The Concept Creators' Lounge

[Homemade Dynamite]

I've completed my own world station, basicially using the WorldWide FM mindset of "put anything you feel like in", I think I got some interesting results. I've edited into my last post to prevent "double posting".

[SpaceJunk]

I'd welcome any ideas for weapons, cars, and music stations (pre-1992) for my concept thread.

[NotAHipster]

I haven't added much to my main concept thread (my gun porn one), and I kind of wanted to turn it into one of those huge and well-thought out concepts with a map and story and radio stations and such (like this one). I'd kind of like some direction for that one. Additionally, I'd like to make another thread called the "GTA Online Americana Update Concept", a theoretical wishlist fanfiction Fourth of July update. If this is a bad place to post this please tell me and I'll keep it in mind if I have another post like this.

Edited June 17, 2015 by NotAHipster

[The Dedito Gae]

I've completed my own world station, basicially using the WorldWide FM mindset of "put anything you feel like in", I think I got some interesting results. I've edited into my last post to prevent "double posting".

are you planning to do anything else than radio stations?

it's good that you like music and all but concepts go far than that.

 

also, which is an appropiate number of missions in my concept?

 

for now is a a prologue for each protag and 28/35 missions for themselves,then the bridges will open and a set of 25 missions where they work together/against each other.

 

Las Venturas chapter is structured mostly the same , seeing as my protags are not "buddies" yet and have their own goals (goals that eventually cross paths),Carcer City chapter will be either in the same format or just the protags working together for a a sizeable ammount of missions, seeing as in that moment of the storymode they will be already familiar with each other and even being allied,the last one will be again in Capital,where the trio must sort things and cut loose ends.

 

i just want the story to avoid the issues of V, where you barely know Franklin, lacks memorable supporting characters and is plagued with plotholes.

 

is not an issue if i don't use a city too much, seeing as i have the DLCs that will explore past events/characters in depth and explore each city more personally.

Edited June 17, 2015 by Midnight Hitman

[bodyparts]

Need some feedback for my first mission on smokin' scot. Thanks.

 

Also you have enough if not more than enough missions, midnighthitman.

[Homemade Dynamite]

 

I've completed my own world station, basicially using the WorldWide FM mindset of "put anything you feel like in", I think I got some interesting results. I've edited into my last post to prevent "double posting".

are you planning to do anything else than radio stations?

it's good that you like music and all but concepts go far than that.

Yeah, but I like to get the music done first.

[Niko Montana]

The HUD for my Las Venturas concept. (Made by Mr.Rocky)

 

 

 

[Niko Montana]

I'm thinking of using the entirety of Clark County, Nevada (renamed Kent County, Robada) along with surrounding desert as my concept's setting. However I will keep the focus on Las Venturas. I was thinking of using all of Nevada (Robada) including Tierra Robada (Sierra Nevada), which think connects to California (San Andreas). What do you guys think?

 

 

 

 

Edited June 20, 2015 by thedriver111

[bodyparts]

Love it, driver. When do you think that the topic will be out?

[Niko Montana]

Love it, driver. When do you think that the topic will be out?

Not sure atm, but hopefully soon. It is actually a remake of a concept I made last year.

[Pooyan Cyrus]

I'm here to tell you that Ghetto Green has finally got its Third Mission. Don't forget to check it out and give me feedback.

Also, I'm not much into 90's East Coast Rap and this is a big trouble because I've planned to have an East Coast Hip-Hop station in Ghetto Green. Can somebody help me with it?

 

My English is just terrible...

[Niko Montana]

I'm here to tell you that Ghetto Green has finally got its Third Mission. Don't forget to check it out and give me feedback.

Also, I'm not much into 90's East Coast Rap and this is a big trouble because I've planned to have an East Coast Hip-Hop station in Ghetto Green. Can somebody help me with it?

 

My English is just terrible...

I can help man.

[bodyparts]

J5

Redman

Method Man

Onyx

Biggie

K-Rino

etc etc.

[Homemade Dynamite]

I've been thinking for my Seattle concept. My idea is that it'll have two protagonists, a father and a daughter. The former is a retired criminal looking to leave his past behind, but if forced to return when his old "friends" come in contact with him. The latter becomes heavily involved in Emerald Bay's crime circle in order to make a name for herself, against her father's wishes. They both get into serious trouble, and find that they can only trust each other... and even that is deteriorating.

