Rytuklis Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 (edited) STORY Boris Nikolaev, a succesful mobster in the Moscow Crime Syndicate screws up in a bank heist - he's identified by a witness. To avoid any unwanted attention, Konstantin Mishkov, the Syndicate's head, decides to send Boris to Las Venturas so he can lay low and help Vlad Orlov, the boss of the Syndicate's American counter-part. Vlad needs help with protecting a two-million dollars worth deal, but things don't go as planned, and Boris once again finds him in desperate trouble - they loose the shipment. Now Vlad, Boris and Anatolij are all on the clock - it's only a matter of time when Mishkov finds out what happened, but the lost shipment is nowhere to be found. Expierence the tense search for the lost shipment, friendship, betrayal and... love, as Boris's story progresses. GANGS AND FACTIONS The International Russian Crime Syndicate Background: Operated all around the world in 1960's - 1993. Mostly known for racketeering, weapons and narcotics trafficking, kidnappings, robberies and heists. Bosses: Konstantin Mishkov, Vlad Orlov, The Moscow Syndicate Background: The higher ranked organisation inside The International Russian Crime Syndicate, which controls the syndicate. Boss: Konstantin Mishkov, Piotr Lebedev, Boris Nikolaev The Colombian Cartel Background: Narcotics trafficking organisation, consisting of Latin American and African immigrants. They focus on low profile operations and their main and only source of income is illegal narcotics trade. Boss: Uknown The Sindacco Family Background: Italian American crime organisation, which is known for racketeering, weapons and narcotics trafficking. Owns bussinesses in Liberty City and Las Venturas. Boss: Johnny Sindacco The Morrino Family Background: American crime organisation, located in Bone County. Known headquarters are the Big Spread Ranch club near Fort Carson. The family keeps a very low profile and not much is known about their criminal record. Boss: Jack Morrino (Deceased), Franco Morrino DOWNLOAD CHAPTER 1: WELCOME TO LAS VENTURAS [COMPLETED] http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32627 CHAPTER 2: WELCOME TO BONE COUNTY [COMPLETED] http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33722 CHAPTER 3: THE WRAP UP [COMPELTED] http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/35280 Edited January 1, 2015 by Rytuklis Springfield, kk., Gammoudicj and 6 others 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Wow, you uploaded it already. Gonna play and give you my feedback soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 Wow, you uploaded it already. Gonna play and give you my feedback soon. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 I should play your chapter 1 and give you my feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Half-Blood Prince Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 Playiiing :3 #FeelingHopeful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 Sadly the intro crashes when the cutscenes go inside the casino. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 21, 2014 Author Share Posted June 21, 2014 Sadly the intro crashes when the cutscenes go inside the casino. It must be you, because I let some people test the intro and everything was fine, neverthless I tested the storyline myself. Are you sure you have DYOM v8.1 and CLEO4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 Sadly the intro crashes when the cutscenes go inside the casino. It must be you, because I let some people test the intro and everything was fine, neverthless I tested the storyline myself. Are you sure you have DYOM v8.1 and CLEO4?I do have both. It might be some CLEO scripts I'm using, but they don't crash other missions. I'll try removing them and test it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 21, 2014 Author Share Posted June 21, 2014 Sadly the intro crashes when the cutscenes go inside the casino. It must be you, because I let some people test the intro and everything was fine, neverthless I tested the storyline myself. Are you sure you have DYOM v8.1 and CLEO4?I do have both. It might be some CLEO scripts I'm using, but they don't crash other missions. I'll try removing them and test it again. Try that, because it's really weird, I mean, I tested the storyline and also some people tested it before it was even completed, none had problems with intro :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PepsiKillaPL Posted June 22, 2014 Share Posted June 22, 2014 Mann... Congratulations on that one... Freakin' awesome.. I wonder what's next with Bad Vlad, Uncle Vlad, whateva... I'm familiar with that theme, Russians climats, ya know.. I'm from Poland though .. For me too much missions on time, but that's okay When Chapter 2 will be released? