Rytuklis Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 (edited) NOTE: Before you start pointing it out, questioning and wondering - yes, indeed, I made a new topic, and please pardon me if you feel irritated by it. The fact is that the whole story and the concept of the mission pack was changed and I thought it would be much cleaner and better to not cause confusion and make a new topic instead. Thank you. MAIN THEME BY RYTUKLIS: https://soundcloud.com/rytuklis/rytuklis-dark-skiesmp3 DARK SKIES The Story: Connor Archibald, a hard-working detective from Las Venturas, Northern Andreas, has been transferred to Los Santos Police Department on Captain Joshua Parker's request. Mysterious, over-dose related deaths keep turning up in the streets of the City of the "Saints", caused by a drug of an uknown origin, nicknamed "The Purple Death". Cody Miller, a long-working detective for the LSPD is not very happy about his new partner, but whatever he likes it or not, is forced to trust him with his journey to the dark artery of the city's organised crime. Solve crimes, look for clues and put your brain to work. This mission pack will not be your ordinary "Go there, kill that" mission pack. In order to progress throughout the story, you'll have to analyse, search, think. Expierence the cold and dark story of two detectives lost deep in the city, having no-one but each other to trust, as the sky above them darkens. Cases: ACT 1: The Whitmann's Case A new, uknown drug, nicknamed "The Purple Death" is causing all hells loosen upon the Los Santos City. Bodies are turning up everywhere, and the LSPD are trying their best to keep the public from realizing what is going on to avoid the panic, but you can't expect the people and the media to give a blind eye to piles of bodies turning up each day. In order to fasten the progress on finding the source of the drug, LSPD requests a well expierenced detective, Connor Archibald, to be transferred to LSPD to aid them on the case. And so your journey through the darkened skies begins: 1.0: Prologue Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34273 1.1: The Whitmann Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34339 Edited October 14, 2014 by Rytuklis Revolver1, Sergiu and Abeer 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 Can always expect some awesome sh*t from you. This will be on my to-do list tomorrow morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 6, 2014 Author Share Posted October 6, 2014 Can always expect some awesome sh*t from you. This will be on my to-do list tomorrow morning. Why wait? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 Cuz' it's exactly 00:59 right now in my country, and this reply is being posted on a stolen iPhone (sis) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 Looks so awesome! I was really looking forward to see you completing the other Dark Skies, 'cause I've fallen in love with the story the moment I played it. But, I assume this is gon' be better, isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 6, 2014 Author Share Posted October 6, 2014 Sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 (edited) From the first mission, I can say, Rytis, that it's gonna be very interesting mission pack. Especially from the dialogues. Looking forward for more missions. BONUS. Before going to work, I've decided to check on the cells downstairs and uuuh... Edited October 6, 2014 by Be Kowalski Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 7, 2014 Author Share Posted October 7, 2014 Thats the games fault . The pedastrian paths seem to be a little out of hand in dyom . Thanks for trying out the intro and stay tuned for ACT1.1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 (edited) Okay, finally, managed some spare time and tried the first mission. It's good for a Prologue. Seems like you've finally used some colors in dialogues, which is pretty dope if you ask me. Damn, why didn't I thought about using color texts to describe an actor's actions. Though the name Cody and Conner seem to be kinda confusing for me. In dialogues, I can't tell if it's Cody or Conner is talking, unless I take a real close look, which might give me less time to read other stuffs and miss out some crucial parts of the dialogue. Cody Conner Cody Conner Conner Cody Conner Conner Cody Cody Conner.Now read that fast and tell me it's not confusing. Edited October 9, 2014 by Revolver1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 Its Connor, not Conner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Its Connor, not Conner Aw sh*t, I got the names f*cked up. Man, I'm so f*cked up. My mind is going crazy nowadays, because of this hell that my school calls "mid-term exams". It f*cked me up real good man. I don't even know what the hell I'm saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 From the first mission, I can say, Rytis, that it's gonna be very interesting mission pack. Especially from the dialogues. Looking forward for more missions. BONUS. Before going to work, I've decided to check on the cells downstairs and uuuh... Because crime never goes on vacation. Revolver1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 Main theme, composed by me https://soundcloud.com/rytuklis/rytuklis-dark-skiesmp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Main theme, composed by me https://soundcloud.com/rytuklis/rytuklis-dark-skiesmp3 Amazing, jaw-breaking. You're really good at this. Anyway, i can suggest you another song... From one of the game that exited me the most (I really liked the atmosphere and i suggest it to every one of you, even though it's not on pc.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 I'm not gonna use other game's tracks on this mission pack. Everything will be composed by myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 10, 2014 Share Posted October 10, 2014 Main theme, composed by me https://soundcloud.com/rytuklis/rytuklis-dark-skiesmp3 It's pretty dope if you ask me. You should be a composer, not DYOM designer (lel) I bet if you start a topic where you offer people to compose songs for their MPs, it'll hit big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 10, 2014 Author Share Posted October 10, 2014 That would be an idea but I dont like the thought of having to compose for every two-missions "go there kill that" mission pack.. Juice the Joos 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In45do Posted October 10, 2014 Share Posted October 10, 2014 I like the sound Btw, how did you create it? What is the name of an application to create it? (Sorry if this is a little bit off-topic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 10, 2014 Author Share Posted October 10, 2014 (edited) I like the sound Btw, how did you create it? What is the name of an application to create it? (Sorry if this is a little bit off-topic) MAGIX MM 2014 Besides people.. Stop being asshats.. This is for commenting on the mission pack, not the freaking OST :S Edited October 10, 2014 by Rytuklis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 13, 2014 Author Share Posted October 13, 2014 A new mission uploaded, however, once again I'm forced to use mediafire instead of that sh*t of an excuse of a storage called dyom.gtagames.nl to which upload a mission is a pain in the ass due to all these freaking 403 errors that explain completely nothing. This is so demotivating when due to not being able to upload to the DYOM website I'm loosing a big part of my audience.. https://www.mediafire.com/?82h2d8rxs4d4gr6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted October 14, 2014 Author Share Posted October 14, 2014 The mission has been re-uploaded to DYOM website. Enjoy! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34339 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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