Rytuklis Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 (edited) Main Theme: STORY What would you do, if the world suddenly turns against you? What would you do, if only what you wanted to do, was seek the truth, but the truth was too much for you to handle?Follow the story of young and ambitious detective, who is ready to bring the crime lords to their knees.. But how can he succeed, when it turns out that he was kneeling the whole time himself? MISSIONS -[/url] Edited August 30, 2013 by Rytuklis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Pretty interesting. Good luck with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terano Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 It looks Interesting!! All the Best For your New Mission Series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 (edited) I was thinking about making a story simmilar to this. Good luck! Edit: I noticed a little mistake - in the info it says his name is Daniel Parker, but in the characters it says his name is Daniel Peterson? Edited July 19, 2013 by thegtaman531 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted July 19, 2013 Author Share Posted July 19, 2013 I was thinking about making a story simmilar to this. Good luck! Edit: I noticed a little mistake - in the info it says his name is Daniel Parker, but in the characters it says his name is Daniel Peterson? Oh, I see. A little mix up, let me fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uShield Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Looks very good, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted July 19, 2013 Author Share Posted July 19, 2013 First mission added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 One of the best dramatic intros i've seen, Rytuklis. I noticed some grammar mistakes but they don't matter much. This will be an awesome MP if you could catch that Heavy Rain feel. Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uShield Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Good job, I'll give it 9/10, just because the moving cutscenes were overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_GDF Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 It looks really awesome, hope it is what it looks like :3 Nice, wish you the best luck with this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 30, 2013 Author Share Posted August 30, 2013 This will be continued, story updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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