 

I'm worried however, that my father protagonist will be too similar to Michael. It just sounds so familiar to write down. Also, I want to be sure I can write a good female protagonist (something that is very controversial here, but it can be done). What worries me most is that she'd be in the shadow of her father throughout the concept. If you notice in other stories, female character tend to be defined by their family, and who their father or husband was, rather than their actions. That's not very good writing in my opinion.

[The Dedito Gae]

..If you notice in other stories, female character tend to be defined by their family, and who their father or husband was, rather than their actions. That's not very good writing in my opinion.

auch.

 

that touched a nerve.

[bodyparts]

I barely have any female characters, problem solved.

 

Plus, the one that I have is a junkie while her father was a mobster. sh*t this is Ray Cappucino all over again..

Edited June 23, 2015 by HipsterHillbilly

[Pooyan Cyrus]

I need help from someone who knows Spanish in the special case that I'm gonna explain now.

Is Valeria Lucas Tania a proper name for a Puerto Rican woman?

[The Dedito Gae]

I need help from someone who knows Spanish in the special case that I'm gonna explain now.

Is Valeria Lucas Tania a proper name for a Puerto Rican woman?

Valeria is a girls name but Lucas definetly not, Tania feels weird and out of place as a last name.

[bodyparts]

So, I'm thinking of evolving my small 'Smokin Scot' concept to something bigger. I want to evolve it to an entirely new game featuring Galaway (Glasgow), Linton (Belfast) and Lonesdale* (London). The game will be set in 1979, a time offering a civil war in Linton, organized crime in Galaway and Lonesdale being Lonesdale. There will be three main protagonists, Eoseph Cleary (Linton), Frankie MacKay (Galaway) and Sarah Owusu (Lonesdale), and all will have their own story but it will be connected in some way.

 

I will probably close my smokin scot concept and focus on this instead what do you think?

 

*: Whoever came up with this name, please contact me if you disapprove of me using it and i'll change it.

[Pooyan Cyrus]

@Midnight Hitman: What about Valeria Minoza?

 

@Everybody: "I haven't been this f*ckin confused since I was a kid..."

I feel this Fiddy line really... What's going on on this Concepts section? I put my time in writing the best way I could and I suggeseted a special section for Concepts and now, after all the work I've put in writing concepts, I see "Vice City" concepts getting more views than me... (I'm not mentioning Tyla's brilliant concept, I'm talking about blank topics that get feedback and views just for carrying the VIce City's name with them.

I'm putting work in Ghetto Green and everything in this damn forum is like it doesn't even exist.

Should I give up on writing it and start a dumb VIce City thread to get everyone's eyes?

f*ck it. You know, I'm just tired of f*cking around here. No one gives a f*ck about you until you're a hardcore IV fan or a VIce city dreamer.

 

Damn I hope this post doesn't gain me a ban for flaming. Don't get me wrong. I don't want to start a beef but this is just simply disgusting. Everytime a Vice City thread opens up around here, everybody starts posting under it and replying to it like they've got a new message from their girl, even though there's NOTHING there when compared to other concepts...

 

I say again, I'm not against Tyla's thread and this post is not about it. I even voted for it and I love it. This post is about non-new sh*t with 2 lines of wishes for a VIce City II that are nowadays called "GTA Concepts"...

Edited June 25, 2015 by PooyanCyrus

[[...]]

Do you know why your concept isn't as popular as VIce City ones? Because everybody wants to see the next GTA in Vice City. OK, Vice City is one of the cities that Rockstar doesn't recreate in the HD Universe, but... Is there any person who remembers San Fierro or Las Venturas? These cities also aren't recreated. Coming back to your statement, you are right. There's too many VIce City concepts that seem to be not informative enough. However, we should thank God those concepts don't look like "Vice City Nights" or "Hood proporty".

Edited June 25, 2015 by phoenixShine

[bodyparts]

Oh god, I have heard the many tales of Vice City Nights but I never dared to read it, until now. My soul is crying.

 

Also PooyanCyrus. Just give it time. Don't direct all your anger at people who work as hard on their concepts. Your concept is great, just give it time.

[Homemade Dynamite]

I asked this before, but I'm posting it here because it seemed appropriate. I'm just about to post my GTA Online Liberty City expansion concept, but I need two logos for two original radio stations I'm making. If anyone could help out, it would be much appreciated.

 

DigitalWave

Electro/Synthwave

 

After Electro-Choc had a change in management and shift from electro to EDM, the original creators of Electro-Choc formed DigitalWave for the purposes of playing the old style of music.

 

Novosibirsk FM

Russian Rock, Pop, and Hip-Hop

 

With Vladivostok FM losing its Russian influence and transition to house/eurodance music, the Russian community banded together to create a new radio station dedicated to their homeland.

