NexusUndead Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 (edited) After a big car crash in San Andreas, William headed to his hometown - New York. After 2 years, he headed back to San Andreas, to his little apartament. First he needs a car, then friends... He isn't the king anymore, Thomas is.. He gets kicked out of his apartament, because he didn't pay the rent. Now the money is verry needed. William heads for the search for a car. Thomas' Crew Paul Sarah Kevin George Steven William's Crew William ========================= Thanks to Graven - GFX Thanks to Dutchy3010 = PatrickW From Zero #1 Thunder #2 Critical Money #3 Speed #4 Rent #5 Never Look Back #6 Garage Cars Colors Characters Sports Car Orange Paul Banshee Red Sarah Hotknife Purple Kevin Sabre White George Turismo Blue Steven Thomas : He is the best driver in whole San Andreas. He drives red Infernus, a gift from his father. He is the San Andreas Racing King. Paul : He is Thomas' friend. He goes with him everywhere. They are friends from the childhood. Sarah : She is Thomas' girlfriend. Usually sits with in the red Infernus. Has her won Banshee. Kevin : His mother died in a car crash. Likes really fast cars. George : He is verry strong Thomas' bodyguard. Likes muscle cars. Steven : His father died from cancer. Really likes action and speed. William : Has no friends, and starts from zero. Needs money fast and racing is one way. Jeff : He is an engineer. His shop has alot of car parts. He fixes anything... If the price is right. Edited June 12, 2013 by NexusUndead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Mission #1 (Thunder) realesed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Odyssey Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 seems like a pretty cool mission pack. i'll try it out now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Armageddon(Temp) Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 I just tried it out, but the game seems to crash after few cutscenes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 I just tried it out, but the game seems to crash after few cutscenes... Could you tell me the exact number, or place where it crashed ? Maybe you skipped some cutscenes, try again, try setting the graphics settings down or smth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Doesn't crash for me. It's a promising start. Good use of the moving cutscenes I give that to you, but there's a lot to improve at. First of all your checkpoints are way too small, have them the normal size. Then secondly there is one thing that needs a bit of logic work, who goes shopping at 12 am? I don't find it possible for a grocery store to be open at 12 am, unless it's a gas station where William was heading to. Well anyway, good work, I give you a 7 out of 10. I'll be sure to play the next mission as well. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Thanks man, feedback really means alot for me. 2nd mission should be done today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Armageddon(Temp) Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 when I dont skip the cutscenes, it works fine. Anyways, nice intro. Eager for upcoming ones.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Sometimes it crash when you skip cutscene. Anyway, i've played it, short for a intro but good, like the use of moving cutsene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Sometimes it crash when you skip cutscene. Thats because the player teleports really long distances. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 Mission #2 (Critical Money) Realesed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 Played it. Good work indeed, but not every cutscene has to be a moving one. And for a car theft, there shouldn't be 2 patrol cars full of officers firing at you, neither should there be a helicopter. Anyway, it's good, I'm liking the way you move the story. 7 out of 10 for this mission, would be higher if there wasn't that much unrealism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 Played it. Good work indeed, but not every cutscene has to be a moving one. And for a car theft, there shouldn't be 2 patrol cars full of officers firing at you, neither should there be a helicopter. Anyway, it's good, I'm liking the way you move the story. 7 out of 10 for this mission, would be higher if there wasn't that much unrealism. Thanks, I'm doing my best on designing the 3rd mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 Mission #3 (Speed) Realesed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 6, 2013 Author Share Posted June 6, 2013 Mission #4 (Rent) Realesed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted June 6, 2013 Share Posted June 6, 2013 Interesting.. I might try it out later and give you some feedback. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 10, 2013 Author Share Posted June 10, 2013 Mission #5 (Never Look Back) Realesed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted June 12, 2013 Author Share Posted June 12, 2013 Mission #6 (Garage) Realesed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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