Long Theft Auto

[HELLO GUY]

I will wait until you finish all mission pack, then play it.

P.S. Screens are amazing!

[The Half-Blood Prince]

"What moves us?" out now: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29096

 

The storyline with the missions already released for the Final Introduction comes at December 5th.

 

THBP, work in progress

[Junior.]

I just noticed you are brazilian too. Will play this MP

 

We should sometime do a mission pack both of us.

 

Best of luck

[The Half-Blood Prince]

 

 

I just noticed you are brazilian too. Will play this MP

 

We should sometime do a mission pack both of us.

 

Best of luck

 

Together? Would be great. Send me an PM soon...

Edited December 4, 2013 by THBP

[Junior.]

Let's do it when DYOM v8 gets released.

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Storyline with all the "Final Chapter" missions released until now (http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29101), but without the mission "To live or die in LS", because it crash on the storyline. You can download the mission on the description of the Storyline link.

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Mission "Revolt" added. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29107

Next mission coming at December 8/9, tomorrow I'll post some screens of that mission...

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

"Fortune cookie"

 

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

"Fortune cookie" out now at: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29165

 

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

"The meeting of the century" out now: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29173

 

Final mission coming at December 12th. The work is ending, guys...

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Final mission out now! http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29195

Play it, enjoy!

The conclusion video with the final of Long Theft Auto + credits will come today or tomorrow, and I'll post here.

 

THBP, work in progress

[Leo28]

I just finished one more mission in my MP,so.. Im free. I'll do a feedback on your Long Theft Auto work.

 

 

Edit: Ok, i just played the whole Los Santos missions, and i will review the following things : Characters(the way you created and such),Camera(placement,timing),and Difficulty. I won't review Story to avoid spoilers.I'll also review the grammar and character hiding.

 

Characters 1.1 - Hide feature. = 7,5

 

The way you hided the characters were many of the things i noticed.You did very good,but you forgot it sometimes.It's ok,errors do happen,but keep in mind this feedback is to help you solve these errors,so that they happen less often.

 

Characters 1.2 - Personality. = 9,0

 

Well,i rarely see people reviewing characters personality,but i'd say they should.Well,i noticed how the characters you create,more specifically talking,the ones which makes part of the main missions,has a different personality.Like,one only talks bullsh*t,the other is a lunatic,and so goes on.

 

 

Camera 1.1 - Placement = 8,5

 

I could notice some fails,but these are not to worry.Smooth and Linear combinations made this expectional.Keep up the good work.

 

Camera 1.2 - Timing = 5,5

 

You really need to work at this man.For an example,if someone says ''Wait,i think we should go there,because there is THE PLACE[just an example,to avoid spoilers]''You add shorts seconds,like 3 or 4. I recommend 6 or 7,because many people takes some time to read.I do read fast,with the eyes,but we need to think about the others too.

 

Difficulty 1.1 - Guns = 7,5

 

Sometimes,it was hard to beat opponents which had uzi's and mp5's with only a pistol.But take in consideration this usually happens at the beggining,so we can spare it.From mission to mission,i noticed how you improve the abilities.Things start getting better and better.There are weapons scattered around the place,which can help the gameplay.This is a positive point.

 

Difficulty 1.2 - Overall = Hard

 

Well,ok.I have to admit.Some missions are easy,but others,i had to repeat 2 times.Like the ones when you are outnumbered,or your guns don't have enough accuracy to reach the enemy,mainly when they are using long-accuracy guns and in high places.I laughed hard when i tried to rush and ended in the ground with a shotgun bullet in the head.

 

Grammar 1.1 - Words = 7,0

 

There are basic errors which everyone who starts learning english commits,and you do commited.But don't get worried,you'll soon fix it,learning with the others while writing.Let me give you an personal example: I am 14 years old and i learned English only by playing games.School only reinforced some verbs.

 

 

Overall : 9,0

 

I really liked Los Santos packs.I knew it was worth to play and review it.Well,this was the first review i made in forums,so feel free to say which things you disagree(in case you do).I wish you good luck and keep up the good work!

 

+1

 

Edited December 13, 2013 by Leo28

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Thanks for the review, Leo. Enjoyed the criticism, very constructive. I also believe that this will improve with time ...

(If you want to analyze the story, no problem ... I do not know if you can to use the

or if the forum does not allow, but for me, you can do)

[Leo28]

Thanks for the review, Leo. Enjoyed the criticism, very constructive. I also believe that this will improve with time ...

(If you want to analyze the story, no problem ... I do not know if you can to use the

or if the forum does not allow, but for me, you can do)

Alright,when i finish my next one(mission of my MP),i'll do it.But only the basic,because you know,there are always inquiring people that untoggle the spoiler option and get disappointed after they saw it

[The Half-Blood Prince]

It's not over yet, isn't?

