Gammoudicj Posted January 2, 2014 Share Posted January 2, 2014 (edited) San Andreas, Los Santos, 2004 "The life in Los Santos is all about killing, dealing, gang wars and sh*t. Three members of three gangs are trying to show the others who's boss and get a package that coasts 25.000.000$, who will get it? It's only a question..." Mexican and proud of it: Crime life Logo: Lance “LD” Devito: Lance is the main protagonist in this storyline. Lance is 28 years old; he was born in Ganton along with his homies: Biggie, Zack, Jeff and Big Boy.. Before 3 months, LD stole a car from a car shop in Downtown. Later he has been arrested by the cops and was for the prison for 3 months. Lance got now to help The South Side Gangsters in their war with the East Side Gangsters and the LS Mexicans. Zack Jackson: Zack is the leader of the South Side Gangsters. Zack is 29 years old. Zack was born in Ganton; he later formed a gang and called it The South Side Gangsters. They later started a war with the East Gangsters. First met: Intro Joey” Biggie” Johnson: Marty is 25 years old and he is a member of South Gangsters. Marty was born in Ganton and he later joined the Gang. Marty is a fat guy who spends all his time in eating but he is a funny guy. He is the best friend of Lance. First met: Intro Died in: the Sad day Jeff Mason: Jeff is 26 years old and he is a South Gangster member. He was born in Ganton and he later became a member of the gang. Jeff later became a gangster rapper and Big Boy became his bodyguard. Jeff will later betray the hood with the EGs. First met: More homies Died in: the finale Vladimir “Vlad” Jackson: Vlad is the uncle of Zack.he is 46 years old. Vlad is the weapon dealer of the South Gangsters and Lance always tells him “what’s this old school bullsh*t” because he doesn’t have strong weapons. First met: Uncle Vlad Rook “Big Boy” Tenpenny: Big Boy is 26 years old and he is a member of SG hood. Big Boy was a fat guy in the past, he always eat like Biggie. After Lance’s release from the prison, he found out that he is so slim now. Sometime in 2004, he became the bodyguard of Jeff. First met: More homies Jack McVald: Jack is an old friend of Zack and Big Boy. He is 31 years old. Jack's real name is Fernando Redwingo, he got kicked by Ernesto for working with the Sgs. Now Jack will help Lance and the rest to get money to buy strong guns. First met: Chapter 2: Intro Died in: Rooftops (killed by Ernesto) Mike Penderbelly: Mike is a 36 old man and he is the chief of LSPD. Mike is a secret drug dealer and he knows about Mexicans package, he will help Lance to get it in exchange for some help. First met: Cop call Marco Morelli: MArco is the leader ,of the Morelli family. They are the most dangerous in San ANdreas, MArco knows about the package of Mexicans and he wants to buy it. First met: The trap Minor characters: Trent Raerho: Trent is an OG of the East Gangsters. The Sgs wants him dead because him and his homies keep blsting them. First met: EGs deal Alexander"Alex" Raerho: Alex is a member of the EGs also he is the protogonist of Crime Life episode. Alex and Lance see each other in some missions and Alex is killable in mission: For the hood Ernesto Rodrigo: Ernesto is the leader of the Mexicans also the protoganist of Mexican and proud of it. He and Lance see each other in some missions and he is killable in mission: The sad day Jimmy Pulaski: Jimmy is the bodyguard of Mike. He is the only one who knows about his drug deals. First met: Cop call Gangs and mafias: South "SGs" Gangsters: The South Gangsters is an old gang in LOs Santos. It was created by Zack Jackson and his homies JOey and Lance. Somewhere in the 90s, they started a war with the Mexicans and East Gangsters. In 2004, the SGs started to lose their reputation on the streets. But their old member Lance Devito is coming out of the prison today... Status: Friend Danger status: Normal Status of leader: Alive East Gangsters: The East Gangsters are the most enemies of the South Gangsters. THey are drug dealers, weapon traffics, and they racket everyone. Status: Enemy Danger status: Strong Los Santos Mexicans: The Los Santos Mexicans are a very strong gang. They are led by Ernesto Rodrigo, they have a package of drugs that coast 25.000.000$. Status: Enemy Danger status: Very strong Status of leader: Alive The Russians: The Russians are the most dangerous mafia in Los Santos. They