Grand Theft Savage Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Be advised. This was written while I was stoned out of this world. You have been warned. Enjoy. ---------------------------------------------- South Los Santos – July 27th, 2013 3:30 pm Franklin was preparing to step outside of his house and into the streets of his neighborhood. He wore a grey hoodie with a black shirt underneath it with black stone-washed jeans. A Saturday with no important tasks to tend to, he decided that he would visit his best friend Lamar. His girlfriend, Tina, was in the shower. Franklin pulled out his .45 Caliber M1911 pistol from behind the dresser in his bedroom. Tina did not know that he had a gun, as she thought he was not a gangster. In his own mind, he wasn’t. Franklin kept his gun hidden at all times from Tina because he did not want her to get the wrong impression. If she found it, it would be nothing but trouble. Franklin: “Tina, I’m leavin’ the house for a bit. I’ll be back soon.” Tina: “Put some food in Chop’s bowl before you leave.” Franklin: “Whatever…” Franklin grabbed the large pack of dog food and poured it down into Chop’s bowl. Once he finished, he whistled for Chop to come and eat it. Chop emerged quickly from the backyard and jumped through the doggy-door. He barked and began to chow down into his bowl of food. Franklin rubbed Chop’s fur and then left his home. Once outside, Franklin decided to call Lamar in advance. He pulled out his trusty iFruit phone and dialed his number. Lamar answered his phone after the very first ring. Lamar: “What’s happening, homie?” Franklin: “I’m coming to your house. You doin’ anything?” Lamar: “As a matter of fact, I am. Come over and I’ll show you something.” Franklin: “Alright, I’ll see you.” Franklin’s eye caught sight of a purple low-rider driving by playing loud music with all 4 seats occupied. Definitely members of the “Ballas” gang. The driver of the vehicle was smoking while driving and one person in the back of the car was slipping an ammunition clip into a pistol. They all stared Franklin down as they drove by him and he simply looked back at them. He knew that if were a different time of day and if there weren’t so many witnesses standing by, he would have been shot. Franklin did not think too much of it and only shook his head. The gang life was outdated to him. It was an endless cycle of violence that he promised himself he would never get back into. He had a much better source of money anyway, since he met Michael. His new life of crime was dangerous as well, but it was a risk worth taking for the amount of money he earned. Being a thug was nowhere near as profitable. Franklin wanted Lamar to realize this, but he could never get through to him. He was nearing Lamar’s house. Lamar lived in a small house directly across the street from a package store called “BEER . WINE,” a popular place for drug deals. Franklin could see Lamar, dressed in a green shirt with a green cap on. He talking with someone else, who had been was dressed in a white shirt and green hat. Franklin crossed the street and approached them. As he got closer to the two, he was beginning to recognize the man with Lamar. He was a thug named Ellis, known for getting into gang fights every day. Franklin has never liked this man. He thought of him as an idiot who was always trying to hang with Lamar. For some reason, Ellis respected Lamar more than himself. He was the type of guy that would kill police officers if Lamar told him to. Lamar: “Yo, Frank, what’s good?” Franklin: “Nothin’. You said you’ve got somethin’ to show me?” Lamar: “Yeah, man, you gonna love this sh*t. Follow me.” Lamar led him into the house and Ellis trailed behind them. Franklin kept glancing back at Ellis as if he was trying to do something suspicious. Lamar brought Franklin into his bedroom and extended his arm, motioning for Franklin to go in. Lamar: “Take a look at this sh*t!” His room had become a mini drug-farm. He had boiling glasses, cartons of Sudafed medications, baggies of marijuana, and even a few small packages of cocaine. Franklin looked at Lamar as if he no longer knew who he was. Franklin: “What’s up with all of this sh*t?” Lamar: “What do you mean? You always talkin’ about how stealing sh*t won’t get us any real money and I took that into consideration. So my man Ellis here hooked me up with some of his connections and now we gonna start dealing for them. You down?” Franklin: “I already went to jail for this bullsh*t. Are you crazy?” Lamar: “You went to jail because you a stupid mothaf*cka. At least we know what we doin’. Times have changed. This is money you’re lookin’ at, Frank. Real money.” Franklin reached into the pocket of his hoodie and pulled out two neatly stacked pile of hundred dollar bills, kept bounded by rubber bands. He tossed one of the stacks of money to Lamar and he examined it closely. Franklin: “Do you even know what real money is? What you’re looking at is $7,500 in cash. F*ck this drug dealing sh*t, man, I’m making real money.” Lamar: “I would rather earn mines like a real nigga. Ain’t that right, Ellis?” Ellis nodded his