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arch stanton

Summerland

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arch stanton

The day my eyes met the astral

Whirled in this virginic tone and whistled in my ears

No longer earthbound

The dashing beings removed my fear

As I rode the horses of boom and power

 

This, to be only something you would dream of

And to something you'd wonder

But in the reality itself

It's something else which can not express in words

But gloom down from the end of your bed

As it glides along the Summerland skies

As the land below blossoms in golden oak

Silver rivers and cities of the holly land

 

I soon land on the doorstep of his noble

And bow to he who is faceless

As the face with no expression can't express it self

So it lays bear to the fact

And so will the Summerland

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Ziggy455

I just read this and got a very ethereal vibe from it. Perhaps some form of astral projection in the basis, but I could be wrong.

 

 

But gloom down from the end of your bed

As it glides along the Summerland skies

As the land below blossoms in golden oak

Silver rivers and cities of the holly land

 

This paints a very vivid image of astral travel, moving, seeing higher planes, and landing. As we all know we float. It's a very esoteric kind of piece, because not many people would understand perhaps the premise or the theme. But I did, and it's a nice piece. I see a familiar undertone of lack of expression, there is no expression of the noble or Summerland.

 

Either way, I liked it. Poetry's subjective, and there's never really any good or bad -in my opinion anyway.

 

 

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arch stanton

You hit the nail on the head, Ziggy. icon14.gif

 

I've always had an intention on composing a poem as such, but never had the strength to write it as it's a strong topic.

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