Target13 Posted June 26, 2013 Share Posted June 26, 2013 (edited) Target13 Presents A Gang Of Cowboys in Bone County worry about the safety of their town Betty Shore, A Biker Gang called The Bone County Bikers are taking over all peaceful towns in the County. John Cooper promises everyone in the town that Betty Shore will be safe. Characters John Cooper John is one of the Bravest man in his town. After coming out from Jail he decided to become good. He helps the Local Sheriff & Does everything to keep Betty Shore peaceful. He formed a gang called the Bone County Cowboys with all the Town People to keep Bone County safe & Betty Shore safe. Adam Wesley Adam is the Vice President of the Gang. He is also the planner. He plans routes & knows all the ways out. He provide John with back up, Father Micheal Micheal is the priest in the Local Church. but he also is a soldier in the Gang. He believes that he is helping God by killing the Devils on Earth. Carlson Jones Carlson is the Mechanic. He fixes cars & bikes & provides John with Transportation. Bertha Jones Bertha is Carlson's adopted Daughter. She is going to Law school & is smart around the cops. Grandma Lisa Lisa is John's Grandmother. She is the best baker in the town but has a serious drinking problem. Pete Pete is a mechanic in Las Payasadas. he is a friend of Carlson & provides him with Oil. he decides to move to Betty Shore since its the only town not taken over by Bikers. Shawn 'Big Shawn' Davis Shawn was formally a popular Cowboy in Fort Carson. After Fort Carson was taken over by Bikers, he lost his Popularity because he couldn't save his Town. He Moved to Las Venturas where he lost weight, Wore Decent Clothing & Got Rich. Now he owns a Casino & is willing to Help John save Betty Shore. Big Papa Big Papa is a fat biker who planned all the kidnapping. He lives in Tierra Robada. He's brother is Sharp Snake Sharp Snake Sharp Snake is Big Papa's brother. After seeing his Brother die, he swore revenge on the Cowboys. Missions 1-Welcome To Betty Shore 2-Local Sunday 3-Protecting Motels 4-Big Shawn 5-Saving The Ladies 6-The Final Fight Credits Leo28 (For his Inspiring Cowboy Hero series) PatrickW & Dutchy3010 (Design Your Own Mission) Target13 (Missions & GFX) DYOM Community (For all the Support) Thanks for the support everyone! The first MP has ended & the second one will start soon. Stay Tuned for the upcoming DLC Cowboys Vs Zombies, Featuring a new Protagonist & a new story with a lot of twists! Edited October 18, 2019 by Target13 VikingEVM 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
basket_boy123 Posted June 26, 2013 Share Posted June 26, 2013 I'm definitely playing this, it looks promising Good luck with the mission pack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aflien Posted June 26, 2013 Share Posted June 26, 2013 I'm going to play it. Better don't let me down. Hehe... I think its best to just make missions and ignore other things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gummy Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Oh damn, I was actually working on something like this, good luck though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted June 27, 2013 Author Share Posted June 27, 2013 Oh damn, I was actually working on something like this, good luck though. Oops, Sorry Man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 @Prince - The fastest one always wins . On topic - Now this is what you should do here, not create useless topics, but make missions packs . Best of luck with this, might try it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Sounds pretty cool. Will play when I get CLEO back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted June 27, 2013 Author Share Posted June 27, 2013 @thegtaman531 Lost your Cleo? @Rytuklis Thanks Man. Looking Forward to your feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 @thegtaman531 Lost your Cleo? @Rytuklis Thanks Man. Looking Forward to your feedback. No, I deleted cleo so I could have a free game for a while because my game was getting over-modded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aflien Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 I played first three missions. They are challenging and entertaining. But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior. Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Nice first missions. But like Nihhichi said, aways put the talking character's name in any sentence. The story overall is great, keep 'em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yezz007 Posted June 28, 2013 Share Posted June 28, 2013 (edited) I played the first three mission, you have a good story You can put "attack direct" behavior on the enemies, so this is unlike a gun training, sometimes they are not shooting back when i shoot them. ....But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall The characters names are written when needed, It is unnecessary to write the characters's name in those camera position, The story is clear. Edited June 28, 2013 by Yezz007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted June 28, 2013 Share Posted June 28, 2013 So, i played the missions as promised. The idea seems okay , but it's realised not that well. You have to focus on the story more. And some grammar issues, but they're better than most of the newcomers' . I guess i would give it a 7/10. Not bad for a new face around here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Target13 Posted June 28, 2013 Author Share Posted June 28, 2013 I played first three missions. They are challenging and entertaining. But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall Nice first missions. But like Nihhichi said, aways put the talking character's name in any sentence. The story overall is great, keep 'em coming. What i always do is that when the Cutscene Camera is pointing at one Actor then i don't add the name in the Dialog cause its clear who's talking. but when i'm pointing at more then Two Actors then i add the names. Thanks for the feedback by the way. I played the first three mission, you have a good story You can put "attack direct" behavior on the enemies, so this is unlike a gun training, sometimes they are not shooting back when i shoot them. Okay, Thanks for the tip. So, i played the missions as promised. The idea seems okay , but it's realised not that well. You have to focus on the story more. And some grammar issues, but they're better than most of the newcomers' . I guess i would give it a 7/10. Not bad for a new face around here. I Knew there were Spelling Issues but Grammar? well I Will look into it, Thanks for the rating....I Guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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