head as Lamar tossed the money back to Franklin. Lamar then grabbed some bags of cocaine. Franklin shook his head in disappointment. Franklin: “Yeah, whatever…” Lamar exited the room and Franklin followed him out. Once outside, the three of them stood in the front yard of the house, watching cars pass by. A white car pulled up in front of the house. The man driving got out and waved to Lamar and Ellis. Ellis: “That’s our customer.” Lamar and Ellis approached the man slowly. Franklin watched them as they negotiated with him, showing him the drugs. The man pulled out his wallet and showed them his money. Lamar: “What the f*ck is this? We ain’t givin’ discounts!” Ellis pulled out a pistol and put it to the man’s head. He began to beg for his life and decided to hand over his necklace and his wallet. He then ran off down the street, leaving his vehicle behind. Lamar dapped Ellis as they walked back to Franklin. Lamar: “Ha! Gangsta sh*t!” Franklin: “Robbin’ people in broad daylight ain’t gangsta. You a damn fool.” Lamar turned his back to Franklin. Ellis then Franklin down and finally spoke. Ellis: “Man, you got no respect.” Franklin: “I got respect for reality.” Ellis grabbed onto Franklin and tried to bring him to the ground, but he was much weaker. Franklin overpowered Ellis and gave him a powerful sucker punch, knocking his hat to the ground. He then tossed Ellis out of Lamar’s front yard. Ellis got up, stumbled, and started to run off. Franklin: “If I see yo bitch ass around here again I’ll kill you!” Lamar stared at Franklin. Lamar: “What the f*ck, man? Ellis is my homie. He ain’t no different from you and me.” Franklin: “Whatever…” Franklin got a message on his phone from Michael. The message said “Meet me at my house in an hour.” Franklin nearly forgot that he was going to meet up with Michael and Trevor to go over the plans of a heist. They were about to rob a bank downtown tomorrow and didn’t even have the process planned out. Franklin: “I gotta go. I’ll see you around.” Lamar: “Who’s that, the police contacting your snitch ass?” Franklin: “I ain’t a mothaf*ckin’ snitch. Get that straight right now.” Lamar: “Yeah, whatever.” *imitating Franklin’s voice* Franklin walked off. He could feel Lamar’s eyes staring at him as he left and got an uneasy feeling about the future of their friendship. ---------------------------------------------- Do you think this was an accurate capture of Franklin? Or was this out of character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiegoPotato Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 FRANKLIN FOR THE WIN. Lots of haters in 3...2...1... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Theft Savage Posted May 5, 2013 Author Share Posted May 5, 2013 FRANKLIN FOR THE WIN. Lots of haters in 3...2...1... LOL! I'm waiting for them... Franklin isn't get any respect right now. The people need to listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gjosh Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Nice thread, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanTheEmcee Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 The crew I build with Franklin is going to be hood as f*ck. Don't know what that has to do with this topic, it was just on my mind. I think I'll go read the OP now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolution-XW Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 (edited) I think that was a splendid story and it would be awesome if this was the actual story if all of that happened i'd be happy tbh. Good job! EDIT: I love the drug lab in Lamar's room!!! I think this should be in the game for us to do drug dealing! Edited May 5, 2013 by Revolution-XW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jsaba2018 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 nice story bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiegoPotato Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 (edited) FRANKLIN FOR THE WIN. Lots of haters in 3...2...1... LOL! I'm waiting for them... Franklin isn't get any respect right now. The people need to listen. I actually write that without finishing reading the story. Now that I finished, I just want to point that it was f*ckING AWESOME. And I certainly think that it is an accurate capture of Franklin. You should write more of this! Great fanfiction. Now I can completely say: FRANKLIN FOR THE WIN! Edited May 5, 2013 by DiegoPotato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanTheEmcee Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Damn, that was a good read man. I like how you took franklins trailer and made your own story of the dialogue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kifflom112 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Are you TOMAHAWKS by any chance? Anyways great story, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinister Assassin Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I don't care what anyone thinks. Frank goes hard. I can't wait till I get to play as him and beat some peds up. To me he seems like a smarter, bigger, better, and more sofisticated CJ. I think