Singing Test! Be Honest, Is This Good Or Bad?

[Ambient_]

Help me!

I need some feedback on this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AR53-HtWOIE

Obviously this song has a few screams but I toned those down for a certain reason in this video (hence why they're sh*tty).

But the singing was decent (not my best decent) so I uploaded this.

Thoughts?

[hornedturtle]

pitch was all over the place. lacked fluidity, and the transitions between the soft sections and hard sections seemed shaky at best.

 

 

 

 

for an idea of what a good transition is.

 

also you need to train your voice better so you can handle the rough stuff better

 

also adding instruments might help get the timing better.

Edited March 29, 2014 by hornedturtle

[Ambient_]

pitch was all over the place. lacked fluidity, and the transitions between the soft sections and hard sections seemed shaky at best.

 

 

 

 

for an idea of what a good transition is.

 

also you need to train your voice better so you can handle the rough stuff better

 

also adding instruments might help get the timing better.

Thanks!

[Mr. House]

I would advise a metronome and maybe listening to the melody of the vocals for the clean parts to sing along to.

[mr quick]

Can you perhaps record something with a backing track or something?

[Ambient_]

I'll do it, this time I'll try hard by warming up and practicing before trying it. All of the videos on that channel, excluding the latest 30sec 'scream test', didn't have me warm up prior to recording.

Can you perhaps record something with a backing track or something?