[The Dedito Gae]

What about Valeria Minoza?

Valeria Minoza sounds pausible and hot

 

also about the rest, i don't know, put some misleading publicity in your sig, beats me, maybe people are not interested in reading mission transcripts.

 

I asked this before, but I'm posting it here because it seemed appropriate. I'm just about to post my GTA Online Liberty City expansion concept, but I need two logos for two original radio stations I'm making. If anyone could help out, it would be much appreciated.

try here.

read the rules, be patient and someone might fulfill your request.

Edited June 25, 2015 by Midnight Hitman

[The Nefarious]

@Midnight Hitman: What about Valeria Minoza?

 

@Everybody: "I haven't been this f*ckin confused since I was a kid..."

I feel this Fiddy line really... What's going on on this Concepts section? I put my time in writing the best way I could and I suggeseted a special section for Concepts and now, after all the work I've put in writing concepts, I see "Vice City" concepts getting more views than me... (I'm not mentioning Tyla's brilliant concept, I'm talking about blank topics that get feedback and views just for carrying the VIce City's name with them.

I'm putting work in Ghetto Green and everything in this damn forum is like it doesn't even exist.

Should I give up on writing it and start a dumb VIce City thread to get everyone's eyes?

f*ck it. You know, I'm just tired of f*cking around here. No one gives a f*ck about you until you're a hardcore IV fan or a VIce city dreamer.

 

Damn I hope this post doesn't gain me a ban for flaming. Don't get me wrong. I don't want to start a beef but this is just simply disgusting. Everytime a Vice City thread opens up around here, everybody starts posting under it and replying to it like they've got a new message from their girl, even though there's NOTHING there when compared to other concepts...

 

I say again, I'm not against Tyla's thread and this post is not about it. I even voted for it and I love it. This post is about non-new sh*t with 2 lines of wishes for a VIce City II that are nowadays called "GTA Concepts"...

This section seems to be pretty dead again. In general though people will respond to topics which grab their interest right off the bat. I think your topic is pretty decent but for me its just too similar to San Andreas. Its set in the early 90s and you have a protagonist who lives on Grove Street and rolls with The Families who's mixed up with corrupt cops. Your first mission even plays out with him being picked up and driven away in a cop car. Keeping in line with Tyla and his Vice City topic - he has a game set in VC in the 80s but its nothing like GTA: Vice City and in many ways is actually better. There are a lot of bad Vice City concepts on here aswell though. If you want to do a concept set in LS in the early 90s you need to set it apart from San Andreas.. I don't really know how you can do this to be honest though unless you completely change your story.

 

The Unholy's State on The Edge of Forever shares certain similarities with SA (even the universe) yet its quite different in many ways due to subtle differences in the setting and characters and a plot which sets it apart from its predecessor.

[Pooyan Cyrus]

 

@Midnight Hitman: What about Valeria Minoza?

 

@Everybody: "I haven't been this f*ckin confused since I was a kid..."

I feel this Fiddy line really... What's going on on this Concepts section? I put my time in writing the best way I could and I suggeseted a special section for Concepts and now, after all the work I've put in writing concepts, I see "Vice City" concepts getting more views than me... (I'm not mentioning Tyla's brilliant concept, I'm talking about blank topics that get feedback and views just for carrying the VIce City's name with them.

I'm putting work in Ghetto Green and everything in this damn forum is like it doesn't even exist.

Should I give up on writing it and start a dumb VIce City thread to get everyone's eyes?

f*ck it. You know, I'm just tired of f*cking around here. No one gives a f*ck about you until you're a hardcore IV fan or a VIce city dreamer.

 

Damn I hope this post doesn't gain me a ban for flaming. Don't get me wrong. I don't want to start a beef but this is just simply disgusting. Everytime a Vice City thread opens up around here, everybody starts posting under it and replying to it like they've got a new message from their girl, even though there's NOTHING there when compared to other concepts...

 

I say again, I'm not against Tyla's thread and this post is not about it. I even voted for it and I love it. This post is about non-new sh*t with 2 lines of wishes for a VIce City II that are nowadays called "GTA Concepts"...

This section seems to be pretty dead again. In general though people will respond to topics which grab their interest right off the bat. I think your topic is pretty decent but for me its just too similar to San Andreas. Its set in the early 90s and you have a protagonist who lives on Grove Street and rolls with The Families who's mixed up with corrupt cops. Your first mission even plays out with him being picked up and driven away in a cop car. Keeping in line with Tyla and his Vice City topic - he has a game set in VC in the 80s but its nothing like GTA: Vice City and in many ways is actually better. There are a lot of bad Vice City concepts on here aswell though. If you want to do a concept set in LS in the early 90s you need to set it apart from San Andreas.. I don't really know how you can do this to be honest though unless you completely change your story.

