My second race, hopefully an improvement. Looking for feedback!

[RavingWithJesus]

My second race is a Point to Point race, just like my first. Only this time it makes a lot more sense, since the distance of this race is 17.85 miles (you get a lot of $ and rp for playing it because of that too!). If you have gta 5 for xbox and are willing to test out my new race that would be awesome! Anyone willing to give feedback, please let me know what you think of it, if you liked it or not, or if I should change something. Thanks!

 

Link:

 

http://rsg.ms/1h036te

Edited March 21, 2014 by ajdude1

[RavingWithJesus]

just updated it. worth a try. edited the link above.

[LuapYllier]

Just as a cursory look it has some serious (in my opinion) defficiencies in proper checkpoint usage. In short you should never be driving in one direction and have the arrows of the checkpoint pointing in a completely different direction.

[RavingWithJesus]

here is the updated, non confusing version! http://rsg.ms/1h7tqBP

 

please try it out and let me know if I need to fix it up a little more!

Edited March 22, 2014 by ajdude1