Constructive Criticism Needed(Crew Emblem)

[Aether]

Hello all, I worked my butt off for this crew emblem and I won't accept anything but perfection. I would really appreciate it if a few of you took a sharp look at it and made some helpful suggestions.

 

 

For example, I always felt like the fuselage and wings of the f-22 needed something so it isn't so plain.. but I don't know what.

 

 

 

[Onett]

As a member of this crew, I say yeah, this looks awesome dude.

[Toshio_maxoS]

No, this is totally awesome, respect for this one, maybe,

if possible, fix some edges. But all in all its awesome.

[Aether]

No, this is totally awesome, respect for this one, maybe,

if possible, fix some edges. But all in all its awesome.

Thank you for the compliment, could you describe which edges you're talking about? It would really help.

[Shmoopy]

The background looks like a motorcycle crew patch
The fighter jet logo shouldn`t be planar , it needs a perspective
Something like this:

The Eagle would be replaced with a Jet that comes out , like this one :

 

 

And don`t forget the stars, any military related logo has ones.

 

That was my constructive critisism

[Aether]

I totally know what you mean by perspective, just not sure how I would illustrate it. I don't mind it looking like a mc patch, if you look up fighter wing emblems on google most of them look like mc patches.

 

I wanted to put some stars down but do you have a location in mind?

[Shmoopy]

I totally know what you mean by perspective, just not sure how I would illustrate it. I don't mind it looking like a mc patch, if you look up fighter wing emblems on google most of them look like mc patches.

 

I wanted to put some stars down but do you have a location in mind?

Probably under "Fighter Wing", red stars having the same curve as of the upper line

[Toshio_maxoS]

 

No, this is totally awesome, respect for this one, maybe,

if possible, fix some edges. But all in all its awesome.

Thank you for the compliment, could you describe which edges you're talking about? It would really help.

 

 

These ones http://i.imgur.com/R2fMhgU.png

 

Well, Its a pettiness. But I just saw it, so I thought I may mention it

[Aether]

Oh my god I didn't even see those. 0_o

 

Thanks!

[Flachbau]

Looks really great. Honestly, I believe you could change the font to a better one.

 

Everything else is fine!

[Aether]

Looks really great. Honestly, I believe you could change the font to a better one.

 

Everything else is fine!

What kind of font would you go with? Keep in mind making letters sucks enough as is.

 

 

How do you guys feel about the tribals? Was going for a Starscream vibe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

May still edit it, but I am going for this look...

 

Edited October 22, 2014 by zVI Jackal IVz

[OVO]

The one with the tribals looks kinda odd to me. It's just 'too much'.

Personally, I would stick with the original emblem.

Edited October 23, 2014 by BattleExel26

[Aether]

Just out of curiosity, would anyone be willing to temporarily join the crew in order to make the font look better and maybe take a different approach on the jet?

[Xanj]

Yeah I agree it looks great, but if there was a way to make the text/font a little thicker, easier to read at a distance, that could be good. But I know from my own emblem work that it is a lot easier said than done lol. With how emblems show in-game though, you want any text to be as easy to read as possible.

 

As for those tribals, they look pretty cool on the preview, but in-game I would think that might be hard to see what it is.