 

The Unholy's State on The Edge of Forever shares certain similarities with SA (even the universe) yet its quite different in many ways due to subtle differences in the setting and characters and a plot which sets it apart from its predecessor.

The guy who was arrested on Double-G's first mission, was Cashy. The protagonist is Andre. So it's in no way the same as SA.

 

Ghetto Green is about drugs and Hip-Hop. Also if this is too similar to SA, what about all the IV DLC concepts that we had in past?

Edited June 26, 2015 by PooyanCyrus

[The Nefarious]

 

 

@Midnight Hitman: What about Valeria Minoza?

 

@Everybody: "I haven't been this f*ckin confused since I was a kid..."

I feel this Fiddy line really... What's going on on this Concepts section? I put my time in writing the best way I could and I suggeseted a special section for Concepts and now, after all the work I've put in writing concepts, I see "Vice City" concepts getting more views than me... (I'm not mentioning Tyla's brilliant concept, I'm talking about blank topics that get feedback and views just for carrying the VIce City's name with them.

I'm putting work in Ghetto Green and everything in this damn forum is like it doesn't even exist.

Should I give up on writing it and start a dumb VIce City thread to get everyone's eyes?

f*ck it. You know, I'm just tired of f*cking around here. No one gives a f*ck about you until you're a hardcore IV fan or a VIce city dreamer.

 

Damn I hope this post doesn't gain me a ban for flaming. Don't get me wrong. I don't want to start a beef but this is just simply disgusting. Everytime a Vice City thread opens up around here, everybody starts posting under it and replying to it like they've got a new message from their girl, even though there's NOTHING there when compared to other concepts...

 

I say again, I'm not against Tyla's thread and this post is not about it. I even voted for it and I love it. This post is about non-new sh*t with 2 lines of wishes for a VIce City II that are nowadays called "GTA Concepts"...

This section seems to be pretty dead again. In general though people will respond to topics which grab their interest right off the bat. I think your topic is pretty decent but for me its just too similar to San Andreas. Its set in the early 90s and you have a protagonist who lives on Grove Street and rolls with The Families who's mixed up with corrupt cops. Your first mission even plays out with him being picked up and driven away in a cop car. Keeping in line with Tyla and his Vice City topic - he has a game set in VC in the 80s but its nothing like GTA: Vice City and in many ways is actually better. There are a lot of bad Vice City concepts on here aswell though. If you want to do a concept set in LS in the early 90s you need to set it apart from San Andreas.. I don't really know how you can do this to be honest though unless you completely change your story.

 

The Unholy's State on The Edge of Forever shares certain similarities with SA (even the universe) yet its quite different in many ways due to subtle differences in the setting and characters and a plot which sets it apart from its predecessor.

The guy who was arrested on Double-G's first mission, was Cashy. The protagonist is Andre. So it's in no way the same as SA.

 

Ghetto Green is about drugs and Hip-Hop. Also if this is too similar to SA, what about all the IV DLC concepts that we had in past?

 

That's another thing.. I also found the story a little hard to follow.

 

I'm just giving you my opinion man, don't shoot the messenger. As I said though this section is going through another dead period so be happy that you're getting some replies at least.

[Pooyan Cyrus]

Don't worry about the section. I'll make the dead rise. I'm not saying my first concept was a masterpiece, no, I confess that it was a weak when compared to likes of your concepts or my recent one. But when I started writing it, there was nobody willing to write a concept around here. Then more and more concepts got in the way.

 

My problem is the way everybody's ignoring everything that's not related to VC.

[The Nefarious]

Don't worry about the section. I'll make the dead rise. I'm not saying my first concept was a masterpiece, no, I confess that it was a weak when compared to likes of your concepts or my recent one. But when I started writing it, there was nobody willing to write a concept around here. Then more and more concepts got in the way.

 

My problem is the way everybody's ignoring everything that's not related to VC.

You've gotten 7 replies since your last post in Ghetto Green I'd say that's pretty good man.

[EM_JAY_86]

Is there a way I can move a post from this topic to my concept without copy/pasting the whole thing? I typed up a rather long mission concept in here and I want to put it in my concept thread in case the creators lounge gets revamped or anything, and my post is lost. Any advice is much appreciated.

Edited June 26, 2015 by EM_JAY_86