The conclusion of Long Theft Auto out now!

 

It was a hard work on all this months, and now(finally D:), the Long Theft Auto project is over! Not over yet because I have to release soon the complete pack, an trailer (of all the pack, the Official Trailer) and the Manual(characters, missions, maps, screens, trailers, gameplays,...), but the story ends today.

 

If you have some question, suggestion, criticism, leave your comment. It's important because it's the final of my first story in dyom, then I need your comments.

 

Grateful, THBP

Work in progress

[Junior.]

So... great job! I found the story very interesting. The characters, some creative missions. You really did put alot of work in it. Don't want to give spoilers, though.

 

Offtopic: Você é de RS?

[The Half-Blood Prince]

So... great job! I found the story very interesting. The characters, some creative missions. You really did put alot of work in it. Don't want to give spoilers, though.

 

Offtopic: Você é de RS?

 

Thank you, Junior. Wait for some news about expansion packs soon.

[OFF]: Sim, Santa Maria-RS

[Junior.]

Will be waiting

 

Offtopic: Eu sou de RS também. Viamão (não é muito conhecida, é "colada" com POA).

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Will be waiting

 

Offtopic: Eu sou de RS também. Viamão (não é muito conhecida, é "colada" com POA).

 

Zona metropolitana, né? Sei bem, conheço duas pessoas que moram aí.

[Junior.]

Se tu conhece então sabe como é ruim morar aqui. Tudo custa mais caro que em POA.

 

We better talk in PM before the moderators start complaining.

Edited December 15, 2013 by Junior123456789

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Se tu conhece então sabe como é ruim morar aqui. Tudo custa mais caro que em POA.

 

We better should start to talk in PM before the moderations start complaining.

 

I sent you one... Confers there...

[Target13]

You have been working on this for an year. I think this MP deserves more attention. As soon as i get a vacation (Friday 20) then i will start playing this.

[Martin_GDF]

You have been working on this for an year. I think this MP deserves more attention. As soon as i get a vacation (Friday 20) then i will start playing this.

 

Well dude... you should recommend it to other people... that doesn't focus in this MP

I played 2 entire chapters (LS & SF) and they were so freaking amazing... one of the best storylines for me. I think this should be awarded as best storyline of 2013 :3

[The Half-Blood Prince]

 

 

 

 

 

You have been working on this for an year. I think this MP deserves more attention. As soon as i get a vacation (Friday 20) then i will start playing this.

 

Well dude... you should recommend it to other people... that doesn't focus in this MP

I played 2 entire chapters (LS & SF) and they were so freaking amazing... one of the best storylines for me. I think this should be awarded as best storyline of 2013 :3

 

 

Wow, calm down, it's just my first MP, dude. D:

(I sent you an PM, by the way. Check your PMs)

Edited December 16, 2013 by THBP

[The Half-Blood Prince]

The manual of Long Theft Auto Out Now: http://www.4shared.com/file/RZSEd3PX/THE_MANUAL_OF_LONG_THEFT_AUTO.html?

Tomorrow I'll post the full story in two versions: missions and storylines. I will also change this page design, a few ugly D:

Still in 2013, I'll the official trailer. The trailer will be the last project task(finally).

THBP, work in progress

Edited December 24, 2013 by THBP

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Complete pack avaible now, download it here: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29398

The Official Trailer coming 2013 yet.

I'll post a text document with the links of all the gameplays, screens and maps of Long Theft Auto soon.

 

THBP, work in progress

[The Half-Blood Prince]

Ok, now it's the last update. Now I'm ending my work in Long Theft Auto. With 91 missions + 26 secondary missions, Long Theft Auto is out now! All the pack, without bugs or crash.

Some points:

- You can read the manual if you have some question about the new state or about the story (characters, missions, ...);

- Again, just watch the Conclusion video if you've played all the missions;

- If you want to see again that 3 gameplays of the Chapter of San Fierro, get the links here:

* Keep your heart on the line:

* Trucker's life:

* The orgs of San Fierro:

;

- You can download the "LTA Misc." to see all the screens, artworks and maps released before;

- Coming for 2014: Two expansion packs. One will be called "The brightness of the Red Diamond"... More informations SOON.

This is my last day of "work" on this year, so if you have some question, suggestion, criticism, please reply this topic.

Grateful, THBP

 

[Doublepulse]

 

Here is the first commentary for Long Theft Auto

[The Half-Blood Prince]

 

 

Here is the first commentary for Long Theft Auto

 

Awesome video, DP.

[TDWP_Adam]

Looks nice, will play it when I get back from school.