Notna Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 (edited) Finished playing it all, and I can for first, say that I have never seen a mission pack - hell, I've never seen a professional game or a film with such a great plot full of twists and turns. I already told you of my near death experience in the second mission, I felt a very new feeling and had to stop the game just to think for a second how awesome it was what I was playing - but from "playing", I can go to the only flaw of this mission pack. Cutscenes. CUTSCENES EVERYWHERE. You know, you're the best storyteller and best cutscene maker this industry has ever seen, but there literally was missions with NO gameplay. Hell, I dare, if there, in the whole mission pack was 20 minutes of gameplay, I'm Michael Jackson. But then again... to the awesomeness. The story got more complex with every damn 5 second cutscene and with that I came more and more amazed. The gameplay it had was just enough. About the story, the twists came out of nowhere. Though it was pretty obvious it was Ethan who Nick was working for. You literally made me jump of my chair when Ethan blew his car killing Max. There was just so many ways the story could have went so it was impossible to expect what would happen next. Also the ending was not an usual happy ending "protagonist got the briefcase, killed the bad guy and lived happily ever after with his friends". NO. EVERYBODY FUKKEN DIED. The only one to survive of the whole character list was Brock, ending up in prison and probably got the death sentence anyway. And the only other one to survive was Mr. Tolli from the casino, who as well probably hanged himself after hearing what he had caused to happen. One thing still bothers me. WHAT WAS IN THE f*ckING BRIEFCASE. Maybe a new chemical element? Like Jacknium or Ethanium. Or maybe SF was right about the sex tape. Or what else could be in there? A pocket size, 37 dollar Johnny Cash guitar? Or Ethan's American Pie collection? We will never know. Once again, Jimmy, you have created 2 hours of pure enjoyment. Holy f*cking sh*t I'm still thrilled and shaking. It was a bit too awesome. Edited September 1, 2013 by Notna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 Damn. I forgot to answer the question "What was in the case?" I've 2 guesses: 1. Instruction to bulid a machine that let you take over the entire universe. 2. GTA V Limited Edition. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 1, 2013 Author Share Posted September 1, 2013 @ SatournFan - Thanks a lot on your feedback, man. I can't say how glad I am it actually came through to you Really thanks for the kind words About the cutscenes - Yeah. There is really a lot of them in this one, but I didn't really have an option cause I wanted to make as much complex story as I could and I couldn't have accomplished that without the cutscenes carrying most of the load. Well, I just hope it didn't ruin the story or the MP for anyone though. Lol, a sex tape? I gotta admit I can't argue with your statement since it has valid arguments holding it, but damn @ Notna - Holy sh*t, that was one big feedback That's why I like your feedbacks, they're so up and down, all around kind of feedbacks where you literally touch every single element of what you've just played Thanks a lot on it, man and I'm especially glad you liked it so much Again, sorry for the cutscene overload, but you know, I guess it didn't do much damage to the overall MP Was it obvious that Ethan worked with Nick? Wow, nice going, man. I didn't think anyone would've guessed that. And you're right, Brock got nailed by the police in a storage full of dead people with nobody around to stand up for him and say he didn't kill all those people, so.. He definitely got the death sentence. About your guess, new chemical elements - Nice imagination Maybe, maybe @ WillBe - Lol, yeah, well, it would've been cool if it was number 2, I guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danik18 Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 (edited) I think I just noticed something : The characters are from you're previous mission packs,right ? Miles is from Kidnapped,Nick is from The Runaway,I guess Will too,then Shane from Jack Frezer,etc. Am I right,or it's just me? Edited September 1, 2013 by danik18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 I think I just noticed something : The characters are from you're previous mission packs,right ? Miles is from Kidnapped,Nick is from The Runaway,I guess Will too,then Shane from Jack Frezer,etc. Am I right,or it's just me? It's just you, or should I say skins. Check yourself, in Kidnapped there's no Miles, and in Runaway there's no Nick etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 I like this mission series, I like the story and the characters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danik18 Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 I think I just noticed something : The characters are from you're previous mission packs,right ? Miles is from Kidnapped,Nick is from The Runaway,I guess Will too,then Shane from Jack Frezer,etc. Am I right,or it's just me? It's just you, or should I say skins. Check yourself, in Kidnapped there's no Miles, and in Runaway there's no Nick etc. You don't get it.I mean the skins.Miles has the same skin as the Kidnapped protag.Etc. Got it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 I think I just noticed something : The characters are from you're previous mission packs,right ? Miles is from Kidnapped,Nick is from The Runaway,I guess Will too,then Shane from Jack Frezer,etc. Am I right,or it's just me? It's just you, or should I say skins. Check yourself, in Kidnapped there's no Miles, and in Runaway there's no Nick etc. You don't get it.I mean the skins.Miles has the same skin as the Kidnapped protag.Etc. Got it? That's actually not a surprise, San Andreas doesn't have a sh*tload of skins, that's why Jimmy used those that he has already used in the previous mission packs. Now, let the off-topic end, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 1, 2013 Author Share Posted September 1, 2013 @ danik - As SatournFan said, there is unfortunately not many skins and of course some of them are the same for different characters from different mission packs. @ SanAndreasDYOM - Thanks a lot, man I appreciate your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 I played last mission now. YOU. ARE. AWESOME. the best ever mission pack, the best ever. heres a cookie and and !!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 1, 2013 Author Share Posted September 1, 2013 Thanks a lot on the feedback, man I'm really glad that you liked the series so much Thanks for playing it. