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Mission series status: FINISHED

 

Play the missions and don't forget to give me feedback about them. biggrin.gif


Mission list:

Chapter 1: Masterminds

1.) Introduction
2.) Rat's net
3.) Into the pocket
4.) Watch your back
5.) Stealing the stolen
6.) Catch me if you can
7.) Back to back
8.) Suburban mayhem

Chapter 2: Back and forth

1.) On the side
2.) Triple turn
3.) Divided thoughts
4.) Insuring the spot
5.) No remorse
6.) Bargaining position
7.) When you turn your back
8. A goner

Chapter 3: Dust in the wind

1.) Damage control
2.) Better offer
3.) Long overdue
4.) Reign of chaos

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But....You Retired mercie_blink.gif

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But....You Retired mercie_blink.gif

Yeah, that was a long time before Swiping Kings wink.gif I'm back for some time now smile.gif

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I like the plot, and i'll play it tomorrow. By the way, nice theme song! icon14.gif As always! Rock 'n' roll forever. wink.gif

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I'm downloading the intro now! welcome back Jimmy biggrin.gif

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Didn't know you were planning another MP so fast. As always, i'll keep up with this. smile.gif

 

So, the intro wasn't much interesting to be honest. It's a good way to introduce us to the characters but it didn't feel "complex" or something like that. But i understand that it's the start so i'll expect more of it, afterall it's the MP that has most twists and cliffhangers.

 

Rating: 7.5/10

 

Just out of curiosity, is the plot inspired by a movie?

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@Andrej - Thanks a lot, man smile.gif Looking forward to your feedbacks smile.gif And yeah, of course, Rock N Roll forever icon14.gif

 

@Platinum Card - Thank you, man. It's good to see you around here too smile.gif

 

@Zizo - Wow, thanks for the quick feedback and a very high rating to start things off smile.gif Yeah, I made the intro short and simple just to introduce the characters. I think this is the shortest intro I've done for any of my mission packs, but that was the point. I didn't want to rush into the thing, I just wanted to set up the plot first so you know what it's about cause, as I said, it gets complex smile.gif And actually no. It is somewhat inspired by a mission pack I did with a lot of designers a while back. ''The Tale of Jack Frazer''. We came up with a similar story back then, but this is fairly different after all. I wanted to do something like this for a long time though. I like when a mission pack has a lot of twists and cliffhangers, so.. smile.gif

 

Just a heads up. The plot isn't finished yet. I'm still in the process of ''tidying it up'', so I can't promise you how fast I'll be able to make the missions, but I'll try not to have too big spans from one mission release to another. smile.gif

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I played the intro and judging from it, it’s a high-class heist mission
It was cutscene only so I won’t be able to rate it but all I can say is that it was a well balanced and written cutscene
I bid you all the best for your mission pack

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Jimmy Leppard is back cool.gif

I played the intro and judging from it, it’s an high class heist mission ph34r.gif

It was cutscene only so I won’t be able to rate it but all I can say is that it was a well balance and written cutscene monocle.gif

I bid you all the best for your mission pack icon14.gif

Yes, I'm back again smile.gif

 

Yes, you're right. It's a high class heist, but just for the info, the heist itself isn't really what you should be focusing on. I won't say anything else, but just for the record, heist isn't something that triggers upcoming events. It's something else wink.gif

 

And no problem, man. Looking forward to your ratings and feedbacks in the upcoming missions smile.gif Thanks for the support smile.gif

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Update: 2nd mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks on the missions, guys wink.gif
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Okay, so the story is a lot better now, as expected. I liked that sudden twist in the end, at first i thought that they just won't find it, i like how you made it unpredictable. smile.gif Though i found it surprising how they already did it from the start, i think it could've been better if it was executed in the middle of the chapter, that would've been interesting. icon14.gif

Anyway, sadly the gameplay wasn't good, as usual, i mean there could've been a lot more to the gunfight, i actually was able to just avoid them and run to the exit, and repetetive actors. confused.gif

 

Rating: 7.5/10

 

I tried to be as detailed as i could this time. Honestly, i feel like there isn't much effort put on the gameplay side. If there was a balance between that and the story i'd propably give this a near-perfect score.

 

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Okay, so the story is a lot better now, as expected. I liked that sudden twist in the end, at first i thought that they just won't find it, i like how you made it unpredictable. smile.gif Though i found it surprising how they already did it from the start, i think it could've been better if it was executed in the middle of the chapter, that would've been interesting. icon14.gif

Anyway, sadly the gameplay wasn't good, as usual, i mean there could've been a lot more to the gunfight, i actually was able to just avoid them and run to the exit, and repetetive actors. confused.gif

 

Rating: 7.5/10

 

I tried to be as detailed as i could this time. Honestly, i feel like there isn't much effort put on the gameplay side. If there was a balance between that and the story i'd propably give this a near-perfect score.

