Notna Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 (edited) Mission series status: In progressWelcome to Dark Assassin: The New Breed.This is my 4th mission pack and the sequel to Dark Assassin: The Conspiracy. It's in progress and currently consists of 8 missions.StoryFour years after The Consipracy. In the end, Leo sacrificed himself by flying the fighter plane into the Dam, destroying the energy plants and stopping the biological weapon planned to kill millions of people. However, after all he survived the crash and stayed low for a while. After all, he couldn't resist and returned to the life of crime. Instead of taking jobs himself, he started to be a mastermind and hired a promising young small time criminal called Evan Ostroff. Leo trained Evan to be a deadly killing machine, who does everything if he gets paid. Now however, Evan and Leo are facing an enemy a lot harder to beat than anyone of their former foes.CharactersEvan Ostroff The protagonist/playable character. He was a small time criminal, but Leo saw his skills and hired him to work as an assassin and a mercenary. Leo He was a professional assassin before, but after the conspiracy, he began to work only as an assassination mastermind. He trained Evan. David Gomez A special agent working for FBI. He has been looking for Evan and Leo for thirteen months, and doesn't stop before Evan is dead or behind the bars. Andreas Miller A special agent working for FBI. He is the field partner of David Gomez, and has been helping him to find Leo and Evan. Mike Gerard A sheriff, and the man in charge of Las Venturas Police Department. He is an old school cop and wants to control all what happens on his station. Felix Redburg A former marine, currently the LVPD Director of Field Operations. Highly trained and skilled. Miano Yamata The leader of Yakuza in Las Venturas. He is very cautious and when he hires jobs to be done, he keeps the encounters with his mercenaries to one meeting. Craig Timmins Leader of the biker gang MC Desert Guns, operating mainly in El Quebrados but also in the surrounding areas. He works for Miano. Ryan Beaver Evan's old friend who he met when he still was a street thug in Los Santos. Ryan has a good collection of guns, but is addicted to narcotics. MissionsChapter 1 Mission 1. - The new breed - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25645Mission 2. - Unchained - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25686Mission 3. - The first job - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25780Mission 4. - A hoax - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25797Mission 5. - Staying low - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25798Mission 6. - The bikers - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25842Mission 7. - Clubhouse massacre - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25843Mission 8. - Death to spies - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25844 ZIP file with full Chapter 1 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30045Play, enjoy and give me feedback! Edited January 26, 2014 by Notna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 No f*cking way. Will play the mission soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHDUDE Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 I played the first mission. It was very good . 5-star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 Hoooooooly... I can't f*cking belive it! I'm gonna play it for sure, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted May 26, 2013 Author Share Posted May 26, 2013 It's so nice to hear from you guys and I am glad you're interested. I promise I am not going to let you down with this! Stay tuned for more missions soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 Really liked the intro Notna. I like how the gameplay goes, you have multiple choices at times and it goes smoothly. But what's really interesting is the way you presented the characters and the story, it feels dark and ruthless. Something that could've been better was the way you showed the dead guys, a linear cutscene at the floor would have looked great. I hope good use of V7's features would be implemented in this MP. Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted May 26, 2013 Author Share Posted May 26, 2013 Thanks a lot for the high rating, and it's very nice to hear from you man. Let's put the past behind us, haha? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDR Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 I'll check this soon as soon as possible, good to have you back mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 (edited) Played the mission! I don't have much to say, but it was presented pretty well. I can see that Leo has trained Evan to be just as brutal or more brutal than he was. I liked the choice at the mission, and it fits very nicely, especially since it is not done in an overly complicated way . I was really hoping to see Leo's face to see if you changed the skin, but damn it ended. One question, do you plan to bring back any of the characters from the first Dark Assassin? It would be nice to see some of the old characters mainly George and William/Richard. I have a suggestion on a story that may involve them in the story. Since William was going to be the next president and he believes Leo is dead..What if George became the Vice President..and William is now looking for Evan Ostroff to either arrest him or kill him..And if William finds out that Leo is alive..and George lied to him.. There is so much that could go wrong there haha. Edited May 26, 2013 by Doublepulse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProtoZeroZ Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 (edited) YES! Its BACK Edited May 27, 2013 by ProtoZeroZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 Thanks a lot guys. First of all DP, yes, Leo is in the next mission and yes, he has the same skin as before, the purple shirt with sunglasses. It's iconic, I didn't want to change it. And then yes, there are a couple of plans to bring back old characters from The Conspiracy. There will be a lot of trouble in the way of Evan and Leo. Thanks again. The next mission will come today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 I like when someone makes MP's that are conected to each other. Characters, happening etc... Well after playing The Conspiracy, i decitied to play this. I loved how you make choice there and for Evan, he is very cold-blooded. I mean he f*cked up gurad, he said that he'll call hostpital if he tell him where're the files. This one was longest missions, it could be a little longer, I mean, you were always making shorter, but this one was very nice. Quality & quantity. I would like also to see more conected things from The Conspiracy, i would be very thankful! And also i want to say, that this mission is one of best your missions that i've played. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted May 29, 2013 Author Share Posted May 29, 2013 The next mission has been released. To download, go here. Play, enjoy and give feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted May 29, 2013 Share Posted May 29, 2013 Thanks a lot for the high rating, and it's very nice to hear from you man. Let's put the past behind us, haha? Well, it's not like i purposly did it, just my honest opinion. But i'm happy as long we're cool. Though this time it was less exiting than the intro, not much action but more focus on story progression. The idea that Leo works with Evan is kinda weird for me, cuz i kinda got used to the "boss sitting around and just giving orders". I'm expecting the next mission to be more stealthy and "assasiny" hopefully. Rating: 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted May 29, 2013 Share Posted May 29, 2013 The Moomins. That f*#%ing killed me. xD Overall, nice mission. I suppose those first missions are just like training missions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted May 29, 2013 Author Share Posted May 29, 2013 The Moomins. That f*#%ing killed me. xD Overall, nice mission. I suppose those first missions are just like training missions? Pretty much. The next mission is going to be more focused on action etc. since Evan gets himself into real trouble. Thanks guys! And yeah I should have said the second mission was focused on progressing the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted June 2, 2013 Share Posted June 2, 2013 new missions??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted June 2, 2013 Share Posted June 2, 2013 I played the first two missions, so here's my feedback: Good stuff: - Nice informing and ''getting to points''. - Pretty cool opening scene, kinda psycho, but still pretty cool. - I love the car you chose to be a car I needed to steal in mission 1. - Nice use of Timeout and Talk on phone objectives - Choice making - Plot revealing and progressing Bad stuff/Stuff that could be improved: - Cutscene timing is too fast. I believe they are between 1 and 3 seconds, just a few over 3 seconds. You should make them 4 seconds per cutscene. It may seem like it's no big difference, but believe me, it is. I don't know if you made this on purpose, but I love how agent Gomez is presented like the agent who is trying to catch Frank Abagnale in the movie ''Catch me if you can''. He is this close, but the main character seems to get away. That's pretty cool aswell. Anyway, it's only 2 missions, let's be honest, there is nothing much to the story yet, but I like it how it's progressing. As for the quality of the missions in general, I'd give you a 8.5/10. It would be 9/10 if the cutscenes weren't changing so fast, but still, pretty good work, man. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 2, 2013 Author Share Posted June 2, 2013 Thanks a lot Jimmy. Well, I consider myself a fast reader so I usually make the mistake on the text timing, putting it the time I am easily able to read it. I'll be working on that in the future. And honestly, I've never seen that movie but now when you said it, got to check it out. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 3, 2013 Author Share Posted June 3, 2013 The 3rd mission has been released. Download here! Now getting back into making more missions, so more of them coming today! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 The 4th and 5th mission have been released. Play, enjoy and give feedback! Also, there's a bug in the 4th mission. Evan's actor disappears while talking to Leo. Also, in the 5th mission there's one storyline mistake I made, in the 4th mission the agents say the raid happens after midnight, but in the 5th mission the raid happens on bright daylight. I apologize for that slight mistake! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Well, it doesn't matter for me. I can type the Midnight cheat (XJVSNAJ) if the raid had to be naturally at midnight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Lol, well, doesn't help much since it was also told to happen the very same day and the 5th mission says 4 days later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 finally, loving this missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammie_GTA Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 I love your missions! I'm gonna play 5 right now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammie_GTA Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 I played 5. Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 I played 5. Amazing! Thanks man, it's much appreciated. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted June 6, 2013 Author Share Posted June 6, 2013 The 6th, 7th and 8th mission have been released. The links are in the main post. Chapter 1 is now finished, and a .rar-file will be uploaded soon! Play, enjoy and give me feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDR Posted June 6, 2013 Share Posted June 6, 2013 Alright; I was waiting to finish the 1st chapter, here's my thoughts. First, gameplay. I didn't play the first DA (I actually started but dropped because it bored me), so I don't know if it's the style of this mission pack, but missions could've be more stealthy in my opinion. For example, when we were infiltrating that abandonned army warehouse, I thought there would be a sneaking section. It kinda disappointed me. Also the gunfights weren't challenging in my opinion. Though it has cons like this, gameplay is good overall. Those choices were nice. When I come to the story; I see something nice, but it could've been presented better. Straightly giving the main points of the plot is a good way, but sometimes it feels like there's not much of a presentation. (To me, atleast.) Furthermore, some missions lacks outros. For instance when we dropped the package to the train station, there could be a phone call or sth like that. I know Miano didn't contact Evan that much, but I was a bit suprised when the mission directly ended when I got the checkpoint. Same thing goes for the 7th mission too. Missions were a bit short, but that's your style as far as I know. So I won't say anything about it. Overall, I liked the first chapter. Gameplay and story presentation are nice, though it can be better like I said. Nice job and keep up the work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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