Huzaifa khan Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 I'm gonna stop playing and reviewing your missions for a while. Cause i'm designing something right now. The same goes for Dyom 123's No Way Out. Waiting for your project. I have no doubt that it's gonna be awesome. BTW Huzaifa, i played the whole series and it was fantastic to be honest taking apart some grammar and typing mistakes. Keep it up with the good work!Thanks, bro for your feedback I try to improve my grammer mistakes in upcoming missions. BTW T13 I'm sure that your project is awesome seriously waiting for it Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k3sshhii Posted July 8, 2014 Share Posted July 8, 2014 Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. Thanks, hope you like my missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 9, 2014 Author Share Posted July 9, 2014 Topic updated... Screen shots and missions link are added. Terano 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terano Posted July 9, 2014 Share Posted July 9, 2014 (edited) Review of Chapter#1 of "Grove Boys Revolution" by Huzaifa [table] Mission Name Writing Presentation Length Difficulty Variety Revolution Begining Good Good Excellent Easy Decent Protect the turf Decent Very Good Excellent Easy Good Taking Over Los Flores Decent Decent Decent(Little Bit Long) Easy Decent Smith's Kidnapping Decent Very Good Not Playable (Cut scene) Not Playable(Cut scene) Very Good Grove And Aztecas Partnershiping Decent Very Good Excellent Easy Excellent Sweet Returns Good Excellent Decent (Short But Okay) Easy Very Good Re-Taking Grove Street Good Excellent Excellent Medium Very Good [/table] Huzaifa, I reviewed first 8 missions excluding Intro. Story is good but when i was playing 'GBR'.I was feeling like i am playing GTA Sa but after 4th mission(Taking Over Los-Flores) I noticed a twist in the story. Chapter 1 contains lots of cool things like Kidnapping, Ballas attacking by bikes, Attacks in Night, and many more. Noticeable mistakes in your writing but enough to understand the story clearly. You definitely puts lots of efforts in making your Presentation and variety good. I like when a ballas member attack on smith by bat that scene was cool. but the biggest con of this MP is that There is a lack of slang words in this MP. I suggest you to use more slang words because its a gang war story and it will also attach player with the story more. Mission length is perfect but i noticed that difficulty level is not hard in any mission. i like if you will work on the difficulty section of 'GBR'. You had done very good use of each function of DYOM. Keep it up bro. Next time, I am accepting more than this from you. OVERALL RATING:- [3.5/5.0] Edited July 9, 2014 by Terano Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 Thanks, for this awesome review and opinions bro I highly appreciated it I try to improve my writing mistakes and other things in my next missions. Stay tuned Terano 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 12, 2014 Author Share Posted July 12, 2014 I'm feeling proud to say that 10th mission had come out Runaway Terano 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 17, 2014 Author Share Posted July 17, 2014 11th mission of GBR has been released: Take over the big one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@QaiserH@ Posted July 19, 2014 Share Posted July 19, 2014 Great Huzaifa Your Missions Are Getting More Name In Dyom Community Good Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 19, 2014 Author Share Posted July 19, 2014 Great Huzaifa Your Missions Are Getting More Name In Dyom Community Good Oh, thanks bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 22, 2014 Author Share Posted July 22, 2014 It has been a week. I can't make any mission of the story because of laziness and busy with other things, but now I continue this again except a mission in 2 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxGrovexX Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it 4.6/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted July 28, 2014 Author Share Posted July 28, 2014 This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it 4.6/5 Hey, thanks for your feedback bro just stay tuned I'll release next mission in couple of days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it You bump a two month old thread to ask if you can get feedback? i can also go to your thread, give a fake rating and then ask for feedback. Seriously dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Oh sorry, dude, I didn't see a date, again really sorry dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted September 8, 2014 Author Share Posted September 8, 2014 T13, this thread is still running, I work out my 12th mission which is under progress and upload in some days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 15, 2014 Author Share Posted December 15, 2014 (edited) 12th mission has been released... Badly Incident Description: After take over east los santos on very next day some bad things happening in the unity station by Vagos and Ballas watch out in the mission. Your Opinion And Feedback Is Appreciated Edited December 15, 2014 by Huzaifa khan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extra Dip Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 (edited) Nice MP I have similliar MP theme with u Edited December 22, 2014 by 1caker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 24, 2014 Author Share Posted December 24, 2014 Nice MP I have similliar MP theme with uThanks, yeah I played your missions that's cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 24, 2014 Author Share Posted December 24, 2014 (edited) 13th mission has been released... Take Out! Jefferson... Edited December 24, 2014 by Huzaifa khan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extra Dip Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 27, 2014 Author Share Posted December 27, 2014 It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street Yeah you're right but I added aztecas in my next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted January 4, 2015 Share Posted January 4, 2015 Why no one add a Reply on my topic !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted March 3, 2015 Author Share Posted March 3, 2015 (edited) 14th and a second last mission of this MP has been released: The Final Showdown Don't skip any cutscene than mission runs perfectly. Your every feedback will be appreciated Play N' Enjoy Edited March 3, 2015 by Huzaifa khan Extra Dip 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extra Dip Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 Finally, after wait for a long time. Will play it later Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted March 3, 2015 Author Share Posted March 3, 2015 Last mission of this mission pack release in 2 days. Stay tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iFarbod Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 Played the MP. Here's my feedback: - OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos. - Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs. So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 Hey, Bro am come Back, am gonna play this mission Right now , Wait for the feedback Huzaifa khan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted March 3, 2015 Author Share Posted March 3, 2015 Played the MP. Here's my feedback: - OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos. - Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs. So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway Yeah, my grammer is sucks and you see Og loc in the final mission. Btw thanks for your feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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