Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 5, 2013 Share Posted July 5, 2013 (edited) Mission series status: FINISHED Play the missions and don't forget to give me feedback about them. Mission list: Chapter 1: Masterminds1.) Introduction2.) Rat's net3.) Into the pocket4.) Watch your back5.) Stealing the stolen6.) Catch me if you can7.) Back to back8.) Suburban mayhemChapter 2: Back and forth1.) On the side2.) Triple turn3.) Divided thoughts 4.) Insuring the spot5.) No remorse6.) Bargaining position7.) When you turn your back8. A gonerChapter 3: Dust in the wind1.) Damage control2.) Better offer3.) Long overdue4.) Reign of chaos Edited March 27, 2017 by Jimmy_Leppard The Odyssey 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted July 5, 2013 Share Posted July 5, 2013 But....You Retired Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 5, 2013 Author Share Posted July 5, 2013 But....You Retired Yeah, that was a long time before Swiping Kings I'm back for some time now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted July 5, 2013 Share Posted July 5, 2013 I like the plot, and i'll play it tomorrow. By the way, nice theme song! As always! Rock 'n' roll forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum Card Posted July 5, 2013 Share Posted July 5, 2013 I'm downloading the intro now! welcome back Jimmy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 Didn't know you were planning another MP so fast. As always, i'll keep up with this. So, the intro wasn't much interesting to be honest. It's a good way to introduce us to the characters but it didn't feel "complex" or something like that. But i understand that it's the start so i'll expect more of it, afterall it's the MP that has most twists and cliffhangers. Rating: 7.5/10 Just out of curiosity, is the plot inspired by a movie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 6, 2013 Author Share Posted July 6, 2013 @Andrej - Thanks a lot, man Looking forward to your feedbacks And yeah, of course, Rock N Roll forever @Platinum Card - Thank you, man. It's good to see you around here too @Zizo - Wow, thanks for the quick feedback and a very high rating to start things off Yeah, I made the intro short and simple just to introduce the characters. I think this is the shortest intro I've done for any of my mission packs, but that was the point. I didn't want to rush into the thing, I just wanted to set up the plot first so you know what it's about cause, as I said, it gets complex And actually no. It is somewhat inspired by a mission pack I did with a lot of designers a while back. ''The Tale of Jack Frazer''. We came up with a similar story back then, but this is fairly different after all. I wanted to do something like this for a long time though. I like when a mission pack has a lot of twists and cliffhangers, so.. Just a heads up. The plot isn't finished yet. I'm still in the process of ''tidying it up'', so I can't promise you how fast I'll be able to make the missions, but I'll try not to have too big spans from one mission release to another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abeer Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 (edited) I played the intro and judging from it, it’s a high-class heist mission It was cutscene only so I won’t be able to rate it but all I can say is that it was a well balanced and written cutscene I bid you all the best for your mission pack Edited July 11, 2016 by Abeer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 6, 2013 Author Share Posted July 6, 2013 Jimmy Leppard is back I played the intro and judging from it, it’s an high class heist mission It was cutscene only so I won’t be able to rate it but all I can say is that it was a well balance and written cutscene I bid you all the best for your mission pack Yes, I'm back again Yes, you're right. It's a high class heist, but just for the info, the heist itself isn't really what you should be focusing on. I won't say anything else, but just for the record, heist isn't something that triggers upcoming events. It's something else And no problem, man. Looking forward to your ratings and feedbacks in the upcoming missions Thanks for the support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 6, 2013 Author Share Posted July 6, 2013 Update: 2nd mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks on the missions, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 Okay, so the story is a lot better now, as expected. I liked that sudden twist in the end, at first i thought that they just won't find it, i like how you made it unpredictable. Though i found it surprising how they already did it from the start, i think it could've been better if it was executed in the middle of the chapter, that would've been interesting. Anyway, sadly the gameplay wasn't good, as usual, i mean there could've been a lot more to the gunfight, i actually was able to just avoid them and run to the exit, and repetetive actors. Rating: 7.5/10 I tried to be as detailed as i could this time. Honestly, i feel like there isn't much effort put on the gameplay side. If there was a balance between that and the story i'd propably give this a near-perfect score. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 7, 2013 Author Share Posted July 7, 2013 Okay, so the story is a lot better now, as expected. I liked that sudden twist in the end, at first i thought that they just won't find it, i like how you made it unpredictable. Though i found it surprising how they already did it from the start, i think it could've been better if it was executed in the middle of the chapter, that would've been interesting. Anyway, sadly the gameplay wasn't good, as usual, i mean there could've been a lot more to the gunfight, i actually was able to just avoid them and run to the exit, and repetetive actors. Rating: 7.5/10 I tried to be as detailed as i could this time. Honestly, i feel like there isn't much effort put on the gameplay side. If there was a balance between that and the story i'd propably give this a near-perfect score. As I said, there will be twists everywhere possible, that's what this is about And I already said that the heist will be the beginning of everything and it