are weapon dealers, drug dealers, their members are evrywhere and they are led by Dimitiri Bronisclav Status: Enemy Danger Status: Very dangerous Status of leader: Dead The Morelli family: The Morelli family are the most dangerous mafia in San Andreas especially in Las Venturras because they own it. They are led by Marco MOrelli. Marco knows about Lance and he is preparing a trap for him. Status:Enemy Danger status: THE MOST DANGEROUS IN SA Status of leader: Unkown (More coming soon) Missions Chapter 1: Helping the brothers out Intro: Testing it tagging up turf Showing who's boss More wars Uncle Vlad hitting them EG deals Stealing some goods Old homies The ambush Night life Jefferson war Gangs wars Dealing time Cleaning the hood Snitch list Rhyme book More stars Bad move One last favor Party Unkown shipment My back For the hood From other point The sad day Revenge Lost Chapter 2: Plans to retake the hood Chapter 2: Intro War for revenge Bank robbery Cars defense Making more money Bad deal Homie drive Robbing the train Cop call Drugs drive Trailer madness Retaking it The trap Secret work Rooftops In our hearts Chapter 3:Ending the sh*t SGs are back Riot Shwoing who's back Battle at the west Rescuing boy EGs supplies Puting an end to the riot The finale show The end Edited February 8, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 8, 2014 Author Share Posted January 8, 2014 (edited) Post changed Los Santos, 2004 It's in that year that evrything is going to change. A gang called Mexicans are about to change everything when they'll get their cargo shipment with a package of drugs That coasts 25.000.000$. Ernesto and his amigos waited for it for 5 years. Now in 2004, the package is coming, will it be easy to get it? None knows about it. Ernesto Rodrigo: Ernesto is 34 years old and he is the leader of Los Santos Mexicans. Ernesto born in 1970 in Mexico. While he was 21 years old, he joined the Mexican. He did some great jobs for them. Later in 1996, he moved to Los Santos with Diego, Alfredo and the Mexican previous leader. In 1998, the Mexicans leader got shot by a sniper rifle in a gang war in East Los Santos. So, Ernesto was promoted as the leader. In 1999, The Mexicans in Mexico started doing a package of drugs that coast a 25.000.000$, they were going to sell it to the Russian mafia of LS. In 2004, the package is coming with big problems.Diego Bernando: Diego is 32 years old and he is a co-leader of the LS Mexicans. Diego born in 1968 in Mexico. He joined the Mexico gang when he was 19 years old. He met Ernesto aand Alfredo and they three made many crimes. They moved to Los Santos in 1996. After two years, Mexicans leader got shot by a sniper rifle and Ernesto was promoted into the LS Mexicans leader and Diego and Alfredo are the co- leaders. First met: IntroAlfredo Martinez: Alfredo is a 34 years old and he is a co- leader of LS Mexicans like Diego. Diego born in 1970, He joined the Mexican gang when he was 21 and he met Ernesto and Diego. Later in 1996, they moved to Los Santos. In 1998 Mexicans leader got shot in his head by a sniper rifle, and Ernesto was promoted into the leader and Diego and Alfredo are the co-leaders. In 1999, Alfredo, Diego and Ernesto heard that their package of drugs will come after 5 years. Now, in 2004, Alfredo expects o get it and become rich. First met: IntroDimitri Braslclove: Dimitiri is the ldaer of Los Santos Russians, Dimitiri wants to buy the drugs that The Mexicans will get in 2004.First met: Russian meeting Died in: It's time to do that dealCesar Mendez: Cesar is the leader of San Fierro Rifa with his brother Armando. Cesar is more stronger than his brother who always run aways, he deals with his problems, he is killer machine, he always sends his men to racket every store in SF. Now he is in LS for two reasons: to take out LS Mexicans and to get their shipment from Willofield.First met: Taking down(killed)Armando Mendez: Armando is the brother of Cesar and they both lead the SF Rifa. Armando isnt like his brother, he doesnt deal with his problems, he always run away and get his brother in troubles. Also, when he find out his men and brother killed, he run away and didnt stay to take revenge. First met: Taking down(killed) Marco Morelli: Marco is 49 years old and he is the leader of the Morelli mafia, the most dangerous mafia in San Andreas. Marco always disrespect his men, he sends his men