As I said, there will be twists everywhere possible, that's what this is about smile.gif

 

And I already said that the heist will be the beginning of everything and it isn't really important. The team were told there is an easy way in (we don't know which), but that the way out should be tricky, which it was. I didn't want to put different actors since it's only security which also isn't so important and I'm plainning on having a lot of main characters, so I didn't want to waste skins on guards etc.

 

Anyway, thanks for another high rating, I appreciate the constructive criticism. There may have been something else to the gunfight, but you know, it's an ordinary casino, ordinary not so trained guards and 6 highly specialized dudes who know why they're there and what they want, so.. I wanted to really make it like Professionals (team) > amateurs (guards/security) and make it for everyone to see the difference.

 

However, thanks on the fast feedbacks from you, man smile.gif

 

More missions on the way.

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Update: 3rd mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys smile.gif
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OMG how I didnt see this? wow.gif

 

jimmy your back, YES !! . I will play the missions soon and give feedback icon14.gif

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The third mission is the best so far. The story is very good and i like the way it's going. And since there's no gameplay this time, there's really nothing bad about the mission.

 

Rating: 8.5/10

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@nitrousoxide - Thanks, man smile.gif Looking forward to your feedback smile.gif

 

@Zizo - Thanks for the highest rating so far. Yeah, well, the third mission is all about setting the course until the rest of the chapter.. sort of. And you also get more info about the case wink.gif

 

More missions on the way, prepare for some major turns and twists wink.gif

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Jimmy I really enjoy the writing effort that you put into your missions. Everything flows really well in connection with the plot. it's something I often look for when playing missions. I've enjoyed the first three missions as I'm very into cutscenes/story part of mission packs. I can't wait till the action picks up.

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Jimmy I really enjoy the writing effort that you put into your missions. Everything flows really well in connection with the plot. it's something I often look for when playing missions. I've enjoyed the first three missions as I'm very into cutscenes/story part of mission packs. I can't wait till the action picks up.

Thanks a lot for your kind words, man smile.gif I'm trying to keep it as interesting as I can biggrin.gif

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Update: 4th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me the feedbacks, guys smile.gif
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I just played mission 4. 9.5/10 I love the story. sh*t get serious

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I just played mission 4. 9.5/10 I love the story. sh*t get serious

Wow, thanks for the highest rating so far, man smile.gif I'm glad you liked it so much.

 

Also,

 

Update: 5th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks smile.gif

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Holy sh*t, Jimmy is back!

 

Haha anyway, I will definitely play this mission pack. You always create a great missionpack. Kind of jealous of you. Good luck with this Jimmy.

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Great story Jimmy
It was like I was watching a movie with subtitles
It was very well written and I loved suspense and twist you have given to it
Overall these are wonderful missions added to collection of Mr. Jimmy Leppard missions

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@ -S-hark21 - Hey, man. I haven't seen you for a while smile.gif Thanks a lot, man. I'm looking forward to your feedbacks smile.gifYou don't have to be jealous of me smile.gif

 

@ Abeer - Thanks a lot on the support, man smile.gif Haha, thanks on the cookies too smile.gif

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Update: 6th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys wink.gif
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Update: 7th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and feel free to give me feedbacks about the missions, guys smile.gif
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Okay, this is the time when i get really amazed by the story, i can't say more. The writing, cutscenes, twists, they are perfect, it's close to a movie. happy.gif

 

Rating: 9/10

 

So, i guess the next mission would be the last for the chapter?

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Okay, this is the time when i get really amazed by the story, i can't say more. The writing, cutscenes, twists, they are perfect, it's close to a movie. happy.gif

 

Rating: 9/10

 

So, i guess the next mission would be the last for the chapter?

Oh, thanks a lot for the quick feedback, man smile.gif i really appreciate that and I'm glad that I finally got to you completely with this smile.gif

 

That's correct, the 8th mission will be the last mission of chapter 1. You can expect a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 1 which is actually gonna be like an intro or a pointer to chapter 2, story-wise of course smile.gif

 

Stay tuned for more missions, guys smile.gif

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Update: 8th mission uploaded. Chapter 1 is complete. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys smile.gif.

 

EDIT: ZIP file uploaded.

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That chapter ending was the best! The gameplay finally got worked up, it's very good this time, i liked how it was in-game when they were talking and the cops came. But the story really got me thinking this time, it was a nice way to end it. I think this could be your best project so far. icon14.gif

 

Rating: ♛ 10/10 ♛

 

I hope the next chapter comes quick! biggrin.gif

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