Franklin will be my favorite character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pilotmonkey Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 thanks for writting me an essay mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Theft Savage Posted May 5, 2013 Author Share Posted May 5, 2013 Are you TOMAHAWKS by any chance? Anyways great story, man! Yeah, that's me. Logged out one day and forgot my password... Haha... And thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANT_P1989 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Haha I liked that story and how you used some lines from the trailer to mix in with your own vision. Respect. Now keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiegoPotato Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Are you going to write more of this? I would love read a continuation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Getzmunney Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Damn you got some talent.. That sounds like the real story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonamix Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 A lovely bit of fan fiction and a great write up for while we wait. check my sig for my fan fiction haha. Keep it up. I have some scenarios for the characters as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Getzmunney Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Embrace yourself for greenrock.. Hes here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YG Low Down Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 (claps) MORE PLEASE GREAT JOB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxbrandon Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Wow, that was a very interesting read, Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo92boi Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 To be honest I always wanted Franklin or at the time the Black/Mexican looking guy to be the main protag, and after I found out that all three of them were protags along with Franklin's back story he's still my favorite out of them all. He's the most reliable, and balanced one of them all. He also from the other side of the crime scale, the streets while Trev is a murderer, and Mike is organized crime kind of guy. Neither of them know how to get dirty with street work like Franklin will. #TeamFranklin.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokeysmokeonsmoke Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Great job man I'm hoping Lamar and Franklin stay tight all the way thru I have a feeling Lamar will die tho unfortunately. I like how you added quotes from the trailer to fit in with your story it worked well only thing I'd say is the green hat guy says "you ain't got no respect for the hood" but doesn't take away from the great job especially when you're high lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolution-XW Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Please continue with this story, make more fiction scenes that you think will happen as the continuation of this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LinuxV12 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 That was a good story, visualized it too. Thanks for the read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DryJohnson45 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I enjoyed this a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oRNoKrazK1ipz Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Good Story Bro.You should do more stories like this until the actual release it would help ease the wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
countrymike84 Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I hope there is more to the hood than just what we saw in Frankilin's trailer. It looked like they were showing the same block in most of the trailer. R are rascals for hiding most of the ghetto areas of the game. I want to feel like I'm in a whole new city when I'm in the hood as Franklin and not even see the low rise buildings of Vinewood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rjmthe2nd Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 yeah the trailer basically stopped at "I Got respect for Reality" i love how you got it all down, epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Getzmunney Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I just read this again. Talented homie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YG Low Down Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I hope there is more to the hood than just what we saw in Frankilin's trailer. It looked like they were showing the same block in most of the trailer. R are rascals for hiding most of the ghetto areas of the game. I want to feel like I'm in a whole new city when I'm in the hood as Franklin and not even see the low rise buildings of Vinewood. I agree when im in the ghetto, I want to be in the ghetto I don't want to just make a turn and be back in the suburbs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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