MadMarshMallow Posted January 24, 2014 Share Posted January 24, 2014 (edited) MadMarshMallow Present.. STATUS: CANCELLED So, after some of my previous mission packs were completed, this time I try to make one with something new; a story that came in my mind some time ago. Well, it's not 'something new' at all, but I guess I should try. Anyway, enjoy. "There is a history about how these newly-made factions started their evolutions. It was when the leader of an organization and the ruler of San Andreas summoned all of his 'thirteen-son' for the first time. Everyone came except the 3rd son, one of the valuable man. The leader wanted to find his new successor among these adopted children. They'll be separated from one and another. They must fight with each and everyone for their own. And after a few years of leaving San Andreas, the leader will come back some day and that time.. he will choose the best amongst them. This is what people named it, the New Generation."The story is about a fine-looking boy named Dominic Nel Amstrong, living in the desert with his parents. His father, Jason Amstrong as known as 'Troublesome Cowboy' was a former bandit. He has done a lot of crimes in his glory days. Even though Jason is still a wanted criminal, they live peacefully without much troubles.However, the fate doesn't always on their side.A bandit gang came and attacked the poor family. Jason died in the battle and his wife, Deanne was shot in the attempted to save her son.A year has passed, Dominic involved in a robbery and was sent to the prison. But, before he can familiarize himself, the place was raided. Along with another prisoner, he escaped the prison and ended up awake at Los Santos, in the middle of a war between factions. There's no turning back for him, but to live on in order to survive. Dominic Nel Amstrong19 years old, actions lover and a boy that is capable of making statement that turns up to be true or real immediately after.In his whole life, he's seeking for nothing. Just doing what the father says. He doesn't know how to drive, he lacks experiences, but everything changed when he set his foot at Los Santos.Jason AmstrongFather of Dominic Nel, he once known as the 'Troublesome Cowboy'. He's a very dangerous man and led a group of bandit in doing crimes. He was killed by a bandit gang while protecting his wife and son.JoeAnother prisoner that helped Dominic during the escaped. He's the one who brought Dom to Los Santos. Related to homosexual.SniderBorn in Los Santos, he's the man that knows everything that's happening around the town. He looked like a normal person, but he might had a history that he doesn't like to be revealed.CokeYounger brother of Snider, he has lost his memory due to the accident in the past 2 years. He doesn't remember his own name. Because of that, Snider called him with the name of 'Coke' for some reason. Chapter 1 1. Introduction : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30019 2. Wrong Place, Wrong Time : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30094 3. Hidden Flame : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30160 Thanks for all that play this mission pack and support me until now. Cheers! Edited February 8, 2014 by MadMarshMallow Shiva. and Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DChumber1 Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 Thanks For Making Wonderful Trailer For My Mission ! I Will Play This MP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 Nice Intro, man. Keep your good work up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 25, 2014 Author Share Posted January 25, 2014 @DChumber1 I'll wait for your feedback then. @Vinesh Thanks for playing. Appreciate the reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 looks great, will play later ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RamiTR Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 (edited) The first mission is pretty well-made. It let me know a bit about the story & how things came to be. Looking forward to future missions, I'm sure I wont be disappointed Edited January 25, 2014 by RamiV2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DChumber1 Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 Amazing Mission Bro....! 5/5 Stars For The Story & Mission Also....! Waiting For Next Mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MadMarshMallow Posted January 26, 2014 Author Share Posted January 26, 2014 Hey, thanks guys for the feedbacks. Stay tune for the next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alibatman Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 I Played the Introduction it was Real Awesome Bro.Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonWarrior (DnW) Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 Looks great, I'll ply for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 26, 2014 Author Share Posted January 26, 2014 @alibatman Thanks, man. @DragonWarrior Don't forget to put on some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 Goodluck! Will give it a try when i got some time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonWarrior (DnW) Posted January 27, 2014 Share Posted January 27, 2014 @DragonWarrior Don't forget to put on some feedback. You mean like the feedback I posted on DChumber's MP? If so ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 27, 2014 Author Share Posted January 27, 2014 @DragonWarrior Don't forget to put on some feedback. You mean like the feedback I posted on DChumber's MP? If so ok? Well, it's up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted January 27, 2014 Share Posted January 27, 2014 intro was awsum. when is next mission come out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 27, 2014 Author Share Posted January 27, 2014 Today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 28, 2014 Author Share Posted January 28, 2014 (edited) Second mission uploaded. Enjoy and feel free to give a feedback. Thanks in advance. Wrong Place, Wrong Time : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30094 Edited January 28, 2014 by MadMarshMallow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KD himan Posted January 28, 2014 Share Posted January 28, 2014 Man Introduction was Really Really Fu**ing Awesome! Thanks for making such a great Series, i will stay tuned up with it Introduction was like a real movie story. maybe you got some inspiration from any movie? by the way Cutscenes and English was so good! ( i am not a good reviewer ) but really i enjoyed the introduction. Good luck for your upcoming missions and have some chocolate from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissionDesignerLazeR Posted January 28, 2014 Share Posted January 28, 2014 Lookin' good. Good luck with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 29, 2014 Author Share Posted January 29, 2014 @KD Himan Thanks for playing, man. Glad you loved the intro. @MissionDesignerLazeR Don't forget to drop a feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted January 31, 2014 Author Share Posted January 31, 2014 New mission released! Feel free to play. Hidden Flame : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30160 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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