LieutenantLoserz Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 did a brochure project, this is is the inside of it, tell me if the information is accuracte http://imgur.com/eUKEfAC theGTAking101 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzzel Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 the cities include the ones you said, but you're missing one. Anywere city, from gta II i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thegutang Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 (edited) Positives: -Your grammar is fairly good. -Even though information is lacking, there are no real inaccuracies. Negatives: -No indentations or paragraphs in the main body. -Poor use of fonts. There are too many and they are too conflicting. Using the GTA font as headers is good. Using other fonts for headers and body is not so good. Keep it simple and theme oriented. -Poor color choice. It doesn't reflect the color theme of the subject. You picked cool colors instead of warm SO-Cal colors. -Lack of insight. You simply regurgitated some of the most basic facts regarding the topic. There is nothing to enforce why I should actual care about what is presented... Interesting facts and topics should include things like how GTA is the most controversial video game ever, how it is one of the most innovative games ever in regards to sandbox play, and how it is one of the most profitable franchises in video game history. Edited February 1, 2014 by Thegutang Vanto and GTAboob 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Ronson Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 ''Los Santos, City of saints, Celuloids and Sun Tan Removal. Where if you get the wrong ingredient for one of the richest persons in Vinewood you'll be facing severe charges for attempted murder. Where Gang bangers can't seem to let go off the 90's and meet the various fake people who just care about how they look in the outside, in fake places like Rockford hills or Vinewood! Or if you ain't a city boy you'd rather go to Blaine County, the morning glory of San Andreas. With the popular Grand Senora desert next to the alamo sea, come visit where there's absolutely nothing! This is the real america, meth, explosions and guns trafficking just right at your doorstep in the small providence of Sandy Shores or if you want to live peacefully from all those nutcases then come to Paleto Bay! Rescesion has hit us really hard but its still a better place than Sandy Shores! In San Andreas there is just so much to do... ranging from skydiving on the Maze Bank Tower to hiking up Mt. Chilliad! The place were multy-culture began then morphed into a nanny state! We won't be broken hypocrites for ever! - Brought by you by the San Andreas Tourism board.'' A Atleast thats what I would write. The only fact you're wrong at is the cities, just a little bit as you lack the cities from Manhunt which are part of the GTA universe aswell . There is Cottonmouth, Carcer, Liberty City, Vice City, Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiddledAttorney Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Sorry but that looks horrible and ugly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAboob Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 (edited) I always f*ckin hated brochure projects, I find them boring and pointless. I don't read brochures anyway I just skim through them and look at the pretty pictures like... I don't care about your politicians... Edited February 1, 2014 by GTAboob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wheildon Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 'Off of' should be 'on'. as in... 'the features of the vehicles are based on contemporary designs' ninjaontour 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nathan456 Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Wrong. Franklin clinton, grove st families? Bro its just families. Or want the set then say Chamberlain Gangster Families. NOT grove st families Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIMSTER777 Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 The colors freak me out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D3ADSH0T Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 ''Los Santos, City of saints, Celuloids and Sun Tan Removal. Where if you get the wrong ingredient for one of the richest persons in Vinewood you'll be facing severe charges for attempted murder. Where Gang bangers can't seem to let go off the 90's and meet the various fake people who just care about how they look in the outside, in fake places like Rockford hills or Vinewood! Or if you ain't a city boy you'd rather go to Blaine County, the morning glory of San Andreas. With the popular Grand Senora desert next to the alamo sea, come visit where there's absolutely nothing! This is the real america, meth, explosions and guns trafficking just right at your doorstep in the small providence of Sandy Shores or if you want to live peacefully from all those nutcases then come to Paleto Bay! Rescesion has hit us really hard but its still a better place than Sandy Shores! In San Andreas there is just so much to do... ranging from skydiving on the Maze Bank Tower to hiking up Mt. Chilliad! The place were multy-culture began then morphed into a nanny state! We won't be broken hypocrites for ever! - Brought by you by the San Andreas Tourism board.'' A Atleast thats what I would write. The only fact you're wrong at is the cities, just a little bit as you lack the cities from Manhunt which are part of the GTA universe aswell . There is Cottonmouth, Carcer, Liberty City, Vice City, Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas. Did u make this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Ronson Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Yeah, quoting our great late friend Steven heines in a couple of lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rob243 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 is this for school ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted February 10, 2014 Share Posted February 10, 2014 (edited) The majority of the "GTA Facts" seemed pretty obvious, unless you were presenting your project to a bunch of kindergartners. From good homes. Also, Franklin isn't part of the Grove Street Families. Edited February 10, 2014 by universetwisters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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