Aila Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 (edited) Changed a name from "The Ballad of Guy STJ" Coming soon (After Chapter 1 Released ) To be updated... Chapter 1 San Fierro, 1993 Russian Mafia has rulling out the San Fierro, they were very cruel to kill people, but one day STJ has offered a job by the Russians Mafia, STJ accepted that offer. but those Mafia is only use STJ to destroying San Fierro Gangs and killing his bestfriend Dom, STJ can't believe for this, he want to avenge to Russians Mafia for death of his bestfriend Dom, after that he looking someone to helping him for killing a Russians leader BV (Bradley Vortune), STJ found The Babous's Gang, he joined that gangs and meet Nagata,Nelson, and Revin.. Chapter 2 When the Russians Mafia has moved from San Fierro, STJ and his friend moved to Las Venturas to find out where the Mafia Russians hiding, but they got in trouble with a ruthless group there, the group was called "The Destroyers", they get in trouble with "The Destroyers" because Nelson has not paid his debt to Varro (Leader of The Destroyers), they're want to kill Nelson and his friend if Nelson still not paying his debts to Varro, but STJ promised to Nelson that he'll protect Nelson and his friends from The Destroyers Chapter 3 After they were separated from The Destroyers threat, they still did not find where the Russians Mafia hiding, STJ and Nelson decided to back to San Fierro, Revin apparently is a spy from the Mafia Russians, he was forestall Nelson and STJ to found Russians Mafia Nelson and his friends will do anything to Revin, they'll kill Revin because he have betrayed from The Babous, but then Jeremy has a problem with Mexican Cartel, STJ Should save Jeremy from the problem and STJ was asking Jeremy to joining The Babous gangs to help STJ to kill Revin and find out where the Russians Mafia hiding Chapter 4 After they're killing Revin, they finally got information about where the Russian Mafia hiding, but STJ should be careful with that information because that could be a trap, And finally STJ and his friend decided to go to place that they got from information for killing BV and his Russians Family Main Characters Sean Tyson Johnson (STJ) (hmycr) Status - Alive Age - 24 He's the main protagonist on this story, he was born on Vice City, he moved to San Fierro at 21 June 1993, he was a good and clever man, he always help people who has a big trouble, because of his kindness the Russians Mafia has offered a job to him, he accepted that offer and starting work at Russians Mafia, But it is just a catastrophe for him, he lost his bestfriend Dom because the Mafia's has killing Dom, he want to revenge to Russians Mafia for the death of Dom. Dom Silverman Status - Dead Age - 26 He's STJ's Bestfriend, he was born on San Fierro, he is a good man. but one day he make a deal with Russians Mafia to attacking all of Gangster on San Fierro, But the Mafia is lying, they actually kill Dom in that area where Dom and Mafia started attacking The Gangster. Jeremy Stattham (bmydj) Status - Alive Age - 32 Currently Friend Nelson Status - Alive Age - 24 Mark "Revin" Louies (Picture Available on 420x320) Status - Determinant Age - 22 Nakamura Nagata (Picture Available on 420x320) Status - Alive Age - 35 Currently Enemies Bradley Vortune (Picture Available Soon) Status - Dead Age - 42 Xavi Cowazy (Picture Available Soon) Status - Dead Age - 67 S Tee (Picture Available Soon) Status - Alive Age - 36 Josh Rodrigo (Picture Available Soon) Status - Determinant Age - 42 The Babous Crew (Picture Available Soon) Danger : Unstoppable Leader : Aryan Joe Armstrong Weapons : M4, Uzi, Colt 45 and SMG Allies : None. The Thugs (Crack Dealer) (Picture Available Soon) Danger : Strong Leader : Earl Whitwicky Weapons : Colt 45, Bat, Knife and Uzi. Allies : American Ballers American Ballers (Picture Available Soon) Danger : Very Strong Leader : S Tee Weapons : Colt 45, Uzi, Tec-9 and SMG Allies : The Thugs (Crack Dealers) Mexican Cartel (Picture Available Soon) Danger : Unstoppable Leader : Josh Rodrigo Weapons : AK47, Deagle, SMG, Uzi and Tec-9 Allies : None CHAPTER 1 [TABLE] Missions Status DescriptionThe Party Completed This is the Introduction of this storyline when STJ was invited the Beach Party by Dom First Collector Completed Dom need your help to taking his money back from the thugs who have a debts with Dom. Bleed Your Heart Out Completed You are going to buy a new clothes, but you saw someone is being attacked by the thugs, you need to save him from The Thugs. 