MadMarshMallow Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 (edited) "The history may not repeat itself.."Luke William, a member of the Black Sky Organization was transferred to San Andreas after failing in his mission in Liberty City. He was sent there to regain the trustof the main boss as he promised to not to fail again. He's given a main task, to eliminate the last member of '7 Brothers', famous hitmen in San Andreas. It seems impossible.. but, who knows..? Luke William24 years old, has been a member of Black Sky in 2 years. After discarded by the boss, he found dissapeared. After 2 years, he cameback to return to the organization. He's given one last chance. Vincent Briggs Friends of Luke William in Black Sky Organization in San Andreas. He's known as the 'Green Mercury'. Has served the organization in 4 years. Andrew Russo Leader of Black Sky Organization in San Andreas. UnderWood A calm, genius private detective in Las Venturas. With his intelligent, he's been solved more than 50 cases in a year. West Stone He's a high rank officer of LVPD. Used to be the 'Officer of the Year' once. Castro Although he's said to be a part-time salesman, he's pretty good in handling a gun. He's a man that knows everything. Hayes Still unknown. Jesse A friend from Liberty City and always been the help of Luke. And now, he's the one who needs help. Oliver A younger brother of Jesse, he's forced by his brother to live in San Andreas due to some reason. CHAPTER 11. New Beginning : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/243362. Clean And Jerk : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/245103. In The Middle Of Nowhere : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/254704. Sabotage : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/258735. Hit Contract : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/26403 6. Big News On Air : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29354 Edited December 22, 2013 by MadMarshMallow alibatman and Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 I didn't know you are back. Welcome back and good luck with your mission pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 15, 2013 Author Share Posted March 15, 2013 I didn't know you are back. Welcome back and good luck with your mission pack. Yes, but I won't be active as before. There are so much things I'm working on the outside life. Btw, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Living Tribunal Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 I really liked the prologue. I am waiting for your upcoming missions... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 Alright, this is propably the best intro i played, EVER! That pit trick was awesome, changing clothes was cool (i always wanted to do that combination), and especialy the cutscenes were KILLING! I advise everyone to play this, i'm not overeacting, it's really amazing and really worth it. Keep up Arejai, nice way to comeback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum Card Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 From Zizo008's reaction I'm going to give it a shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProtoZeroZ Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Same Reaction as ZIzo AMAZING WORK! MAN! Loved it! cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum Card Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Very nice work. I loved the writing just as much as the cutscenes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 18, 2013 Author Share Posted March 18, 2013 Thanks a lot, guys. And due to the school, missions will be updated weekly.. I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DyomKing Posted March 21, 2013 Share Posted March 21, 2013 Awesome Work I really Like your concept in starting when any one kick the person and one man Fall in objects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 23, 2013 Author Share Posted March 23, 2013 2nd mission released. Btw, thanks DyomKing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Living Tribunal Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 (edited) Played the 2nd mission . 1)I liked the shooting part , You have given the accuracies of the people very accurately . It was real fun killing them and Not boring. 2)The cutscenes were really awesome. 3)The runaway path was real fun.(Including the ramp) 4)Lastly , the locked cars .... In all , It was totally superb. Story has started getting interesting.... Edited March 23, 2013 by Zohair12345 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Wow! Epic missions, keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Played the 2nd mission Arejai, it was great. That fight made me feel as if we [the team] were professionals, i don't know how to explain it very well but the gunfight was nice. And that escape felt like a movie, we were getting shot and had to make quick choices. And finally, the ending was cool and mysterious. I'm pretty sure we're not dead right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sloth the storyteller Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Good the first two missions There is a lot of action even if I did not understand the end of the second mission sorry my english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 27, 2013 Author Share Posted March 27, 2013 Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks. @Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Living Tribunal Posted March 27, 2013 Share Posted March 27, 2013 Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks. @Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily. I think the leader shot someone who was gonna shoot us from the back.. Just guessing .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 27, 2013 Author Share Posted March 27, 2013 Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks. @Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily. I think the leader shot someone who was gonna shoot us from the back.. Just guessing .. That's a pretty nice guessed. But, I can't say weather it's right or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SanAndreas12345 Posted April 13, 2013 Share Posted April 13, 2013 The two missions were awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DyomKing Posted April 13, 2013 Share Posted April 13, 2013 Second mission is also good. I really like car finding concept and ending was awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted May 15, 2013 Author Share Posted May 15, 2013 At last.. 3rd mission released. Hope to get feedbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Technique Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 I've played the first few missions. Man, I'm impressed I'll be very honest here, so far this has been the best intro I ever saw. It had great storytelling, I loved the nightmare scene and you showed us a strong protagonist. The second mission had a very good chase, enjoyed it too and I liked the twist at the end. Keep it up, had a lot of fun playing it and have no complains so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 Awesome! Just like the previous two. As always with the mysterious endings which leave the player wondering and waiting for more. Are they testing him or what? I hope i'll find out in the next mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 Uhuh, I agree with Mr. Zizo here. That endings are just so misterious. And that's the best part of the MP. And I'm wondering, is that 3rd mission was just some test for Luke? Probably, I'll discover this in mission number 4! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 Thanks a lot guys. Yeah, they're some sort of mysterious. Anyway, here's the next mission. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25873 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sloth the storyteller Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 I played the last two missions very beautiful appearance the sixth mission vote 9.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Armageddon(Temp) Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 Played your fourth mission, that was utter cool !! And now another character in the series..this is getting interesting.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted June 12, 2013 Share Posted June 12, 2013 The 4th mission was great, just like the last two. You have exellent in and outros. The story is still a mystery but in the last cutscenes it feels like we're going somewhere. Though the only thing i didn't like was the difficulty of the stealth part, it was a bit exagerated and unrealistic (SPAS and M4s for casino guards?!) a 9mm 100% accuracy would've been just fine. Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted July 6, 2013 Author Share Posted July 6, 2013 5th mission released. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/26403 Thanks for the feedbacks, guys. @Zizo Yep, as well as I am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted December 22, 2013 Author Share Posted December 22, 2013 Latest mission updated! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29354 Damn, everything's messed up on the first page. I gotta fix them soon. T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
