PimpGTA - series of Mission Packs based on SA-MP Roleplay Server exper

[Feargeorge]

PimpGTA Mission Pack Series (Currently ON HOLD)

Welcome to my thread of Mission Packs.I am a new DYOM designer and I am trying my best to make these missions look proffesional (which,for some for you,,I might fail to attempt).I hope you do enjoy the current mission packs.Please rate fair,be polite and don't be mean,because,as I mentioned,I started making (better looking) missions today.

 

Index:

The Grove Street Killer sub-MP:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31180 Part 1

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31206 Part 2

TBD Part 3

 

More to come soon,enjoy the current ones!

Characters (Spoiler warning in some places,so beware):

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• Adam Las - Main Protagonist of The Grove Street Killer Case sub-MP.Roled into LSPD and always did a good job.His under-chief,Travis Acevedo,promoted him to sergeant not long time ago.He has many problems with his brother,due to intentions revealed later. Appearances: The Grove Street Killer Case sub-MP
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• Travis Acevedo - Main Character,under-chief of LSPD.He is a honest and sometimes severe man.Adam idolises him due to many reasons.He is counted as a legend of LSPD,and nick-named "The Satan of the Gangs",due to him making many gangs disband when Travis was into a gang-fire against one. Appearances:The Grove Street Killer sub-MP
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• Jack Hammilton - Character with unknown role,citizen living at the victim place. Appearances:The Grove Street Kiler sub-MP.
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• Unknown Guy - Major antagonist of the Grove Street Killer sub-MP.Nothing is currently known about him.

Edited April 4, 2014 by Feargeorge

[Huzaifa khan]

Look's Interesting topic friend I'll check your mission

[mc.jocco]

Based on SA-MP RP? It sounds promising, atleast for me, since I'm playing on several RP servers. Good luck!

[Feargeorge]

Look's Interesting topic friend I'll check your mission

Based on SA-MP RP? It sounds promising, atleast for me, since I'm playing on several RP servers. Good luck!

You two won my gratitude and a place in my respect list.

[mc.jocco]

I appreciate that. I played that first mission:

 

For the beginner, it's not bad. MY opinion is, that you shouldn't put the camera right in front of the character's face, while he's speaking. Writting is good, didn't noticed any "horrible" mistakes. Lenght.. This mission should last several minutes longer. To get more main info about MP and what are we about to expect in it. Overall, I see future in this MP. This is all only MY opinion.

 

Edited March 27, 2014 by mc.jocco

[Feargeorge]

Topic updated:

+ New character,more action,longer.

+ Added Part 2.

+ A lot of exciting things coming in Part 3.