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 any new mission pack soon jimmy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 2, 2013 Author Share Posted September 2, 2013 any new mission pack soon jimmy? Nah, man. I have nothing planned right now since my college year starts soon. I'm out probably until Spring of next year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 4, 2013 Author Share Posted September 4, 2013 (edited) Hey, guys. Since I had time yesterday, I made this questionaire about this mission pack now when it's over. So, I'd like whoever played the mission pack to fill in this questionaire when and if you can Note that there are no ''wrong'' answers, it's a regular subjective questionaire. ALSO NOTE: Anyone who hasn't played the mission pack, but intends to play it or didn't finish it yet, don't read the questionaire since you will spoil the whole story for yourselves. Off to the questions: 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as: a) Brave b) Stupid c) Smart d) Indifferent 2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: (You can choose more than 1 answer) a) Smart b) Humble c) Bad d) Careful e) Laid back f) Dangerous g) Stupid 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? 4.) When it comes to the team (Including Jack and Ethan), who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? 5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? 6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? 8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? 9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? 10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? Edited September 4, 2013 by Jimmy_Leppard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 I'm not putting it in spoilers, because f*ck you, that's why. 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as: a) Brave b) Stupid c) Smart d) Indifferent Answer - of all this adjectives I'd choose 'Smart'. 2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: (You can choose more than 1 answer) a) Smart b) Humble c) Bad d) Careful e) Laid back f) Dangerous g) Stupid Answer - 'Smart', 'Careful'. I think that all of your protagonists (even CJ) were smart and careful at one point. 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? Answer - usually when you introduce a Toreno guy (especially in your latest packs), he turns out to be a great guy overall. But this time I don't think that everything would change if he was one of the robbers. 4.) When it comes to the team (Including Jack and Ethan), who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? Answer - from the very beginning Nick was that fishy kind of guy whom I wouldn't trust (he was the one who sweared the most, too). But then again there is Will. I guess, one of them. 5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? Answer - actually it was necessary. As Ethan said himself, Nick was the only one who knew his whereabouts, so it was at least clever to kill Nick. 6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? Answer - aside from Brock, I guess Shane was the smartest of the remaining characters. 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? Answer - I actually couldn't believe everyone will die, excluding Brock. I thought that at least Jack would not be killed. 8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? Answer - was he a bad guy? I doubt. 9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? Answer - I wouldn't be anyone, since they all died, again excluding Brock, but I don't think he became a free man after he was arrested. 10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? Answer - Shane and Jack should have stayed alive. They were good guys overall, I don't even understand why they died in the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 Off to the questions: 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as: a) Brave b) Stupid c) Smart d) Indifferent B. 2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: (You can choose more than 1 answer) a) Smart b) Humble c) Bad d) Careful e) Laid back f) Dangerous g) Stupid F 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? I'm not quite sure, ill come back to this one later. 4.) When it comes to the team (Including Jack and Ethan), who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? Ethan. He lied to pretty much everyone in the team. 5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? No. It was a senseless killing because he had nothing to do with the case, or Ethan's escape. 6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? Jack. 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? I thought Will and Ethan would die, and everyone else would survive. 8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? Real bad guy. I could sense him betraying the rest of the team when they all teamed up at the end. 9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? I would be Brock, so then I could interrogate Will and ask him where he put the case. 10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? Nope. I think that it was a near-perfect ending. Maybe Brock could of died so absolutely nobody would know about the case, and it will remain a mystery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 4, 2013 Author Share Posted September 4, 2013 Thanks about the answers, guys. I gotta say I like the way you think As for SatournFan - Shane was a bad guy to an extent since he was the first one to turn his back on the team - In the first mission, he locks them out in the casino and escapes and after that he returns to force Brock and Max to give up and leave the case to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 As for SatournFan - Shane was a bad guy to an extent since he was the first one to turn his back on the team - In the first mission, he locks them out in the casino and escapes and after that he returns to force Brock and Max to give up and leave the case to him. I don't see him as a bad guy actually. Well, maybe that's only me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 4, 2013 Author Share Posted September 4, 2013 As for SatournFan - Shane was a bad guy to an extent since he was the first one to turn his back on the team - In the first mission, he locks them out in the casino and escapes and after that he returns to force Brock and Max to give up and leave the case to him. I don't see him as a bad guy actually. Well, maybe that's only me. I can see that, that's why I wrote ''to an extent'' because as for me who made the mission pack, Shane isn't the real bad guy either and that's the reason I asked that question cause I'm very interested in how people experienced Shane's character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as: a) Brave b) Stupid c) Smart d) Indifferent my answer is smart. 2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: (You can choose more than 1 answer) a) Smart b) Humble c) Bad d) Careful e) Laid back f) Dangerous g) Stupid my answer is smart and dangerous. 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? -no, jack wouldnt do anything special. 