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waxman.

I cry

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waxman.

I cry when the needs are left,

I cry when the wants are best,

Nevertheless, I chose to repress to this world that defines

As a mess.

 

Cheer me up by taking me sincerely,

I live off greed but don't act so fearfully

Nevertheless, I adapted to this mess

In a world were victors are legends that confess.

 

I cry when the guilt of my life is at needs,

I cry when the fornication collapses around me,

As dukes to queens and mother to father,

They rely on my soul to vent their own lava.

Deadly igneous dries my two lungs,

My kidney, my liver, my brain and then some,

Posses the powers of the filthy and wicked

As the dreams I recall is the life I predicted.

 

I cry for the grief that I will soon leave behind,

That will tear sides in two and rupture the mind.

I do not want this now, as I do as forever,

But death is inevitable, and death lasts forever.

Edited by Lexty.

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Payne Killer

Good poem. :)

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Ziggy455

I've never been good at deciphering poetry but I'll give it a crack.

 

I think it's a commentary on need and desire. What we're seeing is somebody crying over their life which has been spent in need, not want. They have lived a life of necessity "I cry when the guilt of my life is at needs," so what's happening is that the man or woman cries at a mix of cathartic want and needful things. Yet from this, the man/woman has also spent a life of needing something they can't take with them, and they've spent their life taking, only to realize the damage from their greed is all that is left and that the only product of it is their own sadness, regret, and possible destruction.

 

They rely on my soul to vent their own lava.

Deadly igneous dries my two lungs.

 

What I get, and I'm f*cking sh*t at this stuff, is that the narrator has been a volcano their whole life, and this eruption, the lava, deadly igneous a la their greed is bubbling up and what it leaves, very much like lava, is grief and anguish to others.

 

I took a stab in the dark. I liked it though, it conveyed an image to me.

Edited by Ziggy455

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Mokrie Dela

That's the good thing about poetry; it can be interpreted many ways. Most of the time you'd get a similar message overall.

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Le zébu suintant

I like youre poem. :)

 

There are ideas.

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