to racket every place in SA, he got his hands in San Fierro and Las Venturas even in Liberty City, Marco is in LS for the drugs that the Mexicans have, he got a plan that nobody knows about it, only his son. Sooner or later, we'll find about it. First met: The Morelli Family Johnny ''John'' Morelli: Johnny is 26 years old and he is the son of Marco Morelli. John born in a Rich family, nobody refused what he wanted. Johnny spends his time in smoking, f*cking hoes, sleeping, listenning to music, but he is a pro in killing. His father always tell him that he is a usefull kid. Johnny now got a plan to be a king in SA just like his dad. First met: the Morelli family died in: Revenge is the choice (part ) Robert Dogubachi: Robert is 35 years old and he is a new member of the Morelli mafia. He did some great jobs for Marco in a few days that's why he sends him to danger missions with Ernesto. Robert found out that Marco wants him and the Chongs dead that's why he betrayed him and took his money. First met: Robert, the fatty Died in: Robert's destiny Lee Chong: Lee is a 29 old man and he and his brother lead the Chong triads. Lee is a serious man, he always kill every body who f*cks with him. His men are having a big war with the Yakuza. Lee and his brother Kim live in a big mansion in LV, that place is like an amry base. Lee and KIm found out that Marco wants them dead, that's why they stole half of his money. First met: Meeting and ambush Died in: Blood brothers Kim Chong: Kim is 28 years old and he is the brother of Lee and both of them lead the Traids. KIm always gets his brother in troubles and it's him who started the war with Yakuza by attacking their vans of money in LV. Kim and Lee with the help of Robert found out about Marco's plan, that's why they betrayed him. First met: meeting and ambush Died in: Blood brothers Lee: Lee is 25 years old and he is the new leader of the Yakuza. Lee started to lead the Yakuza when Mu Ni Wu got very old. Ever since he become a leader, he led his gang into troubles and wars with the Morellis and the Traids. First met: Yakuza's last chance(killed) Mu Ni Yu: Mu Ni Wu is the previous leader of the Yakuza, now he is the co-leader. He got too old now, that's why Lee took his place. Mu Ni Wu doesnt want to use weapons, he always use his katana, he thinks that the users of guns are pussys. First met: Yakuza's last chance(killed) Diu Chi: Diu Chi is the co-leader and he is 35 years old. Diu Chi is like a Hunter of the Yakuza, he is too powerfull with his Ak47. First met: Yakuza's last chance (killed) Fernando Lopez: Fernando was a member of the LS Mexicans. He was the gun dealer of the gang. Ernesto kicked him out for snitching, Fernando didnt like what Ernesto did, he betrayed the Mexicans with the South Gangsters and become a trust member of their gang. Fernando knows that Ernesto and the others are looking for him to kill him that's why he changed his name into Jack McVald and started a business of delivering guns with vans. First met: Old pal is a dead pal(killed) South "SGs" Gangsters: The South Gangsters is the most enemy of the Mexicans. They are led by Zack Jackson, they are the most old gang in LS. Their task is to get their hands on the drugs package. The SGs started to lose their reputation on the streets but after 3 months they got back in the game for un unkown reason and they got strong again.Status:EnemyDanger status: MediumStatus of leader: AliveEast Gangsters "EGs": The East Gangsters are a strong gang in Los Santos. They are drug dealers, weapons traffics, they racket everyone and every store. They want to get their hands on the Mexicans package.Status: EnemyDanger status;StrongStatus of leader:UnkownLos Santos Mexicans: The Los Santos Mexicans are a very storng gang. They are led by Ernesto Rodrigo and they got a package of drugs that coasts 25.000.000$. THey are having a war with the EGs and the SGs. They are drugs and weapons dealers. In 1998, their previous leader was killed.Status: FriendsDanger status: Very strongStatus of leader: AliveSan Fierro Rifa: the SF Rifa are a known gang in LS and SF. They racket every store, they are drug and weapon dealers. Their business in LS is delivering the drugs to their dealers.Status: EnemyDanger status: MeduimStatus of leaders: DeadLos Santos Russians: he Russians are the most dangerous mafia in Los Santos. They are weapon dealers, drug