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 22, 2014 Author Share Posted June 22, 2014 (edited) Mann... Congratulations on that one... Freakin' awesome.. I wonder what's next with Bad Vlad, Uncle Vlad, whateva... I'm familiar with that theme, Russians climats, ya know.. I'm from Poland though .. For me too much missions on time, but that's okay When Chapter 2 will be released? Thank you Well, I'm taking a little break from LVS:HS and currently will focus on Driver: San Andreas and a little project, but you can expect Chapter two somewhere around middle-end of July, though. Edited June 22, 2014 by Rytuklis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted June 22, 2014 Share Posted June 22, 2014 Before playing this, i wanted to ask you do you know to speak Russian, but after playing, i got answered my question. Anyway, looks like many MPs/Storylines are focusing on story lately, so this also. I think this is your best project after Episodes From Vice City (I mean in story & theme). I think great dialogue adds much on this storyline, also adding Russian sentences seems very unique. I know Russian a little, and i can understand everything you wrote (Because i'm Serb, and i did learn Russian a little back in school). In the first mission, you should fix actor spawning, since when Boris gets into casino, the guy who told him that he can't continue spawned twice. Similar happened in mission where you lose 2 million dollars. Boris and his mate spawned at same location. However, it wasn't many times. As i said, i like theme, names and other things related to Russia, i think it's really unique. Missions, aren't that hard (in the beginning), but later they become way more harder. Story is going very well, characters are greatly developed, also storyline feature makes it really feel like GTA Russian mafia. Anyway, good work and keep it up! Rating: 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 Before playing this, i wanted to ask you do you know to speak Russian, but after playing, i got answered my question. Anyway, looks like many MPs/Storylines are focusing on story lately, so this also. I think this is your best project after Episodes From Vice City (I mean in story & theme). I think great dialogue adds much on this storyline, also adding Russian sentences seems very unique. I know Russian a little, and i can understand everything you wrote (Because i'm Serb, and i did learn Russian a little back in school). In the first mission, you should fix actor spawning, since when Boris gets into casino, the guy who told him that he can't continue spawned twice. Similar happened in mission where you lose 2 million dollars. Boris and his mate spawned at same location. However, it wasn't many times. As i said, i like theme, names and other things related to Russia, i think it's really unique. Missions, aren't that hard (in the beginning), but later they become way more harder. Story is going very well, characters are greatly developed, also storyline feature makes it really feel like GTA Russian mafia. Anyway, good work and keep it up! Rating: 4/5 Sposibo bolshoe za choroshie ocenki, brat . Yea, I do know Russian, in fact, I'm a fluent Russian speaker, so . Yeah, I noticed these problems you mentioned far beyond the so called point of no return, where you noticed that character spawns are jagged up, but you can't find the objective to select and hide the actor, since the objective is burried at the exact same spot along other 30+ objectives, so it's pretty much impossible, but yeah, i'll try to make sure such problems don't persist in Chapter 2, thank you for playing and rating . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted June 27, 2014 Share Posted June 27, 2014 (edited) I've played part of this storyline, and I can say that this is one of the two storylines I've played that I can call a masterpiece, along with The Flats. I liked the usage of Russian. It sometimes seemed out of place, but it was good overall. I liked that the shootouts did not involve any juggernauts with bulletproof heads or super-armor. I liked that simplicity - most designers, including myself in the past, try to make enemies as hard as they can, but it almost always kills all the fun if it's not some kind of 'boss battle'. I liked those lengthy missions. You seldom see the storylines consisting of very large and long missions, hell, even mission packs rarely make use of 100 objectives these days. I liked the difficulty - you're always in the middle of action, surrounded by enemies who want to kill you as fast as they can. I especially want to say how the difficulty and the length are tied up - as an example, let's take Nikolai's 2nd mission. First you need to steal the helicopter which is guarded by tons and tons of FBI agents. When you finally get to the helipad, you most likely are going to have 3 or 4 stars of wanted level, so when you ascend in the skies, you're met with Hydra shooting heat-seeking rockets at you. But you