Gammoudicj Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 (edited) "1999 years, San Fierro Revenge on traitors is easy but what about if the backstabber that you need to kill is someone that you've been working for almost your whole life and you trusted alot? Will you face the troubles in your way to get him? It's up to you to answer" Welcome to my short mission pack which will contain 20 missions, let's get down to business ladies and gentlemen. "I was a normal hitman in a mafia, doing jobs for my boss. I saved his ass many times and I trusted him and so on with him. He always told me that I'm the son that he never had and it apears that all this bullsh*t was lies... f*cking lies. He betrayed me after doing a job that nobody can do, easily. Right now, I'm looking for revenge. I'll stick to anybody who helps me to take Darco down, whatever it takes" Vladimir Reynold Protagonist: Vladimir "Vlad" Reynold: Vlad grew up in Russia, his father had some files against the govrement which made them kill him and his family. However, Vlad managed to escape. He ran away to Las Venturas, where he joined the army. After his friends' death there, he left the job. He later met Darco, Ivan, Alfredo and Carl in Las Venturas. He's been working with them as a hitman, later after the Carcer City's mission, the rest of the team moved to San Fierro where he met Phil. Now Vlad's only goal is to revenge and kill Darco for betraying him. Friends: Philip "Phil" Robinson: One of Vlad's best friends. Vlad saved him from going to prison before, they've been working together since then, racing, robbing... He's Vlad's last hope to kill Darco. He'll do anything to help him, whatever it takes. Alfredo Vicario: TBA Nick Parker: TBA Lee Yong: TBA Nathan Johnson: TBA Gaston Brondow: TBA Antagonists: Darco Bogdan: The leader of the Bogdan Mafia. He's a man that nobody f*cks with, he met Vlad in LV and asked him to work for him. After some years, he realised that it's time to take care of him since he knows a lot about his dirty business. When he knew that Vlad stills alive, he did everything to take him down, even bribing the SFPD. Richard Williams: One of the best SFPD Detectives, he's been chasing Vlad since a long time ago. Later Darco payed him a lot of money along with the General to hunt and arrest him. Edward Miles: San Andreas Army General, a serious man. Even if he's powerfull, he doesn't mess with Darco. After taking his cut of the money, he started hunting Vladimir. He'll do anything to get him, dead or alive. Ivan Vissarion: Darco's bodyguard and right hand. He's a pro in shooting and never failed at killing any target. He's been working with Vlad for many years, until Darco decided to kill him. Huan Chao: TBA Lim Wong: TBA Prologues: Deathly trap Bad memories Chapter #1: On the run (Download) Awaken Moments from the past Bloody Hotel On the run SFPD infiltration Chapter #2: Getting back on feet Hitman's back Deep business Ship's boomshine New partners, new orders Highway's full speed Where am I? Unwelcome guests Forced Chapter #3: Preparing for war Your new place Trojan Slow and steady Taken down One way or another Wanted man (Part 1) Wanted man (Part 2) Faster than Thunder Back to back Fish in a barrel One last favor Chapter #4: Revenge is the choice Preparing for war Ghost from the past Flashback War of the damned! For the money! Second takeout One last move A revenger's tragedy The Epilogue Coming soon... Coming soon... *Topic's under construction *Try to use pickups in game, missions are not too hard or too easy *The missions need some infiltration, sneaking, stealth and shooting style *Don't forget to give ya' feedback GammoudiCJ for making the missions, topic, informations etc... Dyom 123 for the logo and headers You for your feedback. Edited July 16, 2015 by Gammoudicj .GreenGoo, Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM and Hdxt_Hardluck 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 Looks great! I'll be always waiting for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 4, 2014 Author Share Posted October 4, 2014 (edited) Looks great! I'll be always waiting for it. Thank you for your feedback, Dyom 123. Prologue: Deadly escape is uploaded! PLay enjoy and give some feedback guys http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34254 Edited February 22, 2015 by Gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gheorgheM Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 oh yes! finally! can't wait for the uploads! following! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 Please name the last mission "A Revenger's Tragedy", always wanted to see a mission with that name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 5, 2014 Author Share Posted October 5, 2014 (edited) oh yes! finally! can't wait for the uploads! following! Thank you, I'll try to finish the second mission today IF I have enough time. Please name the last mission "A Revenger's Tragedy", always wanted to see a mission with that name. Okay, sure EDIT: BTW, how was the first mission? Edited October 5, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 5, 2014 Share Posted October 5, 2014 oh yes! finally! can't wait for the uploads! following! Thank you, I'll try to finish the second mission today IF I have enough time. Please name the last mission "A Revenger's Tragedy", always wanted to see a mission with that name. Okay, sure EDIT: BTW, how was the first mission? By the way, make sure the name fits the mission, meaning something terrible would happen to the protagonist then he'll be on his wait to revenge his fallen comrade or some sh*t like that. And I haven't really tested out the first mission yet. Today is my day off since I finally finished all my reviews, so I'll be chilling around a bit with The Flats by BK90, to know what's all the fuss about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gheorgheM Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 EDIT: BTW, how was the first mission? wait a minute, you mean that MOTW mission wasn't the first mission? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gheorgheM Posted October 7, 2014 Share Posted October 7, 2014 oh wait, nevermind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 (edited) Alright mate, just tried the first mission, and here's my review: Deathly Escape (though to be precise, it's Deadly, not Deathly) -Writing: Very good. There are some grammar mistakes and such but they aren't much of a problem. All of them can still be understood properly and the instructions are clear. -Presentation: Very good. The cutscenes are beautifully placed and time, the animations are properly chosen, and the explosions are majestic as f*ck. I especially love the lift detail, it's just f*cking creative. -Length: Very good. The mission can last for a good 9-10 minutes. Vlad, assumed a wanted criminal, is being cornered by the FBI, and he's got to get out, and fast. -Difficulty: Hard. The whole mission mostly consists of intense shootouts. You are heavily outgunned and outnumbered. If I were you, I'll be watching my six constantly, or some nutjob might pop outta' thin air and blast you to God with his silver-plated-with-wooden-grip Desert Eagle. -Variety: Excellent. The amount of variety in this mission is absolutely stunning. The battlefields are beautifully "decorated" with all dem' objects and sh*t. Though the enviroment is kinda badly chosen. If I were the author, I'd have used a rainy weather. Gammou sure knows how to make a battlefield looks like, well, a battlefield (you don't say lol) Overall rating for mission: 9.8/10. The mission is astounding I must say. Everything, and I mean EVERYTHING, is excellently made. The only thing I can complain in this mission is the weather. Like I said, a rainy weather would have been better. What can possibly be better than blasting fools with water in your eyes, on your guns, with an intense-as-f*ck music, and 'dem FBIs just crawl out of spider holes or some sh*t like that. Still, this is one helluva' mission. The author sure know how to make the players happy. One more thing, the grammar is not THAT bad, but still can use some more improvements. Note: I'll review the whole MP once you're finished. For now, just this, but I think it's enough to keep you happy, am I right? Edited October 9, 2014 by Revolver1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Wow! Another MP! Good luck with this bro. I shpuld play your mission in my free time and give you my feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 14, 2014 Author Share Posted October 14, 2014 Thank you for your great review Revolver. Anyways, 3-4 missions are coming this week, if I have time i might release 7 missions. Stay tuned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 17, 2014 Author Share Posted October 17, 2014 (edited) Second prologue is finished and UPLOADED! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34360 Play, enjoy and don't forget to give your feedback. Next mission will be done in the next 1-2 days. Edited October 23, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted October 18, 2014 Share Posted October 18, 2014 (edited) Just played the 2nd mission, a masterpiece if you'd ask me. Nice work, man! You surely did alot of effort! What an object setting! But one thing, you should make the puzzle more easier, it takes a lot of time. I got through it after nearly 15 minutes. Edited October 18, 2014 by Dyom 123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 18, 2014 Author Share Posted October 18, 2014 Just played the 2nd mission, a masterpiece if you'd ask me. Nice work, man! You surely did alot of effort! What an object setting! Thx, a lot buddy. Glad that you liked it, stay tuned, next mission's on the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 20, 2014 Author Share Posted October 20, 2014 (edited) Chapter #1: Mission one is finished and UPLOADED! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34397 Play, enjoy and don't forget to give this dude some feedback Sorry if the mission's not too long, that's because of the interiors and DYOM limits. Edited March 18, 2015 by Gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chetanhaobijam Posted October 22, 2014 Share Posted October 22, 2014 All the available missions are sofar somewhat hard, but very fun to play. Mission1 was all about taking cover and finishing off the FBIs. I failed twice over the lift. After repeating I realised that I have to press Right Ctrl standing near the control switch of the lift. And mission3rd i.e 1st mission of Chapter 1 was very difficult because the police will recognise and shoot. And so mission failed in few seconds. Waiting for the next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 22, 2014 Author Share Posted October 22, 2014 (edited) All the available missions are sofar somewhat hard, but very fun to play. Mission1 was all about taking cover and finishing off the FBIs. I failed twice over the lift. After repeating I realised that I have to press Right Ctrl standing near the control switch of the lift. And mission3rd i.e 1st mission of Chapter 1 was very difficult because the police will recognise and shoot. And so mission failed in few seconds. Waiting for the next mission. Thank you for your feedback, mate. BUt please next time, use spoiler tag alright? The missions are not too hard or too easy, plus there are a lot of unhidden pickups. About the 3rd mission, if you have some stealth and infiltration skils, it'd be easy. That's my opinion because I know where the guards are, probably that's the reason. Stay tuned, missions are on the way. Edited January 30, 2015 by Gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 23, 2014 Share Posted October 23, 2014 (edited) Chapter #1: Mission one is finished and UPLOADED! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34397 Play, enjoy and don't forget to give this dude some feedback Sorry if the mission's not too long, that's because of the interiors and DYOM limits. wut you mean mission one man? Wasn't it released like, weeks ago? Edited October 23, 2014 by Revolver1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 23, 2014 Author Share Posted October 23, 2014 (edited) Chapter #1: Mission one is finished and UPLOADED! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34397 Play, enjoy and don't forget to give this dude some feedback Sorry if the mission's not too long, that's because of the interiors and DYOM limits. wut you mean mission one man? Wasn't it released like, weeks ago? Those two missions were the PROLOGUES. Chapter #1 has just started. Since I'm having holidays, I'll try to finish the next missions today. EDIT: I think I can't so it might be released tommorow. Edited October 23, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 23, 2014 Share Posted October 23, 2014 Aw damn, now I feel like an idiot. Sorry for not looking first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 26, 2014 Author Share Posted October 26, 2014 I'm sorry if the missions took a long time, I just wanna release 3 missions together, I promise that they'll be uploaded tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 28, 2014 Author Share Posted October 28, 2014 (edited) Moments from the past is finished and uploaded! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34462 Next mission will be availebale this evening, if I have enough time, 2 missions. Blame school for that EDIT: C'mon guys, give some feedback. WHy is it so quit around here? Edited October 28, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chetanhaobijam Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 When I enter the new mission link, it shows the awaken mission dyom page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Moments from the past is finished and uploaded! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34397 Next mission will be availebale this evening, if I have enough time, 2 missions. Blame school for that EDIT: C'mon guys, give some feedback. WHy is it so quit around here? Dude you just posted this 3 hours ago and you're expecting feedbacks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 28, 2014 Author Share Posted October 28, 2014 Moments from the past is finished and uploaded! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34397 Next mission will be availebale this evening, if I have enough time, 2 missions. Blame school for that EDIT: C'mon guys, give some feedback. WHy is it so quit around here? Dude you just posted this 3 hours ago and you're expecting feedbacks? it's just because I'm about to upload the next mission, I don't want to double post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Alright now post it, you're not doubleposting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 29, 2014 Author Share Posted October 29, 2014 Bloody hotel is finished and uploaded! Chapter 1 is coming to its end, stay tuned guys http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/34470 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted October 30, 2014 Author Share Posted October 30, 2014 Note: This MP will be stopped for a couple of days, I'm real busy with school and next week's full of exams. I won't be able to design any mission until 7/10/2014. This won't be cancelled, no doubt. I can't wait, myself to work the next missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted October 30, 2014 Share Posted October 30, 2014 Then i'll give feedback soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