21 Guns Completed Dom want you to learning how to shooting at Garcia with Jeremy, but after you're finished the test, the American Ballers gang has come there for attacking you. Little Job Work In Progress You've called by Jeremy to finish all bandits which destroying the Jeremy hideout Mr.Bradley Work In Progress You're offered a job by the Russians Mafia, you have to kill a witness who had seen the murder in Palisades Gangsta'Banging Not Started Dom and Jeremy are in trouble, they're being attacked by a gangs, you need to save them from the American Ballers Gang Bom da' Base Not Started Mr.Bradley wants you to deliver the car bomb to Mexican Cartel base in order to steal the documents [/TABLE] Testing Version - Download 21/9/14 --------------------- Topic Created 23/9/14 --------------------- Topic moved and changed the title Add a mission list Add some pictures of the characters Rockstar Games - Making GTA : San Andreas PatrickW & Dutchy3010 - Design Your Own Mission Alien & Seeman - CLEO Scripts Tukang Kerupuk - Idea, Header, Mission *This topic is still under constructions *Sorry for the tables bug and I don't know how to fix it *Sorry for my bad English because I'm still learning. *Sorry for my grammars Edited February 25, 2015 by Shadowscythe LM3310 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 you could have just asked a moderator to change the topic title you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted September 23, 2014 Author Share Posted September 23, 2014 Okay, next time I will not do this again. LM3310 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonWarrior (DnW) Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 U did it because I told?? O.o? anyway GoodLuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted September 24, 2014 Author Share Posted September 24, 2014 U did it because I told?? O.o? anyway GoodLuck No, I also think that title is weird, so I changed to "Lost In San Andreas" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted September 27, 2014 Author Share Posted September 27, 2014 Demo version will be updated today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted October 21, 2014 Author Share Posted October 21, 2014 (edited) Testing Version Download I need some feedback then I'll continue this storyline again. Edited October 21, 2014 by tukang kerupuk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMariusz700_PL Posted October 22, 2014 Share Posted October 22, 2014 Nice storyline, I hope your missions will be as good as this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted October 24, 2014 Author Share Posted October 24, 2014 You can try the testing missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted November 4, 2014 Author Share Posted November 4, 2014 Guys, I need some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONP Posted November 4, 2014 Share Posted November 4, 2014 Guys, I need some feedback But man, stop asking for feedback each time you release a mission. Instead, try to be more active on the forums so everybody would know you a lil' bit more and start checking out your missions. For example, look at Jimmy's first MP "CJ's stories". None have posted or even played the missions apart from 1 or 2 people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted November 5, 2014 Author Share Posted November 5, 2014 Okay Okay !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PepsiKillaPL Posted November 5, 2014 Share Posted November 5, 2014 So, I understand that this way... There's no feedback... so it won't be normal version of storyline... That sucks man, 'cause you can't to ask for feedback if u haven't uploaded normal version.. Testing version to me is 2/10 so i'm waiting for normal version. Usually i'm saying at the end of the post "Keep up" but there's nothing to keep up yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted November 6, 2014 Author Share Posted November 6, 2014 (edited) Now I'm really don't want make a mission anymore, one last question, is there a rules that you can't ask a feedback if I haven't create a normal version ? Edited November 6, 2014 by tukang kerupuk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 I'll back design this mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extra Dip Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 Hey bro, nice to see you back. Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 Hey bro, nice to see you back. Good luck Thanks bro, I'll design more better mission in future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxcity Posted March 2, 2015 Share Posted March 2, 2015 good missions shadowscythe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted March 2, 2015 Author Share Posted March 2, 2015 good missions shadowscythe Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extra Dip Posted March 2, 2015 Share Posted March 2, 2015 Oy bro, check your PM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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