still have to do the second part, which I sadly didn't get to because of the aforementioned Hydra. The only point that I didn't like is, or rather are the cutscenes. They are VERY long, and you can't really skip them because your game may crash. That especially applies to Introduction - while it doesn't have any action, it has all those cutscenes, and if the game suddenly crashes while you're playing through this storyline, you have to watch the whole thing again. My rating would be 9/10. It was a great thing to try and play, with all the varying missions, and I think I'll try to finish the 1st chapter. Edited June 27, 2014 by Boris The Vodka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 27, 2014 Author Share Posted June 27, 2014 (edited) I've played part of this storyline, and I can say that this is one of the two storylines I've played that I can call a masterpiece, along with The Flats. I liked the usage of Russian. It sometimes seemed out of place, but it was good overall. I liked that the shootouts did not involve any juggernauts with bulletproof heads or super-armor. I liked that simplicity - most designers, including myself in the past, try to make enemies as hard as they can, but it almost always kills all the fun if it's not some kind of 'boss battle'. I liked those lengthy missions. You seldom see the storylines consisting of very large and long missions, hell, even mission packs rarely make use of 100 objectives these days. I liked the difficulty - you're always in the middle of action, surrounded by enemies who want to kill you as fast as they can. I especially want to say how the difficulty and the length are tied up - as an example, let's take Nikolai's 2nd mission. First you need to steal the helicopter which is guarded by tons and tons of FBI agents. When you finally get to the helipad, you most likely are going to have 3 or 4 stars of wanted level, so when you ascend in the skies, you're met with Hydra shooting heat-seeking rockets at you. But you still have to do the second part, which I sadly didn't get to because of the aforementioned Hydra. The only point that I didn't like is, or rather are the cutscenes. They are VERY long, and you can't really skip them because your game may crash. That especially applies to Introduction - while it doesn't have any action, it has all those cutscenes, and if the game suddenly crashes while you're playing through this storyline, you have to watch the whole thing again. My rating would be 9/10. It was a great thing to try and play, with all the varying missions, and I think I'll try to finish the 1st chapter. Thank you very much for your in-depth review. It's such an honor and feels great for this storyline to be compared to "The Flats". I played that storyline myself and as you mentioned, it was indeed a masterpiece. I'll keep that in mind and will try to keep the cutscenes as short as possible. The thing why they were so long is that I already had the whole story of Chapter 1 in my head before even starting to work on this storyline, so I needed lots of cutscenes to express the details. I see that the Hydra is the problem that I let slit through. The thing is that I never disabled the wanted level since I wanted it to feel realistic as possible. You can't cause a mayhem and expect to get away with it so easily. I'll try to make use of the wanted level feature in the next chapter. And yes, please, play the rest of the storyline, the story has quite a few twists for you to enjoy! . Thank you for playing it . Edited June 27, 2014 by Rytuklis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted June 27, 2014 Share Posted June 27, 2014 I played something like 6 missions from this storyline, and i must say it's great. I like it when you put russian words on the dialogs, it makes them ''real'' , if you know what i mean. Also, the actors have low health, but the accuracy still makes them though enemies! The story is great, but don't you think that you're giving a bit too much money on the missions? I'm new, and i don't know much about the ''standards'' for a great storyline, but i think this is between 9/10 and 10/10, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 27, 2014 Author Share Posted June 27, 2014 I played something like 6 missions from this storyline, and i must say it's great. I like it when you put russian words on the dialogs, it makes them ''real'' , if you know what i mean. Also, the actors have low health, but the accuracy still makes them though enemies! The story is great, but don't you think that you're giving a bit too much money on the missions? I'm new, and i don't know much about the ''standards'' for a great storyline, but i think this is between 9/10 and 10/10, keep it up! Thanks! About the money, yea, I noticed it's a little too much, but it's not like they're of any use anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted June 27, 2014 