4.) When it comes to the team (Including Jack and Ethan), who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? -ethan because he lied to every body. 5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? -yes, he know where is ethan and because he need to kill him that he stays secret. 6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? -brock ofc 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? -shane, cobalt and will should die and brock and jack live. 8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? -good-bad. sometimes good, sometimes bad. 9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? -I would be brock or nick, but I would not work for ethan. 10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? -yes because they are all gangsters and they all should be dead or in prison. well not brock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 5, 2013 Share Posted September 5, 2013 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as: a) Brave b) Stupid c) Smart d) Indifferent Smart, after all, he was the only one who actually knew what he was doing. 2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: a) Smart b) Humble c) Bad d) Careful e) Laid back f) Dangerous g) Stupid Dangerous and smart. 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? If Jack was there the first mission would have been the last mission. 4.) When it comes to the team, who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? Ethan since he lied all the time. 5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? Not really, plus Nick was working for him and the only one to help him and then boom. Dead. 6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? Brock. 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? I was pretty sure that Nick, Shane, Will and Cobalt would die in the end, and I kinda thought Max, Ethan and Jack to survive the whole thing but I was 100% sure Brock would survive and live happily ever after. 8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? Good bad guy, I thought he was a dick in the beginning but when he died, I found myself sad. 9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? I would have been Shane; I wouldn't have left with the briefcase and none of the events would have taken place since everybody would have gotten their cut of the money. 10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? Justice served pretty much, all crime stories end like this at somepoint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 5, 2013 Author Share Posted September 5, 2013 Thanks on the filling in the questionaire, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danik18 Posted September 6, 2013 Share Posted September 6, 2013 (edited) 1.) Would you describe Brock's actions throughout the mission pack as:a) Braveb) Stupidc) Smartd) Indifferent SmartSmart,sometimes Brave.2.) Would you describe Brock's character as: (You can choose more than 1 answer)a) Smartb) Humblec) Badd) Carefule) Laid backf) Dangerousg) Stupid Smart 3.) Do you think the things that happened during the heist wouldn't have happened if Jack was with the team? Why? I guess if Jack would be there,well,I still think the things would happen like they did,because,well,they must have receive some money from the guy who tasked them to steal it,probablly more than Jack gave them.4.) When it comes to the team (Including Jack and Ethan), who do you think was the most untruthful guy of them all? Why? I think it was,well,Ethan.5.) Was it necessary for Ethan to kill Nick? If yes, why? If no, why? Not really,as he lost his help with killing him.6.) Who do you think was the smartest person in the mission pack (Or has made the most right choices)? Shane.That sneaky bastard....No one excepted for him to steal the case,and I guess he used that,but I think Will was the smartest. 7.) Before playing the last chapter of the mission pack, which characters did you think will die and which did you think will stay alive at the end? Well,I pretty much knew that the backstabbers,I mean Nick,Will and the others will die,it was pretty obvious.8.) As the overall character, would you rate Shane Paxton as a ''good'' bad guy or the real bad guy? Good bad guy.9.) Now when you know where every character's story ends, if you could be one of them, who would you be and why? Also, would you do exactly as the character in the story did or would you take a different approach at some points of the story? I would be Jack,the rich guy...10.) Do you think the ending can be stamped as ''Justice served'' or do you think someone else should've died or that someone else should've stayed alive? Why and who? Yea,it could be stamped like that. Edited September 6, 2013 by danik18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 6, 2013 Author Share Posted September 6, 2013 Thanks on the answers, danik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_GDF Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 O.O CHAPTER 3 IS REALLY f*ckING MIND-BLOWING! One of the best DYOM storylines i've ever played, for sure! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 O.O CHAPTER 3 IS REALLY f*ckING MIND-BLOWING! One of the best DYOM storylines i've ever played, for sure! Thanks, Martin I appreciate your feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danik18 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 (edited) The best storyline I played (No Offense) was "The Runaway" Edited September 7, 2013 by danik18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 The best storyline I played (No Offense) was "The Runaway" No offense taken, man Everyone has their own favorite mission pack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abeer Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 (edited) First I thought of rating but then I realized that you are beyond that and it won't be right to bind someone creative like you with numbers. Overall comments: Q: What happened to me after I played Jimmy Leppard Mission Series “The Platinum Circle”? Ans: On the left side of brain there was nothing right and on the right side of brain there was nothing left Do take that as a positive feed back Thanks Edited September 11, 2013 by Abeer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 11, 2013 Author Share Posted September 11, 2013 First I thought of rating but then I realized that you are beyond that and it won't be right to bind someone creative like you with numbers. Overall comments: Q: What happened to me after I played Jimmy Leppard Mission Series “The Platinum Circle”? Ans: On the left side of brain there was nothing right and on the right side of brain there was nothing left Do take that as a positive feed back Thanks Lol, man, that's the funniest feedback I've gotten in a long long time. Thanks a lot, really. Sorry about the brain though Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...