dealers, their members are everywhere and they are led by Dimitiri Bronisclav. They want to buy the drugs of Mexicans.Status: FriendsDanger status: DangerousStatus of leader: Dead The Morelli Mafia: The Morelli mafia is the most dangerous mafia in San Andreas, especially in LV, because they own. they got their hands everywhere, they kill every body who f*cks with them. THey want Mexicans drugs and they got an unknown plan. Status: Enemy Danger status; VERY DANGEROUS Status of leader: Alive The Yakuza: The Yakuza are a strong mafia especially in San Fierro, because they own half of it. They are having a big war with the triads and the Morellis. Status: Enemy Danger status; Dangerous Status of leaders: Dead The Chong triads: The Chong triads are a very strong mafia, they are just like Russians. Their HQ is a big mansion in LV and that place is like an army base. Status: Enemy Danger status: Dengerous Status of leaders; Dead Thanks to KD himan for making it for me: Thanks to Aznkei for his great videos Chapter 1: Gangs and sh*tIntroductionChilling after warThe gang warSG's in fireGetting some goodsProtect your amigosCar collectorNo deliveryChatpter2: Cargo from MexicoPart 1:A thing we were waiting forRussian meetingFirst hideoutSecond hideoutThird hideoutWhat belong to usAir warTaking downPart 2:We're here for our stuffBombing the placeStealing in warIt's time to do that dealRevenge on themDefend your motelFollowing the snitchDelivery Chapter 3: New buyers Part 1: The Morelli family Robert, the fatty Sniper operation Robbing the robbers Meeting and ambush Yakuza's attack Dirty job Yakuza's last chance Part 2: Bloos brothers Robert's destiny My plan Main target Traitor problem Old Pal is a dead pal Chapter 4: Sad end Morelli's truth Hell in Los Santos Cold war(lost the file) To Venturas Revenge is the choice(part1) Revenge is the choice(Part2) The end Edited March 25, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_GDF Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 I played them all and they were good missions, nice story But the missions are kind of short, but still being good, keep it up man Gammoudicj 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 11, 2014 Author Share Posted January 11, 2014 Thanks man, but you know, I'm still new in dyom. This episode is aleardy finished and the second Mexican and proud of it too also the third Crime life but I need to publish time so when I'll have time I'll do it. I need also someone to do a logo and a trailer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 (edited) "2004 years, Los Santos, a city of crime, Alexander "Alex" Brown is a bodyguard of an OG of the East Gangsters called Trent Raerho, doing jobs for him, killing anybody for him, a real hitman, leaving a crime life, Alex and Trent with the help of Brian and Drake are going to change the rules in LS when they'll their hands on Mexicans package of drugs" Alexander "Alex" Brown: Alex is 28 years old and he is the progtagonist of Crime Life. Alex is the boydguard of Trent Raerho, a straight OG from the East Gangsters. He was born in Liberty City, and then he worked for Salvatore Leone until 2001 when he got killed by Claude, later in 2002, after taking his revenge on the Yakuza and killing Claude, he moved to Los Santos and there he met Trent Raerho, Brian Hamilton and Drake Jasper, three members of the EGs. Later in 2003, Trent become a straight OG in the gang and start leading a neighborhood and Alex become his bodyguard. Now in 2004, Alex and Trent heard about Mexican's package and they want to get it. Trent Raerho: Trent is 31 years old and he is the best friend of Alex. Trent was a normal member of the EGs, he was always hanging with his homeboys Brian and Drake. Later in 2002, he met Alexander and they started to make crimes and blast the Mexicans and SGs. In 2003, Trent was promated into a straight OG and Alex become his boydguard. Now in 2004, Trent wants to get the Mexicas package. First met: Intro Brian Hamilton: Brian is 27 years old and he is an OG from the East Gangsters. Brian born in Los Santos, later in 1998 he joined the EGs and met Trent and Drake. They were hanging around, and doing their jobs together. In 2003, they met Alex and started to do real crimes. Now in 2004, Brian is an OG from the gang. First met: Bang Bang Died in: Mexican thingy (killed by Ernesto during A thing we were waiting for) Drake