Waar(2014)

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There is a retried army officer major mujtaba and after his retirement Israel attacks pakistan with the help of taliban and pakistan army commander wants major mujtaba back to army but israel attacks from sperate areas and pakistan was getting weak at front of them then major mujtaba create a group and he selected brave soliders from pakistani army and named the group SSG.but after the israel nows about this group and searching about it.but at other end pakistani army was fighting with taliban and SSG was near to destory main jet of israel in which they gets more and more weopens for there army that jet was too big but SSG was too near to destroy it and the israel was getting to attack the main millarty base of pakistan and pakistan has less army in that bass then SSG defence that base and starts fighting against them.

 

 

For Theme song Came To This Link:Theme Song

 

 

Name:Shaan Shahid

Age:34

Rank:Major

Character:Hero

 

Name:Hamza Ali Abbasi

Age:27

Rank:Newbie

Character:Hero

 

Name:Osama Bin Laden

Age:41

Group:Taliban

Character:Vilan

Name:Erick Jason

Age:39

Group:Israel(Commander)

Character:Vilan

 

Name:Abdul Ghafar

Age:36

Group:Pakistan(Commander)

Character:Hero

 

Mission 1:Intro

 

Rockstar Games For Creating Gta San Andreas

Dutchy And Patrick For Creating Dyom Mod

Pakistan For Creating The Movie

For Me For Creating The Missions

Edited August 11, 2014 by @[email protected]

[Gammoudicj]

Dude, why you're always making missions about army and stuff? Why don't you make one about action, gang, horror, etc... And please, use English names. You can get some from here: http://www.behindthename.com/random/?number=2&gender=m&surname=&all=no&usage_spa=1

And I'll check your missions when you'll release it

You should make a request topic at the GFX request forum, they'll help make great logos and headers for you to make tthe OP better.

Edited August 9, 2014 by gammoudicj

[Rytuklis]

I agree with gammou. The military theme is so overused and most of times unoriginal that it's becoming rather irritating.

[Elyobo893]

You need to work on your formatting man. It's horrible to look at. Looking forward to the missions though

[Target13]

Fun Fact.

In dutch, "Waar" means "Where".

 

OT: Topic looks unattractive.

Improve it: http://gtaforums.com/forum/64-gfx-requests-tutorials/

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Dude, why you're always making missions about army and stuff? Why don't you make one about action, gang, horror, etc... And please, use English names. You can get some from here: http://www.behindthename.com/random/?number=2&gender=m&surname=&all=no&usage_spa=1

And I'll check your missions when you'll release it

You should make a request topic at the GFX request forum, they'll help make great logos and headers for you to make tthe OP better.

Yeah dude i like just army missions to create because i like army and i do not want to use English name because my mission is based in urdu languge country so thats why i use urdu names in my mission

Fun Fact.

In dutch, "Waar" means "Where".

 

OT: Topic looks unattractive.

Improve it: http://gtaforums.com/forum/64-gfx-requests-tutorials/

I donot no Dutch languge so i have used it waar because it is a real movie which is waar so thats why i used that word

[Target13]

 

 

Dude, why you're always making missions about army and stuff? Why don't you make one about action, gang, horror, etc... And please, use English names. You can get some from here: http://www.behindthename.com/random/?number=2&gender=m&surname=&all=no&usage_spa=1

And I'll check your missions when you'll release it

You should make a request topic at the GFX request forum, they'll help make great logos and headers for you to make tthe OP better.

Yeah dude i like just army missions to create because i like army and i do not want to use English name because my mission is based in urdu languge country so thats why i use urdu names in my mission

And that's why probably this hardly will get any audience.

 

About the army theme...I agree that it is overused.

But if the MP is based on a Pakistani story then its okay to keep the names. IMO

[DragonWarrior (DnW)]

Or why dont u make up some GFX your self? Or ask me, might take longer than posting in repuests. xD.

 

Anyway GoodLuck.

[Juice the Joos]

You should use less spaces between the lines, it's a pain to read things about the characters.

You should improve your grammar, or, at least, use more punctuation.

The story, however, looks cool (even if this MP is taken from a movie), i'm looking forward to this, but i hope the missions will be well-designed.

Oh, and i see you're trying not to capitalize every word, you're doing it right.

My advice is: don't give up and always learn from the other designers.

 

And look at it in the bright side! People are actually giving feedback! It's always a good thing, some MPs get small or none.

Edited August 10, 2014 by Juice the Joos

[DragonWarrior (DnW)]

Here's some quick workout. Hope you like it.

 

 

[gheorgheM]

right, and gang missions aren't overused? sure, there's like a sh*t-ton of military missions out there (especially ones based on COD or MOH, bwah!) but I think it's refreshing to play from a perspective other than american, so I'll give the mission a try...heck, I even wanna see the movie! although I find it highly improbable that Israel would attack Pakistan...

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Here's some quick workout. Hope you like it.

 

 

Wow thanks my friend it is realy amazing how did you create it

 

 

 

 

How is it now guys.

Edited August 11, 2014 by @[email protected]

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Updated Intro Added To Topic http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33569