isn't really important. The team were told there is an easy way in (we don't know which), but that the way out should be tricky, which it was. I didn't want to put different actors since it's only security which also isn't so important and I'm plainning on having a lot of main characters, so I didn't want to waste skins on guards etc. Anyway, thanks for another high rating, I appreciate the constructive criticism. There may have been something else to the gunfight, but you know, it's an ordinary casino, ordinary not so trained guards and 6 highly specialized dudes who know why they're there and what they want, so.. I wanted to really make it like Professionals (team) > amateurs (guards/security) and make it for everyone to see the difference. However, thanks on the fast feedbacks from you, man More missions on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 7, 2013 Author Share Posted July 7, 2013 Update: 3rd mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted July 7, 2013 Share Posted July 7, 2013 OMG how I didnt see this? jimmy your back, YES !! . I will play the missions soon and give feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 7, 2013 Share Posted July 7, 2013 The third mission is the best so far. The story is very good and i like the way it's going. And since there's no gameplay this time, there's really nothing bad about the mission. Rating: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 7, 2013 Author Share Posted July 7, 2013 @nitrousoxide - Thanks, man Looking forward to your feedback @Zizo - Thanks for the highest rating so far. Yeah, well, the third mission is all about setting the course until the rest of the chapter.. sort of. And you also get more info about the case More missions on the way, prepare for some major turns and twists Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum Card Posted July 7, 2013 Share Posted July 7, 2013 Jimmy I really enjoy the writing effort that you put into your missions. Everything flows really well in connection with the plot. it's something I often look for when playing missions. I've enjoyed the first three missions as I'm very into cutscenes/story part of mission packs. I can't wait till the action picks up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 7, 2013 Author Share Posted July 7, 2013 Jimmy I really enjoy the writing effort that you put into your missions. Everything flows really well in connection with the plot. it's something I often look for when playing missions. I've enjoyed the first three missions as I'm very into cutscenes/story part of mission packs. I can't wait till the action picks up. Thanks a lot for your kind words, man I'm trying to keep it as interesting as I can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 8, 2013 Author Share Posted July 8, 2013 Update: 4th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me the feedbacks, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 I just played mission 4. 9.5/10 I love the story. sh*t get serious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 8, 2013 Author Share Posted July 8, 2013 I just played mission 4. 9.5/10 I love the story. sh*t get serious Wow, thanks for the highest rating so far, man I'm glad you liked it so much. Also, Update: 5th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 Holy sh*t, Jimmy is back! Haha anyway, I will definitely play this mission pack. You always create a great missionpack. Kind of jealous of you. Good luck with this Jimmy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abeer Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 (edited) Great story Jimmy It was like I was watching a movie with subtitles It was very well written and I loved suspense and twist you have given to it Overall these are wonderful missions added to collection of Mr. Jimmy Leppard missions Edited July 11, 2016 by Abeer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 9, 2013 Author Share Posted July 9, 2013 @ -S-hark21 - Hey, man. I haven't seen you for a while Thanks a lot, man. I'm looking forward to your feedbacks You don't have to be jealous of me @ Abeer - Thanks a lot on the support, man Haha, thanks on the cookies too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 9, 2013 Author Share Posted July 9, 2013 Update: 6th mission uploaded. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 9, 2013 Author Share Posted July 9, 2013 Update: 7th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and feel free to give me feedbacks about the missions, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 Okay, this is the time when i get really amazed by the story, i can't say more. The writing, cutscenes, twists, they are perfect, it's close to a movie. Rating: 9/10 So, i guess the next mission would be the last for the chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 9, 2013 Author Share Posted July 9, 2013 Okay, this is the time when i get really amazed by the story, i can't say more. The writing, cutscenes, twists, they are perfect, it's close to a movie. Rating: 9/10 So, i guess the next mission would be the last for the chapter? Oh, thanks a lot for the quick feedback, man i really appreciate that and I'm glad that I finally got to you completely with this That's correct, the 8th mission will be the last mission of chapter 1. You can expect a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 1 which is actually gonna be like an intro or a pointer to chapter 2, story-wise of course Stay tuned for more missions, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 10, 2013 Author Share Posted July 10, 2013 (edited) Update: 8th mission uploaded. Chapter 1 is complete. Play the missions, have fun and give me feedbacks, guys . EDIT: ZIP file uploaded. Edited July 10, 2013 by Jimmy_Leppard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 That chapter ending was the best! The gameplay finally got worked up, it's very good this time, i liked how it was in-game when they were talking and the cops came. But the story really got me thinking this time, it was a nice way to end it. I think this could be your best project so far. Rating: ♛ 10/10 ♛ I hope the next chapter comes quick! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
