VC WIP Shine o' Vice

[/\rdooZ]

 

Wait a minute,ain't this Vercetti's turf?

 

Careful observation,son.

 

I thought you and Mr.Vercetti get by pretty well.Care to explain?

 

Didn't I tell you that yesterday?

 

No,you didn't.

 

Then I'll tell you tomorrow.Now get that gun on the back,and start shooting anything and everything while I drive.If it bleeds,you can kill it.

 

Hey,on top of you having only one arm,you're a drunken mess.Don't you think I should stay behind the wheel?

 

The flies that thought they were safe since we had an 80 feet distance underestimated me too.Uncle Phil never misses.Let's go,cowboy!

Well,ain't this fun!

 

*Ninja Edit:New page,new teaser!

 

Edited October 1, 2016 by /\rdooZ

[deltaCJ]

 

Lemme give it a shot:

 

 

 

Ain't this Vercetti's turf?

Damn right it is. I suggest you listen to Uncle Phil and get ready, 'cause sh*t's about to get nasty, son.

I thought you and Vercetti got along with each other?

Ahh, who cares? My only real friend is my good ol' Boomshine: it was always there for me, if ya know what I mean.

...

Yeah, whatever.

Enough talking, boy. Be ready to shoot every darn bastard that comes after us while I drive, got it?

Shouldn't I be the one driving here? I mean, you look like sh*t, don't take me wrong.

Let me make it very clear for you son: never underestimate ol' Phil.

 

 

I kinda like Ardooz's dialogue better

[Blue]

 

 

Wait a minute,ain't this Vercetti's turf?

 

Careful observation,son.

 

I thought you and Mr.Vercetti get by pretty well.Care to explain?

 

Didn't I tell you that yesterday?

 

No,you didn't.

 

Then I'll tell you tomorrow.Now get that gun on the back,and start shooting anything and everything while I drive.If it bleeds,you can kill it.

 

Hey,on top of you having only one arm,you're a drunken mess.Don't you think I should stay behind the wheel?

 

The flies that thought they were safe since we had an 80 feet distance underestimated me too.Uncle Phil never misses.Let's go,cowboy!

Well,ain't this fun!

 

*Ninja Edit:New page,new teaser!

 

 

Put a few spaces between the commas and fix a few English errors and it's great.

Edited October 1, 2016 by NFX

[Speccy]

You guys have come up with some pretty entertaining dialogue, I must say! Most importantly, BEGINit got the format right this time.

 

BEGINit, why not pick the lines that you personally like best from what the guys have provided and edit them into the gxt? Doesn't have to be entirely Ardooz's version or the one Officer Ronson came up with, for example - it could be a mixture of the two.

 

...could be yet another fun way to engage the community

 

Also, I hate to do this but - "new page, new teaser!" haha

[Blue]

I NEED A TEASER FOR MY ECTOPLASM

[Honker1944]

But but rdooz dialogue is better.

Sorry NFX...

[BEGINit]

I'm not affraid to admit regarding the dialogues - I'm like George Lucas of GTA

[Blue]

But but rdooz dialogue is better.

Sorry NFX...

I said his would be great with the correction of a few English errors and some spaces between the ponctuation and the text. Can you not read?

[Honker1944]

^And you always trying to start sh*tstorm. Buy a looser underwear kiddo.

[Nightstalker_]

Massive offtop and drama won't make the mod come out faster.

[Blue]

 

My bad if I sounded harsh back there. Wasn't really my intention. But that comeback was hilarious of you, I got to admit.

 

@BEGINit Keep in mind. WE NEED A TEASER

[Jinx.]

Except the fact that he was rude, I can't see how he wanted to start a sh*tstorm...? He has a point, he didn't mention that rdooz's dialogue sucks. In fact, he liked it, just giving some little criticism.

[Honker1944]

^He tried to provoke me to made rude response to him but I turned it into jocke so nothing had happend. If I don't do that we would have a massive argue on few pages becouse of collabolators. Some of them would join him the rest go with me and topic would be massively polluted.

 

Anyway what about Braindawg timesync. Becouse I recived a response that meant that is up to Begint. Will it be included or not?

[TheMadeMan]

Shut up Everyone!

[marco886]

teaser?

[Braindawg]

Hate to break it to ya lovers but I'll be polishing the dialogue for the English version.

[/\rdooZ]

Hate to break it to ya lovers but I'll be polishing the dialogue for the English version.

That's great to hear!

Hopefully a release is near...

[The Rockstar Gamer 108]

Wowoooo! A Release is near! It's good to hear.

[Blue]

Fock yeah. @Braindawg

 

^He tried to provoke me to made rude response to him but I turned it into jocke so nothing had happend. If I don't do that we would have a massive argue on few pages becouse of collabolators. Some of them would join him the rest go with me and topic would be massively polluted.

Anyway what about Braindawg timesync. Becouse I recived a response that meant that is up to Begint. Will it be included or not?

Yet again, I didn't try to provoke you in anyway. Edited October 2, 2016 by NFX

[ClaudX]

It doesn't matter. Just drop it. Seriously, you people.

[Rented]

I'll come back another time

[Blue]

It doesn't matter. Just drop it. Seriously, you people.

Right'o.

[deltaCJ]

Fock yeah. @Braindawg

 

^He tried to provoke me to made rude response to him but I turned it into jocke so nothing had happend. If I don't do that we would have a massive argue on few pages becouse of collabolators. Some of them would join him the rest go with me and topic would be massively polluted.

Anyway what about Braindawg timesync. Becouse I recived a response that meant that is up to Begint. Will it be included or not?

Yet again, I didn't try to provoke you in anyway.

 

 

You really like to keep the hate going don't you?

 

Anyways....

 

When's the new teaser coming BEGINIt? Make the teaser a in game mission, it's just been cutscenes so far

[Blue]

You really like to keep the hate going don't you?

What? Nah. Can we stop this non sense off topic already as well? It's getting outta hand.

 

Wonder if Speccy has done anything new and didn't get to show us yet. I mentioned before about the Boxville, I might put it in the works pretty soon. This is what I would be aiming for it, by the way:

 

Edited October 2, 2016 by NFX

[Rented]

Looks like a Royal Mail van

[Speccy]

Wonder if Speccy has done anything new and didn't get to show us yet.

 

Nothing exactly "new" as I am spending a lot of time on preparing Car Pack 4. Today I've made a new rear for the Tornado and spent the rest of my time available on damage parts for it. There's a minor reflection bug that is still annoying me, but I'm moving on for now. Currently I have around 4 of the 14 cars lacking damage parts. Stierlitz sent me his cars as promised, so I'm looking forward to those. I want to be done with this soon.

 

Here's the Tornado (v2)

 

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I haven't changed the front so that has remained the same as in my initial design. I don't reckon anyone studied the Oceanic to the extent of being able to spot each difference, but I hope my changes weren't too subtle.

 

 

[Blue]

Looks great.

[menny]

Love your design Speccy

 

Maybe the Wheel Base is a bit too long. That's just my impression ^^

[TheMadeMan]

I also thought about that too!

[Braindawg]

 

 

Working on the first bike in the list, (If the mod doesnt add additional vehicles, they will replace the Freeway and Angel)

 

This is my version (90% accurate) of the Harley Davidson Softail Heritage, made from different versions of the bike. It's far from done and looks clunky right now.

Edited October 3, 2016 by Braindawg