Jasper: Drake is 29 years old and he is an OG from the East Gangsters. He was born in San Fierro and worked with his father in his old garage. Later, his family was murdered by some mafia. He moved to LS in 1995 where he met Trent. Later in 1998, they met Brian. Drake got some much troubles with the SGs especially with BIg Boy. First met: Bang Bang Died in: Farwell, Drake(killed by Lance during Bad move) Billy Herandez: Billy is a 37 years old manand he is a pimp in LS, also an old member of the East Gangsters and an old friend of Trent, Drake and Brian. Billy was out of the town for 5 years, now he came back for un unkown reason, he is having many troubles with the russian mafia. First met: Billy, the pimp Earl Colton: Earl is a 28 years old man, he is an old friend of Alex, Trent, Drake and Brian. Before 3 years, he robbed a store and got arrested. Now in 2004, he is getting out the prison, planing to take revenge on everybody who f*cked with him. First met: Old friend Lisa Colton: Lisa is the sister of Earl, she is 25 years old. Lisa and her brother are always fighting, because Lisa doesn't listen to him and she's dating a Mexican guy. First met: Helping Earl Robert Dogubachi: Robert is making an appearance in Crime Life. He met Alex in Alhambra Club when it was robbed and he helped him to kill the Cubans. Alex doesnt know that Robert is from the Morelli Mafia but sooner or later he'll find out. First met: First date Minor Characters: Lance "LD" Devito: Lance, from Gangster For Life Episode is making a small appearances in Crime Life, and he has some cross overs with Alex and also he is killable in some missions. Zack Jackson: Zack is the leader of the South Gangsters. He is the main target of the East Gangsters and everybody wants him dead. He is killable too in some missions. Ernesto Rodrigo: Ernesto, from MAPOI, is making a small apearance in CL, he has more than Lance's cross overs with Alex, and he is killable in some missions too. East "EGs" Gangsters: The East Gangsters are a strong gang in Los Santos. They are drug dealers, weapons traffics, they racket everyone and every store. They want to get their hands on the Mexicans package. They got many OGs such as Trent, Drake, Brian, Earl and Alex. Status: Friends Danger status: Strong Status of leader: Alive South "SGs" Gangsters: The South Gangsters are the rivals of the East Gangsters. hey are led by Zack Jackson, they are the most old gang in LS. Their task is to get their hands on the drugs package. The SGs started to lose their reputation on the streets but after 3 months they got back in the game for un unkown reason and they got strong again. Status: Enemies Danger status: Medium Status of leader: Alive Los Santos Mexicans: The Los Santos Mexicans are a very strong gang, they deal with everything especially with drugs, hey got a package of drugs that coasts 25.000.000$. THey are having a war with the EGs and the SGs. They are drugs and weapons dealers. In 1998, their previous leader was killed. Status: Enemie Danger status: Very strong Status of leader: Alive Russian Mob: The Russian Mob are the most dangerous mafia in Los Santos. They are enemies with all the gangs except the Mexicans because they want to get their drugs. Status: Enemoe Danger Status: Dangerous Status of leader: Alive The Cubans: The Cubans are a gang who likes to get in troubles. They are not that strong but they want to be. They racket everybody and get in gangwars always. THey've even took BIlly's Club. Status: Enemies Danger Status: Medium Status of leader: Unkown Chapter 1: Gang problems Part1: Intro Bang Bang Street fights Burn baby burn Money collector hating the haters A little deal Payback time Part 2: KIll and save Billy, the pimp Guardian Angel Russian problems Secret kill Hitman style Old friend Daddy's back Chapter 2: Mexican's stuff Part 1: Mexican thingy Helping Earl No deal Roof support Farwell, Drake Funeral War started War continue Part2: The Battle and the dream Snake work Battle at the HQLike a pro' Yayo' money More problems First date Edited March 29, 2014 by gammoudicj Exocortex 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 9 missions are uputaded! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 Gangs are uputaded! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 2 missions are uputaded! