Have Mercy Posted February 15, 2013 Share Posted February 15, 2013 (edited) redacted lol Edited March 28, 2016 by Have Mercy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ryder- Posted February 15, 2013 Share Posted February 15, 2013 Not bad tupac, But you should try paragraphing you know? Check out my story yeah? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Have Mercy Posted February 15, 2013 Author Share Posted February 15, 2013 (edited) Not bad tupac, But you should try paragraphing you know? Check out my story yeah? I do paragraph, just not the prologue.. And I've seen it already, reading through it still.. EDIT: Chapter 1 is up. Edited February 15, 2013 by MERCYOVTHEDEVIL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IxI JoKeR IxI Posted February 15, 2013 Share Posted February 15, 2013 Very good so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr-Mayhem111 Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Ete historia e muy bien ecrito. Yo me crie en Washington Heights y era un cuidad malo para mi porque de la violencia pero me fue de ahi y mude a Jersey City. Epero por el proximo capitulo. Translation This story is very well written. I was raised in Washington Heights and it was a bad city for me because of the violence but I soon left and moved to Jersey City. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. - Junior Gutierrez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Have Mercy Posted February 19, 2013 Author Share Posted February 19, 2013 Damn man, that wasn't too far from my house.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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