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Dr-Mayhem111

Sinner (Poem)

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Dr-Mayhem111

Never in my life have I been such a sinner,

Harming people to live an easier life, am I a winner?

Willing to kill someone who so as much looked at me sideways,

Only to regret it later on in life like always.

The Winter breeze strike me in July,

But it's Summer and I cannot see the blue sky.

 

Nothing was the same...

 

Desperate and constantly paranoid, I roam with precautions,

Running away from my problems into new ones gives me great exhaustion.

I am not one with the people around me nor the world,

I'm like an insect crawling under a rock as I curl.

I am alone, I am an apparition, I am not here.

I attempt to scream for help but no one can hear.

 

Hell awaits my arrival...

 

We are born in sin and we die in sin.

We are complete opposites of our mirror twins.

When will this nightmare of mine end?

How much of my life do I have left to spend?

Questions that I repeat in my mind everyday,

Hoping for a way out without having to pray.

 

Forgive me Lord, for I have sinned.

 

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Mokrie Dela

I like the rhyming structure here. A few of them don't feel as natural as they could have been, but this isn't a bad piece. Reading it in my head, it seems to flow well (apart from the first two lines in the second verse - they seemed a little awkward to me).

I'm hoping one of the other guys pops in here as I'm not the best for poetry feedback. All i can say is: i liked it :)

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