Ways to improve Michael and Trevor's stories

[greenrock]

since there is a "how to improve franklin story" i thought its only right to do the same for Mike and Trev

[Sussus Amongus]

So Mr. Improver...how would you improve those stories?

Edited May 24, 2014 by Cakelover21

[Racecarlock]

So does micheal like robbing sh*t or not? He's going through this midlife crisis and enjoys the jewel heist and even said robbing the FBI was uplifting and yet at the same time always seems so desperate to get back to the life that he apparently hates so much or doesn't or does. Does he love his family or hate them? He always complains about them and yet he still wants them in his life, so much so he'll tattoo lazlow and punch a yoga instructor to make it happen. Also, I GET IT. MILLENNIALS SUCK! Do you have any good reason why or did you just spend all day watching a weazel news report on the ifruit phone generation?

 

As for trevor, it really would be nicer to know why he's so crazy. He'll kill people outright but insist on seatbelts and good manners. There's the one side mission for his mom and that's all we get. I know he's supposed to be walter white combined with tommy vercetti, and I like playing as him, but he really needs more of a backstory.

[Mr_Leone]

Trevor is far from Tommy Vercetti. Very, very, very far from him. Tommy was much more ambitious in a more realistic way. Tommy also was in the mob, compared to Trevor, who was freelance. Tommy was also much better at mamaging businesses, Trevor had zero interest in proper interactions. He was immature about the Chen proposition and the Chinese wanted nothing to do with him. I think Mike is pretty close to Tommy if Tommy was in his mid forties, just not as ruthless, Mike wouldn't take as many risks compared to Tommy.

[TrevorsMom]

It would have been nice if they had covered Trevor's military history in more detail.

[universetwisters]

Make Trevor more of a meth dealer and less of a guy who's all like YEW BETRAYEED ME MICHAEL every ten minutes,

[Mr_Leone]

Trevor and Chef are awesome together, by the way. They should expand that, or expand Oscar's gun business, maybe by hitting the weak Merryweather crew as they're about to leave? Perhaps setting up the death of Don Perceval? Or maybe Frank plans a heist by himself and uses Lester to help him. Lamar did okay on the jobs he did with F, maybe they will become a one two punch and attempt to take a score together?

[poland stronk]

Well in my opinion Michael's story is complete. His family life is sorted out. His problems with FIB fixed. He has millions of dollars and he wants only peace and retirement. The reason he was robbing banks and stuff was because of Steve Heines, Martin Madrazo, Devin Weston and Trevor. He was forced to do almost all of it. I don't want to see how he produces another movie because it would be boring and unrealistic. Some films are being made by years if not months and with Devin out of picture he shouldn't have more problems with making them. The only thing I would add to his story or rather re-make it is how everything ended. Because I didn't like ending C where I was riding over town and killing everyone just because Lester did his "computer magic". Oh hell, every mission should be re-designed or some more added because that hacker was causing disaster with his nerd skills. Every occasion to do something was cut because he found places where someone was hiding or how to get required stuff.

 

As of Trevor:

-More missions in rural areas (there are characters like Cletus, Maude and possibly many more who would give him interesting missions)

-More rampages and smuggling weapons and stuff. More reckless destruction and missions f*cked up like in GTA III where we were driving people to Marthy who turned them into hotdogs. Trevor is supposed to be a character carrying that legacy from GTA III, II and sometimes Vice City. He is supposed to do stuff Michael and Franklin wouldn't do.

-Story related to The Lost MC and Angels of Death MC. There should be a plot how Johnny and rest of his crew got to west coast and how they met Trevor. This should go on before Michael robs jewelry store because after that Trevor loses his interest in Sandy Shores and focuses on persuading Michael to get Brad out of jail and to rob more places just like 9 years ago. Or at least a sub-plots related to them after he gets back to his trailer from LS.

-Missions where Trevor STALKS Michael. Remember how he walked into Michael mansion and did nothing or how he AGAIN did nothing after he learned the truth about Michael's sweet deal with FIB? There should be a story where he searches every clue after he learns his old buddy is alive and plans to murder him and his family after he gets back from North Yankton. You may ask why he would do that I reply - because that's how Trevor should react, he killed many people because they insulted his mother or laughed because he was Canadian.

-More interesting ending to Mr. Cheng senior. It was stupid to let Franklin kill him and even more stupid to place him in LS. They way I see it, Trevor should lure him by kidnapping his retarded son but someone decided to do otherwise because DEADLINES. Ugh.