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 Chapter 1 is finished! Now working on chapter 2: Plans to retake the hood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 8 missions are uputaded! Characters uputaded! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. John Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 (edited) Wow, wow, wow. 7 posts in a row?! It seems like nobody is giving any feedbacks at all. I see a very good dedication of hard work in this topic. I will play a few missions and try to give some feedbacks. EDIT: There are a total of 37 missions. sh*t, you have done some real hardwork in this. Edited January 13, 2014 by Dr. John Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 Over 35 missions just in few days? Nice work man! I might give it a try! Goodluck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. John Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 All right, I played a few of them Just a suggestion: PLEASE TURN THAT GOD DAMN WANTED SYSTEM! Otherwise, the missions are a very neat remake of GTA SA (well, a few of them are). Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolf247 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 It would be a pun if LD's Middle Name is Steven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 All right, I played a few of them Just a suggestion: PLEASE TURN THAT GOD DAMN WANTED SYSTEM! Otherwise, the missions are a very neat remake of GTA SA (well, a few of them are). Keep it up. Thanks man, about the Wanted system, explain the problem, also, I'm going to finish this story today and I'll start on the enxt episode. Have fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonWarrior (DnW) Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 Good Luck homie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 Good Luck homie Thanks homie, now I'm going to upload 8 MORE MISSIONS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 8 missions are uploaded! Chapter 2 of GFL is finished! Now starting work on Chapter 3: Traitor must die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 (edited) I'm pretty sure some of the names of your characters have been used by LnDProductions, previously known as leoncj, in his mission packs. For example, Zack Jackson and Rook Tenpenny were the names of characters from Crime Life and No Rules in the sands respectively. But, while you could make those up (I don't know how Rook could come to your head, though), I doubt you could really make up the 'McVald' surname, especially when it was featured in 'GANGSTER and Proud of it!' I don't want to and I can't blame you in any way for using the names, I'm not leoncj, but next time come up with your own ideas. Oh, and I'll check your missions pretty soon. Edited January 14, 2014 by SatournFan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 (edited) I'm pretty sure some of the names of your characters have been used by LnDProductions, previously known as leoncj, in his mission packs. For example, Zack Jackson and Rook Tenpenny were the names of characters from Crime Life and No Rules in the sands respectively. But, while you could make those up (I don't know how Rook could come to your head, though), I doubt you could really make up the 'McVald' surname, especially when it was featured in 'GANGSTER and Proud of it!' I don't want to and I can't blame you in any way for using the names, I'm not leoncj, but next time come up with your own ideas. Oh, and I'll check your missions pretty soon. Well, due, I'm tunisian, I dont know much surnames of Americans, I played Leoncjs missions and I read his topics and yes I used some of his names. But I'll try to do my own names in the next episodes Edited January 14, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 I'm pretty sure some of the names of your characters have been used by LnDProductions, previously known as leoncj, in his mission packs. For example, Zack Jackson and Rook Tenpenny were the names of characters from Crime Life and No Rules in the sands respectively. But, while you could make those up (I don't know how Rook could come to your head, though), I doubt you could really make up the 'McVald' surname, especially when it was featured in 'GANGSTER and Proud of it!' I don't want to and I can't blame you in any way for using the names, I'm not leoncj, but next time come up with your own ideas. Oh, and I'll check your missions pretty soon. Well, due, I'm tunisian, I dont know much