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GtA 5 Hitman Girl II


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VendableStew

Hello Guys,

 

Would you be able to give me some feedback of video? Please

 

 

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I found this to be pretty enjoyable! :inlove: Only thing I could give any critique to is at 1:02 with the information for the hitman contract - "Keep your eye on me while I'm doing dealing. If he is pull his gun wipe him out." I kept thinking.. if he is what...?

But you put a lot of time and effort into it, and it's great!

Good job! :^::^::^::^::^:

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LightningLord

Not bad. It's an enjoyable little clip. Only thing that bugged me was the fact that the HUD was on. (Radar, ammo counter, etc.) If they weren't there it'll make it look a little better. But good job. :^:

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VendableStew

I found this to be pretty enjoyable! :inlove: Only thing I could give any critique to is at 1:02 with the information for the hitman contract - "Keep your eye on me while I'm doing dealing. If he is pull his gun wipe him out." I kept thinking.. if he is what...?

But you put a lot of time and effort into it, and it's great!

Good job! :^::^::^::^::^:

 

Thank you very much that's very kind of you, English is my second language that's why my grammar is not very well. I'm sorry about that. I have meant, if is he dealing goes wrong. I will handle it. Thank you once again.

 

 

Not bad. It's an enjoyable little clip. Only thing that bugged me was the fact that the HUD was on. (Radar, ammo counter, etc.) If they weren't there it'll make it look a little better. But good job. :^:

 

I will try to remove them next time. I'm learning another effect every time I do videos. Thank you that's very kind of you.

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RicoSuave87

I had to skip through it because I found it boring and eventually just quit watching.

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VendableStew

I had to skip through it because I found it boring and eventually just quit watching.

 

Thank you mate. :) I appreciate

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Marco veddi

Was good liked the after effects work on the scope also just a tip turn off the display hud when you are shooting for that more cinema like feel here is some of my work. Im doing a youtube series called redemption we need people all the time and id be happy to plug your channel if you did the same for mine.

GTA V REDEMPTION TV SPOT 2: http://youtu.be/8IrLLGVybiE

 

And last thing keep making videos!!!

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