AHelmi88 Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 (edited) A big fire happened on the LV entrance, people are screaming and a lot of cars are burned, The way is closed and fire is took off but, Police has not come yet, After a while, Police arrived to the place and began the investigation, They found that Frank is killed, Want to know who is Frank? Play and Discover.Full Pack: Here Chapter 1 (Finished):Mission 1Mission 2Mission 3Mission 4Mission 5Mission 6Chapter 2 (In Progress):Mission 1Mission 2Mission 3 Missions 4 Chapter 1 review: Link by Revolver1-Credits are Spider262 for the mission and Graven for the logo--The MP is finished if I have new ideas I will start an Special Extra part--Spider262 Productions 2013- Edited October 5, 2013 by Spider262 Kilen9999 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 Hey, haven't seen you in a while. Welcome back. OT: I don't understand your story. You said the PROTAGONIST was killed when he returned home, but if he's dead, why the hell is he the protagonist? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terano Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 Good Luck! for Your MP. But You said Protagonist was dead so is your story is horror? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 17, 2013 Author Share Posted September 17, 2013 I mean it, He dead after he returned home, The missions will be someone of his family telling the story of him, Not the first time he had the mark A+ but, His stories as a police officer, The story is big, Likely to be 20 missions, Horror, Drama and Inspection is coming .. Promise ...Added first mission and GFX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 Im that case, you shouldn't have used the word protagonist. Wth is with you using capital letters everywhere? Use it after a full stop (.) not (,) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 18, 2013 Author Share Posted September 18, 2013 Im that case, you shouldn't have used the word protagonist. Wth is with you using capital letters everywhere? Use it after a full stop (.) not (,) I have done what you said and changed some parts of the STORY section, Thank you, I am not a native English speaker, Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 18, 2013 Author Share Posted September 18, 2013 Can any one help me with a trailer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted September 19, 2013 Share Posted September 19, 2013 I thought you could do one yourself. Btw, there is only one mission. To make a trailer you need at least like, what, a chapter? So people can take parts of your missions to make a trailer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 19, 2013 Author Share Posted September 19, 2013 Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted September 19, 2013 Share Posted September 19, 2013 Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school You can't possibly finish all missions in three days. Unless if you are playing 24/24. lol You can't arrange your time to make missions when school started? My school have started and even though this year is hard, I still have some spare time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 19, 2013 Author Share Posted September 19, 2013 Added new mission and changed some parts of the Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school You can't possibly finish all missions in three days. Unless if you are playing 24/24. lol You can't arrange your time to make missions when school started? My school have started and even though this year is hard, I still have some spare time. I will really but, The problem that I return at 4 and have to sleep at 10 or 11, So, When, I eat and do homework, I will not have very big spare time and also, I'm from diabetes, So, Some times, I can not do any thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 19, 2013 Author Share Posted September 19, 2013 -Added Second Mission -Changed headers -Added two new section (Only one is useful) -Started Mission 3 -Bumped topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 19, 2013 Author Share Posted September 19, 2013 Mission 3 has been added and Game play Videos or Walkthroughs are finished and coming tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_GDF Posted September 19, 2013 Share Posted September 19, 2013 Wow, i played the first and it's a really catching story, i liked it :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 19, 2013 Author Share Posted September 19, 2013 Mission 3 is available on DYOM database, Link tomorrow, I'm using mobile Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 20, 2013 Author Share Posted September 20, 2013 Mission 3 is available ... Mission 4 coming tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 22, 2013 Author Share Posted September 22, 2013 -Removed Characters Section. -Updated Media Section Status. -Checked the links and verified them as working and made some changes. -Added a new mission. -Bumped post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 28, 2013 Author Share Posted September 28, 2013 (edited) Fifth mission added Edited September 28, 2013 by Spider262 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 30, 2013 Author Share Posted September 30, 2013 Why do not you play the sixth mission? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTyLeR Posted September 30, 2013 Share Posted September 30, 2013 Hi Dude.. Your Missions are Good,Very Good in fact. Keep It Up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted September 30, 2013 Author Share Posted September 30, 2013 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted October 4, 2013 Author Share Posted October 4, 2013 Added the second mission in Chapter 2! Note: While testing the mission, It crashed, Most of the DYOM missions by others crash, It is sometimes a problem of the game not the mission! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted October 4, 2013 Author Share Posted October 4, 2013 New mission added for today, This is my weekend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver1 Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 I guess you didn't like my review, sorry if it hurted you but I just wanted to help you out by pointing out your mistakes and fix them in your future mission. But still, I will play chapter 2 as soon as you made them all. Best of luck from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted October 4, 2013 Author Share Posted October 4, 2013 I guess you didn't like my review, sorry if it hurted you but I just wanted to help you out by pointing out your mistakes and fix them in your future mission. But still, I will play chapter 2 as soon as you made them all. Best of luck from me. Which review? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted October 5, 2013 Author Share Posted October 5, 2013 Revolver1 has made a review for the missions, I think it is like a guide for me for my next chapter, Read the review here: http://gtaforums.com/topic/452914-dyom-missions-review/?p=1063587377 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_GDF Posted October 6, 2013 Share Posted October 6, 2013 Well, i played the whole story and it gets me confused in some parts! But still being awesome! :3 Great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted October 6, 2013 Author Share Posted October 6, 2013 Well, i played the whole story and it gets me confused in some parts! But still being awesome! :3 Great job Some parts in this storyline, I'm confused of it myself, However, I will try to improve myself with my new coming series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHelmi88 Posted January 3, 2014 Author Share Posted January 3, 2014 (edited) ... Edited April 12, 2014 by Spider262 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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