The Odyssey Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 (edited) "Would you sacrifice a loved one to save a loved one?" [/url] This tale follow the story of Jason Payne and his his battle against anarchy. It takes place in 2014. The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the rich need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crisis. Jason and his good friend Tommy are planning to make their mark on society and end this reign on terror. However, after Jason's family is kidnapped, the anonymous kidnapper demands one thing. For Tommy to be dead. PAYNE FAMILY [table] NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION Jason Payne Alive Protagonist of the MP. A family man, brave, loyal and tough. An excellent gunman. Kate Payne Alive Jason's wife. Caring and smart, but very afraid. Relies on husband a lot.. Ian Payne Alive Jasons son. Weak yet caring. Sara Payne Alive Jasons daughter. Very sweet but fragile. [/table] DAVIS FAMILY [table] NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION Tommy Davis Alive A man Jason met in the midst of the war. Loyal, caring, and a good friend to Jason. Deb Davis Alive Tommy's Mum. Strict yet paranoid. Digit Alive A friend of Elliot who is a hacker and a technological expert. Due to his computer skills, he aims to track down the army leader. Elliot Davis Alive Tommy's brother and Deb's and Harolds son. Good gunman. Harold Davis Alive Debs husband. Doc Jones Alive A doctor who assists the family's hospital. [/table] THE RED MIST [table] NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION Dominic Oldman Alive A high ranking member of The Red Mist. Powerful Carter Brown Alive A gunman who assists Jason in taking down the Army Leader. Cpl. Andrew Brick Alive Another high ranking member of The Red Mist. Loyal and kind. [/table] U.S ARMY [table] NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION Melvin Scar Dead Leader of the U.S Army and one of the antagonists in the MP. Started the war. [/table] Chapter 1: Bringing down the leader DOWNLOAD HERE: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30457 MISSION 1: Introduction MISSION 2: Scavenged MISSION 3: Red Mist MISSION 4: Dam Busters MISSION 5: Homecoming MISSION 6: Death At Sea Coming soon. -Dutchy and Patrick for DYOM -Graven for headers -Chips237 for winning the Name A Mission Pack Contest -MadMarshMallow for the inspiration for this MP (Max Parker) KD Himan for the trailer Edited March 30, 2014 by The Odyssey xGhostx and Target13 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KD himan Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 (edited) very nice presentation and cool screenshots . i am going to play the first chapter! good luck for the upcoming once. EDIT: I played the first 2 missions, do not take it serious but don't you think that tommy's mom is younger then her? she is a young ped model. by the way, very nice mission, i like the way you made the whole earthquake scene. Edited February 16, 2014 by KD himan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonWarrior (DnW) Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Hi bro, looks cool! I'll try this on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chips237 Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Quite unrealistic setting, but I'll try this out when I get free time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted February 16, 2014 Author Share Posted February 16, 2014 (edited) Thanks guys, please give feedback too. Also remember to report any bugs you find. @KD Himan, Lol, I guess so. I didn't really think about that while making the mission. Edited February 16, 2014 by The Odyssey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 (edited) This looks awesome story I will play this (MP) And awesome screenshots also Edited February 16, 2014 by Huzaifa khan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KD himan Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Here is the trailer by me , i hope you may like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted February 16, 2014 Author Share Posted February 16, 2014 (edited) Here is the trailer by me , i hope you may like it Great trailer! However I would like 1 thing to be changed. Can you change the thumbnail of the video? Only because it matches the logo, and the trailer is right next to the logo so it doesn't look very appealing. Edited February 16, 2014 by The Odyssey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KD himan Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Okey i changed it by making a simple header in Photoshop. but look, you had given link to the trailer.... please put the ''URL'' of video in the topic so that video can appear... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Nice topic look! I'll check this out and give you detailed feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted February 18, 2014 Author Share Posted February 18, 2014 Would anyone be wiling to create a video walkthrough? Preferably someone who is experienced in video making and commentaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alibatman Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 Very Good Mission and Story Good Luck With Other Chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted February 22, 2014 Author Share Posted February 22, 2014 Thanks. Any more feedback guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted February 22, 2014 Share Posted February 22, 2014 I'll give you feedback tomorrow or more later. Have some problems right now. I've played the first few missions, but i'll give you feedback when i play all of them from chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Green-chicken Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 Didnt play the game but a very interesting story plot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolf247 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 The main part is like it's written by Quasier. I'd recommend you change it to something else like: The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the poor need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crysis. You don't need this, but seriously, we know you're too good, but this is just a simple story. But the action and gameplay is great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Played. I don't want to spoil the story much, but i will write some of the spoilers here. The plot is not very unique, it sounds like all the other war themed stories that i used to play before this, but action is well done. One of the things that...How to say 'annoyed me' was location of the private army that joined in fight against main antagonist. They had their base in the center of enemy territory, that thing made me like wtf, i would put it somewhere near city like woods and that, although they later moved to another base. There's little lack of realism, but it don't bother me so much. Gameplay was well done, it was great. Not very perfect but great. I suggest you to use little more DYOM's features there and by that make it more unique. Cutscene and animations are perfect, at least for me, i don't care for animations that much in my own missions so. Overall, it's great, i'm waiting for next chapter, and i might give you more detailed feedback next time. Story - 6/10 Gameplay - 9/10 Presentation - 8/10 Cutscene & animation - 10/10 Overall - 8.5/10 Good luck and keep it up! The Odyssey 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 The main part is like it's written by Quasier. I'd recommend you change it to something else like: The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the poor need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crysis. You don't need this, but seriously, we know you're too good, but this is just a simple story. But the action and gameplay is great! That's a much better description. Thanks. @AnDReJ98 Thanks for the feedback Wolf247 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolf247 Posted March 8, 2014 Share Posted March 8, 2014 But it's not finished, we didn't find out what happened to his family! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted March 8, 2014 Author Share Posted March 8, 2014 But it's not finished, we didn't find out what happened to his family! Exactly, It's not finished yet. I'm working on chapter 2 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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