Feed back wanted

[Cudwieser]

Some constructive criticism welcome.

 

Please tell me what you think of trying these 4 (please try with a few friends)

 

http://socialclub.rockstargames.com/games/gtav/jobs/job/3yelFOI_PEqwqxgQ07rbpw?platformId=2

 

 

[DrAtomic]

Can't play em as they are PS3 jobs, but a couple of things stand right out:

 

Rodeo

1). I noticed right away on Rodeo is that you havent build the GTA mode for it. Since you cant disable GTA Mode I'd say at least take the effort to build it for people that want to play it on GTA. Also note that small tracks in loops like this one work great for GTA mode.

 

Short and Curly

Also with regards to Short and Curly, see my Xbox version of it: http://rsg.ms/KwBMJY What I notice right away is a couple of things:

1). No GTA mode

2). Use more way points for a cleaner track (again see my version of it)

3). For the record neither one of us is very original with this track as I got contacted by a guy who built the same track predating 9 days to my creation (so 3 weeks ago or something).

4). Drive it and see. The title says it me thinks. Isn't much of a description now is it...

 

All in one Line

Hmm doesn't really quallify as drag racing imho (have a look at my jobs for inspiration there, I've released 3 drag races myself).

1). Calling something a drag race should mean it is head to head (use 3 player grid for that, box 3rd player in)

2). When drag racing all lanes should have equal opportunity to win it and not win it because they are first on grid.

3). Using boosts for GTA mode is a lot of fun

 

All Star Gumball

1). If you have waypoints available add a couple on the long straights, try to maintain a visual reference for players (ie have a waypoint visible after going through one).

2). GTA mode

3). Checkpoint 4 to 5 looks horrible on the map (may play better, but odds are it isnt clear where players need to go).

 

Keep building!

Edited January 21, 2014 by DrAtomic

[paulmgrath]

Op iv downloaded yours gonna play them now, could do with some feedback on mine as well if your free,

to the guy above me just change search from xbox to ps3 to play other systems maps

Il be back in 30 with my findings

Edited January 21, 2014 by paulmgrath

[paulmgrath]

@OP

I played 3 of your tracks All in a line, Short and curly and Rodeo,

All in a line

Suggestions

Traffic off so more like a drag race

Alter the checkpoint when the road first veers left so easier to follow to next checkpoint

Few more checkpoints towards the end

 

Good route to race good potential with few little alterations and with the traffic off would open up more room for passing etc i liked it and so did the guy i raced i think

 

Short and curly

Really good track! good choice of vehicle class only suggestions maybe fence off road behind where you do 1st U turn but allow enough room still for sliding? 1 ore 2 more checkpoints, But easily the best of the 3 i played good track and one i would play again.Liked by me and other racer

 

Rodeo

 

Drag race, short, sweet is what it is. Does what it sets out to do well.

 

Theres my opinion i am by no means an expert and my tracks themselves could always be improved but it becomes a never ending cycle lol. Good work OP!!

 

Anyone wana give feedback on mine in sig

Edited January 21, 2014 by paulmgrath

[Cudwieser]

Any more input on the Gumball?

[paulmgrath]

Played half of gumball not really a race too long and too much looking at radar for next C/P would be a good track for car meets and cruises though imo

 

Do mine,Do mine!!

Youtube vid of one of mine

Edited January 22, 2014 by paulmgrath