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North Yankton Discussion

WildBrick142

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  2. 2. Do you want to see a North Yankton DLC?

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Welcome to the North Yankton (and North Yankton in GTA IV Mod) topic The topic has been recently updated, not much was done, and a lot was changed since the first version. Original topic was created

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I like this one a lot.   *Not Mine*

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My trip at North Yankton!

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SonofYankton

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Since Ever one is doing a history of Ludendorff, I will do a history of Ludendorff Weekly!

 

Ludendorff Weekly Was first printed in 1980 To Help put out news of random Events that hit the town. Although Ludendorff Weekly was never a official paper Slowly but surly Ludendorff Weekly Become More read ever week. The Former Paper, Ludendorff Daily was out of business in 1988. Nothing Really changed about the paper until 2003, when bobcat Bank and security co Was Robbed By Trevor Phillps and Michel townly and Bradley Sider. Ludendorff Weekly then add the first 2 page paper. Put in 2013 Ludendorff Weekly went though a overhaul final being viewable onlline. But with this change Many Writers Quit. Leaving Only Wildbrick And Raccoon. Though in 2013 they hired a writer, mnmn1234 who was the worst writer this side of Ludendorff river! After Many Months Ludendorff Weekly got a office in Ludendorff, and raised the price. Then It was now.

 

 

i Hope You guys like it. If there is anything i could add/take away let me know!

 

FeedBack is welcome

It's good but next time, read the small print ;)

 

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I'm already a writer....

Out of curiosity, is there a deadline for the "History of Ludendorff" contest?

 

No. Since I will most likely be the writer for The History Issue There is no deadline

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Empty World

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In the 60's Ludendorff had its economic boom.

In 1980, Ludendorff had hit its peak population. Population of 1,200.

 

However, Ludendorff's good will wouldn't last forever. In 1989, town went through it's worse times.

 

Very nicely written. To give some constructive criticism, however (and if I may), is that you might want to be more lively with the descriptions. Also, you don't always want to start your sentences with "However", "but", "and", "or", or "which". On the second to final sentence I quoted above, you used "however" in the proper way to start a sentence as it would sound weird to end it right after the word "forever". As for using numbers to represent the 1960s, you'll want to spell it as '60s, not 60's. The '60s you mean are not possessive, unless you wanted to say "the 60s' big boom" or something like that.

 

On the final sentence I quoted, you'll want to make it say "In 1989, the town went through its worst times." While I do sound like a complete grammar Nazi, I just want to help you improve upon your writing. I loved what you just wrote and I hope that this can help you for future writings.

 

Connectives are my biggest weakness in writing. Thanks a lot of the feedback. :)

 

I will admit that I have my own faults as well. I'm a screenwriter and one of my biggest problems I try to avoid is the unreal dialogue. Sometimes it sounds very flat or too much like another character.

 

I knew it! You sound like my English teacher (it's a good thing tho). Yeah, the best thing to do is to get into this particular character and write from his/her perspective.

 

Out of curiosity, is there a deadline for the "History of Ludendorff" contest?

How about the 10th of January? But how will we know who will win? Perhaps voting?

 

To stay on-topic, here's few of the pics I took last night.

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How about the 10th of January? But how will we know who will win? Perhaps voting?

That could work. Voting would be much better than the writers taking a pick at random.

 

How will the votes be tallies up, though? Will there be a poll added, or will the votes be based on likes?

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How about the 10th of January? But how will we know who will win? Perhaps voting?

That could work. Voting would be much better than the writers taking a pick at random.

 

How will the votes be tallies up, though? Will there be a poll added, or will the votes be based on likes?

 

Dunno. We could make a thread in Writers' Discussion section with a poll and contestants would have to post their story in that thread.

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WildBrick, sorry for not joining you. My console frezeed (xbox360)

on-topic: Handling on Police Rancher is a little bit different than rancher xl. I tested it today.

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How about the 10th of January? But how will we know who will win? Perhaps voting?

That could work. Voting would be much better than the writers taking a pick at random.

 

How will the votes be tallies up, though? Will there be a poll added, or will the votes be based on likes?

 

Dunno. We could make a thread in Writers' Discussion section with a poll and contestants would have to post their story in that thread.

 

Could work. We should see what wildbrick says about this first.