-Mission where he infiltrates Fort Zancudo and steals jetpack. It's a must. Period.

 

Apart from that there is not much to add to them. They are not under-developed like Franklin. Sure I would like to see more stuff related to Trevor because there is potential in that but Michael? No, no and NO. He already was lead character and there is nothing I would like to see about him.

Edited May 24, 2014 by poland stronk

[Alec Skorpio]

After his family leaves, Mike should have started doing criminal activities as a coping mechanism, reliving his glory days.

 

The Blitz Play should have been a heist thst Franklin set up instead of being for the FIB.

 

Paleto Score should have been a job they did for themselves.

 

The Bureau Raid should have been done so that Mike could get hold of the evidence that Steve had to get out of doing more FIB jobs.

[Trevorphilipjfry]

I'd like to see more of T's personal side. He's actually a much more complex character than people take him for, he isn't just a stupid hick, shagging, killing and injecting at any one time.

 

No, he's much more than that, deep mother issues, dependence issues, trust problems. They can really do a lot with Trevor if the want.

[Shade04rek]

Michael's story was plagued by the FIB factor and Trevor's sandy vagina.

 

Mike should have had more general crime elements. Stuff like hunting down his wifes lovers, taking out a snitch of his connection with dave situation after the jewelry job (yep.. Steve Haines). It would have been funny as hell if Jimmy spent a huge amount of Mikes money on drugs and he forces jimmy to help him make his money back selling. Trevor should have done his homework on Mikes killer after the intro heist and had dave on his hit-list (dave was in f*cking newspapers).

 

*sh*tty FIB Plot Eliminated*

 

Now..

-Trevor finds mike and meets frank, The torture missions.. replace with snitches from jewelry job that get arrested (kidnap from fib, then torture)

-Michael needs money to find madrazos location instead of become his bitch.. Paleto heist

-Michael needs to do computer stuff in FIB building after lester informs him they are on to him killing haines.. FIB raid

-Michael gets help from mexican gang and possibly a Franklin story improver too. kills double of madrazo.. gets jewelery payment back, Madrazo officially main antagonist for Mike

 

As for Trevor there should be no merryweather, how the f*ck does he even know their sh*t all of a sudden at times? like really. MW should have been just the military. He should have had nothing to do with the f*cking chinese, like why?

 

-Trevor + The lost VS Ortaga and aztecas, halfway through ortega gets killed by him and johnny (he still acts like trevors bitch because its trevor and hes hooked)

-Johnny becomes antagonist after Trev kills his brothers for something.

-Trevor kidnaps ashley, she dies somehow, Trevor steals madrazos wife and tells Johnny its ashley in exchange, Trev steals her back (Kidnapping hijinks becomes hilarious)

 

Anything really goes, Its too easy to make the story better.

 

I left out characters like devin since Id have them have more to do with franklin. To stay on topic I wont go in to Franklin.

Edited May 25, 2014 by Shade04rek

[greenrock]

this is going to take place after c ending

[Shade04rek]

After C ending, I think Michael should end up with a divorce and losing it all to his wife, Riches2Rags story followed by misc crime and then end with a truly new peaceful beginning out on those beach side houses on the northwestern map area, with a new gf or something that is like him.

 

Trevor.. hell i do not know, He killed everyone. Maybe he still has the juggulos,

[Chief theef]

Make trevors phone theme color pink. Completley feels so right, knowing his character (big lol) and I don't like pink either

[El Zodape]

Make Trevor more of a meth dealer and less of a guy who's all like YEW BETRAYEED ME MICHAEL every ten minutes,

Pretty much this. I loved Trevor before going to LS. After he met with Michael again, he turned into a crybaby. He was still awesome, but not as much as when he was killing rednecks, bikers and mexicans up in Blaine County.

[Trevorphilipjfry]

Make trevors phone theme color pink. Completley feels so right, knowing his character (big lol) and I don't like pink either

You can change it to pink

[AzelfandQuilava]

More of the TPI missions, the few that are in the game are awesome, shooting up the Lost's trailer park, protecting your meth lab, blowing up the O'NeIl Brothers' methlab and killing them all was so fun.

 

Also, there should of been a mission right after the last heist for both Michael and Trevor where they finally resolve their argument, with Michael properly apologising for what he did to Trevor, but also explaining that he didn't even want Trevor dead at all. Then Trevor would forgive him before realising he had over-reacted to Brad's death with the scene ending with Trevor's infamous line "Brad... was a bit of d**k".