I already started writting some informations. Maybe this weekend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted January 3, 2015 Author Share Posted January 3, 2015 UPDATE Case 1: Only The Toughest Stays : Mission 1(Redeemer of The Souls) is now uploaded! Don't forget to play and to give feedbac! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/35323 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 3, 2015 Share Posted January 3, 2015 UPDATE: Case 1: The Scorpio: Unkown Connection is finished and uploaded! Play, enjoy and give us some feedback guys Btw, played your mission Dyom123. Great one man especially the wheels part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted January 3, 2015 Share Posted January 3, 2015 I played Redeemer of the souls not too long ago. I didn't figure out you guys were making this together, but nevertheless, this is great. Good luck in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted January 4, 2015 Author Share Posted January 4, 2015 Thank you both gentlemen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 4, 2015 Share Posted January 4, 2015 UPDATE: Case 1: The scorpio: East Shootout is uploaded! Play, enjoy and give us some feedback guys Note: Don't expect much from this one because it's just a side mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adolf_Traplord_Hitler Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Hey, i played Redeemer of the Souls by Dyom123, it was just fantastic dude! the ambient music you provided suited perfect to mission gameplay, there were no writing mistakes in the missions, also the scene was greatly designed, i like the way of finding identity of victim, i don't wanna spoil it now! I'll play the missions from Gammoudi too, that would be great, you guys are doin' a great job. Don't hate me, i know its just a mistake, otherwise everything is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mouaz nsb Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Good mission for Dyom123 and Gammoudicj but i thing episode 2 better than episode 1 foward heroses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted January 5, 2015 Author Share Posted January 5, 2015 Thanks guys for your comments. #mouaz nsb: You still haven't seen anything yet! mouaz nsb 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mouaz nsb Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 (edited) so i am wait man Edited January 5, 2015 by mouaz nsb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goten_GTA Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Played the first mission it is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee. Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 (edited) Played Silence in the Storm by Gammoudicj. I enjoyed it a lot, even though East Shootout mission is a bit short. Your presentation is awesome, I love how you combine the slow-motion cutscene with special effect and the right animation. My favorite one is when the victim is shot on the head . Your use of ambient music and sound effect are pretty cool to. Maybe one thing you should do is reducing the amount of visible checkpoint on the clues, since in those 4 missions, only some of the objectives are invisible. Other than that, the missions are awesomely designed and I'm looking forward for more. Edited January 7, 2015 by _Ghost97 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 (edited) Good mission for Dyom123 and Gammoudicj but i thing episode 2 better than episode 1 foward heroses Thank you, mouaz nsb. Stay tuned, we might release 2 missions today. Played the first mission it is cool Thanks for playing man, I apperciate it. Played Silence in the Storm by Gammoudicj. I enjoyed it a lot, even though East Shootout mission is a bit short. Your presentation is awesome, I love how you combine the slow-motion cutscene with special effect and the right animation. My favorite one is when the victim is shot on the head . Your use of ambient music and sound effect are pretty cool to. Maybe one thing you should do is reducing the amount of visible checkpoint on the clues, since in those 4 missions, only some of the objectives are invisible. Other than that, the missions are awesomely designed and I'm looking forward for more. Thank you ! And about East Shootout, it's just a side mission and must be short. Perhaps I'll make it longer next time (in the next case). I'll try to reduce the amount of visible checkpoints as well. Edited January 7, 2015 by Gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee. Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Played Silence in the Storm by Gammoudicj. I enjoyed it a lot, even though East Shootout mission is a bit short. Your presentation is awesome, I love how you combine the slow-motion cutscene with special effect and the right animation. My favorite one is when the victim is shot on the head . Your use of ambient music and sound effect are pretty cool to. Maybe one thing you should do is reducing the amount of visible checkpoint on the clues, since in those 4 missions, only some of the objectives are invisible. Other than that, the missions are awesomely designed and I'm looking forward for more. Thank you ! And about East Shootout, it's just a side mission and must be short. Perhaps I'll make it longer next time (in the next case). I'll try to reduce the amount of visible checkpoints as well. Nah, if it's anything like the Random Event in GTA V, then keep it short, it's better that way . I just didn't realize that it is a side mission when I first played it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 (edited) This is not dead, guys. We're just busy with school, games and our lives. Also, we've got a lack of ideas and clues. But we're still working on this. Stay tuned, 4 missions will be released tommorow, if not today Edited January 13, 2015 by Gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TDWP_Adam Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 How do you play this in chronological order or it doesn't matter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted January 13, 2015 Author Share Posted January 13, 2015 (edited) How do you play this in chronological order or it doesn't matter? It's ordered chronologically, so you should play the missions in order so you can undertand the case concept of the case Edited January 13, 2015 by Dyom 123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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