Share Posted June 27, 2014 I played something like 6 missions from this storyline, and i must say it's great. I like it when you put russian words on the dialogs, it makes them ''real'' , if you know what i mean. Also, the actors have low health, but the accuracy still makes them though enemies! The story is great, but don't you think that you're giving a bit too much money on the missions? I'm new, and i don't know much about the ''standards'' for a great storyline, but i think this is between 9/10 and 10/10, keep it up! Thanks! About the money, yea, I noticed it's a little too much, but it's not like they're of any use anyways. You can use them as toilet paper! #richbro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 27, 2014 Author Share Posted June 27, 2014 Yeah. Oh and by the way, by not completing the whole storyline you miss a lot :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 30, 2014 Author Share Posted June 30, 2014 Main Topic updated: added summary of Gangs and Factions that appear in the storyline. This gets updated as a new faction or gang appears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissionDesignerLazeR Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 Awesome, I'll try this out. Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gheorgheM Posted July 24, 2014 Share Posted July 24, 2014 and wasn't the russian mob active throughout the 90's? >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juice the Joos Posted July 24, 2014 Share Posted July 24, 2014 (edited) and wasn't the russian mob active throughout the 90's? >.> Well, nobody said those were the 90s. Or maybe yes? I don't remember if there was any date on the MP. Also: what is that DADA, tell me, like, now. Edited July 24, 2014 by Juice the Joos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gheorgheM Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 and wasn't the russian mob active throughout the 90's? >.> Well, nobody said those were the 90s. Or maybe yes? I don't remember if there was any date on the MP. Also: what is that DADA, tell me, like, now. I told you, like, now - as in "later" it's something beyond common mortals' understanding! seriously though, if you really wanna know, shoot me a PM, or just google it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@[email protected] Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 your first mission was great and goodluck for more missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 2, 2014 Author Share Posted August 2, 2014 your first mission was great and goodluck for more missions Err... You obviously did not even play this Juice the Joos, The Odyssey and KowalskiGuy 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 3, 2014 Author Share Posted August 3, 2014 Regarding this storyline: I'm not sure how this will go. The thing is my PC started jacking and I decided to reinstall windows, And ofcourse, I just had to forget to backup the progress I made. I'm not going to cancel this but I can't promise that I'll work on this anytime soon before September. In fact, I don't think I'll make even a mission this summer. I mean - it's summer, and I'm enjoying going outside with buddies and other teenage things . So I'm not sure about the fate of this storyline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyobo893 Posted August 3, 2014 Share Posted August 3, 2014 Are all the files in the .rar .dat files??? What one do I play first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted August 4, 2014 Share Posted August 4, 2014 (edited) Alright, I just finished the whole Storyline and to be honest, I was impressed by it. But the only problem is, cutscenes were too long, it might be your style. I liked the reference to Vice City's story (Ambushed deal and all). The use of Russian language was great tough I didn't undestand anything. In some missions, you forgot to hide some actors. Overall, it was great. I realy enjoyed playing it, can't wait for Chapter 2, it's bad that it's not coming soon, anyway keep it up dude Edited August 4, 2014 by gammoudicj Juice the Joos 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 4, 2014 Author Share Posted August 4, 2014 Are all the files in the .rar .dat files??? What one do I play first. You must unrar the DSL folder into GTA SA user files. Alright, I just finished the whole Storyline and to be honest, I was impressed by it. But the only problem is, cutscenes were too long, it might be your style. I liked the reference to Vice City's story (Ambushed deal and all). The use of Russian language was great tough I didn't undestand anything. In some missions, you forgot to hide some actors. Overall, it was great. I realy enjoyed playing it, can't wait for Chapter 2, it's bad that it's not coming soon, anyway keep it up dude Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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