surnames of Americans, I played Leoncjs missions and I read his topics and yes I used some of his names. But I'll try to do my own names in the next episodes http://www.behindthename.com/random/ Here's a good name generator for you to use in your next works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 I'm pretty sure some of the names of your characters have been used by LnDProductions, previously known as leoncj, in his mission packs. For example, Zack Jackson and Rook Tenpenny were the names of characters from Crime Life and No Rules in the sands respectively. But, while you could make those up (I don't know how Rook could come to your head, though), I doubt you could really make up the 'McVald' surname, especially when it was featured in 'GANGSTER and Proud of it!' I don't want to and I can't blame you in any way for using the names, I'm not leoncj, but next time come up with your own ideas. Oh, and I'll check your missions pretty soon. Well, due, I'm tunisian, I dont know much surnames of Americans, I played Leoncjs missions and I read his topics and yes I used some of his names. But I'll try to do my own names in the next episodes http://www.behindthename.com/random/ Here's a good name generator for you to use in your next works. Thanks man, and check my missions, the story will end today in an hour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 (edited) I've something to say about this topic. After finishing Life in Los Santos: GFL, I'll take a breath of it. I'll make a new storyline called Thug's life about life of a thug and it will be including decisions and Gta V style too. GFL will be finished today. Just wait, it will contain more than 80 missions with more than 3 decicions. Edited January 14, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. John Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 All right, I played a few of them Just a suggestion: PLEASE TURN THAT GOD DAMN WANTED SYSTEM! Otherwise, the missions are a very neat remake of GTA SA (well, a few of them are). Keep it up. Thanks man, about the Wanted system, explain the problem, also, I'm going to finish this story today and I'll start on the enxt episode. Have fun You see, whenever I go and kill some EGs, I quickly get 1 star. I don't really have time to evade the cops and the EGs keep killing me with their Uzis. You could either remove the wanted stars when designing missions or make the gangs more easier to defeat. Though, I accept the challenge and tried to complete the missions. It's more fun by that way. Only problem is; it could get annoying after a few times. I will try to give you a detailed review on each missions in a few days. I really liked your work. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 (edited) 8 missions are uploaded! Life in Los Santos: Gangster for life episode is FINISHED! Now I'll start working or Thug's life than come back and finish the second and third episodes About the cops heat, use this cheat: AEZAKMI to lose them and HESOYAM to get health and armor. And check my new topic: THug's life http://gtaforums.com/topic/674638-thugs-life/?do=findComment&comment=1064518418 Edited January 14, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. John Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 (edited) I don't really like using cheats, man. I don't think it's fun to play that way. You can turn off the wanted system, there is no harm in it (Unless a mission is dealing with the cops). Just a suggestion. You can design your mission however you want. You are new to DYOM, right? Edited January 14, 2014 by Dr. John Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 The problem is I dont have the backup files, and yeah I'm new in DYOM. You can check my profile and dont forget to check Thug'd life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 14, 2014 Author Share Posted January 14, 2014 Anybody have a bug or something? Just say and I'll try to fix it in the next episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 15, 2014 Author Share Posted January 15, 2014 Can anybody make a logo for me called: Mexican and proud of it? I really need it for the next episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gammoudicj Posted January 16, 2014 Author Share Posted January 16, 2014 (edited) Post changed. Edited February 17, 2014 by gammoudicj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...