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Huzaifa khan

Grove Boys Revolution [MP]

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Huzaifa khan

 

 

I'm gonna stop playing and reviewing your missions for a while.

Cause i'm designing something right now.

 

The same goes for Dyom 123's No Way Out.

Waiting for your project. I have no doubt that it's gonna be awesome. BTW Huzaifa, i played the whole series and it was fantastic to be honest taking apart some grammar and typing mistakes. Keep it up with the good work!Thanks, bro for your feedback :) I try to improve my grammer mistakes in upcoming missions.

 

BTW T13 I'm sure that your project is awesome seriously waiting for it Good luck! :)

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Casualmind

Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. :cool:

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Huzaifa khan

Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. :cool:

Thanks, hope you like my missions :)

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Huzaifa khan

Topic updated... Screen shots and missions link are added.

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Terano
Review of Chapter#1 of "Grove Boys Revolution" by Huzaifa
[table]
Mission Name
Writing
Presentation
Length
Difficulty
Variety
Revolution Begining
Good
Good
Excellent
Easy
Decent
Protect the turf
Decent
Very Good
Excellent
Easy
Good
Taking Over Los Flores
Decent
Decent
Decent(Little Bit Long)
Easy
Decent
Smith's Kidnapping
Decent
Very Good
Not Playable
(Cut scene)
Not Playable
(Cut scene)
Very Good
Grove And Aztecas Partnershiping
Decent
Very Good
Excellent
Easy
Excellent
Sweet Returns
Good
Excellent
Decent (Short But Okay)
Easy
Very Good
Re-Taking Grove Street
Good
Excellent
Excellent
Medium
Very Good
[/table]

Huzaifa, I reviewed first 8 missions excluding Intro.
Story is good but when i was playing 'GBR'.I was feeling like i am playing GTA Sa but after 4th mission(Taking Over Los-Flores) I noticed a twist in the story. Chapter 1 contains lots of cool things like Kidnapping, Ballas attacking by bikes, Attacks in Night, and many more.
Noticeable mistakes in your writing but enough to understand the story clearly.
You definitely puts lots of efforts in making your Presentation and variety good.
I like when a ballas member attack on smith by bat that scene was cool.
but the biggest con of this MP is that There is a lack of slang words in this MP.
I suggest you to use more slang words because its a gang war story and it will also attach player with the story more.
Mission length is perfect but i noticed that difficulty level is not hard in any mission.
i like if you will work on the difficulty section of 'GBR'.
You had done very good use of each function of DYOM.
Keep it up bro.
Next time, I am accepting more than this from you. :^:
OVERALL RATING:- [3.5/5.0]

 

Edited by Terano

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Huzaifa khan

Thanks, for this awesome review and opinions bro :) I highly appreciated it I try to improve my writing mistakes and other things in my next missions. Stay tuned :)

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Huzaifa khan

I'm feeling proud to say that 10th mission had come out Runaway :)

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Huzaifa khan

11th mission of GBR has been released: Take over the big one!

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Huzaifa khan

Great Huzaifa Your Missions Are Getting More Name In Dyom Community Good

Oh, thanks bro :)

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Huzaifa khan

It has been a week. I can't make any mission of the story because of laziness and busy with other things, but now I continue this again except a mission in 2 days.

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XxGrovexX

This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it :)

 

4.6/5

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Huzaifa khan

This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it :)

 

4.6/5

Hey, thanks for your feedback bro just stay tuned I'll release next mission in couple of days :)

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Aila

Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it

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Target13

Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it

You bump a two month old thread to ask if you can get feedback?

i can also go to your thread, give a fake rating and then ask for feedback.

 

Seriously dude.

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Aila

Oh sorry, dude, I didn't see a date, again really sorry dude.

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Huzaifa khan

T13, this thread is still running, I work out my 12th mission which is under progress and upload in some days :)

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Huzaifa khan

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12th mission has been released...

 

Badly Incident

 

Description:

After take over east los santos on very next day some bad things happening in the unity station by Vagos and Ballas watch out in the mission.

 

Your Opinion And Feedback Is Appreciated :)

Edited by Huzaifa khan

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Extra Dip

Nice MP :^: I have similliar MP theme with u

Edited by 1caker

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Huzaifa khan

Nice MP :^: I have similliar MP theme with u

Thanks, yeah I played your missions that's cool :)

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Huzaifa khan

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13th mission has been released... Take Out! Jefferson... :santa:

Edited by Huzaifa khan

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Extra Dip

It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street :colgate:

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Huzaifa khan

It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street :colgate:

Yeah you're right but I added aztecas in my next mission.

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Why no one add a Reply on my topic !!

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Huzaifa khan

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14th and a second last mission of this MP has been released: The Final Showdown

 

Don't skip any cutscene than mission runs perfectly.

 

Your every feedback will be appreciated :)

 

Play N' Enjoy :)

Edited by Huzaifa khan

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Extra Dip

Finally, after wait for a long time. Will play it later :^:

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Huzaifa khan

Last mission of this mission pack release in 2 days. Stay tuned.

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iFarbod

Played the MP.

 

Here's my feedback:

- OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos.

- Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs.

 

So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway :)

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Hey, Bro am come Back, am gonna play this mission Right now , Wait for the feedback :karmaeater:

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Huzaifa khan

Played the MP.

 

Here's my feedback:

- OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos.

- Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs.

 

So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway :)

Yeah, my grammer is sucks and you see Og loc in the final mission. Btw thanks for your feedback :)

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