 

OT: Does anyone have any pictures of the Wood Depot on the corner at Cavalry Blvd. and the road leading to the church?

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WildBrick, sorry for not joining you. My console frezeed (xbox360)

on-topic: Handling on Police Rancher is a little bit different than rancher xl. I tested it today.

I wasn't in North Yankton anyway.

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Camsterguy

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To-do list:

  • Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)
  • Find a way to get to NY in Story mode, free to explore. (Traffic / NY state patrol bonus)
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What's with everyone using my sig rotator? :p

OT: Does anyone have any pictures of the Wood Depot on the corner at Cavalry Blvd. and the road leading to the church?

@GTAKid667 took images of every building.

 

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There are no images of the road though.

 

 

 

How about the 10th of January? But how will we know who will win? Perhaps voting?

That could work. Voting would be much better than the writers taking a pick at random.

How will the votes be tallies up, though? Will there be a poll added, or will the votes be based on likes?

 

Dunno. We could make a thread in Writers' Discussion section with a poll and contestants would have to post their story in that thread.

 

Could work. We should see what wildbrick says about this first.

I'm ok with that.

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Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)

Does it work in the Prologue?

 

EDIT: Who wants to make the writer's discussion thread?

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DLC will come - in a few weeks or so. ;)

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Onett

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Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)

Does it work in the Prologue?

 

EDIT: Who wants to make the writer's discussion thread?

 

 

 

Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)

Does it work in the Prologue?

 

EDIT: Who wants to make the writer's discussion thread?

 

On it. Where should I put it?

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Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)

Does it work in the Prologue?

 

EDIT: Who wants to make the writer's discussion thread?

 

 

 

Get to NY on GTA Online on PS3 (Right now it freezes when trying to leave Bury the Hatchet)

Does it work in the Prologue?

 

EDIT: Who wants to make the writer's discussion thread?

 

On it. Where should I put it?

 

in the writers discussion section: http://gtaforums.com/forum/78-writers-discussion/

 

dont forget to put all our entries in! :)

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Onett

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If anyone who wrote a backstory for Ludendorff could you tell me your name and story. PM me them and I'll set up a topic. Or if anyone else could.

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Kalvin

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It doesn't freeze when me and my brother get North Yankton in MP (via Bury the Hatchet).

I use a PS3, by the way.

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Chaingang Soldier

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North Yankton is a nice place,

not bringing it as DLC?

That'd be like spitting in our face,

or an arrest by LSPD.

 

Creepy nights, beautiful sunrise,

that's a mind blow!

R*? I'll give you an advice:

Bring the DLC - in a few weeks or so!

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It doesn't freeze when me and my brother get North Yankton in MP (via Bury the Hatchet).

 

I use a PS3, by the way.

And when was the last time you did this?

Pretty sure it's frozen for a lot of users of PS3 since the 'Holiday Gifts' download, any exit from the two missions while the internet is connected freezes at the loading screen

 

You are the chosen one :ph34r:

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I'm not sure when the Holiday Gifts were released, but we did it on Christmas Eve is all I know.

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I'm not sure when the Holiday Gifts were released, but we did it on Christmas Eve is all I know.

http://www.rockstargames.com/newswire/article/52011/grand-theft-auto-online-holiday-gifts.html - Announcement was Christmas Eve so I'd assume it released then.

 

I tried Christmas Day and it didn't work, it probably updated just after you went :pp

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Alright! The poll is now live! Better get voting, as it ends on the 10th!

 

Good luck to everyone involved.

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WildBrick142

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Can you put the stories into quotes? It's hard to see who's story is it :)

 

E: And the poll is a multiple choice.

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Can you put the stories into quotes? It's hard to see who's story is it :)

 

E: And the poll is a multiple choice.

 

Done.

 

And how do you mean it's multiple choice? That's the idea, right?

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Can you put the stories into quotes? It's hard to see who's story is it :)

 

E: And the poll is a multiple choice.

 

Done.

 

And how do you mean it's multiple choice? That's the idea, right?

 

He meant that you can vote for few people, not just one.

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SonofYankton

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So wait, If I win, I would get into LW? Or I could just write about me win it's my time write LW.

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So wait, If I win, I would get into LW? Or I could just write about me win it's my time write LW.

Guess so.

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Anyone wants more pics with north yankton cars?

 

The snowy cars? Don't see why not :)

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